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Misc. Erotica VANDANA..( a hottest tale of conservative beautiful housewife turning to whore)
Aur real nangi pics ke liye pm me but update daal do yaar
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Very very hot story waiting for next update
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Short Bt nice update bro
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hi bro..

aag laga kar us par pani dalna to koi apse seekhe...

very hot update bro...

next update with pics....

kinky update bro..
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Hot excellent update bhai
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Waiting waiting and waiting...........
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Khade lund pe dhoka mat karo bhai
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hi bro...

kyon apne readers ko tadfa rahe ho..

waise bhi corona se lockdown ho raha hai..

time hi time hai 

ek long full sex chat sex abuse and sex seduce ke sath update de do bro.. with pics.
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(14-04-2021, 12:44 AM)mihikagupta1991 Wrote: Woowww.........sabar nhi hota.....ab to aur bhi aag laga di is update ne.....next wala update jaldi dena

Very true
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Lajawab aur bahut bahut mast update
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Wonderful update! Very very hot and erotic writings
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Amazing update! Just mind blowing and super excellent writings
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(14-04-2021, 12:21 AM)Udaybhanu Wrote: Badhiya update hai bhai......
Ek dum aag hai

Thankyou uday bhai....koshis kar raha hu aap jaisi likhne ka....
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(23-06-2020, 09:18 AM)Ajanmol Wrote: CHAPTER 1
wo bhi jawab mai muskura deti hai or phir aage dekh kar chalne lagti hai magar is baar wo or bhi jyada apni football samaan gaand ko matka rahi thi jaise wo jaanbujhkar us drivver ko dikhaana chhaa rahi ho or use tease kar rahi ho.[/b]

To be continue....

Good start.Just a suggestion if you don't mind.Do not give away her intentions.Just describe her actions and let the readers decide about the intention behind her actions.This will give the readers more pleasure,atleast that's what I think.
If you think that giving away her intentions will be better for the progress of the story,then go ahead.You are writing,you have full liberty to write the way you want.
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(14-04-2021, 12:44 AM)mihikagupta1991 Wrote: Woowww.........sabar nhi hota.....ab to aur bhi aag laga di is update ne.....next wala update jaldi dena

Thankyou mihika....update par kaam chal raha hai jaldi aayega.....
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(16-04-2021, 11:04 PM)seansean007 Wrote: Good start.Just a suggestion if you don't mind.Do not give away her intentions.Just describe her actions and let the readers decide about the intention behind her actions.This will give the readers more pleasure,atleast that's what I think.
If you think that giving away her intentions will be better for the progress of the story,then go ahead.You are writing,you have full liberty to write the way you want.

First of all thankyou sean bro fir coming my thread nd gave me valid point out.....i m veryhuge fan of u and mai chha kar ke bhi aap jaisa likh nahi paaunga ...fir bhi koshis karunga ki aap jaisa 10% bhi likh sakku.....thankyou so much bro.....
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(14-04-2021, 12:48 AM)BHOG LO Wrote: Brijmohan ka carecter bhi achcha lag raha hai ab

I hope brij ko log bhi utna hi pyyar de.....
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(14-04-2021, 07:00 AM)exbiixossip2 Wrote: hi bro..

very nice and hot update ...

next update fast ....
i hope you only long update with sex chat and seduce.... with pics

(15-04-2021, 06:40 AM)exbiixossip2 Wrote: hi bro..

aag laga kar us par pani dalna to koi apse seekhe...

very hot update bro...

next update with pics....

kinky update bro..

Thankyou so much bro....or ab update late hone ki wajah yeh hai ki mai nahi chahta hu bhai jaldbaji mai ki koi galti ho mere se isliye time lekar update de raha hu....update jaldi aayega....
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