[Ajaykumar82]

Kya baat hain pink baby aap to yahan bhi fame hain aap likhtey rahiye main aapke saath hoon

[Bimal]

Kya baat hain pink baby aap to yahan bhi fame hain aap likhtey rahiye main aapke saath hoon

Brother,are you this Ajaykumar who had written some hottest interfaith adult stories?

[Bimal]

Aleena aur malik episode ko behad kaamuk aur hot hai.
mujhe ummeed hai ki aap babu se jude agale update ko post karenge

[JHS19]

bahut hi zabardast update!!!lekin doosara part bilkul bhee garm nahin hai.waiting for next update.

[Ajaykumar82]

Brother,are you this Ajaykumar who had written some hottest interfaith adult stories?

Ismein Koi shaq hain kya bhai

[Ghosthunter]

Pink bhai,the reactions of the readers for the second portion of this update are negative.I am also with them.The first part is really dick raising.Aleena is really very cunning.She has convinced her father in law.Now she will not face much difficulties to meet babu.You are really a master of how to develop an adult story.

[Bimal]

Ismein Koi shaq hain kya bhai

There is no doubt just in confusion as many stories of famous writers are being copy pasted in this forum in the guise of original writers.I am really very happy to see you in this forum.I hope you will also start an interfaith adult story soon.Wish best luck of you.

[Pandora]

bahut garm aur kaamuk update. mujhe ummeed thee ki babu pahale Fiza ko bahakaega aur chodega.Please let babu to take care of fiza

[Bonita]

bahut khoob pink bhai.please Aleena, fiza aur babu par adhik mahatv dijiye.

[Regina]

kya romaanchak kahaanee hai !!yah kahaanee bahut hee hot aur kaamuk hai.main aapase nivedan karata hoon, krpaya is kahaanee mein vidaishiyon na joden. pita aur beti ya pita aur putravadhoo ka anaachaar, devar aur bhabhi ke vyabhichaar se adhik kaamuk hai.

[seansean007]

Great update,but I don't like the story to be focused on two women.Erotic stories are better when it is centred around one female character with occasionally a few females acting as support in a few updates.Just like Ik Ajab Si Pyaas it would have been better if it was centred around Aleena.
Anyway you know what you plan to do better than any of us.You must be having something in your mind.Keep writing.
Thanks.

[kriti23]

Great update,but I don't like the story to be focused on two women.Erotic stories are better when it is centred around one female character with occasionally a few females acting as support in a few updates.Just like Ik Ajab Si Pyaas it would have been better if it was centred around Aleena.
Anyway you know what you plan to do better than any of us.You must be having something in your mind.Keep writing.
Thanks.

its true..ik ajib si pyas was epic story centered on one women

[KingLimon]

bahut achchha aur hot update. mujhe lagata hai ki yah kahaanee adhik kaamuk aur romaanchak hogee, yadi aap Aleena, Fiza aur babu par adhik mahatv dete hain.Please make malik to be a cuckold of his bahu Aleena aur beti Fiza.

[pinkbaby]

thanks friends for all the comments


its very good to see that you people are sharing both type of comments,

what you like and what you dislike ......

anyways the story is yet continue

let's see what happens next



pinkbaby

[Introvert]

Thanks brother for your response.Hope you will consider the likes and dislikes of the readers.

[Mafiadon]

hope an update

[Kartik69]

update please

[Rocky69]

update dijiye pink bhai.

[Rumana]

pink bhai agale update de do

[hotboy007]

agale update kab aaega pink bhai?