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Misc. Erotica VANDANA..( a hottest tale of conservative beautiful housewife turning to whore)
Moreover comments bhi tum writers ko positive hi chahiye thoda sa negative comment kardo to yaa to story band ya comment karne wale ki id band... Seedha seedha story write karna hi band kardo... Ye ghatiyapan kyu... Angry Sick
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Knock ! Knock ! Big announcement..

Update 42 ke do version honge ek official version or fan version...

Official version sirf registered user ko dm kar diya jaayega jo bhut jyada hot honge or kinky honge....aisa update jise padhkar aapsab khud pe control ni kar paayenge....or doosra fan version jo car fucking scene hoga birju ke saath.....

Trailer of 1st official version 
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Aye avi dekho to ye kon hai ? Avi video call mai dekhta hai ki ek aurat table par doggy pose mai hai or uska chehra mask se cover hai...avi ko kuch bhi samjh nahi aaraha tha ki yeh ladies hai kon....par ab uska dhyaan uske chehre par nahi balki uske hilte hue choochi par tha jo chudai ke wajah se bhut kaamuk andaz mai upar neeche ho raha tha....ufffff ! Q nazara tha avi ke liye.....wahi brij ki aawaj uske kaano mai padti hai ...dekho avi kaise ye raand aaj 2 mardo se chud rahi hai ?? Hehe ...tum bhi chodna chahoge ??  Sharmao mat avi bolo.....qa chodoge is raand ko ?? Ye raand bhut bhuki hai ...har koi se chudne ko tayaar rahti hai ...bolo ?? Wahi avi se or control nahi hota wo jhat se bolta hai haa brij sir mai chodunga is raand ko.....

Angel ab badal chuka tha ...ab camera ki taraf vandana ke gol gol bade bade gaand the...par camera itni dur tha ki avi vandana ke gaand ke woh til ni dekh paaraha tha jisse use pata chalta ki ye koi raand ni balki uski pyaari patni vandana hai.....wo iswaqt kisi shaksh ka lund choos rahi thi....or wo shaksh uske gaand par tez tez chaata maar raha tha jisse uski gaand thirak rahi thi....haaye ! Qa nazara tha ye....bhari bharkam gaand ko hilte dekhne ke kaaran avi ka lund pura tan kar khada ho chuka tha or usse bhi control nahi ho raha tha or wo bhi haafte hue jhad jaata hai....wahi jab wo jhad jaata hai to uske muh se niklta hai i m cuming....oohh...yeh sunkar vandana peeche palatti hai or gusse se avi ko dekhne lagti h camera mai or use dekhte hue apne haath ko apni gaand mai lejaati hai or use dekhte or dikhaate hue apni gaand par spank karne lagti hai....

This is trailer of update 42 (b) ...or bhut se scene honge isme jo sirf registerd user ke liye available hai.....

Thanks....
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(06-06-2021, 09:41 PM)Newdevil Wrote: Ye story bhi gai gaddhe me..... Ye kya drama hai dn karo to update milega.... Agar story continue karni hai to post karo warna bahut se writer hai jo acchi acchi stories beech me chhod kar chale gaye.... Ham maan lenge ye story bhi khatam.... Waise bhi ab tak sirf ground making hi chali hai itni lambi... Ab kuch accha sa padhne ka time aaya to ye samajhdaar writer me bhi akad aa gai... Arre jaroori nahi naa ki reader dm kare aur tum turant update bhej do usko.... Jaise tum writers ka time kharaab hota hai waise hi readers ka bhi time lagta hai story padhne me..... I will give you 0/100 for this decision.... Stupid writer Angryfire

