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Adultery Kubda bhikhari bhaot choti kahani
(02-06-2021, 10:21 AM)Lion King 989 Wrote: Maine kaha pura likha ha maine yahi to ek main point par roki thi kahani yahi se to kahani ki badi shuruwat honi thi kaise soch liya yaha sex hoga.... Ek ghar jisme sas sasur ek baby aur ek pati hai
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Thoda next update ka wait karte to ap jo sab nagative cmmt kar rahe hai woh samjh jate aisa kyo maine kara


OK. Byeeeerrr bhai logo ab mai wapisi nahi karonga

bhai aaj day time koi update karoge ya fir raat tak ka hee intzaar karna hoga??? aap apni marzi se jaise chahe story likho or negative comments ki parwah mat karo...kisi ko kuch pasand hai or kisi ko wahi cheez napasand aise me kis kis ki sunoge tum...isse behtar hai apni story apne tareeke se likho...
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(02-06-2021, 10:39 AM)Samit_bhai Wrote: Ek ya do chutiyon ke kahne se aap demotivate ho gaye..aapke liye woh chutiye log zyada important hai ya hum sab aapke fan?
Aapne kafi mehnat ki hai ise likhne mein..and hum sabne pasand bhi kiya..
Ye aapki story hai..aapne effort daali hai so jaisa aap chahe waisa aap likhe..aapko dono positive aur negative comments accept karne hoge..lekin aap pe depend karta hai ki aap zyada tawabjud kise dete hai positive ya negative ko..aage aapki marzi
Jab mai aage kahani badane aaya to direct nazar woh 2 cmmt par gayi.... Isliye mai jazbaat mai ye likh diya.... Mai bar bar kah raha ho ye kahani Kubde ke upper tag hai uska roll aage badiya socha mai dono ko koi sasti rundi nahi banaonga..... 

Par log thoda patient nahi rakh pate  isi raat se to woh raaz sab ke samne Lane wala ho jo Kubde ne zeenat lo kaha tha.. Karne ke liye jo bhaot aage intresting hoga.... 

Yaha mai Kubde ke bare mai jo uski pitai ke bad woh badla lene ki sochne laga woh mai likhne wala tha par aise nagative cmmt sari mahnat par pani pher dete reder thoda sa bhi partiksha nahi kar pate ki aage kiya hona hai agar sex karta to wahi bed par kara deta... Aur zeenat is time sex ke bare mai bilkul nahi soch rahi thi..... Balki un lo thund se bahane ka paryas kar rahi thi... Kyoki maine koi feeling is time zeenat ke man mai nahi dali... Ha rukhsar ko maine kise wazah se niche utara wohi to mai likhta par nind aane lagi to maine thoda aur likhna chahata tha to band kar ke so gaya
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Kuch log sex story main classic novel search karte hain. Sex dalo toh problem nahi dalo toh problem lakin. Iinhe chaiye sab...

It's going to right direction. Zeneet is a soft heart woman. She can do any foolish thing. She fall for a ugly bhikari. That type of woman can do anything to save any people life.

@Lion sirjeee you are great writer. I personally messaged YOU Several time jab app offline tha. I know many mailed and PM you.. Why you are Ignoring your fan for some shitty comment
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Kafi dino se yaha nahi aya tha maine. Kal se appka story padna suru kiya tha. Aj hi band hone ka News!.

Yeh log un logo ko comment pe prise karte hain jo ek update le bad 10 days pe new update dete hain.

Last, 3 month se xossipy pe ek vandana ki story ke siwa kohi good erotic and exciting story nahi tha. Sab ko intezar tha lion king ka woh 4/5 month ke bad likhna suru kiye abbb kuch logo ki khujli ho raha hain.

App master of kink and interfaith lion Bhai. Hamlogo ki bare main bhi sochiye zara.
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(02-06-2021, 11:15 AM)Tharki_uncle Wrote: Kafi dino se yaha nahi aya tha maine. Kal se appka story padna suru kiya tha. Aj hi band hone ka News!.

Yeh log un logo ko comment pe prise karte hain jo ek update le bad 10 days pe new update dete hain.

Last, 3 month se xossipy pe ek vandana  ki story ke siwa kohi good erotic and exciting  story nahi tha.  Sab ko intezar tha lion king ka woh 4/5 month ke bad likhna suru kiye abbb kuch logo ki khujli ho raha hain.

App master of kink and interfaith  lion Bhai. Hamlogo ki bare main bhi sochiye zara.
OK mai Phir se shuru karta ho is update mai apko kuch Accha lagega
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(02-06-2021, 11:07 AM)Sincemany Wrote: Kuch log sex story main classic  novel search karte hain.  Sex dalo toh problem nahi dalo toh problem lakin. Iinhe chaiye sab...

