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Small update....thanks for support, keep showing the support through comments and suggestions...thanks
Chapter - 68
They finished celebrating the holi and everyone is packing up and as they are done with shoot and celebration. Everyone has washen up and changed their clothes, waiting for their bus to come so they can travel back. Rahim and anand is settling everyone for their part in the webseries. More than the money they are getting for the film they are happy about enjoying the day with a beautiful mature woman. Everyone got the opportunity to touch and feel devika through the holi celebration, and on top of that they cannot forget the visual treat devika showcased in her skimpy clothes as part of the shoot. While waiting for the bus to arrive, ramu and santhosh was chatting and discussing their day.
Santhosh - bro, why did you ask to pour water on her, i didnt understand... Im sure you might have had some sort of plan
Ramu - haha...you were right and thanks bro executing it and pouring the water at the correct moment.
Santhosh - what happened, what did you do?
Ramu - bro, this lady devika is staying near to my house. Even though she doesn't know me, i have noticed her before when she waits for the bus or walks through the street. She is the most beautiful woman in our area. And all the kids near our area talks about her.
Santhosh - ok
Ramu - and i knew rahim , we play cricket together in the ground near to my house. So from him i knew that devika is his teacher. And when i heard about him directing a webseries and devika was going to be a part of the webseries, i didnt want to miss the opportunity and asked rahim to include him also someway, so i can meet devika. But i never thought it would turn out like this
Santhosh - yeah bro, so why did u want me to pour water at her
Ramu - bro, did u see her ass in that small skirt she was wearing.. It is so inviting, round and curvy. I had never seen her other than in saree. Even in saree her gaand looked very round and i used to enjoy the each movement of her ass in the saree while she walks in the road or when goes to the house after getting down from the bus. So when i saw her in that skimpy skirt and couldn't resist
Santhosh - what are you saying bro, so what did you do...did you actually touched her....
Ramu - hahaha...yes bro..haha...i asked you to throw water at her just to divert her attention. And you were pouring water on her, she was trying to get away from the water and was concentrating on it. So i took this opportunity and quickly inserted my hand inside her skirt , grabbed her soft ass and gave a hard squeeze. Oh man..what a gaand she is having, soft peace of meat. Even she might have not realised what would have happened.
Santhosh - wow..you luck bastard, you grabbed her ass
Ramu - yes bro, but the real lucky bastards are these three guys rahim ,anand and vishnu. You cant even imagine, in the name of webseries they are exploiting devika. Do you know, before inside the tent, they made her act topless
Santhosh - whaat?..seriously
Ramu - yeah bro..she completly toplsess and was covering her milk tanks with her hands. I was able to see little glimpse of her aerola...
Santhosh - wow
Ramu - im sure, they want to fuck her. And they are doing all these stupid webseries just to enjoy her
In 5 minutes the bus came, Rahim and vishnu made all the crew pack things and sent them back in the bus to thier home. Devika will be going back in a car along with rahim, anand and vishnu. After bidding goodbye to their crew, looked around to check devika. But she was not there
Rahim - bro where is she
Anand - not sure, i was busy giving money to each one
Rahim - yeah, i didnt see her after the hoki celebration, where did she go
Anand - and where is vishnu, he is also missing
They checked everywhere , but could not find them.
Rahim - did you see her
Anand - no bro...both of them are missing
Rahim - where did they go?
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chapter - 69
Devika - How far do we have to go vishnu
Vishnu - its nearby only madam
Devika - its 10 minutes we have been walking
Vishnu - madam i have come to this place before and im sure that there is a small waterfalls nearby where we can actually get in
Devika - ok
Vishnu - its safe to get in there, water is not deep and its rocky
Devika - ok..i had told you guys that i dont want play holi. Now look at me, how will i go back home like this
Vishnu - madam dont worry, we will wash off the colours in the river and will clean ourselves before we go
Devika - oh god im fully wet, i did not expect that they will pour water on me
Vishnu - sorry madam even we did not expect it, take it easy madam they just wanted to celebrate holi and a successful day
Devika - but this was little too much
Vishnu - thats why your little brother came to save you. And i knew you wont be comfortable in cleaning yourself infront of everyone, thatd why im taking you to this waterfall place
Devika - i know, you are always so sweet and always there to help me whenever i need. My little boy is always so caring of your sister
Devika was so impressed with vishnu and smiled at him affectionately. Vishnu also returned the smile. Vishnu always tried to portray the role of innocent_ caring ,loving brother of devika to win her heart and gain trust. He knew devika will be lot more comfortable when she has the trust. Now vishnu appeared as the saviour of devika , when everyone was troubling her, and now is taking her to the waterfalls nearby so she would be able to wash off the colour from her body. Devika is walking full wet from the colours and her body is fully covered with colours and no one can recognise it is her. She is
carrying her sari, blouse ,bra and a towel in a plastic bag and following vishnu to a secluded place, so she would be able to clean herself. As she is wet, her T-shirt is clinging to her body showing the shape of her braless boobies. Vishnu did not miss the chance and noticed her nipples sticking out through the tshirt as she is not wearing the bra. And in his mind he was thinking on different plans on how to benefit from this opportunity as he is alone with devika.