Bhai ye batana hmko jaroori ni ki mai kitne time baad update dm karta hu....or tumne kaha ki writer beech mai hi story chhod dete hai....yi kaaran se chhodte hai mere bhai...or mai maanta hu ki mai stupid writer hoo....or mai koi professional ni hu bhai or naa hi ab iske baad koi story likhunga....or maine ye decision apne pure hosh m liya hai ...or meko record or views se koi matlab ni hai.....mai ye story apni khusi ke liye likh raha hu taaki jab ghar thaka haara aau or xossipy kholu or badhiya story na mile to apni hi story padhke ke shaant ho lu...or bhai mujhe bhut badhiya writer thodi banna hai jo kitaabe likhunga....bhai aapko padhna hai to dm m padho warna baaki behtareen story padho....isme hyper hone ki jarurat ni....or raha baat isme post karne ka to dont wry time lagega par isme bhi update aaynge.....
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(06-06-2021, 09:44 PM)Newdevil Wrote: Moreover comments bhi tum writers ko positive hi chahiye thoda sa negative comment kardo to yaa to story band ya comment karne wale ki id band... Seedha seedha story write karna hi band kardo... Ye ghatiyapan kyu... Angry Sick

Bhai kon keh diya ki negative comment se writer bamd kar dete hai story likhna.....are nahi bhai...mai to chahta hu ki log genuinly comment kare agar mera update mai kuch kharabi hai to mai negative comment bhi lunga.....ye to or motivate karega bhai....par yaha reader darte hai ki negative comments se writer bhag jaayega isliye great update mast update likh kar chl jaate hai....bhai mai jo kar raha hu ye mere nazar mai sahi hai......aap pressure mat lo....
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Update 42 (a)

Brij vandana ko aankho hi aankho mai upar aane ka ishaara kar deta hai or fir wo upar chal jaata hai wahi vandana bhi ab brij se kai sawaal pucchna chahti thi or in sab ka jawab bhi chahti thi...wo aslam ki ore dekhte hue bolti hai ..
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Brijmohan - yahi nahi raand tu bhut badi randi hai....tu yhi nahi ruki iske baad tu hariya ko apni video bhej kar seduce ki thi or fir bazar mai un mardo se chudne ke liye bhi store room mai chal gayi thi...

....brij apna kathor haatho ko vandana ke naram naram hatheliyo par firate hue upar le jaaraha tha or fir dono haath ko uske kandhe par rakhkar aage badhte hue apna jism vandana ke jism se sata deta hai.....


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Dear Ajanmol,

Aap ka dm wala update read kiya... Ek aur dhamakedar chudai ka scene aane wala hai... 

Vandu baby ka itna humiliation ho rha hain..matlab brij ne uski puri le rakhi hain...

Yeh humiliation bhot hi hot lag rha hain aur yeh tabtak chalna chahiye jab tak Vandu darling puri tara besharm ban na jaye...

Iss forum pe kaafi story hain jahape husband/male partner ka humiiation hota hain, us hisab se yeh story thoda alag hain.. ihape female humiliation hain...

Anyway as always thank you for this update.. and aap ke yeh jo naya muhim hain,iske bare main alag se comment karunga...
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(06-06-2021, 09:53 PM)Mani4278 Wrote: Send update

(06-06-2021, 09:54 PM)Mani4278 Wrote: Send update

Bhai update dm ho gaya hai....
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(06-06-2021, 09:56 PM)Ajanmol Wrote: Bhai kon keh diya ki negative comment se writer bamd kar dete hai story likhna.....are nahi bhai...mai to chahta hu ki log genuinly comment kare agar mera update mai kuch kharabi hai to mai negative comment bhi lunga.....ye to or motivate karega bhai....par yaha reader darte hai ki negative comments se writer bhag jaayega isliye great update mast update likh kar chl jaate hai....bhai mai jo kar raha hu ye mere nazar mai sahi hai......aap pressure mat lo....

Main tumhari ye baat nahi maan sakta because maine khud aisi bahut si stories padhi hai jisme writer negative comments aane par bolta hai main break le raha hu aur phir kabhi waapis nahi aata aur kuch kalapne wale id bhi band kara dete hain meri khud ki 2 id block padi hai.. tabhi main ab kisi story par comment nahi karta.... Kya bharosa kaunsa writer kis mood ka hai.... Aur ye dm kaise hota hai mujhe nahi pata tumhe update dena hai to de do warna koi baat nahi.... Waise bhi maine kai baar koshish kari hai forum par aana hi band kardu lekin hamesha koi naa koi acchi story mil jaati hai jaise tumhari... Baaki ab main poori koshish karunga aaj ke baad forum par aaun hi naa.... Aur main yahi bolunga ki jo tum kar rahe ho wo saare writers kare to forum ke users apne aap kam ho jaayenge phir purane exbii ki tarah ye bhi band ho jayega....  meri koi baat buri lagi ho to dil par le lena  Namaskar
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(06-06-2021, 10:07 PM)neel191298 Wrote: Ajanmol

Update 42 (a)

Brij vandana ko aankho hi aankho mai upar aane ka ishaara kar deta hai or fir wo upar chal jaata hai wahi vandana bhi ab brij se kai sawaal pucchna chahti thi or in sab ka jawab bhi chahti thi...wo aslam ki ore dekhte hue bolti hai ..
....

