[Jassiharman]

Hello koi hai

[Fuckerwala]

Sarkar 333
Yaar dubara story chalu karo. Itna achchha to likh rahe ho

[Fuckerwala]

Koyi to is kahani ko pura karo

[Rana Abdullah]

Yar sarkar bhai story continue karoge ya ni

[Fuckerwala]

Sarkar bhayi to story pura nahi karenge. Lekin koyi reader hi pura kar do

[KING of Devils]

Sarkar bhayi to story pura nahi karenge. Lekin koyi reader hi pura kar do

Bhai aap hi pura kar di na

[KING of Devils]

App muje ishe story ka plot bata do me complete karu ga

[Fuckerboy123]

Hi every one

[KING of Devils]

Ager real h to isko komal ya rani ko complete karna chahiye bro

[Nadan Dill]

Waiting for new update

[Nadan Dill]

Bhaii koie to is storey ko complet kar do

[KING of Devils]

Bhai me complete karna chahta hu but muje koi idea dega jo avi sir ko janta ho aur story ke age kya hoga vo bhi bata de to me try karu ga complete karne ka

[Happy1234]

Bhai story ko yahi end kardo real story hai or koi or likhega to utna maja nahi aai ga

[Sethi]

Bhai story ko yahi end kardo real story hai or koi or likhega to utna maja nahi aai ga

Kuch hud tak aap sahi Hain. Lekin is case me agar koi is real story ko agar sahi tareeke se sabh alag alag hisse, Jo ke ab bikhre hue Hain, unhain agar ek ache ending tak le jasakta hai Kar Lena chaiye.

Avi bhi, har ek naujawan ke tarah, apni life ko ek acche makaam pe le Jana chahta tha to agar uski incomplete story ko agar ek acchi happy ending de sakta hai to Kar lena chaiye.

[Sethi]

Ye story lagbag saat saal chali phir suddenly ruk gai. Kai logon ne Kai bar writer ko forum ke zariye request kiya jiska koi jawab nahin aiya. 

Agar aap sahi bhi ho to kya?

Yeh bhi to soocho ke in forums par likhne ka in writers Ka kya faida? Yeh log apni personal life aur professional life me se kuch samay nikalne in forums par real ya kalpanik kahaniyan likhte hain aur agar Kisi vajah se kuch din story pe dhyan nahin de sakte hain to ulte seedhe comments milte hain. Inka yahan se ghar Ka kharcha nahin chalta hai. Aur aise me jab kuch log ulte comments likhte hain to writer discourage hoke likhna chod dete hain. 

Inhe encourage karna chaiye. Woh log professional writers to hain Nahin. Aise me agar koi Achi story likhte likhte kahin pe atak jata hai personal ya professional reasons ke vajah se aur usse galat comments milte hain, to woh story ko wahin chodna hi sahi samajta hai. Isme uski galti nahin hai lekin unki galti hai jo unko apna naukar samajh ke uttpatang comments karte hain.

[Happy1234]

Kuch hud tak aap sahi Hain. Lekin is case me agar koi is real story ko agar sahi tareeke se sabh alag alag hisse, Jo ke ab bikhre hue Hain, unhain agar ek ache ending tak le jasakta hai Kar Lena chaiye.

Avi bhi, har ek naujawan ke tarah, apni life ko ek acche makaam pe le Jana chahta tha to agar uski incomplete story ko agar ek acchi happy ending de sakta hai to Kar lena chaiye.

 To jo is real story ke bare me janta ho wo likhe or story ko thoda aage badha ke ek achi ending de de taki kishiko ungli uthane ka mouka na mile

[Sethi]

Sahi hai. Is liye jab bhi koi forum ke writers ki galat comments karte hain, to accha nahin lagta hai. 

Anyway, aapko Avi ke aur uske life aur family ke bare me pata hai to agar aap is story ko aage bada sakte hain, chaiye real me kalpanik story bhi mix karke. Agar aap nahin karna chahte hain to agar kuch log is forum pe is story ko aage le jana chahte hain to just unko kuch hints de sakte hain to shayad wo isse aage le ja sakte hain.

