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Anita shaam ke 6 baje ke kareeb kuchh samaan khareed kar auto se stand pahunchi.Woh auto se utar kar apne ghar ke taraf jaane wale gali ke taraf aage badhi hi thi ki use thodi dur par ek paan dukan par Hariya khada dikha.Hariya paan munh mein thuns kar apne haath ko apne kandhe par latke gamchhe mein ponchhkar wahan se jaane laga.Anita ek pal ke liye use dekhi aur phir waapas ghar ke taraf chalne lagi.
Anita thoda aage badhi hi thi ki peechhe se use ek awaaz sunayi diya,"memsaahab".
Anita yeh awaaz sunnkar peechhe ghumi to Hariya ko peechhe se aate hue dekhi.Hariya paan chabata hua muskurate hue uske paas aaya to Anita muskurati huyee poochhi,"are Hariya ji aap?".
Hariya paan chabate hue hi bola,"haan memsaahab hum".Hariya phir ek nazar Anita ki jism ko gandi nazar se dekhne laga to Anita muskurati huyee poochhi,"Kya baat hai Hariya ji aap iss waqt aur idhar?".
Hariya muskurate hue bola,"haan memsaahab.Kahe hum idhar nahin aa sakte kya?".
Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"off ho Hariya ji,mera matlab woh nahin hai.Aapka marzee aapko jahan jaana hai jaiye.Main to bas aapko idhar normally kabhi dekhi nahin aur khaas kar iss waqt isliye poochh rahi hoon".
Hariya side mein paan thuk kar gamchha se apna munh ponchhkar muskurate hue bola,"haan memsaahab bina kaam ke hum idhar aate nahin hain,aaj ek kaam se idhar aaye the to aato pakadne se pehle soche paan kha le.Paan khaa kar jaa hi rahe the to aap dikh gayi.Aapke naazuk haathon mein yeh thaila dekha to hum soche ki humra hote hue humri pyaari memsaahab ko thaila uthane pare yeh humse bardaasht nahin hoga.To isliye hum aa gaye ki aapki madad bhi kar dunga aur saath mein aapse mil bhi lunga".
Anita Hariya ko thukte hue dekhi.Aamtaur par Anita kisi ko aese thukte hue dekhkar ghrina se use dekhti thi.Use yeh sab pasand nahin tha.Magar Hariya ka baat alag tha.Use na jaane kyun Hariya ke iss tarah ka aadat mein koi burai nahin lagta tha.
Woh muskurati huyee boli,"Hariya ji aap bhi na.Meri tareef karne se baaj nahin aayenge.Haath to haath hota hai."
Hariya yeh sunnkar muskurate hue bola,"nahin memsaahab bilkul baaj nahin aayenge.Hum to sirf sach bolta hun.Ab sach bolne se aapki tareef ho jaye to theek hai wahi sahi."
Anita yeh sunnkar khilkhilane lagi to Hariya bola,"dijiye memsaahab hum thaila aapke ghar tak pahunchane mein madad karte hain".
Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyee boli,"are nahin Hariya ji iski koi zaroorat nahin.Main utha sakti hoon".
Hariya yeh sunnkar paan thukkar munh ko gamchhe mein ponchhkar Anita ki jism ko gande tareeqe se dekhkar waapas uski chehre par dekhkar bola,"kaa hua memsaahab?Humse kauno ghalti hua hai kaa jo aap humse madad nahin karwana chahti".
Anita yeh sunnkar Hariya ke thoda kareeb aayi aur apni chunchi ko thoda sa aage ke taraf karke Hariya ke shirt se jhaankte paseena se chamakte hue uske chhati par haath rakhkar boli,"are nahin Hariya ji kaisi baat kar rahe hain aap.Mujhe to khushi hai ki iss naye sheher mein meri madad karne ke liye koi hai,aur woh bhi aap jaisa mard.Main to bas soch rahi thi ki aap kaam karke thak gaye honge,aapko araam ki zaroorat hogi"
Hariya yeh sunnkar Anita ki jism ko ek baar phir se upar se neeche dekhkar uski aankhon mein dekhte hue bola,"are nahin memsaahab,itna bhi nahin thake hain ki aapki madad nahin kar sake.Humre ander itna dum hai ki hum aapka madad kar sake.Bas bolkar to dekhiye"
Anita yeh sunnkar ek pal ke liye main road (auto stand ke taraf) ke taraf dekhkar apne mobile mein dekhi.Shaam ke 6:15 baj raha tha.Woh time dekhne ke baad Hariya ko dekhti huyi boli,"Theek hai Hariya ji jab aap meri madad karne aa hi gaye hai to chaliye meri madad kar hi dijiye"
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Hariya yeh sunnkar Anita ki aankhon mein dekhte hue bola,"Jaisi aapki marzi memsaahab".
