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Vasant - Vihaar ( LODY BHAI )
#61
Slow steady and descriptive...!
I love this kind of detailed stories..
Jaisa descriptive aapne Kavita ka dream banaya hai...aur uske first milan ki details de rahe ho... I just wish jab bhi aap hero/villan ki entry karvao...toh wo seduction aur sex bhi utnahi descriptive ho!!
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Nice story
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(15-11-2021, 02:33 PM)abcturbine Wrote: great writing....

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(15-11-2021, 10:00 PM)Any one Wrote: Nice story

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(15-11-2021, 06:24 PM)Mgaya Wrote: Slow steady and descriptive...!
I love this kind of detailed stories..
Jaisa descriptive aapne Kavita ka dream banaya hai...aur uske first milan ki details de rahe ho... I just wish jab bhi aap hero/villan ki entry karvao...toh wo seduction aur sex bhi utnahi descriptive ho!!
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Jaroor Bhai aisa hi karege...

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(15-11-2021, 03:27 PM)Vihaan Wrote: Guest readers se request hai k account bnaye Or story ko appreciate kre or jo readers silently story read kr k nikal jate hai yeh woh bohot galat karte hai agar aap story padh rhe hai or apko story interesting lagti hai or aap aage bhi padhna chahte hai toh kam se kam ek appreciation comment toh kar he sakte hai jishse writer ka aage likhne ka mann bna rhe aap esa nhi karte ishliye pehle bhi bohot si stories bech me band ho jati hai ishliye abse agar aap chate hai ki apki pasandida stories chalati rhe toh comment karna ka khasta kare silent readers

@Vihaan , Ha bhai kisi bhi writer ke liye ye bahut jaruri hota hai ki usko apne readers se story ki liye sujhav milta rahe agar story buri bhi lagti hai to writer ko bataye jisse vo aur behatar karne ki kosis kare , lekin agar aap kuch bhi nahi karte hai khali story padkar chale jaate hai to writer ko bura lagta hai aur vo beech me hi story ko band kar deta hai....

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#67
We can see what you are narrating story as an erotic writer.. very interesting and waiting for more characters to enter.. built up very good suspence and than come the main heroine I suppose.. and what a masterly described in details about the past.. it shows that it will be one of the masterpiece here..
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Wonderful update!
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Kavita Visited Vasant-Vihaar With Kanta And Kavita's First Bath In River




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Next Day -



Kavita subah uthakar naha dhokar taiyar hui aur nasta karne ke liye niche aa pahuchi...




Niche Thakur Indrajeet aur Gayatri Devi pahle hi baithe hue the aur vo Kavita ke aane ka hi intezar kar rahe the....jisse vo saath khana kha sake....




Kavita ne apne saas sasur ke pair chukar unka ashirwad liya aur vo sab saath baithkar khana khane lage....Kanta unko nasta parosh rahi thi




Nasta karte hue vo thodi bahut baat bhi kar rahe the , Nasta khatam karne ke baad Indrajeet Singh Bheema ko lekar daroga se milne ke liye chale jaate hai....Kavita khadi hokar apne kamre me chali jaati hai...




Gayatri Devi vahi baithe Kavita ko kamre me jaate dekh rahi thi aur shayad Kavita ko lekar kisi soch me doobi hui thi....




Gayatri Devi soch rahi thi - Bahu ki jindgi bhari jawani me banjar ho gayi hai , bechari kisi se baat bhi nahi karti akele ghut ghut kar jee rahi hai.....mai usse baat karne ki sochti hu lekin meri umra jyada hone aur uski saas hone ki vajah se vo mujhse khulkar baat bhi nahi kar paati hai.....ab bahu ko kisi dost ki jarurat hai jo uske saath ghul mil sake aur uska man bahla sake......lekin ye sab karega kon...




Gayatri Devi ne kuch sochte hue Kanta ko bulaya aur kaha - Tu jaakar bahu ko bulakar la...




Kanta - ji malkin mai jaati hu....Kanta Kavita ke kamre me jaakar usse bolti hai ki aapko badi malkin ne bulaya h....



Kavita - thik hai mai aati hu tum chalo



Kuch der me Kavita niche aai aur Gayatri Devi se kaha - maaji aapne mujhe bulaya....koi kaam tha kya




Gayatri Devi - ha vo mai aisa kah rahi thi ki itne dino se tum kamre me hi thi....ab bahar aai ho to kyu na haweli me thoda ghum lo , isse tumhara samay kat jaayega....Vaise bhi shaadi se lekar ab tak tumne haweli me kuch dekha bhi nahi hai....




Kavita kuch sochne lag gayi.... Gayatri Devi boli - kya hua kis soch me pad gayi....jaao ghum aao haweli...



Kavita - vo maaji mera man nahi hai ghumne ka....



