Misc. Erotica BASSSSS.. KARO ..(NAMRATA ek PAHELI)

[Omprakash meena]

Update me or kitni deri hogi bhai

[oscarpistorious]

is there any hope of further updates?

[omijust4u]

Royalkingfire bhai.... Maine suru se lekar ab tak ki kahani padi, Bhai Aapke likhne ka tarika behad saandaar hai. Dil aur lund dono ko khush kar diya. Puri kahani me aapne ye excitement bana ke rkha ki aakhir kab Nameata ki seal tutegi aur use kon todega. Aur jaise "diwali encounter series" ka aapne end kiya. Namrata Ki seal jaise hi birju todne wala tha. Yaha tak ki usne apne lund ka topa bhi uski chut me daal diya tha but uske baad bhi aap uske baap ko lehar aa gye. Aur Namrata Ki virginity ko bacha liya Ye mujhe behad hi sandaar laga. Tab maine socha ki shayad aapne socha hai ki aap namrata ki virginity akhir tak bacha ke rkhna chahte hai aur kisi special person se uski virginity tudwayenge but Safar ke akhiri episode me Mishra ke lund se Namrata ka seal tudwana samjh nhi aaya. Namrata ki virginity ko lekar jo excitement aapne hamare dil me banaya tha uska ant aise hi sadharan tarike se kar diya. Mujhe to laga kuch bada hona chahiye tha. Birju aur savla ke sath sab kuch hone ke baad bhi aapne sirf uski virginity bacha ke rkhi thi.. to mujhe laga is series (Safar) ke last me bhi namrata ki seal nhi tudwana tha aur excitement barkarar rkhna tha aur iske aage ke episode me iske baap ke hantho hi iski seal tudwani thi. Jaisa aapne safar ke last episode me hint diya tha ki "Namrata uski maa (Suchita) ki pehli galti ka natija tha" jaha tak mujhe samjh aaya ki Namrata Sanjay ki nazayaj aulaad thi.. 

Namrata ki virginity ka excitement to aapne behad sandaar create kiya tha but mere according uska ant is tarike se nhi hona chahiye tha. Aapne thodi jalbaazi kar di. Kyunki jaha tak mujhe lagta hai ye story abhi khatm nhi hui hai balki abhi kam se kam 2-3 series aur aane wali hai. 

Abhi namrata ke past ki series chal rhi hai. Aur ye to bilkul clear hai ki isme jo kuch bhi ho but namrata ki chudai to bilkul hi nhi hogi aur namrata ko lekar jo excitement aapne create kiya tha wo bhi aapne Mishra ke sath namrata ki chudai karwake laghag khatm hi kr diya. Uske baad aap namrata ka past ki story bata rhe hai. Isliye namrata ko lekar wo excitement nhi aa rha jo pehle tha. Main abhi bhi kahunga Namrata Randi ho ya Sanskari, jis tarah aapne namrata ke carecter ko present kiya hai. Uski virginity is kahani ke ant tak aapko bacha ke rkhni chahiye thi. Taki usko lekar jo excitement hai wo akhir tak bana rhe. 

Mera ek suggestion hai agar ho ske to aap "Safar Series" ka last episode ko fir se likho. Aur namrata ki virginity ko kuch bhi krke bacha lo please.... Jitna Birju ne kiya tha utne tak hi Mishra ko bhi krne do fir kisi tarah use wahi tak rok do Par us sale buddhe se namrata ki kuwari chut ko patne se bacha lo Pleeeese. 

Kuch bura laga ho to sorry bhai but me apne aap ko nhi rok paya. Namrata ke carecter se jis tarah main connected hua hu main ye mishra ke lund se uski chut ka fatna bardast nhi kr paya. Accha hua ki aapne Mishra ke lund se uski Gand nhi marwayi. Agar aisa kiya hota to iske liye shayad main aapko kabhi maaf na kr pata. 


mere man me kuch sawal hai.

1. Agar aapne Namrata ke collage boyfriend abhi, aur juta sine wale budhe, birju, savla in sab se uski virginity bacha rkha tha to aisi kya majburi thi ki mishra jaise buddhe se uski seal tudwa di.

