02-05-2021, 10:28 PM
Nice start bhai......
Adultery KALLU KI ZINDAGI KI SHURUWAT
03-05-2021, 12:58 AM
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03-05-2021, 10:28 AM
(03-05-2021, 08:58 AM)Udaybhanu Wrote: Big fan bhai apke story ka lekin wo story ko bhi adhura kyu chhoda aapne
Never intended to...but then due yo some family issues...was unable to allocate time for the story...Also neg commets considering the theme were more then encouraging comments...and then XMask picked it up... so it was not stopped...and I was not feeling guilty ...to leave story...?...tried starting another story.. but realised...it wont be easy to give time like that since i started job and got married..!! So just stopped writting.. !!
Sorry.. but will write something when I have time to write one...I have few ideas ready...just outline!
03-05-2021, 10:32 AM
Kallu ko khalnayak aur agresive banao Story ka
03-05-2021, 10:37 AM
(03-05-2021, 10:28 AM)Mgaya Wrote: Never intended to...but then due yo some family issues...was unable to allocate time for the story...Also neg commets considering the theme were more then encouraging comments...and then XMask picked it up... so it was not stopped...and I was not feeling guilty ...to leave story...?...tried starting another story.. but realised...it wont be easy to give time like that since i started job and got married..!! So just stopped writting.. !!It's ok bhai I completely understand your situation. But thanks anyway your are also my inspiration
Sorry.. but will write something when I have time to write one...I have few ideas ready...just outline!
(03-05-2021, 10:32 AM)DEV_MYSTERIOUS Wrote: Kallu ko khalnayak aur agresive banao Story ka
.Sab hoga bhai ye Kallu ka arc hai
03-05-2021, 02:01 PM
FanArtic 102 - fan comment
ufff! Finally the story I was waiting for a while...
Now rest assured Nushrat is in safe hands - I mean in Udaybhanu Bro's hands!
Cant waitttt!
ufff! Finally the story I was waiting for a while...
Now rest assured Nushrat is in safe hands - I mean in Udaybhanu Bro's hands!
Cant waitttt!
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My story: Samantha & Chai - Ayurvedic Treatment For My Wife (cuckold, hotwife, suspense)
03-05-2021, 02:27 PM
Update 2
Kallu aur Shyam dono apne ghar ke bahar lage bhid ko dekh ke chaunk jaate hai aur daudte huye ghar ke ander ghuste hai to Padma ki haalat dekh kar pura pariwar darr jaata hai.
Padma ka shir fata hua tha jiske upar kapda bandha hua tha aur pura sarir pe chot laga hua tha.
Shyam gusse se....... Aye laxmi MAA ko dawakhana leke kyu nahi gayi tu.
Laxmi....... Bhai paise nahi hai mere paas ishiliye me aapka intezar kr rahi thi Hariya Chacha ko phone me bola hu wo apna tempo leke aarahe hai.
Kallu...... Tu hariya ko kyu boli bada hi kamina inshaan hai. Gaon me abhi bhi chori krta rehta hai. Ushe logo ke halat par koi taras nahi aata hai.
Shyam...... Koi baat nahi baapu abhi MAA ko bas dawakhana leke jaana hai baaki baat baadme dekhenge.
Thodi der me tempo leke Hariya aajata hai.
Hariya...... Kallu leke aaja teri biwi ko paise nahi lunga tujhse bachpan ke dost jo hai hum dono.
Kallu...... Agar meri biwi ki eshi haalat nahi hoti to kabhi bhi teri madat nahi leta. Thu hai teri dosti par.
Hariya....... Tu abhi bhi mujh par gussa hai kyunki mene tere ghar se chori kiya tha aur wo bhi sirf 1100 rupaye. Chal thik hai tu maafi de ya naa de abhi bhabhi ko leke dawakhana chal. Aye shyam dekh kya raha hai bhabhi ko leke aake tampo me bitha tera baap aur mera jhagda to puri zindagi chalti rahegi.
Fir kuchh gaon walo ki madat se Padma ko gaadi me bitha ke sab log hospital leke aajate hai. Jo ki thodi dur seher me tha.
HOSPITAL ME.......
Doctor....... Bahat blood loss ho gaya hai aur brain me blood clotting kr gaya hai ishiliye immediately operation karna hoga aap paiso ka intezam kijiye jaldi. Nahi to patient ko hum bacha nahi paaenge.
Kallu, Shyam aur laxmi ye baat sunke unka hosh hi Ud jaata hai.