Gayatri Devi - are isme man ki kya baat hai...agar akele ghumne me dar lagta hai to ye Kanta ko saath le jaao....ye tumhe achhe se ghuma degi haweli me....




Gayatri Devi ne aavaj dekar Kanta ko bulaya aur kaha - Kanta tum bahu ko haweli ghuma laao , shaadi se leke ab tak isne haweli dekhi bhi nahi hai....badi jor jabardasti karne ke baad Kavita haweli me ghumne ke liye taiyar ho gayi....




Gayatri Devi kuch lene ke liye rasoi ki aur chali gayi....uske jaane ke baad Kanta ne vaha khadi Kavita se kaha - sach me chhoti malkin abhi tak aapne haweli nahi dekhi...!!!!



Kavita - kyu isme konsi hairani ki baat hai....



Kanta - malkin aap is ghar ki bahu hokar bhi haweli ko ab tak nahi dekhi ho...to isme hairani to hogi hi na....khair choriye ab badi malkin ne bol diya hai to mai aapko haweli me ghuma laati hu....chaliye...




Kanta - to kaha se dekhna suru karegi aap....pahle bageeche ki taraf , haweli ke piche ki aur ya haweli ko hi dekhna chahegi....?



Kavita - aaj ke liye haweli hi thik hai , bageeche ko kisi aur din dekh lugi...



Kanta - to thik hai malkin chaliye phir aapko haweli ghuma dete hai....




Kanta phir Kavita ko lekar poori haweli ghumane lagi.....band pade jitne bhi kamre the unko ek ek karke khol ke dikhane lagi....




Kamre kai saalo se band pade hue the jinme dhool jam gayi thi....Kavita ko kamro ki aisi halat par thoda bura lag raha tha....Isliye vah Kanta se boli.



Kavita - Kanta tum in kamro ki safai nahi karti ho kya dekho kitni gandgi hai yaha pe....



Kanta - chhoti malkin dekhiye na kitni badi haweli hai....mai akeli kaha tak iski safai karu , aur vaise bhi ab ye kamre jyada kaam nahi aate hai kuch 2-4 hi kamre mehmaan aane par kaam aate hai isliye mai baaki kamro ki safai nahi karti....




Kavita ko uski baat sahi lagi...aakhir itni badi haweli ki safai akeli aurat se kaise mumkin hai....pahle hi Kanta yaha ka kitna kaam sambhalti hai....




Kamro ko dikhane ke baad ab baari thi chhat dikhane ki....Kanta ne chhat par jaane ka darwaja khola.....darwaja khulte hi saamne do taraf sidhiyan bani hui thi.....




un sidhiyon ko dekh Kavita boli - Kanta ye do do sidhiyo ke raste kyu hai yaha par....




Kanta - maalkin ye ek rasta to upar chhat par jaata hai aur doosra niche tahkhane me.....



Kavita - Tahkhana.....!!!!????



Kanta - ha malkin aapko pata nahi kya pahle raja maharaja hamlawaro se bachne ke liye aise hi gupt rasto ke tahkhano ka istemal karte the.....aapki haweli me nahi hai kya tahkhana.....?




Kavita kuch sochte hue boli - nahi hamari waali haweli me nahi hai koi tahkhana......!!!




Kanta - koi baat nahi malkin yaha par to hai.....choriye ab aur aaiye aapko chhat dikha deti hu mai.....




Kavita ke man me us tahkhane ko dekhne ki ichha hui aur vah boli - nahi Kanta pahle mujhe ye tahkhana dekhna hai.....isliye pahle niche chalege.....




Kanta - kya....are nahi malkin tahkhane ko rahne dijiye.....agar badi maalkin ko pata lag gaya ki mai aapko tahkhane me lekar gayi to vo mujhe kaam se nikal degi.....




Kavita - kuch nahi hoga Kanta unko is baat ka pata nahi chalega.....




Kanta thodi dar gayi aur boli - Chhoti malkin aap kyu zid kar rahi hai.....mai nahi le ja sakti aapko tahkhane me , aap samjhne ki kosis kariye.....aap bageeche ki taraf chaliye , haweli ke piche nadi hai vaha chaliye....lekin ye tahkhane ko rahne dijiye




Kavita ka bahut man kar raha tha tahkhane ko dekhne ka isliye usne kaha - maine kaha na Kanta mujhe tahkhane ko dekhna hai.....agar tum mujhe nahi dikha sakti to mai akele hi jaakar dekh lungi.....





Kanta ab fas chuki thi use kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha ki kya kiya jaaye isliye vah boli - chhoti malkin aapne mujhe fasa diya hai.....thik hai mai aapko tahkhana dikha dungi....lekin pahle aapko chhat dekhni padegi uske baad tahkhana......




