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Aaj to update day do lion ji
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Bhai hawas or Khoon bohot hi tagdi story hai aapki..... Esa lagta hai ki agar kuch shabad likhunga uske baare me to uski bezzati ho jaaegi..... Par itna zarur kahunga ki Kamaal ke writer ho yaar aap...... Ummeed h ki aap uss story ko bhi aage badaaoge......
Bs ek request hai ki Mahnaz or Nazbeen ko abhi maa mat banwaao...... Kuch bhi karke unka bachha girwa do...... Or dono ko Danish or talha se unsatisfied hi rakho..... Kyuki uss story ka main plot hi ye hai ki dono biwiya apne patiyo se unsatisfied h...... Agar inke pati apne Bhai ki biwiyo ko satisfy Karne lage to wo fir incest ban jaaegi.... Or aapki story unique hai use incest me mat tabdeel karo balki or bhi character introduce kro.......
Baaki all the best...... You are an awesome writer clp); yr):
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Bhai ye khani bhi agay hogi ya ye band kar di
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I love this story lion bhai kyoki is may majburi bhi ha aur apni zindgi ka maza bhi ha
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Sirjee Apki Piyari Noorine kab ayegi hum se milne
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Ab ye kahani kaha maine Chhodi thi woh dekhna padega aur is kahani mai ab kitni jaan hai... Ye cmmt dekh kar pata chal raha hai.... Thoda aur time mujhe chahiye shazia ki kuch update aur likhonga tab is par kam karonga
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complete this story lion singh ?
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Sirjee use more image and gif
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Kya likhte ho bhai awesome stories h
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Is kahani ko bhi chaloo karo bhai sher singh
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Bhai plzz continue update