Hariya Anita ki haath se thaila le liya aur dono Anita ki ghar ke taraf chal diye.Thoda aage jaane par road andhera tha.Sadak ke kinare ki light bahot dheemi thi aur koi aane jaane wala bhi nahin tha.Hariya Anita ki kamar par haath rakhkar use apne taraf khinch liya aur Anita bhi bina kisi virodh ke usse chipak gayi aur dono waise hi chalne lage.
Hariya Anita ki kamar se neeche uski gaand par haath rakhkar masalte hue puchha,"memsaahab saahab kitne baje aayenge"
Anita chalti huyi boli,"lagbhag 8 baje tak"
Hariya Anita ki gaand masalte hue bola,"Achha."
Dono Anita ke ghar tak pahunch chuke the. Anita main gate ko kholne lagi aur kholti huyi Hariya se puchhi,"Aese Hariya ji aap idhar se jaa rahe the ya aapko meri madad karne ka dil kar raha tha isliye aap aaye idhar."
Hariya Anita ki gaand se satt kar bola,"Memsaahab mera to har waqt aapki madad karne ka dil karta hai,lekin iska matlab ee nahin ki hum apna marzee se kabhi bhi aakar aapko kisi tarah ka pareshani hone dun.Woh to bas eehaan se jaa rahe the to aap dikh gayi.Shayad upar wala chahta hai ki hum aapka iss sheher mein khyaal rakhun."
Anita tala khol kar Hariya ke taraf ghumkar dekhi aur muskurakar "hmm shayad" boli ki tabhi woh,"memsaahab kuchh kh..khane ko do memsaahab,kuchh khane ko do" ki awaaz sunnkar ghabra gayi aur jidhar se awaaz aa rahi thi uske taraf dekhne lagi.Hariya bhi udhar dekhne laga to use ek ganda sa aadmi dikhayi diya.Uske baal,daadhi aur munchh bade bade the aur usme gandagi bhara hua tha.Kapda bhi maila aur fata hua tha.
Woh Anita ke aur kareeb aate hue bolna jaari rakha,"memsaahab khana do,memsaahab khana do."
Hariya use Anita ke taraf aata dekh uske taraf haath se rukne ka ishara karte hue bola,"abe udhar jaa,khabardar jo memsaahab ko tang kiya to.",lekin woh bhikhari usko nazar andaaz karte hue Anita ke taraf dekhte hue aage badhta raha.
Hariya usko aage badhta dekh dubara aur sakhti se bola,"abe teri to" aur Anita aur bhikhari ke beech mein khada hone jaa hi raha tha ki Anita usko rokte hue boli,"Hariya ji rukiye.Main isko jaanti hun.Isko darane ki zaroorat nahin."
Hariya Anita ke taraf ek baar dekha aur phir wahin uske bagal mein hi khada hokar waapas uski kamar par haath rakh diya.Anita use apni kamar se haath hatane ke liye nahin boli.
Woh bheekhari Anita ke kareeb aakar apne haath se munh ke taraf ishara karte hue bola,"memsaahab bahot bhukh laga hai,kuchh khaane ko dijiye"
Uske nazdeek aane se Anita ki naak mein gandi badbu ghusne lagi thi.Anita ko Hariya ke jism se bhi badbu aati hai,magar woh zyadatar paseene aur sharab beedi ke the.Hariya ganda rehta tha magar woh mazduri karne ke kaaran aur woh roz nahin to ek din gap karke nahata bhi tha,magar yeh bhikhari aakhiri baar kab nahaya ho kaha bhi nahin jaa sakta tha.
Anita apni naak ko thoda sikudte hue boli,"main abhi baahar se aa rahi hun,ghar mein abhi khaana nahin hoga".
Woh bhikhari gidgirate hue bola,"memsaahab jo bhi hai ghar par,jutha baasi jo bhi hai de dijiye main kha lunga,bahot bhukh lagi hai."