Kavita bhi iske liye raazi ho gayi aur phir vo dono sidhiya chadte hue upar jaane lagi....aage Kavita apni gaand ko lachkate hue sidhiyan chad rahi thi aur piche Kanta use dekh man hi man muskura rahi thi....




Sidhiyan chadkar vo upar pahuch gaye...haweli ki chhat sach me bahut badi thi....Kavita use dekh boli - sach me Kanta bahut badi chhat hai....tum iski safai kaise kar leti ho....




Kanta - ha chhoti malkin thodi paresaani to hoti hai....iske liye hi to mai roj chhat saaf nahi karti , saptah me 1 baar safai hoti hai yaha ki




Chhat dekhne ke baad Kavita charo aur ka nazara dekhne lagi....bada hi manmohak najara dikh raha tha haweli ki chhat se.....charo taraf haryali thi , halki halki hawa bah rahi thi aise drasya me Kavita ka man khil utha.....phir use haweli ke piche use ek ghar dikhai diya jise dekh Kavita ne pucha - Kanta vaha us ghar me tum rahti ho.....?





Kanta - ji chhoti malkin haweli ke aaspaas ye ekmatra hi ghar hai....aur us ghar me mai hi rahti hu....




Kavita - tum...akeli....!!???



Kanta - kyu malkin kya hua....akele rahne me koi dikkat hai kya....?




Kavita - nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai bass aise hi puch liya....Kanta ke chhote se ghar se thodi hi doori par Kavita ko ek nadi bhi dikhai di , jise dekh usne pucha...




Kavita - Kanta , vo jo vaha paani bah raha hai vo nadi hai kya....?

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Kanta - ji chhoti malkin vo nadi hi hai.....aapko uske baare me nahi pata hai kya....




Kavita - nahi mujhe pata hai , Vikram ji ne mujhe ek baar bataya tha nadi ke baare me lekin maine vo dekhi nahi.....




Kanta - to thik hai chhoti malkin mai aapko nadi bhi dikha dungi , aap use dekh bhi lijiyega aur nahane ka man ho to naha bhi lena....



Kavita - nahana...vo bhi nadi me..!!!!



Kanta - aur nahi to kya malkin...mai to usi me nahati hu roj....bada maza aata hai nadi ke thande paani me nahane me....




Kavita nadi me nahane ki baat se badi utsahit ho gayi....aur uska bhi man nadi me nahane ka karne laga....




Chhat dekhne ke baad ab Kavita ka romanch Tahkhana dekhne ka tha....isliye niche aate hi usne Kanta se sabse pahle iske baare me hi kaha....




Kanta jaan gayi ki ab chhoti malkin tahkhana dekhe bina nahi jayegi...isliye vah boli - rookiye mai masaan jala leti hu phir chalte hai......




Kavita ab khus ho gayi ki Kanta use tahkhana dikhane ke liye taiyaar ho gayi.....




Kanta ne masaan jalate hue kaha - dekhiye malkin mai aapko pahle bata deti hu....niche bahut se chuhe aur chhote mote keede mil sakte hai.....isliye aap unko dekh kar chillana mat , nahi to badi malkin ko pata chal jaayega.....isse meri naukari muskil me aa sakti hai....




Kavita haste hue boli - tum chinta mat karo mai nahi darti chuho se.....kuch nahi hoga tumhari naukari ko.......ab chale...




Kanta - ha....aap mere piche piche aana aage mai chalugi.....phir kanta apne dono haatho me do masaan liye niche utrne lagti hai....Kavita uske piche piche aa rahi thi...ek ek sidhiyan utarte hue vo niche pahuch gaye....




Kanta ne ek masaan vahi tahkhane ki diwar par taag di aur doosri masaan se ujala karte hue Kavita ko tahkhana dikhane lagi.....poora tahkhana mitti se bhara hua tha.....charo taraf makdiyon ke jaale lage hue the....aur ek alag si hi badboo vaha se aa rahi thi....
 
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Kavita us masaan ki rosni me tahkhane ko dekhne lagti hai....vo thoda aage badti hai aur uska pair ek chhoti si lakdi padta hai......Kavita ka par lagte hi vah lakdi toot jaati hai aur lakdi tootne ki aavaj poore tahkhane me gunjne lagti hai......chhrrrrr chhrrrrr




Ye aavaj sunke ek chuho ka jhund bhaagte hue Kavita aur Kanta ke pairo ke niche se.....ek kone se doose kone me jaata hai.....




Itne saare chuho ke ek saath aane se vo dono hi dar gayi.....Kanta ke haath se masaal niche gir gayi.....




 Kavita itni ghabra gayi ki uski cheekh nikalne waali thi ki tabhi......Kanta ne jaldi se apna ek haath aage lejakar Kavita ke muh par rakh diya taaki cheekh na nikal sake aur....dosre haath ko Kavita ki kamar se le jaate hue uski gol Gaand par rakh kar jor se apni aur khinch liya....