It's  going to right direction. Zeneet is a soft heart woman. She can do any foolish  thing.  She fall for a ugly  bhikari.  That type of woman can do anything  to save any people  life.

@Lion sirjeee you are great writer.  I personally  messaged YOU  Several  time jab app offline tha. I know  many mailed and PM you.. Why you are Ignoring  your fan for  some shitty comment
Ha mai pm nahi dekh pata par abhi inbox maine chek kara hai... Mai ab likhta ho fresh mind se
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(02-06-2021, 11:41 AM)Lion King 989 Wrote: Ha mai pm nahi dekh pata par abhi inbox maine chek kara hai... Mai ab likhta ho fresh mind se
Kya aisa koi episode aayega jahan zeenat/Rukhsar bus mein jayege and koi buddha ya koi aur unse masti kare..shuru mein woh nakhra kare..phir baad mein enjoy kare..
Hum iss bare mein pm mein baat kar sakte hain.
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Lion King Bhai Nagetiv Comment pe dhyan mat do. apne trike se likho AApki khani he. hum rider Suzav de sakte he. par khani ka vislesan nhi kar skte. Aap apne trike se likho.
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Waah bhai sher singh bahut badiya mast hai

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Yaha zeenat aaram se bethi thi aur rukhsar un dono ko dekh kar kuch sawalt kare....

Dono apna nam batate hau basi aur murli.... Tab zeenat un ko dekhti hai palat kar aur kahti hai... Ab tum log sahi halat mai Aa gaye ho... Par tum log kon ho....


Murli... Ji mai yaha 10 km aage ek chote se mandir mai rahta ho aur ye mera sathi hai bansi par waha mandir mai kafi door hone ki wazah se kam shardalu aate hai....

Bus jo Dan dakshina milti hai usi se hum kam chala lete hai....

Bus kuch log subah sham hi aate hai aur kuch din se kam log aur hote chale gaye.... Manglwar ko bhale thode zyada log Aa jate hai... Jisse kuch dan dakshina se hamara guzara chal jata hai....

Aaj sham ko hum kisi kam se chandigarh sec 27 mai aaye the...

Aur kam apna niptakar der raat apne mandir ki traf nikle badi mushkil se ek auto wala tayyar bhi hua....

Aur jab hum mandir yaha se bus kuch doori par tha to uska auto punture ho gaya....

Aur use paise deke zyada door mandir nahi tha to paidal Jane ka socha....

Par tab tak halki barish shuru ho gayi par itne nahi thi ki hume pareshani ka samna karna pade....

Lakin jab apke yaha se kuch doori par the to aandhi toofan sa shuru ho gaya aur barish ki moti moti boondo ne hame bhigana pura shuru kar diya... Waha bada sa bargad ke ped ke niche aane se pahle hum puri trah se bheeg gaye the....

Aur toofan apne zoro par the hame thund lagne lagi... Aur bura hal ho gaya....

Mandir ke liye ye piche ka rasta pass hi tha to hum main road de na aake is piche ke raste par nikal aaye aur Phir apne dekha hi hum kis musibat mai the...

Yaha ab rukhsar kahti hai....

R... Chalo jo kaha sahi kaha par yaha aake tum pishab kar ke pura room ko badboo se bhar diya aur mere bahan ke sath tum...

Bansi.... Nahi nahi mamsahib hame to josh hi nahi tha aur thund ki wazah se hum bedum pad gaye ki hum kiya kar rahe hai pata nahi tha aur kab hum bed par aaye nahi pata...

Par jab hamare sharir mai garmi aane lagi to thoda bahot hosh aane laga....

Aur yaha kab hamara thund se pishab nikal gaya pata hi nahi chala.

Dono nange simte hue bethe the... Tab rukhsar uthi aur kahne lagi mai abhi aayi....

Ye kah kar rukhsar bahar nikal kar apne room par aayi....

Aur woh dono tak taki nigaho se zeenat ko dekh rahe the.....


Usi raat sham ko.... Kubda dar aur khof se apne jhopde ki traf aaya....

Dar use na to farman se lag raha tha aur zeenat se lagne ka sawal hi nahi tha....

Bus woh yahi soch kar wapis aaya ki uska jhopda kahi security officer bulwa kar todwa nahi diya ho....

Woh apne jhopde jo sahi salamat dekh kar khush hua aur apne sharir ka kuch dard ye dekh kam hua...

Par use abhi kafi chot lagi hue thi kam se kam use ek pain killer ki tab ki zaroort thi... Par woh kaha se lata....

