Misc. Erotica BASSSSS.. KARO ..(NAMRATA ek PAHELI)

[KASHIKA]

@Royalkingfire aap story chalu karne vale ho kya agar yes toh plz bata do because so many readers waiting for new update , writing , seduction , plot , characters and story is next level on this thread so plz give some information about update 

[behka]

good going

[Anvesharonny]

I hope you and your family are fine Royalkingfire brother.If possible inform us when you going to post next update.
We are eagerly waiting for your next update.

[Royalkingfire]

DEAR READERS........


 kuch bhi likhne se pehle main aap sabki tahe DIL  se mafi mangta hu pichle 4 months se iss kahani ka koi bhi new update nahi aaya hain 

Corona ke second wave main mera boht personal loss huva uss se ubharne main samay laga 1 months se main hafte me iss site ko visit deta tha iss kahani pe comments and personal message tabhi bhi chalu the 


Itne bade gap ke bad kahani ke update dena dur ki baat par man bhi nahi huva sochne ka mere pas kahani continue karne ka koi why nahi tha , but apke personal messages and kahani ke prati prem ko dhyan me rakhte huve me ye message likh raha hu .


Aur bat rahi update ki toh . Honestly speaking writing ek kala hain aur ek kalakar apne kala se jyada der dur nahi reh sakta but other side is uski vajh se uske kala ko protsahan dene vale ko takleef hoti hain joh apko meri vajh se jhelni padi 


Filhaal kahani ek mid stop pe khadi hain so i don't know kaha se pick-up kiya jaye , there is so many possibilities and point of views 


Iss situation main kahani ke prati aap sabki ray (suggestions) jane bagair main koi bhi kadam nahi utha sakta 


So kya lagta hain apko kya karna chahiye comment here or DM me 


Once again aap sabne ye prove kiya hain aap is thread ke sabse mature and thinkable audiance ho 


                         ........ :- ROYALKINGFIRE

[themaskeditor]

Well your story is AWESOME, padh kar hum apne gum bhool jate hai. I want you to continue the story with your own imagination. It is your writing skills that we love and that has brought the story to this level. aur bahut sa foreplay rakhna.

[themaskeditor]

BTW I love the character and exploits of suchita. Also being your first story you have nailed it.

[B123z]

Hamm sir jii ap kalakar or ham raider ham galtiya bi nikalnge or wah wai bi karnge so ap khud hi apni lqst upadte dekh ke storyy aage bathaooo nddd


Meri khud ki yahi rai he ki story me jyada carectar aad mat karnaa or jo ladaki or maa jo abi chal raha hi men roll me rakhnaa

[raja shri]

@royalkingfire story apki jabardast hai....mere suggestions se tumne story Jha roki thi ...whi se continue kro dost....
Story apki hai yr.....so jaisa tumne socha hai ...waisa likho....kyuki hr reader ki soch alag hoti hai story ko lekar..... So jitna jldi ho sake come back ....and again continue this story....bahit miss kr rha hu apki sory ke update ko.....

[KASHIKA]

Aapki kahani always top rahi hain and this is my first story as a reader so hamesha ek different feel he is kahani ka

Kal me details me story ke bare me suggestions dungi if u don't have any problem

[Anvesharonny]

DEAR READERS........


 kuch bhi likhne se pehle main aap sabki tahe DIL  se mafi mangta hu pichle 4 months se iss kahani ka koi bhi new update nahi aaya hain 

Corona ke second wave main mera boht personal loss huva uss se ubharne main samay laga 1 months se main hafte me iss site ko visit deta tha iss kahani pe comments and personal message tabhi bhi chalu the 


Itne bade gap ke bad kahani ke update dena dur ki baat par man bhi nahi huva sochne ka mere pas kahani continue karne ka koi why nahi tha , but apke personal messages and kahani ke prati prem ko dhyan me rakhte huve me ye message likh raha hu .