Kanta ke aisa karne se Kavita uski chhati se chipak gayi....uske maathe par paseena aane laga aur dhadkane bhi tej tej chalne lagi.....




Lekin ye scene dekhne me bada kaamuk lag raha tha......Masaan ki halki rosni me Kanta , Kavita ko apni chhati se chipkaye khadi thi.....Kanta ka ek haath Kavita ke hotho par tha aur doosra haath uski gol Gaand ko kas ke pakde hue apne shareer se chipkaye hue tha......dono ek dusre ki aankho me dekh rahe the




Kavita ki sanse tej hone lagi.....karib 2 minute tak Kanta aur Kavita aise hi ek doosre ki aankho me dekhte hue khade rahe....




Uske baad Kanta ne dhire se apna haath Kavita ke muh se hataya lekin gaand par haath ab bhi tha aur uski aankho me dekhte hue boli - maaf karna maalkin....maine kaha tha na ki aap chikhegi...isliye maine aapke muh par haath rakha tha....




Kavita uski aankho me dekhte hue boli - mai dar gayi thi Kanta.....lekin chuhe ab jaa chuke hai , isliye tum mujhe chor do....




Kanta ne halke se apna haath uski gaand se hataya use aajad kiya.....Kavita , Kanta ki banho se nikal kar piche gayi to phir se uska pair lakdi par pada aur dobara aavaj hui -......chharrrrrrr chaarrrrr




Is baar Kavita jis kone me piche gayi thi usi kone se lakdi ke tootne ki aavaj se chuhe bhaage....chuho ki vajah se Kavita phir se bahut dar gayi aur bhaagte hue Kanta ki aur aai......lekin vah chikhi nahi




Kavita bhaagte hue Kanta ki aur aai to dar ke maare uska santulan bigad gaya aur ek jor ka dhakka Kanta ko laga jisse Kanta tahkhane ki jamin par gir gayi........aur Kavita bhi uske upar aa giri.....




Ye scene bhi bada hi manmohak tha.....Kanta niche giri hui thi aur usi ke upar Kavita....lekin Kavita uske upar is prakar giri thi ki.....Kavita ke stan thik Kanta ke muh par dabav bana rahe the.....

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Kanta ko Kavita ke stano se apne muh par lag raha dabav aur stank se aa rahi aakrshak khoosbu bahut uttejak lag rahi thi.....




Kavita ko bhi samjh nahi aa raha tha ki ye sab uske saath kya hua....isliye vah jaldi se apne aap ko sambhalte hue khadi hui.....Kavita ke hat-te hi Kanta bhi khadi ho gayi....




Kavita aur Kanta dono hi badi asmanjas ki stithi me thi.....unhe samjh nahi aaya ki ye achanak unke saath kya hua tha.....




Kanta ne jamin par giri masaal ko uthaya aur kaha - chhoti malkin ab chaliye yaha rahna sahi nahi hai.....uske baad vo dono bahar aa gaye.....




Bahar aate hi Kavita ne dekha ki girne ki Vajah se Kanta ki saree poori tarah mitti me san chuki hai.....isliye usne kaha....




Kavita - are Kanta tum to poori mitti me ho gayi ho.....tumhe to dobara naha kar doosre kapde pahnne padege....




Kanta ne ek nazar apne upar daali to paya ki uske kapde gande ho chuke hai....isliye usne kaha - ha malkin nahana padega.....aap aaram kariye mai piche nadi par jaati hu aur thodi der me naha mar aati hu , phir mai aapko bageecha dikha dungi




Uske bad kanta Kavita ko vahi darvaje per Khade chhodkar niche aa jaati hai niche aate hi usko Gayatri Devi sofe per baithi Hui milati hai...



Gayatri Devi kanta Ko dekhkar bolti hai h - are Kanta idhar aa to....



Kanta -  ji malkin




Gaytri Devi ne Kanta ko dekha aur kaha - are ye kya halat bana rakhi hai tune...kitni mitti lagi hui tere kapdo par 




Kanta - vo malkin jab mai chhoti malkin ko haweli ghuma rahi thi , to un band pade kamro me se lag gayi ye mitti




Gayatri Devi - achcha theek hai ab jaldi se jakar naha le aur mere kamre mein aa Jana almari mein thoda purana saman hai unko rakhna hai....




Kanta - ha malkin mai bas thodi der me aati hu...Kanta ke jaane ke baad Gayatri Devi apne kamre me chali jaati hai...




Kanta ko gaye hue lagbhag 5 minute Ho chuke the lekin Kavita abhi bhi vahin Apne kamre ke darwaje per khadi Hui kis soch mein thi.... Shayad vah tahkhane me jo hua usi ke baare me soch rahi thi...