Woh andhere mai andar jhopde mai aaya par zeenat ke ghar ki Teris aur door ki light jal rahi thi jo subah jaldi aane par band karna farman bhul gaya...

Car samne nahi thi to kubda sochne laga ki dono kahi gaye hai.... Woh himmat kar ke door ke pass aaya aur is door ke handle ko ghuma kar dekha door lock tha...

Woh Phir itnminan se wapis jhopde mai aaya... Aur aake apne ko rahat dene ke liye bister par let gaya...


Sochne laga ki zeenat ne kyo kaha ki maine uske sath galat kara hai... Ya kahi uske shohar ko kahi se kuch pata na chala ho... Zeemat kisi bhi kimat par aisa nahi kar sakti usi ki wazah se bich bachav mai mere jaan bachi....

Kash sala apne man ki iccha puri karne se pahle saari mai chod pata par sala maine uske jism ka kyo aur fayda nahi uthaya kyo apne baate karne mai jaldbazi kar gaya...

Use apna puri trah se bana leta tab usse apne tarike se chalne ko kahta....

Par ye aurat khubsurat jaat hai shayad usne hi kuch kah diya ho kiya pata uske dil mai Phir se sharif aurat ka janam le liya ho...

Par zeenat tujhe iski kimat chukani padegi apna badla zaroor longa.....

Woh pillow par sir rakh kar sochne laga... Par use ye kiya pata shayad zeenat yaha aaye.... Agar aaye bhi to woh 24 hour kisi ki nazar mai rahe ya usse milna mushkil ho sakta tha....

Kubda seeda apne kubad ke karan nahi leta balki karwat badal kar leta hua tha.... Nind aahi Aa rahi thi....

Waha chandigarh ke toofan ka asar yaha hua par koi aandhi nahi chali par barsat khub ho rahi thi....

Karwat leta hua woh beth jata hai aur bidi nikal kar pine lagta tha


Bidi machis takiye ke niche rakh deta hai... Aur woh sochta hai ki ab jaise use Zeemat ka samna karna pade to use apne raand puri trah se kaise banaye.....

Usr bahot afsos ho raha tha ki kyo usne jaldbazi dekha kar caroro ka haseen jism hath se Jane diya.....

Ye moka bhi sach mai caroro bhikhari mai se ek ko mta hai woh bhi Kubde jaise ko...

Zeenat ne kaise rim job di use ye soch kar vishwasha Phir se nahi hua par woh zeenat se farman ka badla bhi lena chahata tha aur zeenat ko apne londi banana chahata tha....

Tab yahi soch soch kar uska demag kam karna band kar deta hai....woh Phir bidi dubara pune ke liye pilow ke niche hath dalta hai....

To machis bidi ke sath zeenat ka latter hath lagta hai woh ye mahssos kar ke Beth jata hai....

Aur woh latter ko pillo se nikal kar dekhta hai open karts hai....

Zeenat ke ghar ki roshni mai woh leeter par aankhe gada kar dekhta hai...

Laikn uski samjh nahi aata bus woh kiya likha tha use kale akshar jaise dekhte hai....

Par use thodr no ka gayan tha aur yaha koi latter jaise cheez aise nahi rakh sakta na hawa mai ud ka koi kagaz ka tukda aisa Aa sakta tha....

Woh comman sense se no ki ginti karta hai to 10 no hote hai woh ye to ab samjh gaya ki zaroor zeenat ne hi likh kar diya hoga...

Ha woh bachapan mai padne gaya par pad na paya....

Ab ise ye latter kisi ko dekha kar padwana tha... Tab uske man mai khayal aata hai ki uska dost kallu bhikhari padai likhayi janta hai kyo na usse ye padwao par ab to woh uske pass ja nahi sakta tha....

Subah woh uske pass Jane ki sochta hai use badi viyakulta hoti hai aakhir ye kiya likha hua hai....

Idhar dilshad gahri nind mai chudai kar ke so gaya tha to rukhsar 2 jodi chup hap Kurta pajama almari mai se nikal kar lati hai....

Aur niche aati hai teeno aise hi bethe the khanosh par zeenat bahot gahre khayal mai doodi hur soch rahi thi
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Ruksar ne hi use hosh mai Lake kahti hai ab tum kiya soch rhai ho....

Ye kah kar woh Kurta pajama door er hi dono ko traf fek kar kahti hai ise pahan kar apne manga jism dako aur waise ab barish to ho rahi hai par thoda ruk jai to yaha se ujala hone se pahle chale jana....

Agar nhi bhi ruke tab bhi jana shayd tum mandir pahuch kar bheeg bhi jaoge to aise halat nahi hogi....

