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(31-07-2021, 07:14 AM)Jassiharman Wrote: Hello
Hi. Please tell how you want to proceed?
Please note, there are other stories which are inspired by Avi's story and some have just posted comparatively short stories but there is at least one story which is being posted currently which is narrated very well and the story is being posted for over one year with new updates every other day. It is inspired by Main, Meri Family aur Mera Gaon, though it starts similarly but proceeds in a different way. But even the writer says that he is inspired by Avi's story and many readers have even told the same thing.
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(03-08-2021, 10:21 PM)Sethi Wrote: Hi. Please tell how you want to proceed?
Please note, there are other stories which are inspired by Avi's story and some have just posted comparatively short stories but there is at least one story which is being posted currently which is narrated very well and the story is being posted for over one year with new updates every other day. It is inspired by Main, Meri Family aur Mera Gaon, though it starts similarly but proceeds in a different way. But even the writer says that he is inspired by Avi's story and many readers have even told the same thing.
See, it depends on you what you want to do. After all even Avi didn't write the story giving correct names as if he did that, all the girls and women in his family and known to him would have become untouchable in his college, friend circle, village, family. After all he war writing about being intimate with a whole lot of females whom he knew. So he would not write the real names and relations so no one would be hurt.
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Story continue karunga next Sunday se
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(08-08-2021, 09:42 PM)Jassiharman Wrote: Story continue karunga next Sunday se
Today is Tuesday
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Jad dives ball tur gaye taan labhan gaya
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Main yea story nahi likh sakta please mujhe force na karien
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(03-08-2021, 10:21 PM)Sethi Wrote: Hi. Please tell how you want to proceed?
Please note, there are other stories which are inspired by Avi's story and some have just posted comparatively short stories but there is at least one story which is being posted currently which is narrated very well and the story is being posted for over one year with new updates every other day. It is inspired by Main, Meri Family aur Mera Gaon, though it starts similarly but proceeds in a different way. But even the writer says that he is inspired by Avi's story and many readers have even told the same thing.
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No problem. As I had said in my comment, there are other similar stories which have been inspired by Avi's story. Some were short stories but at least one is continuing for over 15-16 months and itst writing style is similar to Avi's. And he is giving regular updates every 2-3 days.
Avi's story is incomplete with many loose ends. We are only interested in knowing how the loose ends like what happens to Avi's father's business, what happens to his grandfather, how his problems with his aunties got solved, how Rani and Komal problem got solved, etc. If the story had completed, no one would have been asking you to proceed with this story, but since you say that you knew him, you would have an idea how things sorted themselves out, or did they get messed up?
Everybody is anxious because after the story ran for so many years, it finally remains incomplete. Those who followed the story for 6-7 years and then it stops with so many loose ends, obviously people will ask you for the rest of the story.
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(23-07-2021, 01:33 AM)Sethi Wrote: Sahi hai. Is liye jab bhi koi forum ke writers ki galat comments karte hain, to accha nahin lagta hai.
Anyway, aapko Avi ke aur uske life aur family ke bare me pata hai to agar aap is story ko aage bada sakte hain, chaiye real me kalpanik story bhi mix karke. Agar aap nahin karna chahte hain to agar kuch log is forum pe is story ko aage le jana chahte hain to just unko kuch hints de sakte hain to shayad wo isse aage le ja sakte hain.
Soch lijiye. Aakhir Avi bhi is story ko lagbag saat saal se likh Raha tha. Woh bhi isse khud complete karna chahta hoga lekin abhi woh possible nahin hai to kalpanik hi sahi, is story ko ek happy ending de ke khatam kiya Jaye to sahi Hoga. Aap bhale is forum pe hi bhale main points likh dijiye jaise ek reader ne chalti story ke samay likhe the:
suckerjeet 4th March201512:48 AM
kahani adhi hogeyi he
mela v adhi hogayi he. . .
bahut kuch ho chuka hai
bahut kuch honebala hai. . .
kuch swal ka jwab mila hai. . .
kuch swal ka jwab milnebala hai. . . .
jese ki. . . . .
sheela ki jwani?
shoba kab legi prasd?
panditan ka adhura pyas?
thakuran ki intejar?
resma kab banegi pinky?
kamani ki manokamna hogi puri?
sara zoya mala (hospital) kab karengi phir se tratment?
