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Slow steady and descriptive...!
I love this kind of detailed stories..
Jaisa descriptive aapne Kavita ka dream banaya hai...aur uske first milan ki details de rahe ho... I just wish jab bhi aap hero/villan ki entry karvao...toh wo seduction aur sex bhi utnahi descriptive ho!!
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We can see what you are narrating story as an erotic writer.. very interesting and waiting for more characters to enter.. built up very good suspence and than come the main heroine I suppose.. and what a masterly described in details about the past.. it shows that it will be one of the masterpiece here..
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Mast story hai boss.. Maza aa gya
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Nice update bro Kavita ne toh nadi k pani me aag laga di Haweli me do he aadmi hai abhi tak toh ek toh Thakur aur dusra Bheema to ye teesa aadmi kon aa gya.. Agle update jaldi de
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Brother behtarren update... story badhiya chl rrrhi hai ab ye kon aa gya haweli me shayad koi naukar hoga....waise brother isme hero or heroine kon hoga or hogi....
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Kahani ke saath bane rahne ke liye aap sabhi ka bahut bahut dhanyawad....aage bhi aise hi saath bane rahna.
Thank You
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Next update kuch hi der me post karne waala hu...usi baare me mai aap sabhi se kuch puchna chahta hu........
Kya mujhe Story ko Members Only kar dena chahiye.....?
Jaldi se apni raay de....Thank You