Tum log yaha se uth kar woh ek store room hai samne waha jakar let jao aur yahi kamal le jao... Is par let kar aaram kar lena....

Woh dono ko ye sahi bhi laga Ruksar ghum gayi to dono ne uski night mai gaand ka jabarjast sexy kataw dekh kar kapde pahne... Aur woh dono gaand ka darshan karte hue ek store room mai chale gaye aur kambal zammen par dala aur let gaye....

Murli....mamsahib kitni acchi hai yar hum dono ki jaan bachayi aur Hamne bhi kaha socha tha marte time ki aisa khubsurat thoda nanga jism ko is trah touch karne ko milega....

Bansi...ha yar sala jab tak hosh mai aaye aur mamsahib ko apne shariir par mahsoos kiya unke chikni jhamgo par pet par ahhh hath rakh kar maza lene ki koshish bhi karo to ye dusri mamsahib kaha se Aa gayi.....

M... Yar jisne hamari jaan bachayi hai uske bare mai galat sochna pap hai... Mhamne bahot si madir ke piche house wife ko choda hai...apne jaal mai fasa kar kisi ko bacche ke liye choda kisi ko pooja arcana ke bahane choda kisi ko buri aatma se multi dene ke bahane choda.....

B... Ha yar par ek se ek hasen house wife ko choda jinhe dekh kar foran lund khade ho jai par sach mai aise naram haseen aur mazhabi aurat ka jism ka hissa lagne se jo maza aaya shayad aisa kabhi aaya ho.... Par yar mai to bahak gaya tha... Par jis devi ne hamari jaan bachayi uske liye man mai pap paida ho gaya....

Dono bahot khamoshi se baate kar rahe the....

Aur bahar ab zeenat Phir re usi window ke pass pahuchi hawa kam hue par barish ho rahi thi lakin pahle jaisa dum barish mai nahi tha....

Woh slide open kar ke Phir se kisi kuch khayalo mai khone lagi...

Tab Ruksar ne piche ee Zeemat ko is trah se bahi mai liya jaise mard apne biwi ko lete hai... Dono hath zeenat ke Pet ke upper the...

R... Kiya hua kiya soch rahi hai kiya mai galat time par Aa gayi thi.... Jo tum un logo se sex nahi kar payi...

Z.. Kiya appi ap bhi maine un dono ke bare mai nahi socha tha... Agar woh log sahi hoke mere sath kuch galat karte to mai unko rok deti par... Unka koi masla nahi lakin....

R.... Lakin kiya Zeemat tum itna udas kyo ho aakhir kiya Baat hai...

Z... Accha batati ho puri baat.... Zeenat ne saari pahan kar us Kubde ke samne aane se leke apne boobs par nishan dekh kar direct Kubde par is Baat ka ilzam laga kar puri baat batayi....par woh nahi jo Kubde ne karne ko Zeenat se sahi se kaha tha.... Bus kuch khawaish ke bare mai thoda bataya....

Z.. Ab pata nahi uska kiya haal hai mere wazah se uski ye halat hue...

R.. Tu Pagal hai kiya are jo tune us Kubde bhikhari ko jo tohfa diya jiski soch koi bhi aise log life mai nahi rakh sakte....

Bus tu Kubde ko bhul ja are tu sach mai Pagal hai puri ki puri koi kisi ko is trah biwi banta hai usme apne ling se tere mang bhari to iska kiya matlab chal tune uske pairo ko ashirwad lene ke liye chuwa... Par woh bhi chal koi baat nahi.....

Lakin woh ek tere fantasy thi jo tune kara uske saath tu use apna pati man rahi hai kiya bewakoofi jaise baat kar rahi hai....

Sach mai tu Pagal hai....are tujhe mai raaz ki baat batati ho maine apne bf se shadi se 4 din pahle madir mai shadi kar li thi....

Par halat aise bane ki mai usse suhagrat nahi bana payi.... Aur woh bechara kabhi is Baat ka fayda nahi uthata ha wrrk mai ek ya 2 bar bus mere kheriyat puchne ko call Aa jata hai uski bhi shadi ho gayi... Aur woh dono khush hai...


Ha mai ab bhi use chahata ho aur moka mila to shayad ek dusre ke samne samne hone par sex kar le....

Mere shadi to us ke dharam ke hisab se real hi hue thi... Par tere ye shadi... Hahahahhah Pagal hai tu us Kubde ko apna pati man rahi hai... Bakwad aise lund to kisi ke bhi ho sakte hai kiya aise lund dekh kar sab se chud jai kiya....