Woh bhikhari jab dubara bola to Hariya use sakhti se,"abe..." bola hi tha ki Anita use tokti huyi boli,"Hariya ji please ise daraiye mat,bechara bhukha hai".
Woh bhikhari Hariya ke taraf gusse se dekhne laga aur phir Anita ki kamar par uska haath ko dekhne laga.Anita uski nazron ko dekhkar samajh gayi ki woh uski kamar par Hariya ke haath ko dekh raha hai magar woh bejhijhak chup chap apni bag se 100 rupaye ka note nikalti huyi use dekar boli,"yeh lo aur jao kuchh khareed kar kha lo"
Jab bhikhari Anita ki kamar par Hariya ke haath ko dekha to Hariya wahan se haath hata liya aur peechhe Anita ki gaand par rakh diya.Bhikhari Anita ki awaaz sunne ke baad uske haath mein paisa dekhkar jhatt se paisa le liya aur muskurate hue Anita ko dekhkar bola,"bhagwaan aapko humesha khush rakhe memsaahab,humesha khush rakhe" aur yeh bolkar woh wahan se chal diya.
Anita muskurati huyi use dekhti rahi.Wahin Hariya bhikhari ko jaate hue dekh bola,"Sasura ee bhikhari kahan se aaya iss waqat?".
Anita Hariya ka baat sunnkar jawab mein boli,"Kabhi kabhi idhar aa jata hai,khana bacha rehta hai to main de deti hun" aur phir jab woh dur chala gaya to Hariya ke taraf dekhkar boli,"chaliye Hariya ji" aur phir waapas ghumkar main gate ka chhota darwaza kholkar ander ghus gayi.
Hariya bhi peechhe se ander ghus gaya aur main gate ko ander se bandh karke Anita ke peechhe chalne laga.Anita lawn se ghar ke taraf chalne lagi aur chalte hue uski gaand ki matak badh chuki thi.Anita thoda aage chalkar chalti huyi hi ghumkar Hariya ke taraf dekhi to use khud ki gaand ko ghurte hue payi aur muskurakar phir waapas saamne dekhkar chalti huyi boli,"Hariya ji chalte waqt nazar raaste par honi chahiye."
Hariya Anita ki baat sunnkar muskurate hue bola,"memsaahab humra nazar raaste par hi hai,aapki dono gaand ke beech jo raasta hai uss par."
Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi ghar ka darwaza kholti huyi boli,"Hariya jee aap bhi na" aur phir ander dakhil huyi aur Hariya bhi peechhe se ander ghus gaya.Anita living room ka light on kar di aur Hariya ander se darwaza bandh karke thaila neeche rakhkar Anita ko peechhe se baanhon mein bhar liya.
Hariya ke baanhon mein bharne se Anita ki munh se,"ouch Hariya ji" nikal gayi magar iske alawa woh aur kuchh nahin boli.Hariya Anita ko wahin switch board ke paas peechhe se pakde hue uski nangi kandhe ko chumne laga aur uski gaand par saree ke upar se hi apne pant mein kaid lund ko ragadte hue puchha,"hum bhi kaa memsaahab?"
Anita Hariya ko bina roke hue jawaab di,"bas meri tarbuj ke peeche hi pade rehte hain"
Hariya uski gaand par lund ragadte hue aur uski kandhe ko chumte hue bola,"are memsaahab aapki gaand hain hi aesi,sasura humesha humra khoon garam karke humra lauda khada kar deta hai."
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Greate glimpse sean bro...waiting ur official update...
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Amazing. The scenarios you create. Alone in a locked house at dusk. No one expected for 1-1.5 hour
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Very nice superb update....
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26-05-2021, 05:53 PM
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Have read this excerpt 5 times in the last 2 days...
....gaand ke beech ka raasta.... Ufff
The ass crack or the asshole?!!!
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(26-05-2021, 05:53 PM)creamydelight Wrote: Have read this excerpt 5 times in the last 2 days...
....gaand ke beech ka raasta.... Ufff
The ass crack or the asshole?!!!
Glad you liked it.
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Greatest of all time...no words to explain
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28-05-2021, 01:47 PM
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Intense ?nice erotica
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(28-05-2021, 05:21 PM)Sumit1234 Wrote: Brother itna time kyu lete ho update dene me......
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I think you don't read any post other than the updates.I have clearly mentioned that I will post only when I complete writing the story and these are just glimpses of what I have been writing for a few of the loyal readers who have supported and loved this story.
