[Udaybhanu]

Moral of the story...ek aur fantastic story incomplete...yehi riwaj hai is xossipy ka...

Incomplete to rahega sanaji yaha kisi ko interest nahi hai ek comment krne ke liye. Kisine sahi kaha hai free ka maal ka koi kadar nahi hota hai chahe wo kitna bhi achha ho.

Aur mujhe ye incomplete riwaj todna tha lekin mujhe ab pata chala ki akhir writer kyu chhod dete hai story bich me.

You have been a fantastic supporter of this story that is the only thing I am sorry for you and to my other supporters too.

But story incomplete to rahega hi agar readers hi saath na de writer ka. Sayad me hi tha xossip me jo itna zaldi zaldi update deta tha kyunki mujhe mera agla story nushrat ke upar bhi banani thi. Lekin sab waste hai yaha

[Baban]

UDAY AND BABAN YOU DID A SPLENDID JOB... YES I CAN UNDERSTAND YOUR FEELINGS... WE ARE WITH YOU... THANKS FOR THE SUPER STORY... FEELING BAD THAT IT ENDED WITHOUT LOLO AND SARA... BUT ITS OK...

Thanks bro for understanding us. Main bhi is story ke sath jura hua tha, 2 updates bhi maine likha.  par kya kehena? Sab hum (main aur uday bhai) kal bol hi diye hai..  Kisi kisi sacchey rwader ko kharap lag raha hai.. Par woh shayad nahi samjhengey ek writer ka dard.

Hum free story aap logon tak pahuchaate hai... Aur usi free ka kadaar zyadatar log nahi karta...... Puraa maza leke par liya fir without any comment, reply dusri story pe shift ho jaate hai.

Kahaan gaya woh xossipy? Kya tha woh puranaa xossipy uffff.. Mazaa ataa tha tab likhke aur logon ka comments parkey. Tab lagbhag har ek reader support karte thei writer ko.. Isiliye toh maine itney story likhi jo aap sabko pasand aya tha. ❤

Main isiliye uday bhai ko garma garam comment karta tha taake woh aur mazey se likhey..... Par hum kuch readers se kitna faraak parega bhai? Jab baaki log writer ka respect hi nahi karte?

Aab to story likhne ka iccha bhi nahi hota.... Kyu likhu bhai? Jab pathak comments hi nahi karte.... Humko Bataao ke kitna mazedar lag raha hai, erotic inspiring comments karo... But no..... Free mein aye aur gayaab. 

[Udaybhanu]

Thanks bro for understanding us. Main bhi is story ke sath jura hua tha, 2 updates bhi maine likha.  par kya kehena? Sab hum (main aur uday bhai) kal bol hi diye hai..  Kisi kisi sacchey rwader ko kharap lag raha hai.. Par woh shayad nahi samjhengey ek writer ka dard.

Hum free story aap logon tak pahuchaate hai... Aur usi free ka kadaar zyadatar log nahi karta...... Puraa maza leke par liya fir without any comment, reply dusri story pe shift ho jaate hai.

Kahaan gaya woh xossipy? Kya tha woh puranaa xossipy uffff.. Mazaa ataa tha tab likhke aur logon ka comments parkey. Tab lagbhag har ek reader support karte thei writer ko.. Isiliye toh maine itney story likhi jo aap sabko pasand aya tha. ❤

Main isiliye uday bhai ko garma garam comment karta tha taake woh aur mazey se likhey..... Par hum kuch readers se kitna faraak parega bhai? Jab baaki log writer ka respect hi nahi karte?

Aab to story likhne ka iccha bhi nahi hota.... Kyu likhu bhai? Jab pathak comments hi nahi karte.... Humko Bataao ke kitna mazedar lag raha hai, erotic inspiring comments karo... But no..... Free mein aye aur gayaab. 

Baban bhai humne apna point prove kr diya hai aur hamare sachhe readers ne hamara decision ka saath bhi diya hai. Aur kuchh kehne ki zarurat nahi hai baban bhai me bahat try kiya tha ki Kareena Kapoor ka story arc complete karu. Lekin yaha ka ek reader jo kabhi yaha mujhe comment karke motivate nahi kiya wohi reader mere story ko chori karke dusra site me dale to kesa lagta hai wo sirf hum jaise writer hi samajh sakte hai.

[ramumargaya]

Bhai aap story puri karo. Mai aap ko sujhaav bhi de sakta hu.

Baban bhai se pucho maine unhe pm kar ke kitna protsahit kiya tha.

You please also write nusrat story.

Aap writer log bekar ke readers pe dhyan dete ho. Par aapke chahne walo pe nahi. Deeply hurt bhai

[Udaybhanu]

Bhai aap story puri karo. Mai aap ko sujhaav bhi de sakta hu.

Baban bhai se pucho maine unhe pm kar ke kitna protsahit kiya tha.

You please also write nusrat story.

Aap writer log bekar ke readers pe dhyan dete ho.  Par aapke chahne walo pe nahi.  Deeply hurt bhai

Nahi bhai yaha aapke hardwork ka koi kadar nahi hai. Ab me bas mere jaise writer logo ka story padhunga aur unko support karunga. Kyunki unko to reader log support karenge nahi kuchh readers ko chhod kar, baaki sab ka haath me dard hota hai ek comment daalne me.