Dekho maine un dono ka lund bhale halke se dekha tha par andaza yahi hai ki khada home par dono ka uncut Kubde jaisa bada ho jai.... To uska matlab ye hai ki unse sex kar le....

Aur mai nahi aati to shayd woh dono tere teeno ched bhar dete ....

Ha is time piche se aake zeenat ko apne traf kar ke ghuma kar sab kahne lagi....

Z... Ap nahi ja to mai sex ke liye usnhe apna pati nahi man rahi ho kuch aise baate aur hue jo apko nahi batayi....

Mai apko bata bhi nahi sakti use bhi ap mere fantasy samjhengi.... Apne sab kuch apne bf se kara ho par sex to yani intercourse to nahi kara hai na... Agar karti tab pata chalta ki pahle aise mard er sex kar ke dilo deemag mai kaisa lagta hai....

Maine do bar samjho uske samne nangi aayi do bar mere samne mutt mari par mere demag dil mai aisa gahra asar nahi pada... Jab maine usse pura sex kara tha tab mujhe laga ki mujhe kiya anmol cheez mil gayi....


Uska gnada ghinona chehra ab mujhe duniya ka sabse haseen chehra malom padne laga... Us ka kubad se jhuka badan dekh kar mujhe ab aur Accha lagne laga... Us ke kubad ko sahlate pyar kar ke mujhe aur badiya malom padne laga.... Par ap nahi samjhogi... Kabhi aise logo se sex karna tab pata chalega tumhe ki aise logo ki gulan ban kar kitna Accha lagta hai....

Pata nahi woh jhopde mai gaya hoga ya nahi... Agar gaya hoga go mera latter pada hoga ya nahi....

Ruksar bus uske is jawab ka reply nahi de smti thi woh bus beth gayi aur us pishab ko dekhne lagi....

Tab Zeenat ki baato ka asar samjho ya kuch bhi woh unke hi kaodo mai se ek baniyan nikal kar pishab pochne lagi... Bahot sa pishab uske hath mai lga gaya....

Woh aisa achanak kyo karne lagi..... Par shayd ye badboo ussee bardash na ho pa rahi thi... Ya abhi un dono ko bula kar saaf nahi karwa sakti thi.... Woh pishab ki baniyan kaopde mai dal kar apne hath saaf karne chali gayi....


Aur 2 hour tak dono mai kuch baat nahi hue dono ek dusre ki traf dekh rahe the...

Pat kis pahar mai zeenat ko nind Aa gayi... Aur Ruksar apne ab bf ke bare mai bhi sochne lagi... Shadi user real hi kari par usme us shadi ke liye blackmail na kara na sex karne ke liye dawab dala balki shadi ke bad Ruksar usse sex karna chahati thi par wohi aisa moka nahi mila aur woh bus kuch dono baate karte hue din se weekly hi baat woh bhi bus 10 min bahot se bahot kar pate....

Tab store room ka door open hua dono bahar aaye Ruksar un dono ko dekh kar Beth jati hai barish mai ab dum nahi tha....
To bansi waha se Jane ke liye kahta hai to Ruksar slide open ka kar ke woh bhige kapde de deti hai....

Woh log chupchap soyi hue zeenat ko dekh kar window se chale jate hai....

Ab ek subah ka wait kubda kar raha tha.... Aur karib 5 baje ho woh apne jhopde se nikal gaya.....

Seedha ek masjid ki traf jaha subah kuch khiart batne ,,., ke bad kuch log bhikhariyo ko dete the.....

To woh seedha usi masjid ki traf gaya... Jaha kallu ke milne ka chance tha....

Par kallu bhikhari roz nahi aata tha... Agar woh na waha milta to uske thikane par jata.....
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(02-06-2021, 07:08 AM)Mgaya Wrote: I hope is main inka role jyada nahi hoga...just to push both girls to kubda...as story title is kubda bhikari...and not zeenat ke adventure!!?
Itna toh normal comment that bhai...is main itna kya negative lag gaya apko???
Aur kuch bura laga toh quote karke batao...loved your story...but itna toh comment kar hi sakte hai!!!
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(02-06-2021, 11:54 AM)Samit_bhai Wrote: Kya aisa koi episode aayega jahan zeenat/Rukhsar bus mein jayege and koi buddha ya koi aur unse masti kare..shuru mein woh nakhra kare..phir baad mein enjoy kare..
Hum iss bare mein pm mein baat kar sakte hain.

Bus wale maine Tabbasum ki kahani mai likha tha par aisa abhi mere demag mai nahi hai par dekhte hai ye kahani kaha jati hai.....
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(02-06-2021, 07:08 AM)Mgaya Wrote: I hope is main inka role jyada nahi hoga...just to push both girls to kubda...as story title is kubda bhikari...and not zeenat ke adventure!!?