Shyam...... Karib kitna paisa lagega.
Doctor...... Total 3 lakh ke karib kharcha aaega jaldi kijiye.
Shyam aur Kallu, Laxmi ko wohi hospital me chhod ke turant hi Raghunath ke ghar bhagte hai.
Hariya apne tempo me betha ke dono BAAP Bete ke saath aata hai Raghunath ke ghar.
Raste me......
Hariya....... Kallu chinta mat kar bhabhi thik ho jaaegi. Raghunath sahab ko sab chiz bolna wo jarur madat karenge tera.
Shyam...... Baapu aap chinta mat kijiye me hu na MAA ko kuchh hone nahi dunga.
Kallu, Shyam aur Hariya teeno Raghunath ke ghar pahunch jaate hai.
Security...... Arey kaha chale aaye ho dono chalo bhago yaha se.
Kallu..... Bhai hume ander jaane de bahat zaruri kaam hai maalik se.
Wohi dur khada Raghunath ki Biwi Rambha khadi thi.
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Rambha...... Kaun ayaa hai.? Ander aane do.
Kallu aur Shyam......... Dhanyawad maalkin thoda maalik se milna tha.
Rambha........ Kutte suna hai aaj tere bete ne mere bete par kichad feka tha.
Ye sunke Kallu ka shir niche jhuk jaata hai.
Rambha...... Bolna suwar tum log bhul gaye ki hum log kaun hai hum log jaha thukte hai waha tum log kaam karte ho aur tumlogo ki itni himmat ki tum logo ne hamare pariwar par kichad uchhala hai.
Kallu ghutne ke bal baith jata hai aur bolta hai........ Maalkin mere bete se galati ho gayi hai hume maaf kar dijiye. Bas maalik se milne dijiye.
Raghunath......... Kya hua hai Rambha kaun aaya hai ?
Rambha........ Kuchh majdoor aaye huye hai aapse milne.
Raghunath......... Kya hua hai aur kyu aaye ho yaha.?
Kallu....... Maalik gajab ho gaya hai meri madat kijiye. Meri Biwi dawakhana me hai kuchh paise chahiye operation karne ke liye.
Raghunath........ To kitna paisa chahiye ?
Kallu....... Maalik 3 lakh.
Raghunath....... Hehehehe sala suwar kahika paisa chahiye wo bhi 3 lakh hehehehe
Rambha......... Oji sunte ho ye wohi ladka hai jo aaj Nikhil par kichad uchhala tha.(Shyam ki isara krte huye)
Shyam haath jod kar Raghunath ka pair pakad leta hai........ Maalik mujhse galati ho gayi hai meri saza mere MAA ko mat dijiye.
Raghunath....... Thik hai thik hai chalo mere bete ka gaadi me kuchh gandagi laga hua hai tum dono jao aur gaadi ko saaf kar do fir me paisa dunga.
Dono BAAP Bete turant hi gaadi dhone nikal jaate hai jab wo dono gaadi ko dekhte hai to darr hi jaate hai.
Kyunki gaadi ke samne ke hisse me khoon laga hua tha. Pata nahi gaadi par ye kiska khoon tha.
Raghunath...... Jaldi karo nahi to paisa nahi dunga.
Dono turant hi gaadi dhone lagte hai aur gaadi pe laga khoon ko achhe se saaf karte hai. Saaf hone ke baad dono Raghunath ke pass jaate hai.
Kallu...... Maalik gaadi saaf ho gayi hai ab mere paise.
Raghunath apne jeb se 1 rupaye ka sikka nikal ke dekta hai.
Raghunath....... Leja yehi hai tera paisa.
Fir dono RAMBHA aur Raghunath hasne lagte hai.
Tabhi Nikhil aur Nushrat bahar aate hai.
Nikhil...... Kyu buddhe mil gaya paisa chal bhag yaha se.
Shyam....... Ye julum mat kijiye Maalik aaj paisa de dijiye me puri zindagi aapke kheto me kaam karunga muft me.
Nikhil hasta hua........ Kyube kutte kaha gayi teri hekdi kichad feka tha na mere pe. Ja apni behen ko leke aa tab jaake ek mahina meri rakhel banne ke badle 3 lakh le lena.
Ye baat sunke shyam ko itna gussa aata hai ki wo Nikhil ko pakad ke pitna chalu kr deta hai. Shyam kafi hatta katta tha to wo Nikhil pe lafi bhari pad raha tha shyam ka ek thappad se Nikhil behosh ho jaata hai.
