07-07-2021, 12:17 AM
Waiting
(03-07-2021, 09:23 PM)Bregs Wrote: story is good lekin too many characters who don't have direct connect with story are making it slow n bogged down, thats why story seems stuck a particular point for too long because of vast stories running concurrently
Otherwise story writing n description of sex is marvelously hot n lusty
(03-07-2021, 11:46 PM)Boubia Wrote: Story update thora bada hona chahiye
(04-07-2021, 01:12 AM)akii_789 Wrote: Nice update..
Keep it up..
(04-07-2021, 01:55 AM)StoneCold Wrote: Bhot Kamaal ..................
(04-07-2021, 08:50 AM)Kasim Wrote: Very nice update bro.
(04-07-2021, 08:50 AM)Shanji798 Wrote: Super bro continue ?
(04-07-2021, 08:57 AM)Preet_ Wrote: Sahi baat hai
(04-07-2021, 11:56 AM)Eswar P Wrote: Bhai very nice and majedar update . Small request har update me naye naye ourat samil hita hai lekin principal ki ghatana ke bad pinky ki bhare me kuch nahi likha . How did she feel about Santosh . Please kuch family members se be likho bhai.
(04-07-2021, 12:45 PM)akii_789 Wrote: Bhai Sunday hai update to hona chye .
(04-07-2021, 05:44 PM)Abhi32 Wrote: Bhai apki kahani bahut hi jabardast hai
(05-07-2021, 11:35 AM)Happy1234 Wrote: Mast update bro keep going and regular update bro
(07-07-2021, 12:16 AM)axm55 Wrote: Waiting for next update.
(07-07-2021, 12:17 AM)akii_789 Wrote: Waiting
(07-07-2021, 10:26 AM)Eswar P Wrote: Ok bro