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Adultery Kubda bhikhari bhaot choti kahani
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31-05-2021, 02:06 AM
(31-05-2021, 01:21 AM)Fuckstar Wrote: Bhai please Hawas or Khoon or Harami Balam ko bhi continue karna ?? Harami balam to shuru kar sakta ho par abhi dekhta ho is kahani ko is week mai pura karne ke bad aise lagatr update dene ke bad mai yaha thoda intresting ye kahani banane ja raha ho... Dekhta ho safal hota ho ki nahi 
31-05-2021, 02:18 AM
Sirjeee! Beinteha ki noorine ke khayal rakhna! Most hot veili Rand
31-05-2021, 05:55 AM
31-05-2021, 09:03 AM
There is no point of going back to old stories and again writing..
Aap purani kahaniyon ko update karne se accha nayi kahaniya hi likhe..woh zyada romanch paida karti hai.. Also, le kubda fulfill his fantasies..jaise woh zeenat ko thoda baki bhikhari ke saamne expose kare etc..
31-05-2021, 11:44 AM
Mere ek weekness hai mai male carecter ko mai jayada repeat nahi karta hai is story mai Kubde ka ek important roll hai... Kyoki is kahani ka tag hai kubda bhikhari jis ke wazah se ye kahani zeenat ke ird gird hi ghumegi aur kuch new carecter aayenge par mai is long nahi le jaonga
31-05-2021, 11:45 AM
(31-05-2021, 09:03 AM)Samit_bhai Wrote: There is no point of going back to old stories and again writing.. Ye kahani kubda bhikhari ke upper hi hai to mai kuch intresting likhonga jisme every update mai Kubde ka kuch alag roll ho par woh bhale waha na ho zeenat ke pass
31-05-2021, 11:47 AM
Jis plot par chal rahi hai use rakhte hue mai kuch likhonga par ek carecter ko bar bar likh kar intrest kharab nahi karonga
31-05-2021, 11:48 AM
31-05-2021, 01:47 PM
31-05-2021, 04:21 PM
line king 989 Yr ab sb se phele Nye Episod me Farman ko mna lo kaise bhi Zeenat us ko Bol de ki agli rat me Usne hi Berhmise Zeenat ko kata tha. aur Use 2 week ke liye foring jana pde to wo rukhsar ko yha Zeenat ke sath rhne Bula le. aur ab Bechari rukhsar ko bhi thoda moka dedo kubda ke lund ki puja krneka. Lekin Use yah free me na millega Kunda ke aandar ka Dominent Purush jag chuka he Be rhmise Rukhsar ke badan ko kat kar Thappd mar mar kar uski cht gand aur chhera lal karneke bad hi usko chode. Ek bar uska bchha dudh pirjhaho tab kubda use dur karke khud dudh pine lge.
31-05-2021, 09:51 PM
You have excellent writing skills.....App next me aysi story likho jisme ek female character aur 6-7 male character rahe....With twosome, threesome sex rahe.......Agar app aysi story likhte ho to 100% pura hit hoga. ?
31-05-2021, 10:45 PM
01-06-2021, 01:59 AM
Kubda chala jata hai aur zeenat ke armano par pani Phir jata hai par uske dawara kahi gayi baat zeenat ke damage mai samne lagi... Par woh saari blouse mai sex karne ka moond to hua par Kubde ne kuch farmish rakhi jisne zeenat ko thoda sochne samjhne ka moka diya....