Lekin tabhi Raghunath ke aadmi aake Shyam aur Kallu dono ko pakad ke baandh dete hai.
Nushrat... Teri itni himmat suwar ki tu mere pati par haath uthaya.
Ye bolte huye Nushrat Shyam ke pairo ke bich me ek laat marti hai. Aur Shyam dard ke mare niche gir jaata hai.
Nushrat haste huye....... Teri MAA ko aaj mene hi apne gaadi se udaya tha. Kya kr lega kutte tu??
Tum dono bewakuf apne hi MAA aur biwi ka khoon saaf kr rahe the hamare gaadi se.
Aur ye kehte huye Raghunath aur ushke sare log hasne lagte hai. Aur Nushrat to maza le rahi thi ye sab ka.
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Kallu aur Shyam dono hi wohi par pade ro rahe the.
Kallu...... Maalik paise dene ki jarurat nahi hai hum dono ko ab jaane dijiye me kahi aur se paisa udhar le lunga.
Raghunath....... Kallu baat ye hai ki paisa to me dene wala nahi tha tujhe lekin tere bete ne mere bete par haath uthaya hai wo bhi ishiliye kyunki mere bete ne teri beti ko apna rakhel banake rakhna chahta tha ishiliye.
Ab tum dono ki saza yehi hai ki ab tumhari beti ko me aur mere aadmi sab milke apni ek raat ki rakhel banaenge.
Ye sunte hi Kallu aur Shyam dono ke aankho me aansu aajate hai.
Shyam...... Raghunath sirf ek baar mere haath khol de tera jabaan khinch lunga me.
Raghunath...... Esha hai kya. To thik hai tere samne hi teri behen ka izzat uatarega mera beta aur me aur fir mere ye aadmi bhi.
Ye kehta hua Raghunath apne aadmi logo ko ishara kr deta hai ushke aadmi sab gaadi leke hospital ki wor jaate hai. Aur kuchh aadmi Kallu aur Shyam ko pit rahe the.
To be continued...........
Kallu aur Shyam dono apne ghar ke bahar lage bhid ko dekh ke chaunk jaate hai aur daudte huye ghar ke ander ghuste hai to Padma ki haalat dekh kar pura pariwar darr jaata hai.
Padma ka shir fata hua tha jiske upar kapda bandha hua tha aur pura sarir pe chot laga hua tha.
Shyam gusse se....... Aye laxmi MAA ko dawakhana leke kyu nahi gayi tu.
Laxmi....... Bhai paise nahi hai mere paas ishiliye me aapka intezar kr rahi thi Hariya Chacha ko phone me bola hu wo apna tempo leke aarahe hai.
Kallu...... Tu hariya ko kyu boli bada hi kamina inshaan hai. Gaon me abhi bhi chori krta rehta hai. Ushe logo ke halat par koi taras nahi aata hai.
Shyam...... Koi baat nahi baapu abhi MAA ko bas dawakhana leke jaana hai baaki baat baadme dekhenge.
Thodi der me tempo leke Hariya aajata hai.
Hariya...... Kallu leke aaja teri biwi ko paise nahi lunga tujhse bachpan ke dost jo hai hum dono.
Kallu...... Agar meri biwi ki eshi haalat nahi hoti to kabhi bhi teri madat nahi leta. Thu hai teri dosti par.
Hariya....... Tu abhi bhi mujh par gussa hai kyunki mene tere ghar se chori kiya tha aur wo bhi sirf 1100 rupaye. Chal thik hai tu maafi de ya naa de abhi bhabhi ko leke dawakhana chal. Aye shyam dekh kya raha hai bhabhi ko leke aake tampo me bitha tera baap aur mera jhagda to puri zindagi chalti rahegi.
Fir kuchh gaon walo ki madat se Padma ko gaadi me bitha ke sab log hospital leke aajate hai. Jo ki thodi dur seher me tha.
HOSPITAL ME.......
Doctor....... Bahat blood loss ho gaya hai aur brain me blood clotting kr gaya hai ishiliye immediately operation karna hoga aap paiso ka intezam kijiye jaldi. Nahi to patient ko hum bacha nahi paaenge.
Kallu, Shyam aur laxmi ye baat sunke unka hosh hi Ud jaata hai.
Shyam...... Karib kitna paisa lagega.
Doctor...... Total 3 lakh ke karib kharcha aaega jaldi kijiye.