I'd cmmt par nahi kaha maine ek pm aaya jab chek kar raha tha usme kuch mujhe laga ki ye insan shuru se mer ekahani ko pasand nahi karta hai aur Phir bhi padta hai.... Par jo usne likha woh mujhe Accha nahi laga
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(02-06-2021, 06:20 AM)Rohit Wrote: ab zeenat ek sasti veshya banegi aur dher saare graahak use chodne ke lie line mein khade honge. bilkul bakavaas.

Aur ye cmmt bakwas bhi kahte hai padte bhi hai ye log kaha se idea laga lete hai ki aage kiya likhnw chaha raha ho..

Aage episode pura hota to samjh aata ki maine sasti rundi banaya hai.... Par ye kahani skip karte hai bus pata nahi kiya serch karte hai bar bar yahi itni gheriyo se likh ka bata raha ho kubda ka ek main roll hai samjh nahi aata inko... Zeenat ke demag mai bus ab kubda hai... Agar maine kuch gami delane ko lita diya to sala kaise idea laga diya... Aur Phir mai is time rukhsar ko kyo bulata kiya aisa likhne de bina samne wale lo seduce kar ke dono se sex kara deta... Agar karaya to kah sakte the... To apne galti sudharta
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(02-06-2021, 12:36 PM)Johnyfun Wrote: Waah bhai sher singh bahut badiya mast hai

Jaisa socha hai waise likhtey jao comments to har type ke aate rahenge

Ha par aage kiya hone wala hai ye log idea kaise laga sakte hai ha mai is kahani mai nazbeen ka touch dene ki socha zaroor par ab alag tarike se hi likhta ho..... 

Yaha mai story open nahi karna chahata tha... Na karonga abhi... Ki zeenat  ke man mai kiya hai..... 
Woh Kubde ke samne itni kamzor kyo ho rahi hai rahi sex ki baat to woh ab kahi bhi kisi se kar sakti hai... Par Kubde ki kiya woh baat hai jo use challange laga.... Par sala ek cmmt me moond kharab kara aur pm mai bhi.... Thoda rukhsar ki entry kara raha tha aur dusre City mai woh kiya miss karti hai wohi likhta.... Par yaha sab ko ek jaise hi kahani lagti hai.....
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(02-06-2021, 12:31 PM)Bhikhumumbai Wrote: Lion King Bhai Nagetiv Comment pe dhyan mat do. apne trike se likho AApki khani he. hum rider Suzav de sakte he. par khani ka vislesan nhi kar skte. Aap apne trike se likho.

Par agar ye pura episode pura karta aur zeenat ke sath sex karta to ye cmmt aata to mujhe relise hota ki maine galat likha hai....
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(02-06-2021, 12:58 PM)Mgaya Wrote: Itna toh normal comment that bhai...is main itna kya negative lag gaya apko???
Aur kuch bura laga toh quote karke batao...loved your story...but itna toh comment kar hi sakte hai!!!

Chill bro...ignore karo unko..
i know its tough to focus when motivation is on negative side...aur mood bhi chahiye likhne ke liye...aur aise logo ko ignore karna jitna log bolte hai utna easy bhi nahi...but i would say k aap unki comment padho...ignore karo...phir acche comment padho unka reply do..simple..!Mind divert hone main help karega!!
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Sex stories ko sex stories ki tarah padho na itna logic dhundhne ki kya jarurat hai agar logic hi chahiye to apni college college ke kitab padho.

Good going bhai 

Badhiya likh rahe ho continue rakho.
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Subah karib 6 baje uth kar kubda kallu ko dekhne gaya par woh masjid ke door par na mila kubda late bhi ho gaya ki ab ye latter kisse padwaye....

Aur jo no tha woh kisi ke mob se nahi mila sakta tha pco isd to ab rahi nahi....


Kubda ne socha kisi rah chalte logo mai se kisi ek se padwaye par usne nahi padwaya tab aise hi kafi der ho gayi....

Woh ek footpath par betha soch raha tha kiya kare....

Tabhi use road par langada dono pairo se apahiz jiska nam sudama tha woh nazar aaya woh apne piro ko ghasita hua bheekj mang raha tha...

Chahata to wheel chair se bhi aisa kar sakta tha par jitni daya dekha kar bheekh mango utna hi zyada bheekh milti hai sudama bhi kafi ameer bhikhari mai se ek tha....

Jisne apne lachari ko professional bana diya... Waise bhi Kubde ke pass bhi kafi paise the....