Aur bat rahi update ki toh . Honestly speaking writing ek kala hain aur ek kalakar apne kala se jyada der dur nahi reh sakta but other side is uski vajh se uske kala ko protsahan dene vale ko takleef hoti hain joh apko meri vajh se jhelni padi 


Filhaal kahani ek mid stop pe khadi hain so i don't know kaha se pick-up kiya jaye , there is so many possibilities and point of views 


Iss situation main kahani ke prati aap sabki ray (suggestions) jane bagair main koi bhi kadam nahi utha sakta 


So kya lagta hain apko kya karna chahiye comment here or DM me 


Once again aap sabne ye prove kiya hain aap is thread ke sabse mature and thinkable audiance ho 


                         ........ :- ROYALKINGFIRE

First of all so sorry hearing about your personal loss.Bhagwan aapko takat de iss loss se baher aane ki yahi prathana Hain.Aap apana time lelo kyunki Personal life and family se badhkar kuch nahi.
Hum bas aap thik hain ya nahi ye janake liye dm or post karate the.Aap ache ho ye sun ke tassali ho gayi.
Aur rahi baat story suggestions ki to main wo agali post main bataunga.

[Anvesharonny]

Ab aate hain aapki story pe.
In the beginning of the story we introduced Namrata as sweet,shy,sanskari ,Sharif girl.
Even with the encounter with Birju and savla we always saw innocent face of Namrata.Even in diwali encounter episode we still thought Namrata as sweet sanskari but in safar saga we introduced to new Namrata Jo Sanskari dikhane ka natak karati hain lekin Hain chalak Lombadi.
And in flashback saga now we witnessing how Namrata is transformed into chalakh lombadi Aur iss flashback saga main bahot naye characters introduce hue Abhi,Karan,Dube sir ,raga etc.Ab story bahot intresting mode pe aa gayi Hain.Ab mujhe kya lagata Hain ya meri suggestions main aapko bata hoon.
1.iss flashback saga main bhi flashback aa gaya jab Namrata ne dance performance Kiya aur usse ek aadami ka message aaya jisane use khandar main bulaya jise namra pehele se hi jaanati hain.kyunki uss aadami ne message main likha tha ke us jagah aana jaha aana tumhe pasand hain aur jaha tumne apni andar aur baher ki khubsurati ko jana tha so Mera guess Hain ye ki wo buddha aadami Shayad das sir hoga.jisake bare main abhi ne bataya tha,kala buddha 58 saal ka.
2.Agar wo aadami das Hain to ye dekhana intersting hoga ke usane namrata ko peheli baar seduce kaise kiya hoga.kyunki Namrata pehele se to aisi hogi nahi wo pehele sanskari,shy,sweet rahi hogi.fir das ne use kaise dheere dheere seduce kiya ye janana interesting hoga.Aur sunsan khandar jaise jagah main usane Namrata ke sath kya kya kiya hoga ye sochte hi uttejana aa jati Hain.
3.Agar wo aadami das nahi to kaun ho sakta hain ye aap hi bata sakte ho wo koi buddha school peon,Fake pujari ya baba koi bhi ho sakta hain.
4.Aur Namrata ne uss addami ke sath college main bhi enjoy Kiya Hain ye hume abhi Namrata ke scene se pata chalta Hain kyunki college ki wo jagah bas Namrata ko pata thi.aur use wo jagah kuch kiye bina nahi pata hogi.
5.Aur story main jo baaki character Hain like dube sir,Karan,raga,abhi inhe supporting character hi rakho.Aur blackmailing angle bilkul mat dalo.
6.Story jaise pehele thi waise hi rakho more foreplay and seduction.koi force sex mat add karo.
Aapne last update Jo Diya tha usise aage kahani badhao Baki aap to master Hain story likhane ke jaisa aapko lage waise likho.kyunki aapki writing ke hum kayal Hain.