Shyam aur Kallu, Laxmi ko wohi hospital me chhod ke turant hi Raghunath ke ghar bhagte hai.
Hariya apne tempo me betha ke dono BAAP Bete ke saath aata hai Raghunath ke ghar.
Raste me......
Hariya....... Kallu chinta mat kar bhabhi thik ho jaaegi. Raghunath sahab ko sab chiz bolna wo jarur madat karenge tera.
Shyam...... Baapu aap chinta mat kijiye me hu na MAA ko kuchh hone nahi dunga.
Kallu, Shyam aur Hariya teeno Raghunath ke ghar pahunch jaate hai.
Security...... Arey kaha chale aaye ho dono chalo bhago yaha se.
Kallu..... Bhai hume ander jaane de bahat zaruri kaam hai maalik se.
Wohi dur khada Raghunath ki Biwi Rambha khadi thi.
Rambha...... Kaun ayaa hai.? Ander aane do.
Kallu aur Shyam......... Dhanyawad maalkin thoda maalik se milna tha.
Rambha........ Kutte suna hai aaj tere bete ne mere bete par kichad feka tha.
Ye sunke Kallu ka shir niche jhuk jaata hai.
Rambha...... Bolna suwar tum log bhul gaye ki hum log kaun hai hum log jaha thukte hai waha tum log kaam karte ho aur tumlogo ki itni himmat ki tum logo ne hamare pariwar par kichad uchhala hai.
Kallu ghutne ke bal baith jata hai aur bolta hai........ Maalkin mere bete se galati ho gayi hai hume maaf kar dijiye. Bas maalik se milne dijiye.
Raghunath......... Kya hua hai Rambha kaun aaya hai ?
Rambha........ Kuchh majdoor aaye huye hai aapse milne.
Raghunath......... Kya hua hai aur kyu aaye ho yaha.?
Kallu....... Maalik gajab ho gaya hai meri madat kijiye. Meri Biwi dawakhana me hai kuchh paise chahiye operation karne ke liye.
Raghunath........ To kitna paisa chahiye ?
Kallu....... Maalik 3 lakh.
Raghunath....... Hehehehe sala suwar kahika paisa chahiye wo bhi 3 lakh hehehehe
Rambha......... Oji sunte ho ye wohi ladka hai jo aaj Nikhil par kichad uchhala tha.(Shyam ki isara krte huye)
Shyam haath jod kar Raghunath ka pair pakad leta hai........ Maalik mujhse galati ho gayi hai meri saza mere MAA ko mat dijiye.
Raghunath....... Thik hai thik hai chalo mere bete ka gaadi me kuchh gandagi laga hua hai tum dono jao aur gaadi ko saaf kar do fir me paisa dunga.
Dono BAAP Bete turant hi gaadi dhone nikal jaate hai jab wo dono gaadi ko dekhte hai to darr hi jaate hai.
Kyunki gaadi ke samne ke hisse me khoon laga hua tha. Pata nahi gaadi par ye kiska khoon tha.
Raghunath...... Jaldi karo nahi to paisa nahi dunga.
Dono turant hi gaadi dhone lagte hai aur gaadi pe laga khoon ko achhe se saaf karte hai. Saaf hone ke baad dono Raghunath ke pass jaate hai.
Kallu...... Maalik gaadi saaf ho gayi hai ab mere paise.
Raghunath apne jeb se 1 rupaye ka sikka nikal ke dekta hai.
Raghunath....... Leja yehi hai tera paisa.
Fir dono RAMBHA aur Raghunath hasne lagte hai.
Tabhi Nikhil aur Nushrat bahar aate hai.
Nikhil...... Kyu buddhe mil gaya paisa chal bhag yaha se.
Shyam....... Ye julum mat kijiye Maalik aaj paisa de dijiye me puri zindagi aapke kheto me kaam karunga muft me.
Nikhil hasta hua........ Kyube kutte kaha gayi teri hekdi kichad feka tha na mere pe. Ja apni behen ko leke aa tab jaake ek mahina meri rakhel banne ke badle 3 lakh le lena.
Ye baat sunke shyam ko itna gussa aata hai ki wo Nikhil ko pakad ke pitna chalu kr deta hai. Shyam kafi hatta katta tha to wo Nikhil pe lafi bhari pad raha tha shyam ka ek thappad se Nikhil behosh ho jaata hai.
Lekin tabhi Raghunath ke aadmi aake Shyam aur Kallu dono ko pakad ke baandh dete hai.