Jab usne ek najar apne upar daali to girne ki vajah se uski bhi saree gandi ho gayi thi , uske pairo , hatho par mitti lagi hui thi aur uske kaale baal makdiyo ke jaalo se lipat gaye the...



Kavita ne un jaalo ko hatane ki kosis ki lekin vo nahi hat rahe the jisse usko ye bahut ganda lag raha tha aur gussa bhi aa raha tha...isliye usne bhi dobara se nahane ke baare ne socha




Jab vah apni saree utarkar bathroom me nahane jane lagi to use nadi ke baare me khyal aaya aur socha ki kyu na mai bhi aaj nadi me hi naha ke aau...vaise bhi mujhe nadi ne nahane ka bahut man kar raha tha




Isliye thodi der soch vichar karne ke baad vah haweli me niche utarkar piche nadi ki taraf jaane lagti hai....



Nadi haweli ke piche karib 200-300 metres door thi aur beech raste me Kanta ka bhi ghar padta hai....jab Kavita uske chhote se ghar ke paas pahuchi to usne bahar se Kanta ko aavaj lagai...lekin vaha Kanta nahi thi...




Isliye Kavita ne socha ki shayad vah abhi nadi par hi naha rahi hai isliye vo vaha se nikal kar aage badne lagi....tabhi use saamne se Kanta aati hui dikhai di jo apne haath me balti pakde hue thi



Kanta Kavita Ko dekh ghabrate hue boli -aap yahan kya kar rahi hai malkin



Kavita ne muskurate hue kaha - mere bhi kapde gande ho gaye the aur mujhe bhi dobara nahana padta isliye maine socha ki kyu na ekbaar nadi me nahaya jaye isliye mai yaha aa gayi....




Kanta - to aapne iske liye badi malkin se puch liya hai....shaahi logo ko yaha aane nahi diya jaata agar unse bina puche aai ho to ye achha nahi hai....




Kavita - nahi maaji mujhe kahi mili nahi isliye mai yaha gayi unse bina puche....ab jo bhi ho dekha jayega , tum chalo mere saath nadi par mujhe bhi nahana hai




Kanta kuch soch me pad gayi uske chehre par alah hi bhav the , usne kaha - nahi mai aapke saath nahi aa sakti , mujhe badi malkin ne jaldi se kisi kaam ke liye bulaya hai....




Kavita udas hote boli - ye kya baat hui Kanta....tumne to mujhe haweli ghumane ke liye kaha tha aur ab tumhi iske liye mana kar rahi ho




Kanta - maine mana nahi kiya malkin...mai bas abhi aapke saath nahi aa sakti , badi malkin ne kaam ke liye bulaya hai....aap aisa kariye akele hi chali jaiye...




Kavita - mai akeli....!!!.....nahi nahi maine pahle kabhi nadi dekhi bhi nahi aur tum to akele nahane ki baat kar rahi ho




Kanta - isme dekhne aur akele nahane ki kya baat hai....aaiye mere saath ( Kanta Kavita ko nadi ki taraf le gayi ) ye dekhiye nadi....bass aapko isme doobki laga ke nahana hai lekin ye dhyan rakhna ki nadi ke beech ne mat chali jana...vaha thodi gahrai hai yahi kinare par nahaiyega




Kavita ne nadi ko dekha....jo halki dhara ke saath bah rahi thi , nadi ki chaudai bhi achhi khasi thi aur paani bhi bilkul saaf aur neela najar aa raha tha...nadi ke charo aur badi badi jhadiya aur ghaas ugi hui thi...



Kavita - Kanta yaha koi aata to nahi hai na.....?



Kanta - nahi malkin aap nischint hokar nahaiye yaha koi bhi nahi aata hai....bas aap jaldi nahakr aa jana....vo kya hai iske baare me badi malkin ko pata nahi lagna chahiye isliye...



Kavita - achha thik hai mai thodi der me aati hu....



Kanta ye baat kahkar vaha se chali jaati hai....Kavita vahi kinare par khadi nadi ko bahte hue dekhne lagti hai....nadi ka manmohak drashy dekhne ke baad Kavita ek lambi saans lekar vaha ki khusboo apne andar samet leti hai




Ab Kavita aage badti hai aur apni saree ko haatho se pakad kar thoda sa upar uthati huu ek pair bahti nadi ke paani ne rakh deti hai....

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Vasant ritu ki halki garmi me bhi nadi ka paani use itna thandak de gaya ki usne turant apna pair vaapas bahar kheech liya....




Ab vah apne dono ghutno ko modkar niche baith gayi aur hatheli ko aage badakar nadi se paani liya aur apne chehre par de maara....




Nadi ka thanda paani uske chehre par padte hi uski aankhe band ho gayi....paani mathe se bahta hua uske hotho tak aaya aur uski chin se niche girne laga...