Par zeenat aisa kaise kare ye thoda mushkil lagne laga..... Zeenat ghar aakar hawas ki aag mai jal rahi thi usne apne saadi blouse utar kar normal dress pahni.... Par Kubde ne sex nahi kar aur ajeeb ghayan usko diya... Jo story aage badne par pata chalega.... Farman office mai pareshan tha... Use nahi pata ki zeenat ke sath jorjabarsti kisi ne kari hai ya khud zeenat kuch din se wild ho rahi thi kiya usne kisi ke sath sex kara hai..... Tab usi time arman ko malom pada ki kuch hafto ke liye use America jana hai 2 din bad.... Ye uske liye nai baat nahi thi..... Arman ghar aaya sham ka khana zeenat banane lagi aur wohi dheere dheere sex ka saroor utarne laga.... Arman jab aaya to bahot accha welcome kara... Aur bahot khush dil se mili...... Araman ke samjh nahi aata ki zeenat aaj raat se kuch alag behaviour kar rahi thi aur ab aisa khusmizaz welcome ....... Dono ne kafi kuch baat karke dinner kiya.....aur atman Mr bataya woh 2 din bad America ja raha hai to zeenat moond kharab karne ka natak kaho ya sach mai moond kharab karne lagi.... Tab araman ne kaha ki woh chahe chandigarh chali jai ya rukhsar ko bula le.... Is par zeenat kahne lagti hai uska bahot chota baby hai woh akele to itni door se nahi Aa sakti..... A... To mai flight ki tkt book kar deta ho aur delhi se unhe receive kar longa.....tab zeenat kahti hai woh soch kar batayega kiya karna hai.... Isi bich baato hi baato mai achanak se farman kahta hai ki woh aaj subah usne uske boobs par nishan dekhe hai.... Par aramn ko apne galti ka ahsas hota hai ki use ye sab achanak nahi batana tha.... Aur zeenat ne ye uske muh se suna to.... Woh ghabra kar dar ke mare lamp si gayi.... Aur uske muh se foran ek sec mai reply aaya ki ye us Kubde ne akelepan ka fayda utha kar bang karne ki koshish mai apne dant gads diye... Par woh is Kubde par bhari pad gayi..... Mai apko subah batane walo thi raat ko mai itna dar gayi ki apse nazar milne mai sharma rahi thi..... Apse Baat bhi mob par karna chahi par ap busy honge to kar na payi..... Mai itna dari hur thi ki apne room se nahi nikli.... Aur mob bahar tha to apne call kare honge to mai receive nahi kar payi aur woh mai Phir mob ke pass jab gayi to apke call dekhe par himmat nahi kar payi apse kahne ke liye.... Ye sunkar farman ka guss satwe asamn par hota hai... Aur woh gusse mai itna Pagal ho jata ha ki woh seedha jhopde ki traf jata hai.... Waha arman ko bahot rokne ki koshish mai zeenat bhi piche jati hai.... Kubda apne jhopde mai Aa Gaya tha.. Aur woh leta hua aaram se apna aage ke plan ke bare mai soch raha tha... Bus jaise hi arman pahucha aur us Kubde par laat ghuse ki barsat kar di use adhmara halat mai le aaya..... Zeenat ne bahot us Kubde ko bahane ki koshish bhi kari par woh nazuk mizaz ladki arman jo balck belt holder bhi tha us par kabo na kar pati hain... Arman us ko waha se dakka mar kar bahar nikalne lagta hai... Aur security officer ko bhi call karne ke liye apna mob ghar se Lane ke liye jata hai.... Par zeenat rok kar kahti hai ap kiya kar rahe ho iski saza apne ise Adhmara sa kar ke de di.... Aur ap mere izzat security officer ke samne samaj ke samne neelam karna chahate ho.... Ye sun kar arman ruk gaya... A... Abe harami tujhe 2 waqt khana diya paise diye aur tu mere biwi ki izzat lootna chahata hai nikal ja yaha se warna tujhe mot ke ghat utar donga.... Kubda apne tooti futi halat mai waha se nikal kar piche jungle ki traf chala jata hai..... Aur us time woh kuch kahta to nahi bus apne naak muh se khoon pochta hua sochne lagta hai... Sala iski saza zeenat ko deke rahonga rundi sali pahle mujhse maza liya mere lund par mar Mitne ki baat kar rahi thi.... Par apne shohar ko kyo bataya.... In sharifzadi par maine kaise bharosa kar liya... Maine usse aaj mere jaise logo ki shahzadi banne ko kaha to iska inam mujhe ye diya.... Nahi nahi kuch aur baat hogi sala mai mar khate time uski aankho mai dekha jo ek bebasi mai thi Nahi par iski saza mai aise buri trah donga ye hamesha yaad rakhegi....arman babu tune mujhse zinda chhodkar a Accha nahi kara..... Ab dekh mai kiya karta ho..... Arman ka soya mard jaag to gaya tha....par zeenat ko apne aap par bahot gussa aaya. Usne ye sab kyo kah diya..... Woh bechara mere bare mai kiya soch raha hoga.... Kiya tune bhikhariyo ki rundi banne ke liye socha tha us Kubde ki baato se.... Ha mai us waqt soch rahi thi ki apne Kubde ko khush karne ke liye sab kuch karongi.... Par shayd tere andar kuch aachai jaag gayi thi kiya..... Jo tune arman ko us Kubde ko door karne ke liye kah diya par maine aisa to nahi socha tha ki mai arman se ye baate kah dongi..... Par inhone achanak hi pucha aur maine bhi bina soche kaise bol diya..... Par mai aise sawal ka jawab dene ke liye tayyar nahi thi...... Woh bechara mujhe kitna galat soch raha hoga.... Zeenat ye sab soch rahi thi..... F... Suno ap kal subah redy ho jana mai apko kal hi chandigarh Chhod kar aaonga.... Aur aake yaha par koi aur jagah talash karonga jaha aise log na ho.... Sala garib soch kar mai uski madad karta raha aur woh...... Arman ki baato mai hukum sa tha... Isliye zeenat chandigarh Jane ko mana na kar payi..... Subah badi mushkil mai hue arman nahane gaya... To ek latter jaldi se likha.... Par bahot kam alfaz mai.... Bus ye likha mai chandigarh ja rahi ho mujhe maaf karna..... Kuch halat aisa paida hue ki mai kuch kah na payi.... Aur apna mob no bhi likh diya.... Yaha zeenat galti par galti kari ja rahi thi ha ye Baat chalo letter par likh deti par mob no....... Woh jaldi se us jhopde mai gayi aur wahi pillow ke niche rakh kar wapis aa gayi...... Par yaha har trah ki bewakoofi zeenat kar rahi thi.... Ab ye bhi nahi pata ki kubda pada likha hai ya nahi ya woh yaha aayega ya nahi..... Ya ye latter kisi aur ke hath lag jai aur woh is par likhe no ka kuch aur zeenat se Baat kare..... Ab ye zeenat galti aisa kaise kar sakti thi.... Par jaisa demag chala usne waisa kara.....