Brijmohan - yahi nahi raand tu bhut badi randi hai....tu yhi nahi ruki iske baad tu hariya ko apni video bhej kar seduce ki thi or fir bazar mai un mardo se chudne ke liye bhi store room mai chal gayi thi...

....brij apna kathor haatho ko vandana ke naram naram hatheliyo par firate hue upar le jaaraha tha or fir dono haath ko uske kandhe par rakhkar aage badhte hue apna jism vandana ke jism se sata deta hai.....


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Dear Ajanmol,

Aap ka dm wala update read kiya... Ek aur dhamakedar chudai ka scene aane wala hai... 

Vandu baby ka itna humiliation ho rha hain..matlab brij ne uski puri le rakhi hain...

Yeh humiliation bhot hi hot lag rha hain aur yeh tabtak chalna chahiye jab tak Vandu darling puri tara besharm ban na jaye...

Iss forum pe kaafi story hain jahape husband/male partner ka humiiation hota hain, us hisab se yeh story thoda alag hain.. ihape female humiliation hain...

Anyway as always thank you for this update.. and aap ke yeh jo naya muhim hain,iske bare main alag se comment karunga...

Thankyou neel bhai....ye toh bas aane wale toofan ka trailer hai...asli picture toh ab aayega.....keep supporting...
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(06-06-2021, 10:11 PM)Newdevil Wrote: Main tumhari ye baat nahi maan sakta because maine khud aisi bahut si stories padhi hai jisme writer negative comments aane par bolta hai main break le raha hu aur phir kabhi waapis nahi aata aur kuch kalapne wale id bhi band kara dete hain meri khud ki 2 id block padi hai.. tabhi main ab kisi story par comment nahi karta.... Kya bharosa kaunsa writer kis mood ka hai.... Aur ye dm kaise hota hai mujhe nahi pata tumhe update dena hai to de do warna koi baat nahi.... Waise bhi maine kai baar koshish kari hai forum par aana hi band kardu lekin hamesha koi naa koi acchi story mil jaati hai jaise tumhari... Baaki ab main poori koshish karunga aaj ke baad forum par aaun hi naa.... Aur main yahi bolunga ki jo tum kar rahe ho wo saare writers kare to forum ke users apne aap kam ho jaayenge phir purane exbii ki tarah ye bhi band ho jayega....  meri koi baat buri lagi ho to dil par le lena  Namaskar

Are bhai dil mai kyon le rahe ho....accha aap yi chahte hai ki mai yhi pe post karu ??
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(06-06-2021, 09:46 PM)Ajanmol Wrote: Knock ! Knock ! Big announcement..

Update 42 ke do version honge ek official version or fan version...

Official version sirf registered user ko dm kar diya jaayega jo bhut jyada hot honge or kinky honge....aisa update jise padhkar aapsab khud pe control ni kar paayenge....or doosra fan version jo car fucking scene hoga birju ke saath.....

Trailer of 1st official version 
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Aye avi dekho to ye kon hai ? Avi video call mai dekhta hai ki ek aurat table par doggy pose mai hai or uska chehra mask se cover hai...avi ko kuch bhi samjh nahi aaraha tha ki yeh ladies hai kon....par ab uska dhyaan uske chehre par nahi balki uske hilte hue choochi par tha jo chudai ke wajah se bhut kaamuk andaz mai upar neeche ho raha tha....ufffff ! Q nazara tha avi ke liye.....wahi brij ki aawaj uske kaano mai padti hai ...dekho avi kaise ye raand aaj 2 mardo se chud rahi hai ?? Hehe ...tum bhi chodna chahoge ??  Sharmao mat avi bolo.....qa chodoge is raand ko ?? Ye raand bhut bhuki hai ...har koi se chudne ko tayaar rahti hai ...bolo ?? Wahi avi se or control nahi hota wo jhat se bolta hai haa brij sir mai chodunga is raand ko.....