2. Puri kahani me sirf buddho se hi kyun chudai karwa rhe hai.

[Anvesharonny]

Royalkingfire bhai.... Maine suru se lekar ab tak ki kahani padi, Bhai Aapke likhne ka tarika behad saandaar hai. Dil aur lund dono ko khush kar diya. Puri kahani me aapne ye excitement bana ke rkha ki aakhir kab Nameata ki seal tutegi aur use kon todega. Aur jaise "diwali encounter series" ka aapne end kiya. Namrata Ki seal jaise hi birju todne wala tha. Yaha tak ki usne apne lund ka topa bhi uski chut me daal diya tha but uske baad bhi aap uske baap ko lehar aa gye. Aur Namrata Ki virginity ko bacha liya Ye mujhe behad hi sandaar laga. Tab maine socha ki shayad aapne socha hai ki aap namrata ki virginity akhir tak bacha ke rkhna chahte hai aur kisi special person se uski virginity tudwayenge but Safar ke akhiri episode me Mishra ke lund se Namrata ka seal tudwana samjh nhi aaya. Namrata ki virginity ko lekar jo excitement aapne hamare dil me banaya tha uska ant aise hi sadharan tarike se kar diya. Mujhe to laga kuch bada hona chahiye tha. Birju aur savla ke sath sab kuch hone ke baad bhi aapne sirf uski virginity bacha ke rkhi thi.. to mujhe laga is series (Safar) ke last me bhi namrata ki seal nhi tudwana tha aur excitement barkarar rkhna tha aur iske aage ke episode me iske baap ke hantho hi iski seal tudwani thi. Jaisa aapne safar ke last episode me hint diya tha ki "Namrata uski maa (Suchita) ki pehli galti ka natija tha" jaha tak mujhe samjh aaya ki Namrata Sanjay ki nazayaj aulaad thi.. 

Namrata ki virginity ka excitement to aapne behad sandaar create kiya tha but mere according uska ant is tarike se nhi hona chahiye tha. Aapne thodi jalbaazi kar di. Kyunki jaha tak mujhe lagta hai ye story abhi khatm nhi hui hai balki abhi kam se kam 2-3 series aur aane wali hai. 

Abhi namrata ke past ki series chal rhi hai. Aur ye to bilkul clear hai ki isme jo kuch bhi ho but namrata ki chudai to bilkul hi nhi hogi aur namrata ko lekar jo excitement aapne create kiya tha wo bhi aapne Mishra ke sath namrata ki chudai karwake laghag khatm hi kr diya. Uske baad aap namrata ka past ki story bata rhe hai. Isliye namrata ko lekar wo excitement nhi aa rha jo pehle tha. Main abhi bhi kahunga Namrata Randi ho ya Sanskari, jis tarah aapne namrata ke carecter ko present kiya hai. Uski virginity is kahani ke ant tak aapko bacha ke rkhni chahiye thi. Taki usko lekar jo excitement hai wo akhir tak bana rhe. 

Mera ek suggestion hai agar ho ske to aap "Safar Series" ka last episode ko fir se likho. Aur namrata ki virginity ko kuch bhi krke bacha lo please.... Jitna Birju ne kiya tha utne tak hi Mishra ko bhi krne do fir kisi tarah use wahi tak rok do Par us sale buddhe se namrata ki kuwari chut ko patne se bacha lo Pleeeese. 

Kuch bura laga ho to sorry bhai but me apne aap ko nhi rok paya. Namrata ke carecter se jis tarah main connected hua hu main ye mishra ke lund se uski chut ka fatna bardast nhi kr paya. Accha hua ki aapne Mishra ke lund se uski Gand nhi marwayi. Agar aisa kiya hota to iske liye shayad main aapko kabhi maaf na kr pata. 


mere man me kuch sawal hai.

1. Agar aapne Namrata ke collage boyfriend abhi, aur juta sine wale budhe, birju, savla in sab se uski virginity bacha rkha tha to aisi kya majburi thi ki mishra jaise buddhe se uski seal tudwa di.

