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అద్భుతంగా రాసావ్ మిత్రమా.... అగ్గి రగులుకుంది.
సిద్దు మరియు హరిక పాత్రలను మొదట్లో ఓపెన్ మైండెడ్ గా చూపించి మేడం-భరత్ రిలేషన్ ను ఒప్పుకుని దగ్గరుండి మరీ ప్రోత్సహించి ఇప్పుడు కేవలం భరత్ ను అసహ్యించుకోడానికి మాత్రమే కథలో ఉన్నట్టు చూపించడం అదో రకంగా ఉంది.
సిద్దు గాడి పాత్రైతే మొదటి నుంచి తలాతోక తెలియని ఎదవ లాగే ఉంది..
" మామా ! నువ్వు మా అమ్మను దంచుకో నేను కూడా మీ అమ్మను... వద్దులే మీ అమ్మ లాగే ఉండే హరిక అమ్మను ఎగరేసి దెంగుతా...అది వీడియో తీసి మరీ నీకు చూపిస్తా...అయినా సరే ఆ పిచ్చి లంజ హరిక లవర్ ను కాబట్టి నన్ను సపోర్ట్ చేస్తుంది. నీకు తాగించి రెచ్చగొట్టి మా అమ్మని దెంగించి మరీ సున్నితంగా దెంగకుండా రఫ్ గా దెంగావని నీమీద పగబడతా.."
పోలా అదిరిపోలా....
మీ భాయిజాన్ 
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Super ga rasaru
Next update kosam waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting
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Super Update bro Chala bagundi kani me updates Chala slow ga peduthunnau
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02-06-2021, 10:50 PM
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First of all I am soo happy to see you after you said no thoughts :)
As incase of update Don't joke with us
By asking how's the update
You have separate fanbase to your creation/ story
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Super emotional ... nice update
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02-06-2021, 11:39 PM
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Ok update bagoledu ani telusu
Sorry
I will change it
Story ayithe undi kani adi clarity ga rayali ante time paduthundi anduke rayaleka poya
So meeru wait cheyandi eppudo okasari malli update isthanu
Naku kooda manasu undi bro
Mari intha daridranga vodiliyeyanu lendi
But twaraga ayipogottali anna tentiom lo night ala chesa
Na style lone twaralo rastha
Keep waiting friends
నా స్టోరీస్ కంప్లీట్ అవుతాయి అని నమ్మే వాళ్ళు పిచ్చోళ్ళు
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I feel you ended the season quickly.
It will be very good, if this can be transferred to web series.
Because this contains lot of emotional and love scenes.
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Miru muginchina vidhanam koncham ibbandhiga vundhi climax telidhu
Kani parleehu happy ending
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An abrupt ending. The sexual ending looks weird. Conquering guilt over the inner urge is the message! The maturity of the daughter as a medico in invoking the inner consciousness of her mother to over come the guilt free from the opinions of others is well depicted and suits well with the definition of Shobanam -"a prayer that everything should turn out to be good".
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Madem Bharath ela kalisara Valla iddari Nadya matalu rayalisindhi parvaledhu climax bagundhi all the best your Ife story web series shoot Chester Chala bagutundhi super and waiting for season 2..
Chandra 
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Happy ending ..........
All the best for your carrier
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Update chalabagundhi dom garu, next updates Kosam wait chesthu mee storyni baga nachina reader
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(03-06-2021, 12:39 AM)bobby Wrote: I feel you ended the season quickly.
It will be very good, if this can be transferred to web series.
Because this contains lot of emotional and love scenes.
(03-06-2021, 12:55 AM)Venky248 Wrote: Miru muginchina vidhanam koncham ibbandhiga vundhi climax telidhu
Kani parleehu happy ending
(03-06-2021, 01:08 AM)lonely75 Wrote: An abrupt ending. The sexual ending looks weird. Conquering guilt over the inner urge is the message! The maturity of the daughter as a medico in invoking the inner consciousness of her mother to over come the guilt free from the opinions of others is well depicted and suits well with the definition of Shobanam -"a prayer that everything should turn out to be good".
(03-06-2021, 01:27 AM)Chandra228 Wrote: Madem Bharath ela kalisara Valla iddari Nadya matalu rayalisindhi parvaledhu climax bagundhi all the best your Ife story web series shoot Chester Chala bagutundhi super and waiting for season 2..
(03-06-2021, 05:15 AM)Common man Wrote: Happy ending ..........
All the best for your carrier
(03-06-2021, 05:19 AM)nar0606 Wrote: Update chalabagundhi dom garu, next updates Kosam wait chesthu mee storyni baga nachina reader
(03-06-2021, 06:21 AM)Sachin@10 Wrote: Superb update
Ok update bagoledu ani telusu
Sorry
I will change it
Story ayithe undi kani adi clarity ga rayali ante time paduthundi anduke rayaleka poya
So meeru wait cheyandi eppudo okasari malli update isthanu
Naku kooda manasu undi bro
Mari intha daridranga vodiliyeyanu lendi
But twaraga ayipogottali anna tentiom lo night ala chesa
Na style lone twaralo rastha
Keep waiting friends
నా స్టోరీస్ కంప్లీట్ అవుతాయి అని నమ్మే వాళ్ళు పిచ్చోళ్ళు
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Thank god.... aa maata annaru santhosam
Wait chestu untamu
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03-06-2021, 09:13 AM
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(03-06-2021, 06:47 AM)dom nic torrento Wrote: Ok update bagoledu ani telusu
Sorry
I will change it
Story ayithe undi kani adi clarity ga rayali ante time paduthundi anduke rayaleka poya
So meeru wait cheyandi eppudo okasari malli update isthanu
Naku kooda manasu undi bro
Mari intha daridranga vodiliyeyanu lendi
But twaraga ayipogottali anna tentiom lo night ala chesa
Na style lone twaralo rastha
Keep waiting friends
If you really try this on web series .....that will be awesome
In Telugu web series , they are all routine , common things no twists ,,,,
I think your story perorms well and good
It will be a trendsetter
It is far from routine storyline .......
Cut the sex part add sensitive romance,
It will be youth blockbuster hit .......
Don't be hesitate with sexy dialogues ...
Some regular official channels are using more than that
( Ex . 7 Arts )
We will be very happy if you make this in YouTube
All the best director saab
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Bagundi chala bagundi koddiga thondaraga evvagakafu next update
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03-06-2021, 02:49 PM
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