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Adultery Kubda bhikhari bhaot choti kahani
Zeenat aur Rukhsar ko hi veili slut Bnao. Zeenat 15 sin Rukhsar ke Ghar par rukne jaye Kyo ki farman vapish videsh yatra pe gya he aur Rukhsar ki sas sasur huj yatra pe Aur uske husband ko Out of station ya Bimar kar do yahi carecater ke sath DUSRA PART likho.
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Iram wali kahani shuru karo bhai
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[quote pid='3384618' dateline='1623386460']
To ap batana sab last mai kis kahani ko ek novel ke tor par pesh karo....Mai ek sasti rundi yaha ab kisi ko nahi bana sakta ha aage koi kahani shuru karonga to woh iram ya intzar kab tak karenge hum bhala ya noorine jaise banaonga



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Bhai please please please HARAMI BALAM or HAWAS OR KHOON ko continue kro

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Incomplete abrupt end ?
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(02-06-2021, 01:59 AM)Lion King 989 Wrote: R... Tum dono kon ho aur bahar niklo mere bistre par se warna...

Ruksana ne datte hue kaha par itni zor se nahi ki uski awaz bahar tak jati....

Dono dar gaye... Par nange kaise nikal sakte the...

Par ruksara ne phir se kaha to dono uth kar kamal ko chhod kar itne tezi se uthe ki lund par rukhsar ki nazar lamha bhae gayi....

Jaha pishab kara tha woh dono usi window ke pass jakar beth gaye....

Aur apne jahnge aise milayi ki lund ka na dekhe....
Woh apne kapde uthne ki koshish karne lage...

Par tab unka bachav zeenat karti hai... Apne maxi ko sahi se aur karti hue apne kamar par hath rakh kar rukhsar se mukhatib hoti hai.. Par chehre par na dar tha na kuch aur

Balki zeenat apne khushmizazi chehre se rukhsar ko bethe ke liye pahle kahti hai aur puri baat sunne ke liye kahti hai....

Zeenat ki is ada se khade hone par bansi murli dekhte hai....

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Aur abhi zeenat ko jab sahi se dekha to dono ke hosh udne lage ki woh kis haseena ko apne bich mai liye lete the aur woh dono ab ek dusre ki shakal muh faad kar dekhne lage.... Aisa nahi tha isse pahle nahi dekha tha par woh hosh mai nahi the....

Zeeenat ek ek Baat bade itniman se batati hai.. Aur kahti hai thund ki wazah se un dono ka pishab nikal gaya tha woh itna thund mai rahe ki bister par bade mushkil se aaye....


Dono ko traf rukhsar ne dekha to woh zeenat ki traf dekh rahe the....

Rukhsar ko bhi laga ye Baat sach hi hai...warna zeenat is time apne hawas ke liye kaha se koi paraye City mai leke aati... Aur zeenat ke chehre par bhi koi hawas jaisa kuch nahi tha....


Rukhsar Beth to gayi thi zeenat bhi udhar bister par beth gayi to samne se jab zeenat un dono ki traf se hati thi to rukhsar dekhti hui ki woh dono zeenat ki traf hi dekh rahe hai.....

Aur shayd unki aankho mai shukriya jaisa lag rha tha... Rukhsar ki nazar bansi par jati hai to uske kuch pair khul gaye the jisse uska soya hua lund latka tha par zyada nahi dekh raha tha....

Rukhsar un dono ki traf mukhatib hokar ab apne chehre par normal andaz mai lagi hue boli....

Aiiiiii tum log kon ho aur tumhara nam kiya hai.....

Ab dono ne jab rukhsar ki traf bade shandar andaz mai betha hua nighty mai dekha to.... Aur ab jhatka laga rukhsar apne zulfo mai hath mai leke khel rahi thi....

Uska bahot halka pet dekh raha tha jo madakta se bhara hua tha us ka jism zeenat se thoda gadraya hua tha...

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Pink hont aankhe bhi naseeli aur abhi sex kar ke aayi thi to jism aur zyada sexy lag raha tha....

Dono ab rukhsar ki traf dekhne lage... Agr is moke par dono soche to jaise bataya tha ki rukhsar aur zeenat mai se ek ko chuuna mushkil tha..... Par dono kuch na bolte hue ek dusre ko dkehne lage.... Aur woh logo ki zaban mai alfaz hi nahi aa rahe the.....

Zeenat bade itniman se bethi hue kuch soch rahi thi....aur rukhsar un dono ka muaaina karne lagi.....

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 don't have any problems whatsoever with this turning point... I jus have a request k jab apne start kiya tha matlab jab kubde ne zeenat ko apne dil ki khwaish boli thi k wo uske sath kya kya karna chahta hai.. To us mai sb se upar pet wale scenes the... Jo apne fir kahani mai apply ni kiye... Bs yahi ek request hai... Pet wale scenes thode include karo... There must b many navel lover like me reading this story... Please
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Awesome story
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Bhai ek baat kehni thi aapse..... Aapki ye last story Shazia Ek Khilona ek bohot achi story ho sakti thi..... Par shayad naye characters ko introduce karne ki jaldbaazi me story thodi ajeeb si ho gayi thi...... Story me potential bohot tha or characters bhi bohot ache the...... Unka buildup bhi acha tha...... Par story me ek saath itne characters aa gaye the shayad zada tar readers confuse ho gaye...... Par story me kuch yaadgar scenes bhi the jese Shazia ka shabana,haria or dhobi ke saath foursome or wo baba ki kutia me unka lund chusna or last me bhikari wala....... Aapke sex scenes likhne ka m shuruaat se hi fan hu...... Aap sex ko alag level pe le jaate ho...... maine puraani teen stories Hawas or Khoon, Harami Balam or kubda bhikari padi hai isse pehle..... Hawas or Khoon or Harami Balam me jo story pe aapki pakad thi uska xossipy ki koi story mukabala nahi kar sakti...... Ek ek character ko ache se introduce kiya tha..... Araam se bina jaldbaazi ke...... Or sex to tha hi next level...... kubda bhikari bhi kaafi achi thi par agar sudama ko bhi sex karne ka moka milta to or maza aata...... Khaer koi nahi but ab aap aage koi nayi story likho ya Shazia ko hi continue karo ya apni koi puraani story ko ye aap pe hai..... Par story apne hisaab se likhna readers ke suggestions ya galat comments se frustrate hoke story me naye characters laane ki jaldbaazi mat karna...... Ek or baat story me female lead hi rakhna.... Ek ladki kai mard nayi situation me..... Haa beech beech me ek do female characters add kar sakte ho flavour ke liye par main heroine ek hi rakhna...... Or aapne iss story me kai baar ye use kiya hai" esa kyu hua ye aage pata chalega"...... Isko zada use mat karo balki reader ke liye surprise rakho ki jo ghatnaya story me pehle ho chuki hai unke piche ki wajah kya hai...... Isse mere khyaal me readers ki dilchaspi badegi.......
Or aapko bohot bohot thank you jo aap apni niji zindagi se time nikalke humare liye esi nayi or manoranjak story laate ho..... Thank you very much bhai......
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अच्छी कहानी थी लेकिन अंत इतनी जल्दी से होगा सोचा नही
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