Par ye log bheekh mang kar lakho kama lete hai par is paiso ko apne upper kharch hi nahi karte marne ke bad lakho paisa aisa hi pada rah jata hai.... Ya woh apne pariwar ko chupchap paise bhijwa dete hai...

Aise hi bahot se bhikhari the jinke pass flate zameen jaydad thi inke bacche aish ka jeevan ji rahe the...

Aur ye bhikhari ban ka apna ye kam kar rahe the... Subama bhi unhhi bhikhariyo mai se ek tha...par dolatmand to tha par flate zameen jaydad nahi thi woh apne dolat ko sada raha tha....

Barish ho garmi ho chahe koi sa mosam ho ye log aisa hi karte the....

Sudama par nazar Kubde ki padi.... Woh jhat se uske pass aaya.... Sudama se acchi patti thi.... Woh kai bar kisi mele ya jaha Dan dakshina kisi awasar par zyada milti to waha jate the...

Sudama bhi Kubde ko dekh kar khush ho gaya dono ek jahah sabki mazro se door ek Park ke pass beth gaye....

Pahle dono mai kafi baate hoti rahi tab Kubde ko pata tha is par mob rahta hai....

Par sudama bheekh mangte time silent kar deta tha... Aur chupa kar rakhta tha....

Tab Kubde ne kaha use ek argent call karna hai... Bahot zaroori hai.... Agar 5 min ke liye woh apna mob se no mila de..... To....

Kubde ne woh latter use thamate hue deta hai....

Sudama pada likha bhi tha... Aur woh latter par nazar dal kar thoda padte hue bahot shoked hua aur Kubde ko kahta hai.... Abe ye tere liye hai ya kisi aur ke liye....

K... Isme kiya likha hai jo tu itna chonk gaya....


Sudama.... Abe bhosdi ke ye latter mai aisa likha hai ki sala vishwasha nahi hota... Kisi ladki ka latter hai ye jo tujhse maafi mang rahi hai.... Aur is no par call karne ko kah rahi hai....

K... To der kyo karta hai lagana ka call is hasena ko gaand faad donga apne shohar se mujhe marwaya....

S...par isme to ye maafi mang rahi hai....

K... Tu der na kar tu bus call laga....

S... Ek shart par tum log kiya Baat karte ho mujhe bhi sunna hai....

Par Ye tujse maafi kyo mang rahi hain..

K...to apna kan laga kar sun lena....

S... Chal waha bilkul us kone mai chalte hai jaha aas pass koi nahi hai aur yaha bhi koi nahi par waha chal kar acche se us ki baat mai sun longa....

Kubde ko koi aitraz nahi hua woh us sudama langde ko leke waha chala gaya.... Jaha ab koi bhi nahi tha....

Par tabhi kubda kahta hai yaha bhi koi Aa sakta hai kyo na mere jhopde mai chale....

Par rickshaw mai piche side mere jhopde ke chalte hai waha aaram se Baat karnege...

Subama man gaya aur us jhopde ka rikshwa se rasta 15 min ka tha par andar aane mai us langde ko dikkat jungle ke raste se nikalne mai hoti hai... Par woh kaise bhi 45 min rikshwa ke 15 min laga kar hote hai.. Rikshwa wala to piche side Chhod gaya tha...

Aur sudama ko intrest aaya ki koi ladki isse maafi kyo man rahi hai....

Woh dono pahuch kar sudama apne kapdo ke andar se android mob nikalta hai jo kafi mahnga lag raha tha...

Tab woh pahle mob se no milakar hand free kar deta hai....

Dusri traf foran ring hone lagi...

Us time zeenat apne room mai hi thi... Aur us ke pass rukhsar bethi hue baat kar rahi thi...

Mob ki ring baji to us par sudama ban kar true caller ke zariye aaya...

Zeenat aur rukhsar nam pad kar kahti hai are ye no kis ka hai....

R..tumhe hi pata hoga.... Rukhsar apne baby ko goad mai leke apne boobs se doodh pila rahi thi....

Utha na dekh koi hoga shayd farman ne call kara ho....

Z... Woh to America gaye... Chalo dekhti ho...

Ye kah kar zeenat ne call recive kar ke apne kan par mob lagaya.....

Zeemat ki hello.... Meethi si awaz sunkar Kubde ko koi farq nahi pada lakin sudama ko laga yaar ye meethi se awaz to sach mai ek ladki ki hai.....
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K.... Sali madarchod raand apne lund devta ko chhodkar mujhe pitwakar apne kaha Maa chudne chali gayi....

Ye awaz sun kar zeenat uchal padi.....

