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(26-06-2021, 11:49 AM)qazmlp Wrote: My favourite character is the newest introduced character,Watchman Aslam.
I have already commented one direction in which the story can go.
Brij Mohan has already had enough of Vandana,so it's high time that Brij ki KLPD ho jaaye,maybe even literally, Vandana does it herself and runs away.
@qazmlp bro...mujhe aapka idea bhut pasand aaya tha or mai aage chalkar ye idea jaroor use karoonga .....osi tarah aage or bhi idea dete rahiyega.....
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sorry now story not looking real it's looks fake story
because you forcely included aslam without any reason
Sorry for comment
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(26-06-2021, 03:12 PM)Rohanx40 Wrote: sorry now story not looking real it's looks fake story
because you forcely included aslam without any reason
Sorry for comment Relax Rohan,he has not even gone in that direction yet.
Knowing how Ajanmol writes,I am sure he will let Vandana
decide her own destiny. It's her wish,HER life,her desires are all
that matter.
And anyway,this is a fantasy story, things like this don't really happen.
it's a skill to write in a way that you tease the line between real and fantasy and yet make it sound unreal so that we readers enjoy the unthinkable and Ajanmol has done it very well.
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(26-06-2021, 02:36 PM)Ajanmol Wrote: @qazmlp bro...mujhe aapka idea bhut pasand aaya tha or mai aage chalkar ye idea jaroor use karoonga .....osi tarah aage or bhi idea dete rahiyega.....
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27-06-2021, 09:48 PM
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Update na dene ke liye sorry.....jald hi update dunga....
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28-06-2021, 12:46 AM
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Koi baat nhi.. Lekin bharpai ke liye thoda lamba update dena...
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Mere sathi readers,
Ajanmol ne mujhe agla update ka kuch hissa dm kiya hain....
Bhot hi rochak aur dhamakedaar hone ja rhe hain...
kuch namuna aap sabke samne rakh rhe hain -
"Brijmohan :-are randi...aise shareef aurto ki tarah kaahe sharma rahi hai jaise pehli baar ye sab kar rahi hai ya pehli baar birju ko aise karta dekh rahi hai ?? Hehe...mujhse pehle bhi to yeh tere saath masti kar chuka hai ...masti qa behenchod bas choda nahi hai tujhe baaki tere jism ke saath to pura maze liya hai isne....ab apni sharam ko apne paniyayi chut mai daal or dekh nazar utha ke ki kaise yeh tere bra se tere badan ki khusboo ko apne andar samet raha hai ?? Iski aankho mai apni aankho ko mila kar dekh kitna hawas hai tere liye ..."
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"vandana ko bhi bhut maza aaraha tha or uski chut mai bhi maano bhut saari cheetiya (ant) rengne lagi ho....ek to brijmohan dwara use french kiss or choochi masalne or doosre ore birju ke dwara uske gaand ko masalna or apna chehra uski gaand pe ragadna ye sab vandana ke liye bhut jyada ho raha tha jiske chalte wo sab kuch bhool bas is pal ko enjoy karne lagi thi or uski chut paani chhode jaa rahi thi......"
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"Birju :- are meri bholi bhaali randi memsaab aap chaar pairo se chalkar aane ka matlab nahi samjhe ?? Hehe.....chaliye mai aapko saaf saaf keh kar bata deta hu ...mera matlab yeh hai ki aap chalkar nahi balki ek kutiya ke tarah ghutne or kohni ke bal chalkar mere paas yaahi aayengi or ha ek baat or aate samay aapki ye aanke mere lund par hona chahiye....."
Aur bhi bhot sare cheese anewala hain is update mein jo mujhe bhi nhi pata.
Ajanmol bro ne apne lekhan shaili ke dwara, vandu darling ko bhot, bhot hi zada humiliate kie hain...
Ekdam avval darje ki update... 2 male 1 female combination ka aisa kadak update.... padke pura pani chod dega bhai log.........
Please bro give the full update as soon as possible....
 
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(27-06-2021, 02:29 AM)qazmlp Wrote: Relax Rohan,he has not even gone in that direction yet.
Knowing how Ajanmol writes,I am sure he will let Vandana
decide her own destiny. It's her wish,HER life,her desires are all
that matter.
And anyway,this is a fantasy story, things like this don't really happen.
it's a skill to write in a way that you tease the line between real and fantasy and yet make it sound unreal so that we readers enjoy the unthinkable and Ajanmol has done it very well.
Sorry but he is not a perfect writer
It's correct believe it
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बिना वजह ,., को घुसा रहा शुरू से
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Beautiful update... Please update more.
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Sunday ko tha update day
Ab aur wait na karawo
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Take your time it's alright
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please post this story in english
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Kya hua Ajanmol bhai...Update is delayed,..kab Tak release karoge
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29-06-2021, 11:33 PM
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(29-06-2021, 11:27 PM)qazmlp Wrote: Kya hua Ajanmol bhai...Update is delayed,..kab Tak release karoge
Bhai 60 % update complete hai...bas time ni mil raha isse aage likhne ka...lockdown khulne ke baad life busy chal rahi hai.....or mai part by part dekar maza kharab ni karna chahta isliye is sunday ko finally update mega update dunga.....i hope u all like this upcoming mega update....or mera aap sab se waada hai ki ye aane wala update bhut erotic hoga....
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