Kavita muh dhokar khadi hui aur vaapas saree ko upar uthate hue paani me chali gayi....jaise jaise vah nadi me aage badti paani ka star bhi upar uthte hue uske jism ko dhakne lagta....




Jaise hi paani uski jangho tak aaya to uski aankhe apne aap band ho gayi aur saanse tej hone lagi lekin vo aage badti rahi....aur jaise hi paani ne uski taango ke beech ki ghaati me apni jagah banai to uske muh se siskari nikal gayi....ssssiiiiisssiiii




Shayad nadi ka thanda paani uski chut ko garam banakar use alag hi ahsaas de raha tha....dhire dhire vah aage badti rahi aur paani aakhir kar uski badi chatiyon tak aa pahucha aur uske stano ko paani ne apni girfat ne le liya...




Kavita ne apna sir jhukakar paani me ek doobki lagai aur vo aankh band kiye nadi ke aagosh me chali gayi.....aankh band kiye hue vah khyalo me kho gayi...




Tabhi jhadiyon se kisi ke aane ki aahat hui...Kavita aankh band kiye apne vicharo me khoi hui thi isliye use ye aavaj nahi sunai di...




Jhadiyon se ek hatta-katta jawan pahlwan jaisa aadmi ladkhdata hua nikal kar aaya...shayad usne sharab pee rahi thi...isliye usse achhe se chala bhi nahi jaa raha tha....




Lekin jab us aadmi ki najar saamne naha rahi Kavita par padi to uske aankho ki putliyan chaudi ho gayi....sharab ka sara nasha hawa me ud gaya aur uski aankhe bas Kavita par hi tik gayi....



Aur uske muh se nikla - waah kya maal hai , kya najara hai yar.....!!!!



Us aadmi ne jhadiyon ke paas hi ek jagah banai aur chupakar vah Kavita ko nahate hue dekhne laga...



Kavita ko uska aabhas nahi hua ki koi use dekh raha hai....vah to apni aankh band kiye khyalo me khoi hui thi....uski saree poori geeli hokar uske jism se chipak chuki thi...jiska najara vah aadmi le raha tha




Kavita ne saree ko ek haath se pakda aur use nikalne lagi....bheegi hui saree uski nabhi se khichte hue alag ho gayi....saree ko Kavita ne apne kandhe par rakh liya....aur hatheli me paani bharkar apne upar daalne lagi....

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Blouse aur petticoat shareer se poori tarah chipak gaye the aur nadi ka bhawa halka hone ki vajah se uska petticoat upar uthkar uski jaango tak aa gaya tha....nadi ka paani bilkul saaf tha isliye uski jaange paani me dikhne lagi thi...




Aisa shandar najara dekh us aadmi ka haath apne aap uske lund par chala gaya....jise vah apne hatho se dabane laga aur man me sochne laga - badi hi kamaal ki aurat hai ye to...kitna chikna badan hai iska aisa najara dekh kar to mai dhnya ho gaya




Kavita aankh band kiye haath niche le gayi aur apne chikne sapaat pet par ferne lagi , saath hi vah apni anguli ko apni gahari nabhi me bhi badane lagi....




Shayad nadi ka thanda paani Kavita ko uttejak bana raha tha...aur saath hi Kavita ke husn ke ye najare us aadmi ko bhi uttejak bana raha tha...




Kavita ab hatho se apne stan ko bhi dabane lagi thi.....vah aadmi to ye dekh kar mara ja raha tha uske haath apne lund par tej tej chalne lage the...aur vah badbada bhi raha tha - aahhh kitni kamuk aurat hai , kaise apna pet aur chuchiyon ko masal aur daba rahi hai...lagta hai iski pyas adhoori hai , koi poori nahi karta hai iski pyas...




Ab us aadmi ke man me kuch soojhta hai aur vah jhaadi ke piche se khada hokar Kavita ke saamne aa jata hai....



Kavita ki abhi bhi aankhe band thi , vah to abhi bhi apni virahleela me vyast thi aur apna pet masal rahi thi....



Us aadmi ne kuch socha aur bade robile andaz me kaha - ae kon hai tu aur yaha ye sab kya kar rahi hai....



Kisi aadmi ki aavaj sunkar Kavita ka to haal behaal ho gaya vah apni khyali duniya se bahar aai aur usne jhat se apni aankhe kholi....saamne ek mustanda aadmi khada hua tha , jisne apni dhoti jangho tak chada rakhi thi...




Kavita us aadmi ko dekh bahut dar gayi usne jaldi se saree ko apne sarir par lapet kar ek palloo kar liya aur darte hue paani se bahar aane lagi....