He wants to make use of this golden opportunity and wants to make best out of it. He knew that devika now trust him alot and need to use this trust to make her do something and push his luck.
Atlast after walking for couple more minutes they reached the banks of the river. And 50 meter away there is a beautiful small waterfalls. They would have to walk through the water inorder to reach the waterfalls.
Devika- wow this place is beautiful
Vishnu - see i told you..its surrounded by forest noone would come here
Devika - yeah
Vishnu - lets not waist time, we dont have much time we have to return soon otherwise it will be late once you reach home
Devika kept the plastic bag under a tree near by and came near the river and with her foot touched the water to check the temperature of the water
Vishnu - it will not be cold madam
Devika - yeah its not cold
Devika bend down and took some water in her palm and tried to wash away the colours on his hand
Vishnu - madam its bettwr if we go to the waterfalls, you would be able to wash away the colours quickly
Devika - but how can we go there, is the water deep and also its little rocky
Vishnu - no madam water is not deep , we can just walk towards there
Vishnu got into the water and offered his hand to devika , devika took his hand and they carefully walked towards the waterfall. And the water level was only knee deep, devika was able to walk without any problem
They reached the waterfall and it was not big waterfall, water is falling only from a small height with little force. Even kids would be able to stand there without any trouble.
Vishnu - ok madam now you wash off the colours from your body
Devika took small steps and stood underneath the waterfalls and started to wipe off the colours from her face, hands and legs. Vishnu also got inside the waterfalls and started to himself as he was also covered in colours. He was cleaning him himself and at the same time watching devika. As her skirt is now wet, he was able to easily see the blank panty she was wearing underneath the skirt. Devika was busy cleaning herself, while vishnu was enjoying the view.
Vishnu thought now is the time to try and push his luck as he dont want miss another opportunity. So as devika was cleaning , vishnu told
Vishnu - madam, there is lot of colour on your back and neck , you probably would have to remove the tshirt to clean properly
Devika looked at vishnu confusingly
Vishnu - madam i mean how would you be able ti clean your back without removing the tshirt
Devika - oh vishnu is there lot of colours on my back
Vishnu - yes
Devika - oh what would i do now
Vishnu - madam you have to clean and for that you should remove the tshirt. And also thats the only tshirt im having , so i need to dry the tshirt before we go so i have something to wear
Devika - yes true, i didnt think of it. But how would i be able to remove the tshirt when you are standing here, can you please go back to the river bank. So i can remove, clean and come back
Vishnu - madam we dont have much time and i also would have to remove the colour from my body. Madam you can do one thing, just turn around and remove tshirt and give it to me. So i . can keep the tshirt for drying on that rock. And you can stand like that and take bath, while i will clean myself standing here
Devika was thinking about, and vishnu tried to convince again
Vishnu - madam what are you thinking, i have seen you like that before, its nothing new. Dont you remember last time in the waterfall and also while at the time filming as well.
Devika thought and said to herself, " yeah true, he has already seen me like that, and vishnu is my little brother and a perfect gentleman, there is no problem and i trust him alot"
Vishnu - what madam, you still consider me as a stranger, and dont trust me
Devika - no vishnu, you are my darling little brother and there is no question of trust with you. You are the most caring person
Saying that devika smiled at vishnu , turned around, slowly held the end of her tshirt and using both the hands slowly peeled off the tshirt from her body.
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Nice update.. but too short..
Please give us a long updates.. atleast of 2 pages at one time.. and this time please give updates soon..