[Royalkingfire]

Well your story is AWESOME, padh kar hum apne gum bhool jate hai. I want you to continue the story with your own imagination. It is your writing skills that we love and that has brought the story to this level. aur bahut sa foreplay rakhna.

Thank you brother 

[Royalkingfire]

BTW I love the character and exploits of suchita. Also being your first story you have nailed it.

Hamm   sir  jii   ap kalakar   or  ham raider   ham galtiya bi nikalnge  or   wah wai  bi karnge  so ap khud  hi   apni   lqst  upadte  dekh ke storyy aage bathaooo  nddd  


   Meri  khud ki yahi rai he ki   story  me   jyada  carectar  aad mat  karnaa  or   jo    ladaki  or maa  jo abi chal   raha  hi men roll me rakhnaa

@royalkingfire story apki jabardast hai....mere suggestions se tumne story Jha roki thi ...whi se continue kro dost....
Story apki hai yr.....so jaisa tumne socha hai ...waisa likho....kyuki hr reader ki soch alag hoti hai story ko lekar..... So jitna jldi ho sake  come back ....and again continue this story....bahit miss kr rha hu apki sory ke update ko.....

Thank you all of you   

Keep supporting , thanks for comment.

[Royalkingfire]

Ab aate hain aapki story pe.
In the beginning of the story we introduced Namrata as sweet,shy,sanskari ,Sharif girl.
Even with the encounter with Birju and savla we always saw innocent face of Namrata.Even in diwali encounter episode we still thought Namrata as sweet sanskari but in safar saga we introduced to new Namrata Jo Sanskari dikhane ka natak karati hain lekin Hain chalak Lombadi.
And in flashback saga now we witnessing how Namrata is transformed into chalakh lombadi Aur iss flashback saga main bahot naye characters introduce hue Abhi,Karan,Dube sir ,raga etc.Ab story bahot intresting mode pe aa gayi Hain.Ab mujhe kya lagata Hain ya meri suggestions main aapko bata hoon.
1.iss flashback saga main bhi flashback aa gaya jab Namrata ne dance performance Kiya aur usse ek aadami ka message aaya jisane use khandar main bulaya jise namra pehele se hi jaanati hain.kyunki uss aadami ne message main likha tha ke us jagah aana jaha aana tumhe pasand hain aur jaha tumne apni andar aur baher ki khubsurati ko jana tha so Mera guess Hain ye ki wo buddha aadami Shayad das sir hoga.jisake bare main abhi ne bataya tha,kala buddha 58 saal ka.
2.Agar wo aadami das Hain to ye dekhana intersting hoga ke usane namrata ko peheli baar seduce kaise kiya hoga.kyunki Namrata pehele se to aisi hogi nahi wo pehele sanskari,shy,sweet rahi hogi.fir das ne use kaise dheere dheere seduce kiya ye janana interesting hoga.Aur sunsan khandar jaise jagah main usane Namrata ke sath kya kya kiya hoga ye sochte hi uttejana aa jati Hain.
3.Agar wo aadami das nahi to kaun ho sakta hain ye aap hi bata sakte ho wo koi buddha school peon,Fake pujari ya baba koi bhi ho sakta hain.
4.Aur Namrata ne uss addami ke sath college main bhi enjoy Kiya Hain ye hume abhi Namrata ke scene se pata chalta Hain kyunki college ki wo jagah bas Namrata ko pata thi.aur use wo jagah kuch kiye bina nahi pata hogi.
5.Aur story main jo baaki character Hain like dube sir,Karan,raga,abhi inhe supporting character hi rakho.Aur blackmailing angle bilkul mat dalo.
6.Story jaise pehele thi waise hi rakho more foreplay and seduction.koi force sex mat add karo.
Aapne last update Jo Diya tha usise aage kahani badhao Baki aap to master Hain story likhane ke jaisa aapko lage waise likho.kyunki aapki writing ke hum kayal Hain.

Thank you my brother 

Apke iss comment se story ko aage padhane main boht help hogi iski value words main nahi bata sakta

[Royalkingfire]

DEAR READERS......