Z.... Ap ap kaha ho ap mujhe maaf kar dena mujhse bhaot badi galti ho gayi apne mere boobs par kata tha to woh nishan kafi chupane ki koshish kari par farman ne dekh Liya....

Aur woh nishan dekh kar mujhse achanak se aisa pucha ki mere muh se apka nam nikal gaya mere devta ka nam nikal gaya mere pati ka nam nikal gaya... Jisne apne lunddddddd se mere mang bhari thi maine apka nam le liya..... Mujhe apki bahot yaad aa rahi hai... Khuda se yahi duwa mang rahi thi bus ye latter apke hath lag jai aur apki kheriyat malom pad jai.....

Khuda ka lakh lakh shukar apka call Aa Gaya....

Ye Baat muh se rukhsar ne suni to uska muh khula sa rah gaya... Ki ye itne khubsurat ladki bus ek lund ke liye us galich bhikhari se maafi mang kar ro rahi thi.....

Ye sex hawas tak to thik tha par us galich insan ne aisa kiya jaadoo kar diya....

Yahi hal Subama ka hua itni shahad se meeti barik pyari se awaz sunkar kisi ameer khandani hone ka saboot dete hue woh awaz Subama ke kano mai rus ghol rahi thi... Woh bhi muh faad kar sun raha tha....

Tab foran apne bacche ko doodh se muh hata kar bister par lita kar rukhsar ne mob chhin kar hand free kar diya....

Dono traf se hand free the....

K....are madarchod tujhe mai wahi saadi mai aisa chodta aur tere gaand bhi berahami se marta to tujhe aqal aati....

Maine tujhse yahi kaha tha na ki mere jaise kuch log hai mere dost hai unko tu tadpa hamare jaise log tere parchai bhi chuwne se gjabrate hai.... Aur tujhe maine kal shamshan ghat par bulaya tha burkhe naqab maj aur waha kisi ko tujhe maza dena tha....

Aur tu sali madarchod man gayi..... Kiya kah rahi thi ap mere lund devta ke sath mere pati se bhi bade hai... Mai apki izzat apne pati se zyada karti ho......

Jo ap kahenge mai karongi... Kon sa tujhe us aghori se chudwata bus mai tujhe le jakar waha ek bahne se usse maza leta.... Phir aisa hi mohalle ke bhikhariyo ko tadpata par chodta mai hi tujhe.....

Sali badi badi Baat kah kar mujhe pitwa dia....

Z... Nahi nahi aisa nahi hai..... Ap jaisa chahoge mai karongi par agar mai apko pitwa ti to mai bhala kon sa no deti....

K... Ha baat to tere sahi hai par mujhe piwane ka badla lena hai...

Z... Ha pa jo chaho mujhe saza do par mai apko piwane ki soch bhi nahi skati.....

K.... Accha to tu kaha hai....

Z... Mai chandigarh mai ho.....

K... Kal subah tu yaha hona chahiye samjhi.....mujhe nahi pata th kaise aayegi....

Mujhe tere chuchi tera chehra tere gaand tere chut dekhna hai.....

Ye mere dost ka mob hai tu mujhe is no par woh video wala call kar....

5 min mai tera call aana chahiye mai zara jab tak pishab kar ke aata ho....

Ye kah kar woh mob kaat deta hai....

Subama ka muh khula tha.... Woh jaise kisi ne use favicol se ek jagah chipka diya ya kisi ne stachu bana diya ho....

Woh bus Kubde ko dekha ja raha tha....

K... Kyo be jab uski awaz sunkar tera ye hal ho gaya to jab tu use dekhega to.....

Par tu kiya sochta hai ki tujhe is apsara ko chuwne donga..... Hahaha bus tu use side se dekh lena jab use mai tere samne yaha mob par nangi karonga......

Yahi hal rukhsar ka tha woh bhi yahi soch kar sadme mai Aa gayi ki ye kiya hua ye Zeemat ko kiya hone laga ye zaroor us Kubde ne kala jaado karya hoga......


Zenat ko woh mana karti hai video call ke liye aur phir se gazinad Jane ke liye..

Par isme rukhsar ko koi Shaq na raha ki zeenat par koi kala jaado karaya hai.....aur woh aghori ka bhi zikar suna tha....

Lakin koi kala jaado nahi par zeenat ko khud pata nahi woh kyo ye sab kar rahi thi......

Tab tak Kubde ke nam se safe kar ke video call kar deti hai....

Yaha rukhsar nahi rokti woh bhi us Kubde ko dekhna chahati thi ki aisa kiya hai usme jo Zeenat ko Pagal kar diya......
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