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(12-05-2021, 02:01 PM)anushka Wrote: Nice update.. but too short..
Please give us a long updates.. atleast of 2 pages at one time.. and this time please give updates soon..
Last two times his update length are good. Longer than this would need more time from him and that's his choice. We can suggest improvement with frequency of posting like once in 3 days.
Updates lengthier than this are unreasonable to ask for.
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Nice update Bookkeeper bro. Thanks for increasing update length. Would be great if the frequency of posting is also increased.
Thanks again
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Nice update bro.... keep rocking
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Chapter - 70
Vishnu watched devika taking off the tshirt and once again saw sexy back with all mixed colours. Devika turned her head to side and handed over the tshirt without turning back. Vishnu took the tshirt from devika washed it in the water and kept it for drying in a near by rock
He looked at devika, she is washing away the colours from her body, vishnu felt she is completely comfortable of him being around her. Vishnu wanted to make his next move and thought this the perfect time for it
Vishnu - madam, there is lot of colours on your back, its fully covered with colours
Devika - oh, is it vishnu...these kids
Devika tried to wash away the colour from her back by stretching her hand to her back. But she had difficulty in reaching to all the areas in her back. By seeing that vishnu said
Vishnu - its ok madam, i can help you, otherwise you will not be able to reach and extend your hand to all the areas.
Devika also understood that she wont able to wash away colour from her back without the help of vishnu
Devika - ok..thanks vishnu , im giving lot of trouble to you
Vishnu - there is nothing like that madam. Its my duty to take care of my sister
Devika was again impressed with vishnu. In the mean time, vishnu reached near devika and took water in his hands from the falls and touched her shoulders with bare hands and started rubbing to wipe off the colours her body. The next 5 minutes he used his hand to thoroughly clean her back, by feeling the smoothness of her back. He did not try anything stupid as he know that will put an end to the show and any mistake from him will make devika uncomfortable and she will lost trust and their relationship will be jeapordy
Vishnu - madam, can i wash your legs as well , there are lots of colour on the back side of your legs
Devika was comfortable with vishnu, so she didnt have any doubt in her mind when she said
Devika - yes, no problem vishnu and thanks for helping me out
Vishnu kneeled down in the water and started with her feet and slowly worked towards her thighs making sure he is not leaving out any place. All this time devika was busy cleaning her front side. Vishnu held her thighs, pressed it and rubbed pretending to wash away the colour. He measured the thickness or her thighs while adjusting his dick through the dhoti he wad wearing. As he was kneeling down , her round ass is right infront of his face. The skirt she is wearing is transparent now and showing signs of the black panty she is wearing. He can also make out the shape of her ass as the clothes are sticking to her body.
Vishnu thought he will try to push his luck further and take advantage of the situation without alarming devika or putting any doubt in her mind
Vishnu - ma'am
Devika - yes vishnu
Vishnu - i have cleaned your back and legs and washed off the colours. But...
Devika - yes what happened vishnu
Vishnu - madam ..i can see there is colour on your bottom as well..i mean on your...
Vishnu used his index finger and gave small poke on her right ass
Devika - oh god...how did the colour reach there , i dont understand
Vishnu - yeah madam, it looks like there are lot of colour there
Devika - oh is it
Devika took her hand towards her back and tried to wash off the colour over her skirt
Vishnu - madam, it wont go like that..you would have to remove the skirt to wash away the colour
Devika - oh no...how can i
Vishnu - madam just remove it, there is no point , i can already see what you are wearing inside and it makes no difference. And im just trying to help you out.
Devika - i know vishnu that you are trying to help me, but you should also understand that im a mature married woman.
Vishnu -ok madam, if you still trust me i will turn back so you can clean it yourself
Saying that vishnu stood up and turned back and started cleaning himself. Devika turned her head sideways and looked over the shoulder to see the vishnu has turned to the other side. Devika felt bad as he was just trying to help her.
Devika - hey vishnu..are you mad at me..vishnuu
Vishnu - im not mad at anyone. If still you dont trust me i dont have anything to say
Devika - hey vishnu...dont feel , you are the only one i trust, otherwise i wouldn't be here standing like this
Vishnu - ok you go ahead and clean yourself after that we will go, we dont have enough time
Devika sighed a little and thought he can already see the panty what she is wearing and it will not make any difference. So she slowly opened the knot of cloth she is wearing on the waist and removed it complete from her body and kept aside on a rock. She looked again over her shoulder to see vishnu still standing facing other side busy cleaning himself. Devika smiled, thinking how innocent and good this boy is. She is now completely comfort around vishnu.