2. Puri kahani me sirf buddho se hi kyun chudai karwa rhe hai.

Actually Mishra ne Namrata ki virginity li ya Nahi yahi mystery Hain. Royal king fire brother be likha hi iss tarah se Ke Aap usake writing Ke fan ho jaaye.
Pehele unhone namrata Sanskari Sharif dikhaya Aur Diwali encounter Tak Hume yahi laga Ke namrata ko sexual encounter ka koi experience Nahi Hain.lekin
Diwali encounter Ke baad namrata Ke andar Jo pyas lagi thi use Mishra be use karake usaki chudai ki lekin royalking fire brother ne story main Aisa twist Kiya ki yeh question samane aaya ke Namrata Sharif sanskari dikhane ka Natak karati Hain ya wo ek chalakh Lombadi Hain Jo apane husn ka fayada utha Ke apani pyas Puri karati Hain.Aur isaka jawab namrata Ke past life main Chupa hain.aur wo aage ka update padhke pata chal jaayega.
Aur Rahi baat buddho ki to yehi story ki theme Hain Aur aage ka pata Nahi royalkingfire brother Kya twist laate Hain??

[Anvesharonny]

Congrats Royal King fire Brother for 8 Lakh views on your story.I hope you and your family is safe and healthy.
We miss you badly in this forum.
If possible please provide update about your health status.hoping to see update on story very soon.
Stay Safe Keep Rocking.

[rehanboy16]

Hoping to see you come back with a bang.

[doctor101]

Classic erotica. Writer has a right to give twist and turn. Aap writer ki treatment dekho. Baaki net pe aap ko 1000 virgin girls story mil jaayegi.

[omijust4u]

Actually Mishra ne Namrata ki virginity li ya Nahi yahi mystery Hain. Royal king fire brother be likha hi iss tarah se Ke Aap usake writing Ke fan ho jaaye.
Pehele unhone namrata Sanskari Sharif dikhaya Aur Diwali encounter Tak Hume yahi laga Ke namrata ko sexual encounter ka koi experience Nahi Hain.lekin
Diwali encounter Ke baad namrata Ke andar Jo pyas lagi thi use Mishra be use karake usaki chudai ki lekin royalking fire brother ne story main Aisa twist Kiya ki yeh question samane aaya ke Namrata Sharif sanskari dikhane ka Natak karati Hain ya wo ek chalakh Lombadi Hain Jo apane husn ka fayada utha Ke apani pyas Puri karati Hain.Aur isaka jawab namrata Ke past life main Chupa hain.aur wo aage ka update padhke pata chal jaayega.
Aur Rahi baat buddho ki to yehi story ki theme Hain Aur aage ka pata Nahi royalkingfire brother Kya twist laate Hain??

Actually aap sahi bol rhe bhai. Ha ye mystery hi hai ki mishra ne uski virginity todi hai. Kyunki royalkingfirebhai ne chut se sirf blood aane ki baat likhi hai seal tutne ki nhi. Aur main samjha ki mishra ne uski virginity todi hai. Its my bad. Shayad wo pehle se hi kheli khai thi.

[dagadu]

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HOPE TUM MERI BAAT SAMAJH GAYE HOGE

[axm55]

Waiting for next update.

[oscarpistorious]

How many more months will u take to write next update?

[BHOG LO]

Dibba band

[axm55]

Waiting for next update.

[Anvesharonny]

Dear Royalkingfire brother,You neither replying messages not replying posts.So just want to know you and your family is all right?? because past 3 months we not seen you post anything in this thread.
Just want to know are you going to move story forward or we consider it as the end of the story.
Stay Safe And Keep Rocking.

[Sush44]

Hello Royalkingfire brother..hope aap acche honge.. Sub bahot time se aapke story ke update ka wait kar rahe hai..hame pata hai aap ye story aise bich mein nahi chodenge.. Par ata least hame bataye ki next update kab ayega ya ye story ka future to kya hoga.. Please..

[dickcassidy]

Awesome

[Max87]

apki message mila bhai, magar apki message box full hain is liye apko private message nehi kar pa raha huin,

by the way thanks to back and waiting for new update bhai

[oscarpistorious]

bhai 3-3 months gap spoiling all the fun of this awesome story....I can understand that there is timing issue....writers have other priorities as well....but I suggested you to write smaller updates like before instead of writing bigger updates.....

[raja shri]

@royalkingfire brother apki story bahut jabardast hai..... Apki writing skills ka to me fan ho gya hu .....story ka seduction level kamal ka ha yr....bs ek problem hai apki aap update bahut slow dete hai....agr kuch problem hai to bta skte hai ...an dnext update kab tak doge.....

[Ricota]

atleast reply to the comments and let your readers updated about the status of the story