Nushrat... Teri itni himmat suwar ki tu mere pati par haath uthaya.
Ye bolte huye Nushrat Shyam ke pairo ke bich me ek laat marti hai. Aur Shyam dard ke mare niche gir jaata hai.
Nushrat haste huye....... Teri MAA ko aaj mene hi apne gaadi se udaya tha. Kya kr lega kutte tu??
Tum dono bewakuf apne hi MAA aur biwi ka khoon saaf kr rahe the hamare gaadi se.
Aur ye kehte huye Raghunath aur ushke sare log hasne lagte hai. Aur Nushrat to maza le rahi thi ye sab ka.
Kallu aur Shyam dono hi wohi par pade ro rahe the.
Kallu...... Maalik paise dene ki jarurat nahi hai hum dono ko ab jaane dijiye me kahi aur se paisa udhar le lunga.
Raghunath....... Kallu baat ye hai ki paisa to me dene wala nahi tha tujhe lekin tere bete ne mere bete par haath uthaya hai wo bhi ishiliye kyunki mere bete ne teri beti ko apna rakhel banake rakhna chahta tha ishiliye.
Ab tum dono ki saza yehi hai ki ab tumhari beti ko me aur mere aadmi sab milke apni ek raat ki rakhel banaenge.
Ye sunte hi Kallu aur Shyam dono ke aankho me aansu aajate hai.
Shyam...... Raghunath sirf ek baar mere haath khol de tera jabaan khinch lunga me.
Raghunath...... Esha hai kya. To thik hai tere samne hi teri behen ka izzat uatarega mera beta aur me aur fir mere ye aadmi bhi.
Ye kehta hua Raghunath apne aadmi logo ko ishara kr deta hai ushke aadmi sab gaadi leke hospital ki wor jaate hai. Aur kuchh aadmi Kallu aur Shyam ko pit rahe the.
To be continued...........
03-05-2021, 02:47 PM
Bhai ya story adultery hai ya thriller......
03-05-2021, 03:26 PM
This prequel is going superb!!
Ab kallu ka character kuch kuch samajh mein aa raha hai..... Ke uske liye jawaan aurat kya hai... Hamesha har khoobsurat aurat ke chere pe sirf ek hi chehra nazaar ataa hai usko. Uska mental situation ab samajh me aa raha hai.
Ab kallu ka character kuch kuch samajh mein aa raha hai..... Ke uske liye jawaan aurat kya hai... Hamesha har khoobsurat aurat ke chere pe sirf ek hi chehra nazaar ataa hai usko. Uska mental situation ab samajh me aa raha hai.
03-05-2021, 03:32 PM
Areeyyy yeh to bahut boora hua Kallu ke saath. Yaar Nusrat itni gandi soch ? Kasam se poora parivaar gandi soch aur dil rakhte hai. Sharam aani chahiye inko.seriously......
03-05-2021, 06:56 PM
(03-05-2021, 02:47 PM)Sumit1234 Wrote: Bhai ya story adultery hai ya thriller......Koi thriller nahi hai bhai sidha sa story hai ishiliye pehle se hi sab clear hai.
(03-05-2021, 03:26 PM)Baban Wrote: This prequel is going superb!!Bilkul baban bhai esha hi hai
Ab kallu ka character kuch kuch samajh mein aa raha hai..... Ke uske liye jawaan aurat kya hai... Hamesha har khoobsurat aurat ke chere pe sirf ek hi chehra nazaar ataa hai usko. Uska mental situation ab samajh me aa raha hai.
(03-05-2021, 03:32 PM)Basic Wrote: Areeyyy yeh to bahut boora hua Kallu ke saath. Yaar Nusrat itni gandi soch ? Kasam se poora parivaar gandi soch aur dil rakhte hai. Sharam aani chahiye inko.seriously......
Badla mazedar hogA Kallu ka
03-05-2021, 08:58 PM
Superb story...this story have potential to surpass your last story too...make it as kinky as possible for revenge... include Raghunath's daughter...Nasrath's sister...also awaiting the part where kallu learned hypnosis
03-05-2021, 09:19 PM
(03-05-2021, 08:24 PM)Sam840 Wrote: Nice plot waiting awesome picture selectionThank you
(03-05-2021, 08:58 PM)Mgaya Wrote: Superb story...this story have potential to surpass your last story too...make it as kinky as possible for revenge... include Raghunath's daughter...Nasrath's sister...also awaiting the part where kallu learned hypnosis
I will try my best.
04-05-2021, 12:50 PM
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