Devika took her hand behind and tried to wash away colour from her ass. She was able to wash away some colour and she was not sure whether she was able to remove it completely as she cant see it. She tried to turn her head maximum to see, but she was not successful. She looked at vishnu and he was still looking away and busy washing himself. Atlast she thought she has no choice other than calling vishnu
Devika - vishnu vishnu
Vishnu pretented to be angry and did not give any any response
Devika - vishnu....dont give too much drama
Still there wasnt any response
Devika - vishnu...im sorry if i made you feel bad..im sorry vishnu..vishnu
This time he responded
Vishnu - what madam what you want
Devika - oh ok..thats good .are you angry with me
Vishnu - no im not
Devika - then i want help from my brother
Vishnu - what happened
Devika - can you check if the colour is completely gone on my back, i cannot see it myself
Vishnu - for that i would have to turn back and face you...but do you trust me
Devika - hey stupid..i was just kidding only..i trust you completely, who else i will trust...can you check please
A smile came to his face, he is delighted that his plan is working out. He again changed his expression to serious face and slowly turned around and looked at devika. He was completely astounded to see his dream lady, standing there under the waterfall only wearing a black panty showing her beautiful curvaceous ass to him. Vishnu stood there cannot believe what he is seeing. He can also see the thread on her waist tied by chaami. Her panty is fully drenched in water showcasing the shape of her gaand. He was able to see 2 full round ass cheeks bulging out and as well as the in between the shape of her ass crack.
He spotted some colour on her right ass cheak, due to the hard squeezing by ramu.
Devika - vishnuu...is there anymore colour or is it completely washed off
Vishnu came to his senses and responded
Vishnu - yeah yes madam..there is still colour madam
Devika - oh where is it....
Vishnu - madam its on the right side
Devika again unsuccessfully tried to wash the colour away
Devika - did it go
Vishnu - no madam..it is towards the middle on the right part
Devika again tried to stretch her hand , but could not reach the exact spot
Vishnu - madam, if you want i can help you..but you should not think me in any bad.. I just want to help you as my own sister
Whenever vishnu says , he is treating her as his sister that makes devika's heart melt and she will feel comfortable and trusts vishnu more
Vishnu - if you trust me , i can help you
Devika thought for a second, she did not feel anything wrong in it as vishnu is just a innocent kid who trying to help her
Devika - ok vishnu...i trust you completely and you are helping here. Go ahead and please help me
Vishnu had a mischievous smile on his face as he stepped closer to devika. He again kneeled down on the water and with his four fingers touched devika's right ass. He touched and gave a small press. He couldnt believe his luck. Her ass felt like soft cushion for vishnu. He checked the softness of her ass as he rubbed and at the same time gave little squeezes using his palm. For him it is the first time he touching and squeezing a woman's ass. And for devika, it is the first time another man other than her husband , touching her ass with her permission. She tried to look calm and relaxed as she felt Vishnu's fingers exploring her ass
Devika - is it going vishnu
Vishnu - yes madam its going, but im wondering how did you get colour there
Devika - i have no idea vishnu
Vishnu - did someone touch you here
Devika - i dont remember vishnu, everyone wad attacking me with colours
Vishnu understood it might have been that fucking ramu
Vishnu - madam there is some colour gone underneath the inners. Let me remove that colour as well
Devika - ok
Vishnu used his left hand and took out the edge of her panty from the right ass cheek and pulled it towards her ass crack, revealing her right ass globe completely. Now her full right ass is visible infront of Vishnu's eyes. And he used his full right hand to hold the entire right ass cheek and squuezed it in pretext of washing the colour away. Devika looked down over her shoulder to see what vishnu is doing
Devika - what happened vishnu, is it done
Vishnu - yeah madam almost done
He again took another 1 minute , exploring her ass, weighing it, squeezing and rubbing her ass. He made sure her ass is spotless and all the colour is washed. After that he took out the panty from her ass crack and kept it back on her ass cheek
Vishnu - ok madam we are done...