This is one of the reason I don't like posting anything here.Most readers just want the updates and will start pestering for more inspite of making it clear that frequent updates is not possible.They don't even want to involve themselves in the story discussion,what they liked,what they disliked,what they imagined by reading a particular para or sentence and so on.
It really helps amateur writers if readers involve themselves more actively in the whole idea of an erotic story but here it's more about getting a material to shag to.
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(28-05-2021, 06:14 PM)seansean007 Wrote: I think you don't read any post other than the updates.I have clearly mentioned that I will post only when I complete writing the story and these are just glimpses of what I have been writing for a few of the loyal readers who have supported and loved this story.
This is one of the reason I don't like posting anything here.Most readers just want the updates and will start pestering for more inspite of making it clear that frequent updates is not possible.They don't even want to involve themselves in the story discussion,what they liked,what they disliked,what they imagined by reading a particular para or sentence and so on.
It really helps amateur writers if readers involve themselves more actively in the whole idea of an erotic story but here it's more about getting a material to shag to.
Very true sean bro....
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(28-05-2021, 06:14 PM)seansean007 Wrote: I think you don't read any post other than the updates.I have clearly mentioned that I will post only when I complete writing the story and these are just glimpses of what I have been writing for a few of the loyal readers who have supported and loved this story.
This is one of the reason I don't like posting anything here.Most readers just want the updates and will start pestering for more inspite of making it clear that frequent updates is not possible.They don't even want to involve themselves in the story discussion,what they liked,what they disliked,what they imagined by reading a particular para or sentence and so on.
It really helps amateur writers if readers involve themselves more actively in the whole idea of an erotic story but here it's more about getting a material to shag to.
Absolutely bhai, I totally agree with you.
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(28-05-2021, 06:14 PM)seansean007 Wrote: I think you don't read any post other than the updates.I have clearly mentioned that I will post only when I complete writing the story and these are just glimpses of what I have been writing for a few of the loyal readers who have supported and loved this story.
This is one of the reason I don't like posting anything here.Most readers just want the updates and will start pestering for more inspite of making it clear that frequent updates is not possible.They don't even want to involve themselves in the story discussion,what they liked,what they disliked,what they imagined by reading a particular para or sentence and so on.
It really helps amateur writers if readers involve themselves more actively in the whole idea of an erotic story but here it's more about getting a material to shag to.
Ignore him, bro just keep doing what you do...as of story is concern everything about it great. All things are perfectly set only thing you should add is ' make Jeetu part more exclusive bcz that's the main character seducing anita in first place.. hariya is fine but let Jeetu seduce her more.. you can add some cheating stuff in Anita's character .. like night quickies, phone conversation between Jeetu and her. Keep these new things like BJ, ass licking etc exclusive to Jeetu.. just a suggestion
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I was reading erotic stories earlier but it was in xoosip, initially I never liked this one but gave it a bit of time and realised how a story can seduce you're imagination more than any porn in the world a good story like this would stimulate you're senses to the core it's not easy to find the right words and right expression but Ii will wait as long as it takes to read this masterpiece.
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Inteha..... Ho gayi intejar ki
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(04-06-2021, 12:32 PM)Spidy1818 Wrote: I was reading erotic stories earlier but it was in xoosip, initially I never liked this one but gave it a bit of time and realised how a story can seduce you're imagination more than any porn in the world a good story like this would stimulate you're senses to the core it's not easy to find the right words and right expression but Ii will wait as long as it takes to read this masterpiece.
Agreed!
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Has anyone seen or does anyone know any woman having character and dressing sense similar to Anita?
Do share your experiences.
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(14-06-2021, 11:03 PM)seansean007 Wrote: Has anyone seen or does anyone know any woman having character and dressing sense similar to Anita?
Do share your experiences.
Not sure about the character but dressing yes , there was this play home teacher near my house and every time she use to come on road har mard ka lund khada hojatha , people use to not even blink there eyes ,she had such perfect breasts they were so firm not even sagging a bit and she use to wear hot sarees just like anita , many times i have imagined her in this series which makes it more exciting , I am sure if there was a cum contest she would be drenched in it . what is exciting about anita and hariya is the equation which is mind-blowing , its like anita challenges hariya every time about his machoism and can go to any extent to bring out that janwar in him and yet maintain that grace its like jerking just enough you want to cum but she will not let you ahh .
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