Kavita kuch bhi bolne ki haalat me nahi thi vah paani se bahar aakar us aadmi se thodi doori par sir jhukaye khadi thi....uski dhadkane bahut teji se chal rahi thi....ab vo kaise bhi karke yaha se nikal jaana chahti thi....




Us aadmi ne phir se apni kadak aavaj me kaha - suna nahi kya tune maine pucha kon hai tu aur yaha kya kar rahi hai....




Kavita ne kuch bhi nahi kaha aur vah mauka dekhte hue vaha se bhagne ki soch rahi thi....jaise hi vo bhagne lagi us aadmi ne jaldi se aage aakar Kavita ka haath pakad liya....

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( Kavita ne abhi saree ko achhe se pahna nahi tha vah bas use apne sharir par lapete hue us aadmi se parda kar rahi thi )


Us aadmi ne Kavita ka haath itna tight pakad liya ki Kavita ko dard hone laga aur uske aisa krne se vah bahut jyada dar gayi....



Kavita ko jab dard hua to usne apni mithi aavaj me kaha - choro mujhe jaane do...



Aadmi - aah kya mithi aavaj hai teri....pahle jo maine pucha uska jawab de....kon hai tu bata maine tujhe pahle kabhi yaha nahi dekha



Kavita kuch nahi boli aur us aadmi ki pakad se chutne ke liye jhatpata rahi thi....



Aadmi - saali kitna hi chura le jab tak batayegi nahi..mai tujhe nahi jaane duga...tujhe sharam nahi aati kaise kaamleela karke nadi ka paani ganda kar rahi thi...




Kavita ko isse pata chal gaya ki ye aadmi mujhe suru se yaha par dekh raha tha...lekin kanta ne to kaha tha ki yaha koi nahi aata phir ye aadmi kaha se aaya.....?




Ab us aadmi ne Kavita ki saree jisse vah parda kiye hue thi usko hata kar niche gira diya....Kavita phir se dar gayi aur jhatpatate hue boli - ye kya kar rahe ho....mujhe jaane do




Saree ke niche girte hi us aadmi ke saamne Kavita ab blouse petticoat me thi...jisse uske blouse me kase stan jo paani se bheeg chuke the , uska pet aur nabhi saaf dikhai dene lagi...




Kavita ke bade stan itne paas se dekhne par uske lund me khoon teji se bahne laga aur dekhte hi dekhte dhoti me ek tamboo sa ban gaya...Kavita jisne apni najare jhukayi hui thi usko dhoti ki unchai ka aabhas ho gaya....




Kavita phir se jhatpatate boli - dekho mujhe jaane do...nahi to mai tumhari shikayat Thakur Sahab se kar dugi...




Aadmi haste hue - tu kya shikayat karegi meri Thakur se....agar maine use tere baare me bata diya ki tu yaha kya kar rahi thi to tujhe nangi gaav me ghumayege...



( Kavita ko Kanta ki baat yaad aai jisme usne kaha tha ki aapko badi malkin se puch kar aana chahiye tha lekin vo bina puche aa gayi thi....iss baat ki galti use ab ho rahi thi )



Us aadmi ne mudkar piche ki taraf dekha aur sochne laga - saala kya badi gol gaand hai iski aur petticoat kitna tight hai aisa lagta hai iske bade chuttad abhi petticoat fadkar bahar aa jayege....( Uska man kar raha tha ki Kavita ki badi gaand daba de lekin vah aisa nahi kar paya )

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Gaand dekh kar us aadmi ne kaha - ek baat to hai tu bahut sundar hai....Maine tere jaisi aurat aajtak meri jindagi me nahi dekhi , batana kon hai tu.....?




Apni tarif sunkar pata nahi par kyu Kavita ka man machal utha aur usne apni gardan niche jhuka li....lekin kuch boli nahi...



Ab us aadmi ne apni najar ghumai aur ek baar Kavita ko upar se niche tak dekha....to uski najar Kavita ki gol gahari nabhi par gad gayi.....




Kavita ki nabhi ko dekh usse is baar raha nahi gaya aur usne apna ek haath uthakar Kavita ke pet par rakh diya....




Pet par haath lagte hi Kavita paagal ho gayi...uska sarir dhila padne laga aur ghutne ladkhdane lage....aakhir 4 saal baad kisi mard ne use chua tha to aisa hona lajami tha....




Kavita ki aankhe band ho gayi aur vah haklate hue boli - aaahhhh yeee kyaa kar rahe hoooo tum.....



Kavita ko is prakar bolte dekh vah aadmi samjh gaya ki ab ye garam ho gayi hai....isliye usne apni pakad dhili kar di aur Kavita ke pet par haath firane laga...




Jiss tarike se vah Kavita ke pet par haath fer raha tha aur uski nabhi me anguli daal kar daba raha tha usse pata lag raha tha ki ye aadmi ek khela hua insaan hai.....