Angel ab badal chuka tha ...ab camera ki taraf vandana ke gol gol bade bade gaand the...par camera itni dur tha ki avi vandana ke gaand ke woh til ni dekh paaraha tha jisse use pata chalta ki ye koi raand ni balki uski pyaari patni vandana hai.....wo iswaqt kisi shaksh ka lund choos rahi thi....or wo shaksh uske gaand par tez tez chaata maar raha tha jisse uski gaand thirak rahi thi....haaye ! Qa nazara tha ye....bhari bharkam gaand ko hilte dekhne ke kaaran avi ka lund pura tan kar khada ho chuka tha or usse bhi control nahi ho raha tha or wo bhi haafte hue jhad jaata hai....wahi jab wo jhad jaata hai to uske muh se niklta hai i m cuming....oohh...yeh sunkar vandana peeche palatti hai or gusse se avi ko dekhne lagti h camera mai or use dekhte hue apne haath ko apni gaand mai lejaati hai or use dekhte or dikhaate hue apni gaand par spank karne lagti hai....

This is trailer of update 42 (b) ...or bhut se scene honge isme jo sirf registerd user ke liye available hai.....

Thanks....

First of all thank you for creating this type of new technique in this forum....

Isspe abhi kafi readers apne rai denge.. positive / negative... sabhi tara ke comments dekh kar aap apna decision lena..

Mere hisab se, xossipy forum pe koi bhi writer bas ek hi maksad ke liye likhta hain - uo hain naye naye reader unke story ko pade aur comment kare...
Taki uo writer apna story ko aur behtar bana paye...

Now if the readers remain silent, then it is really disappointing for them... 

Aap bhi isi ke chalte lag rha hain yeh neye kadam liye hain..

Let's see what happen - janta (readers) ka keya rai hain !!!!!

God bless and hope for the best.... Heart Heart
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(06-06-2021, 10:17 PM)neel191298 Wrote: First of all thank you for creating this type of new technique in this forum....

Isspe abhi kafi readers apne rai denge.. positive / negative... sabhi tara ke comments dekh kar aap apna decision lena..

Mere hisab se, xossipy forum pe koi bhi writer bas ek hi maksad ke liye likhta hain - uo hain naye naye reader unke story ko pade aur comment kare...
Taki uo writer apna story ko aur behtar bana paye...

Now if the readers remain silent, then it is really disappointing for them... 

Aap bhi isi ke chalte lag rha hain yeh neye kadam liye hain..

Let's see what happen - janta (readers) ka keya rai hain !!!!!

God bless and hope for the best.... Heart Heart

Neel bro...maine ye ni kaha ki update yaha ni aayenge bas late aayenge....or aapke comment hi genuine hai baaki reader bas formality nibhaate hai.....khair mere ko dm karna pade ya yha post karna pade dono mai mera fayda ya nuksaan ni hai...kyoki jo aisa sochte hai ki mai apni stories ki popularity k liye kar raha hu ye galat hai...kyoki mere thread alread 400k views paar hai...mhai...mai jo kar raha hu baaki writero k liye kahu.. hu...new comer k liye.....
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Maine jin logo ko dm par update bheja hai wo bata sakte hai ki maine unke  khne par kitne der mai update bheja hai...??or koi dikkat hai mere is decision se ??
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Send 42b pls
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(06-06-2021, 10:37 PM)Mani4278 Wrote: Send 42b pls

Haha..bhai wo likha ni hu...jaldi hi likh ke bhej dunga.....
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bhej de bhai post
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bhai pati ko pati hi rahne do gandu mat banao bus yahi kahna chahunga aapse
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de de bhai mssg me
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(06-06-2021, 10:45 PM)Mani4278 Wrote: bhai pati ko pati hi rahne do gandu mat banao bus yahi kahna chahunga aapse

Are bhai...isme avi gandu kaise ban raha hai ???....qa maine avi tak koi update aisa likha jisse yeh aako lag raha hai.....
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