01-06-2021, 02:15 AM
(This post was last modified: 01-06-2021, 02:16 AM by Kartik123. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Ek hii jhatke me kahani mod di kuch aur plan hai kya joh bhi hai kahani bohat interesting hoti jaa rahi hai aise hi garam masale daar update dete rahiye.. waiting next
01-06-2021, 02:45 AM
Zeenat subah 8 baje farman ke sath nikal gayi... Aur raste mai khas baat nahi kari lamba safar tay kar ke woh sham ko chandigarh pahuche ha arman ne aaram se Gaadi ek ya 2 jagah fresh hone ke liye roki thi aur ek acche dabe mai khana kahaya.....
Rukhsar ko bhi nahi bataya ki ye dono Aa rahe hai.... Barhal jab ye dono gahar pahuche to rukhsar ke sad saur hairan hue... Achank bina itliha diye bager aane ke liye... Zeenat apne aunty jinka nam rukhsana tha woh zeenat se gale mil kar istiqbal kara..... Rukhsar apne baby ko leke Dr ke yaha gayi hue thi apne shohar dilashad ke sath..... Tab kuch der rukkar farman ne izzat mangi delhi Jane ke liye aur kaha woh America ja raha hai.... Aur woh apne dost ke yaha rukega kuch kam nipta kar use nikalna hoga.... Par dono mamu mami ne bahot roka lakin farman chala gaya..... Tab rukhsar aayi to zeenat ko dekh kar khush hue par Achank aane aur farman ke chale Jane ki wazah puchi to zeenat ne bataya ki woh America jana pad raha hai isliye woh yaha Chhod gaye..... Raat ko sab ne dinner liya.... Dilshand bhi khush tha ki uski saali aayi hue hai... Zeenat ko ek room alag se diya tha jo ground floor par piche ke side par tha.... Pahli manzil par rukhsar aur dilashad the... Dilashad ke parents bhi ground floor par hi the par frunt gate ke pass the..... Kafi bada aagan tha 4 room niche the par koi use nahi karta....ek trah se haweli hi thi..... Piche jaha zeenat ka room tha... Waha ek badi se window thi jo ek sunsan back side chote se Road par khulti..... Aur samne ki Road kr par ek bads talab tha.... Aur kuch jingle jaisa mahol tha... Ha waha subah sham dhobi kapde done aate the..... Kahne ko chandigarh hi tha par ye naksha out of area mai bana tha.... Zeenat apne room mai bethi thi tab rukhsar aati hai aur use apne pass aata dekh zeenat usse lipat kar bahot rone lagti hai..... Zeenat is ki wazah puchti hai aur tassali bhi deti hai.... Zeenat hichiki mar mar kar rote hue Kubde ki baat battai hai ki kaise woh dar ki wazah se sab bata diya.. Aur Kubde ko bahot Mara..... Is Baat ko sunkar rukhsar sir patak leti hai aur kahti hai tere andar aql nahi thi kiya koi aisa batata hai..... Are kuch der to soch samjh kar jawab deti aur tune to ab kiya karo mai tera..... Sab bekar kar diya... Par ek Baat sahi bhi hai tu Kubde ko bhul to nahi payega par farman tujhe waha nahi rahega.... Z... Ha mai janti ho woh mujhe waha nahi rahenge par mai ek bar usse maafi mangna chahati thi ... R...ek Baat kaho mai waise tune jo inam us Kubde ko apne husn ka diya hai iske badle woh agar Jan se bhi Mar jata to woh ye gift hi samjhta..... Tujhe pane ke liye koi mar mit bhi sakta hai.... Z... Aur ap appi ap bhi to jawan ho hasen ho ap ka jism kitni madakta se bahrpoor hai.. Baby hone se to ap ke jism mai aur zyada nikhar aaya hai...... R... Are mere tarif baad mai karti rahna ab to so ja mujhe pata hai kubda tujhe sapne mai parshan karega aur 12 baj rahe hai.... Mujhe jana hoga kal baat karte hai..... Zeenat....hmmmmmmmm Ruksar ko bahot hi Accha lag raha tha zeenat ke aane se woh bahot khush thi par baby ko raat ko waise 11 baje tak doodh feed karati thi