Devika - ok vishnu thanks, so shall we go back
Vishnu - yes madam, let me take the tshirt from the rock which i had put to dry
Devika - ok
Vishnu walkes towards the rock, and an idea came to his mind. He thought , anyway he reached this far and doesnt want to miss the opportunity and want to push his luck futher more. He wanted to see her breasts as well.. So he thought he will act like he slipped from the rock and fell down. He turned back looked at devika, she was busy washing her face for the final time before they go from there. She is still standing showing her back towards him. He thought this is the perferct time, so got into the top of the rock and acted as got slipped from the rock
Vishnu - oh...ouch..help help madam
Devika heard the scream from vishnu and turned back covering her breast with the hand to find vishnu lying on the water crying in pain
Devika - vishnu what happened...oh god
Vishnu - madam i slipped from the rock and fell down, i cannot get up madam... I think i broke my leg madam..i cannot get up madam
Devika got worried seeing the pain of vishnu. She looked for the skirt she kept near her ,so she could cover her breast using it. But she cannot find the skirt. She searched again and saw the skirt has floated away in the water and is far away. She knew that she doesn't have any choice but to go like this to vishnu covering her breast with hands. Vishnu was crying out loud acting as if he has broken his leg. Devika walked carefully to where vishn was lying while holding her breast with her hands
Devika - vishnu..oh god what happened
Vishnu cried and said
Vishnu - madam i cannot get up, my leg is paining..oh no madam
Devika looked around to see if anyone is there for help, but noone was there
Vishnu - madam help.. I cannot get up, please help me getting up please madam
Devika was really worried to see the pain of vishnu. She thought, its not the time to worry about her nakedness by seeing the condition of vishnu. She doesnt know how serieous is the injury. Vishnu screamed again in pain and this time devika got really scared so she quickly took out her hands from her breasts, revealing her ripe breasts first time infront of vishnu.
Vishnu atlast saw the sight he was waiting for and saw her white heavy breast infront of his eyes. He continued to act as he is having lot of pain, while enjoying the view her breasts. Devika bend down and tried to hold his hand and pull him. And when she bend down, her boobies was hanging down and shaking and swingimg with each her movement. Vishnu saw her hard pointy nipples and she had light brown nipples and round coin sized aerola around it. Her nipples are so hard and erect as she was standing in the water and her breast is filled with milk.
Vishnu felt like holding her breast and suck the milk out of it. Her breast was hanging and dancing literally infront of his eyes. And she is only wearing her black panty. Devika again held his hand and tried to pull him up. And vishnu atlast got up , putting all his weight on devika. Devika struggled to keep her balance, while holding vishnu. And in the process of getting him up and making him stand on his feet, lot of times her hanging breast touched vishnu's shoulder, arms and side. He could feel the the firmness of her breast when it was pressed on his arm. He could also feel her nipples poking on his arm while she was pulling him
At last vishnu was on his feet and he showed lot of pain
Vishnu - madam i dont think i would be able to walk madam, its giving me lot pain
Devika is now not bothered about showing her naked breast to vishnu as she is actually worried about the injury of vishnu
Devika - we will do one thing, you keep your arm around my shoulder for support and i will help you to walk towards the river bank
Vishnu - ok madam
Devika took Vishnu 's right hand and kept it on her right shoulder and used her left hand support Vishnu's waist .Viahnu took the opportunity to completely lean towards devika putting his whole weight on her . Devika was struggling to take him towrds the river as she has to support his full weight on her shoulder. They took small steps towards the river bank. And while walking devika's left breast is constantly touching the right side of vishnu. He is again getting the feel of her breast on his body. He is enjoying the view of her bouncing breast. Her breast really looked like a ripe mango as she is a breastfeeding lady.
Vishnu while walking now took out his right hand which supporting her should and kept his arm hanging down her right shoulder and put more weight on devika. He acted as if he is in lot of pain.
And the moment when put is hand hanging down around her right shoulder, with each step his palm started brushing her right breast. Devika failed to notice this as she was concentrating on carrying him to the river banks. His fingers rubbed against her pointy nipple and her breast is frequently touching and bouncing in his palm with each step. He felt the hardness of her nipple and softness of her entire breast in his hand. Even though he wanted to grab her hanging breast and squeeze it , he controlled himself.
Atlast they reached the river banks and she made him sit on the ground.
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Excellent update.. Thanks..
Slow seduction is superb..
Where there will be no force but mutually later on..
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