AAPKE comments padh ke boht accha laga iss kahani ke prati apka prem aur connection main samjh raha hu issiliye main yaha ye story continue karunga 


Boht lambe gap ki vajah se thoda recap dekh lete hain 


Iss kahani ki kuch main character hain jinhe humne DIWALI ENCOUNTER ISS SAGA main developed hote dekha jaise ki 

1) NAMRATA

2) SUCHITA

3) BIRJU (WATCHMEN  OF SOCIETY, DEAD IN  PRESENT ) 

4) SAVLA ( SERVENT OF NAMRATA'S FAMILY) 

Aur iss saga main kuch supportive character the 

5) ABDUL ( suchita's lover ) 

6) SANJAY ( NAMRATA'S father) 


Iss DIWALI ENCOUNTER SAGA  ka response next level tha aur ye mera personal favourite bhi hain

Iske bad aayi "SAFAR SAGA " joh ek successful experiment tha 

Isme hamne 

SUCHITA ka hard-core encounter dekha ek gande Bhikari se train ke toilet main  ( jaha SUCHITA ko bad main samjha voh Bhikari se pregnant toh nahi huvi ? ) 

Aur ye experiment SUCHITA lovers ko kafi pasand aaya joh ek total fantasy writing thi as a writer maine pehli bar kuch alag likha tha  


Second half of story main hamne ek naye lead character ko dekha 

1)DCP MISHRA 

Jisne iss kahani ki main lead NAMRATA ko uske jawani ka maja diya ( ya NAMRATA ne liya ) 


Aurr iss point pe kahani present se past main chali gayi 

" NMARTA EK PAHELI " ISS saga main jisme hamne ab tak 3 episode dekhe aur boht sare new characters

1) VARSHA ( NAMRATA'S CLG FRND)

2) ABHI ( NAMRATA'S BF) 

4) RAGA ( CHAPRASI / BHIKARI) 

5) PROFESSOR DAS 

6) Karan 

7) UNKNOWN CHARACTER IN KHANDAR 


yaha tak kahani aake ruki hain par iss scenario ko maine tab socha tha aur ek writer ke ideas badlte rehte hain so in characters main se boht se character ka ab jikra bhi nahi hoga aage jake so ye chij as a reader aap samjh lena 


Aur current ongoing story main NAMRATA ek khandar main ja rahi hain aur ek unknown character vaha NAMRATA ka wait kar raha hain joh character mere liye bhi unknown hain 

@AVENSHARONNY  bhai ne iss character ko kafi acche se explain kiya hain upar vale comment main unhone possibility diyi ki vaha koi bhi ho sakta hain 

Jaise ki 

Professor Das 

Clg ka peon 

Clg ka koi aadmi 

Unknown bhikari / baba / fake pujari  joh NAMRATA ko janta ho 


So aap sabke upar main ek kam chod raha hu aapke fantasy aur logic ke hisab se uss unknown character main aap kise dekhte hain joh clg aur NAMRATA se sambandh rakhta ho because aage ki sari kahani past main chalegi joh NAMRATA ko develop karega 


Plz comment for that character 

After that sotry ka update aayega 


Kon hoga uss KHANDAR main ? 

Jiss ke liye NAMRATA dance ke bad clg ke piche vale KHANDAR main pasine se lat pat hoke ja rahi hain 





Aapke jawab ka intajar rahega 



              ROYALKINGFIRE.           

[Shabaz123]

Wellcome back bhai.......

[KASHIKA]

DEAR READERS......


