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Bohat he shaandaar update tha bhai jaisa ki apna kha ki ye apki pehli story hai pr jaisa apne update diya hai ushe padhkar ye bilkul bhi nhi lagta ki aap pehli bar story likh rhe hai bohot he vyavasthit update tha Or story interesting lag rhi hai Maan-pur gaav me choriyaan Or bahu ka 3 saal baad kmre se bahar aana ye sb raaz jaanne ko mein bohot besabr hu or agle update ka besabri se intezaar rhega update jaldi dene ki koshish kare or ek request ye rhegi k jada comments na aane pe story band karne ki mat sochna jaise jaise story aage badegi readers judte jayega
Waiting for more updates
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Start is great..!!
Suspense bhi accha banaya hai..!
waiting for the next superb update!!
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Fir of congrats brother for new story....
Starting bahut bdiya hai.... Thakur indrajit acha insaan lagta hai or Shayad tharki bhi.... gayatri devi indrajit ki patni pativrata hogi jaroor ye....or iski bahu ko kya ho gya jo 3saal se niche nhi aayi ....shayad pati maar gya hoga ...kanta nokrani jaroor bahu ke saath kuch kregi ....
Dekhte hai aage kya majedar hota hai....
And waiting for next update brother
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Acha update tha bhai aap bohot sahi likh rhe ho vikram ki mouth hue thi ya hatya..?
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Good update again...
Lots of suspense... thieves and Vikram's death...!!
We know who is the heroine...but not sure who is going to be the hero or anti-hero for the story..!!
Awaiting
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Mere hisab se to story 10/10 hai bhai mat likh rhe ho aap....