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Tujhay Dhondon kahan (writer-Sahil)(special thanks avi bhai)
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Tujhay Dhondon kahan

 writer
Sahil
Special thanks
 avi bhai

story start karny se pehly kuch batein clear ho jaein take readers ke zehn me koe shaq o shoba wihm o guman (chinta) na rahe

Hi dosto jesa ke aap loog oper daikh rahe honge tittle me avi bhai ka naam he is ka kiya matlab he

kiya avi wapas aa gaya he?
kiya ye bhi avi ki story he?
ager aesa he to phir us ko apni pehly wali story complite karni chaye thi?

bhaiyo aesa kuch nahi he 
na avi bhai wapis aaya he 
or na hi us ki story he
2saal pehly jab avi bhai ne dobara apni story
`main meri famaly mera gaun` aa kar continue ki thi tab me ne or sahil bhai ne Xossip forum par avi ko ik request ki thi aap is story ke sath ik or story start karo to 
avi ne kahan me apni purani story complite kar ke phir dosry story start karu ga 
phir us din ke baad hum dono daily jab avi online aata xosssip par to us se chit chat karty the 
aese hi baton baton me avi bai ne kaha ke yar tum log bhi apni koe story kyun nahi likhty 

us waqt me to silent reader tha lekin sahil bhai xossip ka member tha me or sahil ik hi gaun ke rehy waly hain is liye hum dono sahil ki id se hi avi se baat karty the

khair baton ko short karta chalon avi jab ye kaha to sahil bhai ne wo text mujhy dikhaya 

phir mere dimag ki bati jali me ne sahil se kaha ke avi bhai ko bolo ke ik script ager us ke zehn me he to hame chota sa peragiraf likh kar de 

sahil ne bhai ko text kiya lekin us waqt avi bhai off line ho chuke the us ke baad 1 2 din guzar gae avi ka koe reply nai aaya hum samjhy naraz ho gae shayad 

lekin hamari mayosi 3 din hi khatam huwi jab avi bhai ne ik labma choda text bheja g haan dosto wo story ka script tha 

phir ham ne us par likhna shuru kiya jab 2 update mukamal huwe to hum humne socha story chap di jae 

hum ne is bat ka mashwara avi bhai se liya to unho ne kaha ke koe lambi story post karny se pehly kam az kam us ke 8 ya 10 lambe chode updats ka hona hona zarori he 

phir hum bhai ki baat maanty huwy post nahi ki or phir kuch arse baad avi ne bhi xosssip me post karna karnachor di 

or ham bhi bhi apni persnal life me mebuzy ho hogai or phir ik din aaya ke xosssip ban ho gai 

tittle me avi bhai ka naam sirf isliye diya gaya he kyun ke story bhale hum dono ne mil kar likhi lekin scrip avi bhai ne diya tha is liye hum ne sara credit us writer ke naam kar kardiya

story post karny se phely ik guzarish he apni rae se hume zaror aagah karna
thank for reading...
TUJHY DHONDON KAHAN
(story of tow boys)
Namaskar comming soon Namaskar
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TUJHY DHONDON KAHAN
(story of tow boys)
Namaskar comming soon Namaskar
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TUJHY DHONDON KAHAN
(story of tow boys)
Namaskar comming soon Namaskar
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Aik alishan mehal Charo tarf charagan


Itni badi haweli or us me sanata chaya huwa tha bass chidyon ke chehkny ki awaz aa rahi thi

jese hi camra us mehal ki iner side ki tarf jata he wese hi sanata or ghehra ho jata he jo jo chidyo ki chil mill thi wo bhi band ho jatti he

tabhi kisi kadmoon ke chalny ki aahat sunnai deti he
tak tak take!!!!!!

wo qadam chalty huwy ik room ke paas aa kar ruk jaty hain

us room ka darwaza kulne ki aawaz aati he
cheeeeeeench
or koe ander enter hota he or darwaja band ho jata he

KADAK

is awaz se ander baithe huwe koe aurat chear se uthne ki koshish karti he he lekin uth nahi paati

or qadam chalty huwy us laday ki tarf barny lagty hain

us lady ke dil ki dharkan tez ho jati he or lambi lambi sansein lene lagti he

un qadmon awan ab use apne qareeb sunai deti he us ki gabrahat or barh jati he

tabhi do hath us ki orh bharty hain
nazar room me lagi ghadi par jati he waqt apni raftar me chal raha hota he

taktaktaktak

wo dono hath barhty huwy us lady ki ankhon par aajaty hain waqt ki raftar jese ruk c jati usi waqt ik zordar awaz aati he

Tan
ye awaz ghari se aati he 12a.m
lekin us lady ka pura wajood hil jatta he us ke raseely hont kampny lagy hain wo kuch bolna chahti he lekin bol nahi paati

phir do hont us aurat ke kampty huwy honton ki tarf bhadty hain or us ke raseely honto ka rass peeny lagty hain

thisi madhum sa music saeran bajta he

pee loo tere gele gele honto ki shabnam

us aurat ki gardan peche ki tarf lurak jati he or us ke lambe ghane resmi baal hawa me lehra rahy hoty

ik hadsom ladka us aurat ke raseely honton se sara ras nichod raha hota he us ki gardan se pink coler ke dupaty ko utar ke bad par faink deta he or us ke honto se apne hont alag kar ke us aurat ke kan ki tarf le jatta he or dheere se bolta he
happy?birthday maddam

or us maddam aankho se aanswo dhara behny lagti he

sab ko hasany wali meri rani maddan aaj kud ro rahi
ye bolty huwe wo ladka us ke samny aa jatta he

or maddam rani use apni bahon me kasty huwe bolti he
Mere raja jaan hi nikal thi di tum ne meri

raja- maddam aap ko birthday? gift jo dena tha

rani maddam- (use apni bahon or teez kasty huwy) mere nikal jatti to

raja- (rani maddam se alag hoty huwy)me apni sasein aap ki sason me dall detta

raja apne honton se rani rani ke honton ko lock ? kar deta he or fir se rani ke honton ka ras pene lag jatta he or rani us us ke balon ko sehlany lagti he or isbar dono hi aek dosry ke honto ka ras peeny lagty hain 4 . 5 mint ki kissing ke baad dono aek dosry se alag ho jaty hain or apni sasein durst karny lag jaty he

continue..........
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No doubt Avi is one of the greatest writer in this forum.
The first update itself has expressed the quality of you as a superb writer.
Superb writing. Please do continue the story
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