Shubha Adventures

[Givemeextra]

Do post your reviews and suggestion and looking ahead for response

Cons:
1) Don't spam your own thread. Updates delivery should be timed better.
    To many updates in same day will lead to next many days completely empty. If updates were 1 per day, then it wil be regular posting
2) Pictures were missing in later parts completely
3) Original Font was fine , the last few posts had to big a font
4)  Expected more incidents while she was with Hubby in call


Pros:
1) Chat conversations were good
2) The way Shubha went into debauchery was more realistic (when compared to other stories)
3) Good writing Skills

Future:
1) More incidents with Hubby on call?
2) What will Hubby see/learn when he comes Back?
3) Shailesh  Character scope ?
4) Any more incidents behind hubby's back when he is around?


General:
How are you going to take it forward? Any hints. Is story close to end or more of Shubha's ADVENTURES exist?


THREAD RATING: 4 STARS OUT OF 5

 

[Shield]

Awesome story

[ak81ymail]

Cons:
1) Don't spam your own thread. Updates delivery should be timed better.
    To many updates in same day will lead to next many days completely empty. If updates were 1 per day, then it wil be regular posting
2) Pictures were missing in later parts completely
3) Original Font was fine , the last few posts had to big a font
4)  Expected more incidents while she was with Hubby in call


Pros:
1) Chat conversations were good
2) The way Shubha went into debauchery was more realistic (when compared to other stories)
3)  Good writing Skills

Future:
1) More incidents with Hubby on call?
2) What will Hubby see/learn when he comes Back?
3) Shailesh  Character scope ?
4) Any more incidents behind hubby's back when he is around?


General:
How are you going to take it forward? Any hints. Is story close to end or more of Shubha's ADVENTURES exist?


THREAD RATING: 4 STARS OUT OF 5

 

Appreciate your time and suggestions for giving such a lengthy review and happy that you liked it. I know the pictures are missing will add them later as difficult to manage them to find with exact situation and time consuming. Try to work on the same if you can post some pics for the rest of the part will really appreciate and add them to the earlier parts

[Givemeextra]

Appreciate your time and suggestions for giving such a lengthy review and happy that you liked it. I know the pictures are missing will add them later as difficult to manage them to find with exact situation and time consuming. Try to work on the same if you can post some pics for the rest of the part will really appreciate and add them to the earlier parts

Thank You for clarification.

No need to go back and update existing posts. What is written can stay that way only.

Better to channel efforts on planning future posts/situations. 


       

[nishanthtu]

Another masterpiece from this writer. Somebody should give this guy an award. Regular updates, good story line and lenghty updates.

[Sankamithira]

Very nice. Please keep same font and size.

[koolme98]

this is so hot....

[sakshisanthosh143]

Update bro

[bobby]

Nice update

[nishanthtu]

Update bro

[savitasharma]

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nice pics. great story

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nice story with pics

[ak81ymail]

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[Dinesh Raveendran]

Awesome, she has become a cock and cum hungry whore finally.

[xavierrxx]

She has happily turned a prostitute. Her brother in law and his friend are now pimp for her.

[Givemeextra]

good update.

from masters to servants, she is exploring

But she is still not a a slut. She is a high-class prostitute now

She needs to become a slut. Opening her legs for free instead of money.... Let her adventures continue....

Eagerly to see how she manages once Hubby returns. But these can be several episodes away, not now.

[doctor101]

A great chess game of seduction and Ajay is the Master of seduction.

[nishanthtu]

She should be with someone she had a past. May be someone from the college that flirted and she avoided and complained about. This can add more spices Ajay can put him in without knowing the past

[Gilmalover]

Sexy updates

[Synthetic_Niya]

Loved the story... The initial part of her seduction were the best. Quite realistic and nice build up.

The last part of her becoming a prostitute and of orgy was kinda unrealistic... Maybe it's just my taste but I absolutely loved the story till first threesome with Manju and Ajay.