AAPKE comments padh ke boht accha laga iss kahani ke prati apka prem aur connection main samjh raha hu issiliye main yaha ye story continue karunga 


Boht lambe gap ki vajah se thoda recap dekh lete hain 


Iss kahani ki kuch main character hain jinhe humne DIWALI ENCOUNTER ISS SAGA main developed hote dekha jaise ki 

1) NAMRATA

2) SUCHITA

3) BIRJU (WATCHMEN  OF SOCIETY, DEAD IN  PRESENT ) 

4) SAVLA ( SERVENT OF NAMRATA'S FAMILY) 

Aur iss saga main kuch supportive character the 

5) ABDUL ( suchita's lover ) 

6) SANJAY ( NAMRATA'S father) 


Iss DIWALI ENCOUNTER SAGA  ka response next level tha aur ye mera personal favourite bhi hain

Iske bad aayi "SAFAR SAGA " joh ek successful experiment tha 

Isme hamne 

SUCHITA ka hard-core encounter dekha ek gande Bhikari se train ke toilet main  ( jaha SUCHITA ko bad main samjha voh Bhikari se pregnant toh nahi huvi ? ) 

Aur ye experiment SUCHITA lovers ko kafi pasand aaya joh ek total fantasy writing thi as a writer maine pehli bar kuch alag likha tha  


Second half of story main hamne ek naye lead character ko dekha 

1)DCP MISHRA 

Jisne iss kahani ki main lead NAMRATA ko uske jawani ka maja diya ( ya NAMRATA ne liya ) 


Aurr iss point pe kahani present se past main chali gayi 

" NMARTA EK PAHELI " ISS saga main jisme hamne ab tak 3 episode dekhe aur boht sare new characters

1) VARSHA ( NAMRATA'S CLG FRND)

2) ABHI ( NAMRATA'S BF) 

4) RAGA ( CHAPRASI / BHIKARI) 

5) PROFESSOR DAS 

6) Karan 

7) UNKNOWN CHARACTER IN KHANDAR 


yaha tak kahani aake ruki hain par iss scenario ko maine tab socha tha aur ek writer ke ideas badlte rehte hain so in characters main se boht se character ka ab jikra bhi nahi hoga aage jake so ye chij as a reader aap samjh lena 


Aur current ongoing story main NAMRATA ek khandar main ja rahi hain aur ek unknown character vaha NAMRATA ka wait kar raha hain joh character mere liye bhi unknown hain 

@AVENSHARONNY  bhai ne iss character ko kafi acche se explain kiya hain upar vale comment main unhone possibility diyi ki vaha koi bhi ho sakta hain 

Jaise ki 

Professor Das 

Clg ka peon 

Clg ka koi aadmi 

Unknown bhikari / baba / fake pujari  joh NAMRATA ko janta ho 


So aap sabke upar main ek kam chod raha hu aapke fantasy aur logic ke hisab se uss unknown character main aap kise dekhte hain joh clg aur NAMRATA se sambandh rakhta ho because aage ki sari kahani past main chalegi joh NAMRATA ko develop karega 


Plz comment for that character 

After that sotry ka update aayega 


Kon hoga uss KHANDAR main ? 

Jiss ke liye NAMRATA dance ke bad clg ke piche vale KHANDAR main pasine se lat pat hoke ja rahi hain 





Aapke jawab ka intajar rahega 



              ROYALKINGFIRE.           

WELCOME BACK ROYALKINGFIRE

 
 thanks for this recap but apki kahani itni dimag me beth chuki he ki iski jarurat nahi padi par isme bhi kuch important likha he apne 
I think aapne direct keh diya ki filhaal me jo character introduce huve the like abhi , Karan , raga inko bhul jao or dimag me mat lo 
So i can understand aap sirf us unknown khandar vale character par focus kar rahe ho and it's good for us because hame Namrata ka origin dekhna hae uski paheli dekhni he so i think 

Voh character clg se related hona chahiye like 

Clg ka peon , worker or profesor

But according to your writing theme character low class hona chahiye and little bit older because aise he logo ne namrta ko open up kiya he so my final suggestion is 

Old peon or old professor .