ria &zia ka judwa maja kya phjr milega?
payal kab ghumega avi mela ?
pgf &kgf ke sath kabtak chalegi masti?
kabtak vapas ayegi ritu?
heena soniya k comeback?
aarti ki kab uteregi aarti
sofiya ko kya tayar kar payegi kgf ?
mumy papa ki kahani?
neha bua ka suspence?
rani ka history?
rani avi kya hopayega shadi?
kya mala degi rani ko takkar ya koi aur v ane bali hai?
sital ke sath kab hogi adhuri kahani puri?
sweta didi& neeta bua ki kab khulegi gand?
poonam & vidya kab lagega no?
jyoti bua ka manokamana?
chacha ka chakkar?
khuwar singh ko kitne lagenege jhataka?
ranjit singh kya jaisa dikhata waisa hai?
kavita &leena ka future?
riya (gaon) ka recation?
rajesh ka unsloved problem?
savita ka kya hoga hoga phjr se entry?
dadaji ka jhataka?
badi chachi kabtak hogi tayar?
choti chachi kji smartness kab tak degi avi ka sath?
avi ko kya100 karenedegi bilo rani (hony singhka gana) . .
avi kabtak rahega gaon mai? kya kya change hogi gaon mai?
finally the most imp qus
komal???!!!
(1 asa chrecter jo story 1st le ke abtak chali arahi sayad end tak chale. . . jo apna madhur ahesas dheree dhree chod rahi hai. . . slow poison ki tarha uska asr se kab hoga avi ka. hang over. . .
Note - neha bua ka raaz ab dire dire open karunga
Supence tabi open ho sakta hai jab aapko ye pata ho ki us raaz me kitne sawal chupe hai
Ek sawal abi baki hai, dadaji ke sath kya hua hai,
Us sawal ke sath Avi apne mata pita ke bareme jo bate chupai hai wo avi pata lagayenga
Choti chachi nahi bata rahi hai to kya hua Avi kahi aur se pata lagayenga
Step by step chalte hai
Avi ka college, komal ka chapter, rani ka pyar aur neha bua ka raaz, ek sath chalenge, taki jaldi raaz open ho sake
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Neha bua ka raaz,
choti chaahi to Avi ko kuch batati nahi hai
kab tak Avi choti chachi ke sahi samay ka intazar karenga
Avi ko dusaro se puchna chaiye
1) Badi chachi ko puche apne maa aur papa ke bareme, Badi chachi emotional ho jayengi ji se Avi unse puch nahi payenga
2) pooja bua, wo sab me badi hai, unko paya honfa oar wo kahengi ki choti chachi ko puch lo
3) choti chachi, wo to kahti hai sahi samay ka intzar karo
4) neha bua to bat nahi karti unse puch hi nahi sakta Avi
5) seema chachi, seema chachi bata sakti hai, unko apni bato me fasa kar Avi sach pata kar sakta hai
6) neeta bua, neeta bua se bhi sach pata kiya ja sakta hai, wo to neha nua ke kafi karib hai unko bahot kuch pata honga
7) chacha, chacha ko jada kuch pata nahi hota pir bhi wo kuch to bata hi sakte hai, chacha se narmi se bat karni hongi Avi ko
8) sweta didi wo kabhi nahi batayengi,
9) komal, komal ko jitna pata honga wo bata dengi
to neeta bua se start karte hai
pir seema chachi, komal, aur chacha se puch lenge
step by step raaz open karte hai
neeta bua se neha bua ke bareme puchte huye rajesh ka raaz bhi open karenge
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Note -
1st step komal
2nd step neeta bua jisme rajesh ko introduce karunga
3 step hai seema chachi jaha rani ki mummy ka part honga
4 step dadaji
5 step hai chachaji, jaha jyoti bua ka kissa bhi close honga
6 step hai komal
7 step hai neha bua ka raaz
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Ho sake to thode details bhi dedena. Bakhi aapke upar hai, jaise aapko marzi. Aapka hint ekdam sahi hai. Isse story sahi direction me jaayegi aur happy ending bhi hogi.
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aisa lagta hai ki is baar bhi ye story adhuri rahegi. khair koi na koi to ayega ki is masterpiece ko complete karega. Waiting for the best.
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(19-03-2022, 05:01 PM)Jassiharman Wrote: Nahi rahgi
App kab se karoge start
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