Kavita ko uske aisa karne par sahi lag raha tha aur vah uske aisa karne par bahut machal rahi thi...isse vo aadmi bahut khus ho raha tha...




Kavita 4 saal se apne badan me jo garmi dabaye thi vah ek anjaan aadmi ke sparsh se bahar aa rahi thi jisko vah jaanti tak nahi thi....agar aisa kisi aur aurat ke saath bhi hota to vo bhi apne aap ko rok nahi paati kyuki kaamvasna hoti hi aisi hai...



Aadmi thoda josh me aaya aur usne apna ek haath piche le jakar jor se ek chpaat Kavita ki badi gol par de maari.....apni Gaand par itne jor se hue hamle me Kavita chikh padi...


Aadmi - waah kya chuttad hai tere bade , gol , mulayam bilkul makhan jaise...man kar raha hai ki tere in chuttado ko kha jaau....



Kavita kuch kah nahi saki aur gardan nichi karke khadi rahi....uska sharir ab uske bas me nahi tha....




Vah aadmi badi teji se uske pet ko masal aur daba raha tha Kavita ek machali ki tarah tadap rahi thi....usko isme maza aa raha tha...lekin phir Kavita ko abhas hua ki vo ye sab galat kar rahi hai...




Isliye vah hosh me aai aur mauka dekh us aadmi ko dhakka dekar gira deti hai aur apni saree uthakar haweli ki taraf bhaag jaati hai....




Vah aadmi khada hokar kavita ko pakdne ki kosis karta hai lekin Kavita thodi door jaa chuki thi isliye vo haath naji aai....




Kavita ko jaate dekh aadmi ne lund masalte hue jor se kaha - are randi ye to bata jaati ki tu hai kon...tera naam kya hai....




Uski aavaj sunkar Kavita ne piche mudkar dekha aur rook kar apni saree pahni phir haweli me ghus gayi.....



Kavita ko haweli me ghusta dekh vo aadmi thoda achmbhit hua aur sochne laga - saala ye aurat haweli me kyu chali gayi....lekin jo bhi ho thi saali badi garam , Randi - Chinal kahi ki....kitna garam badan tha iska maza aaya isko masalne me....pata nahi saali ab kab milegi.....





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Mast story hai boss.. Maza aa gya
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Nice update bro Kavita ne toh nadi k pani me aag laga di Haweli me do he aadmi hai abhi tak toh ek toh Thakur aur dusra Bheema to ye teesa aadmi kon aa gya.. Agle update jaldi de

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Brother behtarren update... story badhiya chl rrrhi hai ab ye kon aa gya haweli me shayad koi naukar hoga....waise brother isme hero or heroine kon hoga or hogi....
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(16-11-2021, 05:47 PM)Yampag Wrote: We can see what you are narrating story as an erotic writer.. very interesting and waiting for more characters to enter.. built up very good suspence and than come the main heroine I suppose.. and what a masterly described in details about the past.. it shows that it will be one of the masterpiece here..


Mere alawa aap sabhi readers hi story ko masterpiece bana sakte hai...isliye aap sabhi se request hai ki kahani ke saath jude rahiye aur aise hi comment karke batate rahiye ki kahani kaisi chal rahi hai....agar kuch kami lag rahi ho to mujhe bata dena jisse mai aur behtar kar sakoo

Thank You.  Heart Heart Heart
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(18-11-2021, 12:28 AM)Any one Wrote: Mast story hai boss.. Maza aa gya

Thank You Bhai
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(18-11-2021, 02:15 PM)Vihaan Wrote: Nice update bro Kavita ne toh nadi k pani me aag laga di Haweli me do he aadmi hai abhi tak toh ek toh Thakur aur dusra Bheema to ye teesa aadmi kon aa gya.. Agle update jaldi de

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Bass bhai thoda intezar maro sab pata chal jayega
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(16-11-2021, 06:30 PM)hfmwife Wrote: Wonderful update!

Thank You Bhai , last tak saath bane rahna
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(18-11-2021, 11:06 PM)raja shri Wrote: Brother behtarren update... story badhiya chl rrrhi hai ab ye kon aa gya haweli me shayad koi naukar hoga....waise brother isme hero or heroine kon hoga or hogi....

Bhai Heroine ka introduction ho chuka hai aur rahi baat hero ki to thoda wait kariye uska bhi aapko pata lag jayega..

Thank You
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#78
Kahani ke saath bane rahne ke liye aap sabhi ka bahut bahut dhanyawad....aage bhi aise hi saath bane rahna.

Thank You
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#79
Next update kuch hi der me post karne waala hu...usi baare me mai aap sabhi se kuch puchna chahta hu........


Kya mujhe Story ko Members Only kar dena chahiye.....? 


Jaldi se apni raay de....Thank You
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Fantastic story!
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