[Sush44]

Ab aate hain aapki story pe.
In the beginning of the story we introduced Namrata as sweet,shy,sanskari ,Sharif girl.
Even with the encounter with Birju and savla we always saw innocent face of Namrata.Even in diwali encounter episode we still thought Namrata as sweet sanskari but in safar saga we introduced to new Namrata Jo Sanskari dikhane ka natak karati hain lekin Hain chalak Lombadi.
And in flashback saga now we witnessing how Namrata is transformed into chalakh lombadi Aur iss flashback saga main bahot naye characters introduce hue Abhi,Karan,Dube sir ,raga etc.Ab story bahot intresting mode pe aa gayi Hain.Ab mujhe kya lagata Hain ya meri suggestions main aapko bata hoon.
1.iss flashback saga main bhi flashback aa gaya jab Namrata ne dance performance Kiya aur usse ek aadami ka message aaya jisane use khandar main bulaya jise namra pehele se hi jaanati hain.kyunki uss aadami ne message main likha tha ke us jagah aana jaha aana tumhe pasand hain aur jaha tumne apni andar aur baher ki khubsurati ko jana tha so Mera guess Hain ye ki wo buddha aadami Shayad das sir hoga.jisake bare main abhi ne bataya tha,kala buddha 58 saal ka.
2.Agar wo aadami das Hain to ye dekhana intersting hoga ke usane namrata ko peheli baar seduce kaise kiya hoga.kyunki Namrata pehele se to aisi hogi nahi wo pehele sanskari,shy,sweet rahi hogi.fir das ne use kaise dheere dheere seduce kiya ye janana interesting hoga.Aur sunsan khandar jaise jagah main usane Namrata ke sath kya kya kiya hoga ye sochte hi uttejana aa jati Hain.
3.Agar wo aadami das nahi to kaun ho sakta hain ye aap hi bata sakte ho wo koi buddha school peon,Fake pujari ya baba koi bhi ho sakta hain.
4.Aur Namrata ne uss addami ke sath college main bhi enjoy Kiya Hain ye hume abhi Namrata ke scene se pata chalta Hain kyunki college ki wo jagah bas Namrata ko pata thi.aur use wo jagah kuch kiye bina nahi pata hogi.
5.Aur story main jo baaki character Hain like dube sir,Karan,raga,abhi inhe supporting character hi rakho.Aur blackmailing angle bilkul mat dalo.
6.Story jaise pehele thi waise hi rakho more foreplay and seduction.koi force sex mat add karo.
Aapne last update Jo Diya tha usise aage kahani badhao Baki aap to master Hain story likhane ke jaisa aapko lage waise likho.kyunki aapki writing ke hum kayal Hain.




excellent suggestion!!

[Anvesharonny]

Thank you my brother 

Apke iss comment se story ko aage padhane main boht help hogi iski value words main nahi bata sakta

Thanks To You Brother jisane hamare liye itani achi erotica likhi apana time nikalke.

[Sush44]

Welcome Royalking Bhai..??
apke laut aane se is platform me ek nayi jaan daldi hai..??

namrata ki journey jo aapne abhi tak twist and turn se likhi hai wo abhi tak kamaal hai..muze malum hai ki uski aage ki journey bhi aisi hi kamaal ki hogi..

kuch suggestions:
story jaisi likhi hai waisi hi continue karo..abhi ke namrata ke saath relation sirf casual hi rakho..Karan ki blackmailing jada mat badao..Karan ka character kam kardo..RAGA ya Das Sir character interesting rahega..muze lag raha hai ki RAGA aur das sir dono ko bhi barabar chance milna chahiye..lekin end mein dono me se ek namrata ko pura pata hai ye likh sakhte ho...
side by side namrata ke flashback me Birju, Savla comparative roll mein kidhar the ye bhi dikha sakthe ho..

hope ye journey surwaat se end tak apni sima tak pohochegi..???

royalking bhai apko fir se ek baar shubh kamanaye aapke story ke liye..?✌✌ hum apke follower apka hamesh saath denge..??