Soch lijiye. Aakhir Avi bhi is story ko lagbag saat saal se likh Raha tha. Woh bhi isse khud complete karna chahta hoga lekin abhi woh possible nahin hai to kalpanik hi sahi, is story ko ek happy ending de ke khatam kiya Jaye to sahi Hoga. Aap bhale is forum pe hi bhale main points likh dijiye jaise ek reader ne chalti story ke  samay likhe the:

suckerjeet 4th March201512:48 AM


kahani adhi hogeyi he
mela v adhi hogayi he. . . 
bahut kuch ho chuka hai
bahut kuch honebala hai. . . 
kuch swal ka jwab mila hai. . . 
kuch swal ka jwab milnebala hai. . . . 
jese ki. . . . . 

sheela ki jwani?
shoba kab legi prasd?
panditan ka adhura pyas?
thakuran ki intejar?
resma kab banegi pinky?
kamani ki manokamna hogi puri?
sara zoya mala (hospital) kab karengi phir se tratment?
ria &zia ka judwa maja kya phjr milega?
payal kab ghumega avi mela ?
pgf &kgf ke sath kabtak chalegi masti?
kabtak vapas ayegi ritu?
heena soniya k comeback?
aarti ki kab uteregi aarti
sofiya ko kya tayar kar payegi kgf ?
mumy papa ki kahani?
neha bua ka suspence?
rani ka history?
rani avi kya hopayega shadi?
kya mala degi rani ko takkar ya koi aur v ane bali hai?
sital ke sath kab hogi adhuri kahani puri?
sweta didi& neeta bua ki kab khulegi gand?
poonam & vidya kab lagega no?
jyoti bua ka manokamana?
chacha ka chakkar?
khuwar singh ko kitne lagenege jhataka?
ranjit singh kya jaisa dikhata waisa hai?
kavita &leena ka future?
riya (gaon) ka recation?
rajesh ka unsloved problem?
savita ka kya hoga hoga phjr se entry?
dadaji ka jhataka?
badi chachi kabtak hogi tayar?
choti chachi kji smartness kab tak degi avi ka sath?
avi ko kya100 karenedegi bilo rani (hony singhka gana) . . 
avi kabtak rahega gaon mai? kya kya change hogi gaon mai?
finally the most imp qus


komal???!!!

 (1 asa chrecter jo story 1st le ke abtak chali arahi sayad end tak chale. . . jo apna madhur ahesas dheree dhree chod rahi hai. . . slow poison ki tarha uska asr se kab hoga avi ka. hang over. . . 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 Note - neha bua ka raaz ab dire dire open karunga

Supence tabi open ho sakta hai jab aapko ye pata ho ki us raaz me kitne sawal chupe hai

Ek sawal abi baki hai,  dadaji ke sath kya hua hai, 

Us sawal ke sath Avi apne mata pita ke bareme jo bate chupai hai wo avi pata lagayenga

Choti chachi nahi bata rahi hai to kya hua Avi kahi aur se pata lagayenga

Step by step chalte hai

Avi ka college,  komal ka chapter,  rani ka pyar aur neha bua ka raaz,  ek sath chalenge,  taki jaldi raaz open ho sake



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Note - 

Neha bua ka raaz, 

choti chaahi to Avi ko kuch batati nahi hai

kab tak Avi choti chachi ke sahi samay ka intazar karenga

Avi ko dusaro se puchna chaiye

1) Badi chachi ko puche apne maa aur papa ke bareme,  Badi chachi emotional ho jayengi ji se Avi unse puch nahi payenga

2) pooja bua, wo sab me badi hai,  unko paya honfa oar wo kahengi ki choti chachi ko puch lo

3) choti chachi,  wo to kahti hai sahi samay ka intzar karo

4) neha bua to bat nahi karti unse puch hi nahi sakta Avi

5) seema chachi,  seema chachi bata sakti hai, unko apni bato me fasa kar Avi sach pata kar sakta hai

6) neeta bua,  neeta bua se bhi sach pata kiya ja sakta hai,  wo to neha nua ke kafi karib hai unko bahot kuch pata honga

7) chacha, chacha ko jada kuch pata nahi hota pir bhi wo kuch to bata hi sakte hai,  chacha se narmi se bat karni hongi Avi ko

8) sweta didi wo kabhi nahi batayengi, 

9) komal,  komal ko jitna pata honga wo bata dengi

to neeta bua se start karte hai

pir seema chachi,  komal,  aur chacha se puch lenge

step by step raaz open karte hai


neeta bua se neha bua ke bareme puchte huye rajesh ka raaz bhi open karenge



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Note - 

1st step komal

2nd step neeta bua jisme rajesh ko introduce karunga

3 step hai seema chachi jaha rani ki mummy ka part honga

4 step dadaji

5 step hai chachaji,  jaha jyoti bua ka kissa bhi close honga

6 step hai komal

7 step hai neha bua ka raaz


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Ho sake to thode details bhi dedena. Bakhi aapke upar hai, jaise aapko marzi.

[Sethi]

Sorry guys but I broke my hand while playing football this weekend  Sad
Please pray for my speedy recovery.

Ab aapka haal kaisa hai? Aur kitna samay lag sakta hai aapko theek hone me? Aap story kafi acchi likh rahe the. Agar isse continue rakhte ho to accha hoga as aapka likhne ka style bhi original story se similar hai. Ho sake to respond kijiye.

[Roni ji]

Plz updated

[Jassiharman]

Hello