par dinner aur sab ek sath the to time pata na chala aur dono bhi 30 min tak kafi kuch aur bhi baate kari isliye rukhsar upper chali gayi.... Barsat shuru ho gayi to zeenat thande mosam ke haws lene ke liye window open kar deti hai... Bahar se mst hawa aa rahi thi..... Woh bar bar apna mob chek karti ki kahi us Kubde ka call na Aa jai par is waqt call kaise as sakta tha..... Tab ye bhi sochti ki pays nahi kubda jhopde mai gaya hoga ya nahi.... Agar gaya hoga to woh latter padega ya nahi.... Agar anlad hua to koi kagaz ka tukda samjh kar kahi fek na de..... Ya ho sakta hai koi aur ho janne wala... Jise woh latter pads de.... Us ke kitne chot aayi thi kiya woh kisi Dr ko dekhayega ya woh us dard mai tadapta rahega...... Zeenat aisa hi kafi der us window par khadi hokar soch rahi thi..... Tabhi 2 saye nazar aate hai jo ek samne hi kuch door ped par Sahara leke apne ko bhigne se bacha rahe the..... Lakin bahar barish tez thi bijli bhi kadak rahi thi.... Par itni tez roshni ke ek pal jaise aati jati lakin in do logo ka chehra saaf nahi dekh pata... Zeenat ke room ki light jali hue thi.. Jisse woh saye aache se zeenat ko dekh sakte the..... Ped bhi un par zyada barish se nahi bacha pa raha tha thund se dono buri tarah kamp rahe the..... Zeemat se raha nahi gaya woh itni tez thutur rahe the ki dono apas mai gale jaise mil kar khade the.... Zeenat me un dono ko hath ka ishara kar ke apne tarf bulaya to kuch der woh dono khade rahe par bar bar ishara karne par dono zeenat ke window ki traf aane lage..... Window par slide lagi thi par koi lohe ka jungla nahi tha.... Dadak se 6 feet upper thi..... Woh dono zeenat ke traf kadam badane lage.....thund se buri trah kapte hue... Zeemat ke pass aane lage....
01-06-2021, 02:47 AM
(01-06-2021, 02:15 AM)Kartik123 Wrote: Ek hii jhatke me kahani mod di kuch aur plan hai kya joh bhi hai kahani bohat interesting hoti jaa rahi hai aise hi garam masale daar update dete rahiye.. waiting next Ha maine jo socha hai wohi likh raha ho kahani ko intresting banana hai ha kubda ka hi humutainon ko thoda roka hai..... Par Kubde ke roll khatam nahi kara kubda kab kaise milega ye bahot intresting socha hai par thode update ke bad.....
01-06-2021, 02:49 AM
(31-05-2021, 09:51 PM)Edens Wrote: You have excellent writing skills.....App next me aysi story likho jisme ek female character aur 6-7 male character rahe....With twosome, threesome sex rahe.......Agar app aysi story likhte ho to 100% pura hit hoga. ? Kahani mai kuch idea to bahot Aa rahe hai par us idea par likhonga to kahi mere ye kahani short story se long na ho jai ab kuch thoda fast likhonga.....
01-06-2021, 02:50 AM
(31-05-2021, 04:21 PM)Bhikhumumbai Wrote: line king 989 Yr ab sb se phele Nye Episod me Farman ko mna lo kaise bhi Zeenat us ko Bol de ki agli rat me Usne hi Berhmise Zeenat ko kata tha. aur Use 2 week ke liye foring jana pde to wo rukhsar ko yha Zeenat ke sath rhne Bula le. aur ab Bechari rukhsar ko bhi thoda moka dedo kubda ke lund ki puja krneka. Lekin Use yah free me na millega Kunda ke aandar ka Dominent Purush jag chuka he Be rhmise Rukhsar ke badan ko kat kar Thappd mar mar kar uski cht gand aur chhera lal karneke bad hi usko chode. Ek bar uska bchha dudh pirjhaho tab kubda use dur karke khud dudh pine lge. Dekho jo hoga badiya hoga maza aayega bhaot kinki sex humiliation jo mai jayada nahi likhta woh ab is kahani mai try karonga |
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