[Baban]

Doston..... Hum writer bhi chahte hai ke readers mazey se enjoy kare aur apna feedback de. Par agar aap log humko feedback nahi dengey toh writer ko bhi maza nahi ayega. Isluye please jo bhi registered member stories partey ho agar unko stories acchi lag rahi hai toh comments karke writer ko aur protsahit kiya karo... Isse woh writer aur mazey se anand se likhega.....

Firse wahi Purana xossipy ko wapas le aate hai... Chaliye doston.......

Kya aap chahte hai yeh story continue ho?

[Ajanmol]

Doston..... Hum writer bhi chahte hai ke readers mazey se enjoy kare aur apna feedback de. Par agar aap log humko feedback nahi dengey toh writer ko bhi maza nahi ayega. Isluye please jo bhi registered member stories partey ho agar unko stories acchi lag rahi hai toh comments karke writer ko aur protsahit kiya karo... Isse woh writer aur mazey se anand se likhega.....

Firse wahi Purana xossipy ko wapas le aate hai... Chaliye doston.......

Kya aap chahte hai yeh story continue ho?

Yup bro ....go ahead...

[Ajanmol]

And meri guest user se request hai pls story padhne ke liye registerd hoiye or feedback dijiye...nahi to ye maza bas kuch din hi milega....koi bhi writer nahi chahega ki uska story koi aise padh kar nikal jaaye....or waise bhi kon sa registered hone mai paisa lag raha hai......story ki ahmiyat sirf writer se nahi hoti balki reader se bhi hoti hai...so guys support erotica writers....

[KING of Devils]

Bhai aap ki bate Shai hai ki ham mahanet se readers ke liye story type kar ke post karte hai but un stories me kuch yashe log hote hai jo hamare story ko copy past kar dete h aur original writer ko credit tak nahi dete hai me bhi ek writer hu other site par ishle samja sakta hu apke duk ko yashe muje bhi story complete karne ka man nahi tha but mene apni story ko complete kara apne readers ke liye

Meri apse yahi gujarish h ki aap apni story ko continue kar de because sabhi ek jase nahi hote hai bro

Sorry ager meri koi baat buri lagi ho to

[Baban]

Bhai aap ki bate Shai hai ki ham mahanet se readers ke liye story type kar ke post karte hai but un stories me kuch yashe log hote hai jo hamare story ko copy past kar dete h aur original writer ko credit tak nahi dete hai me bhi ek writer hu other site par ishle samja sakta hu apke duk ko yashe muje bhi story complete karne ka man nahi tha but mene apni story ko complete kara apne readers ke liye

Meri apse yahi gujarish h ki aap apni story ko continue kar de because sabhi ek jase nahi hote hai bro

Sorry ager meri koi baat buri lagi ho to

Thanks reply dene ke liye...nahi bhai.. Bilkul Bura nahi manaa..... Thanks ❤

Maine Ek chis notice kiya.... Abhitak jinhone bhi reply diya sab writers hi hai..

[Udaybhanu]

Doston..... Hum writer bhi chahte hai ke readers mazey se enjoy kare aur apna feedback de. Par agar aap log humko feedback nahi dengey toh writer ko bhi maza nahi ayega. Isluye please jo bhi registered member stories partey ho agar unko stories acchi lag rahi hai toh comments karke writer ko aur protsahit kiya karo... Isse woh writer aur mazey se anand se likhega.....

Firse wahi Purana xossipy ko wapas le aate hai... Chaliye doston.......

Kya aap chahte hai yeh story continue ho?

And meri guest user se request hai pls story padhne ke liye registerd hoiye or feedback dijiye...nahi to ye maza bas kuch din hi milega....koi bhi writer nahi chahega ki uska story koi aise padh kar nikal jaaye....or waise bhi kon sa registered hone mai paisa lag raha hai......story ki ahmiyat sirf writer se nahi hoti balki reader se bhi hoti hai...so guys support erotica writers....

Bhai aap ki bate Shai hai ki ham mahanet se readers ke liye story type kar ke post karte hai but un stories me kuch yashe log hote hai jo hamare story ko copy past kar dete h aur original writer ko credit tak nahi dete hai me bhi ek writer hu other site par ishle samja sakta hu apke duk ko yashe muje bhi story complete karne ka man nahi tha but mene apni story ko complete kara apne readers ke liye

Meri apse yahi gujarish h ki aap apni story ko continue kar de because sabhi ek jase nahi hote hai bro

Sorry ager meri koi baat buri lagi ho to

Thanks reply dene ke liye...nahi bhai.. Bilkul Bura nahi manaa..... Thanks ❤

Maine Ek chis notice kiya.... Abhitak jinhone bhi reply diya sab writers hi hai..

Yehi to baat hai bhaiyo ek writer hi dusre writer ka problem samajh raha hai aur reply kr raha hai.

Me bhi apne achhe readers ko wada kiya tha ki Kareena ki story arc complete hogi ish baar. Lekin jo chori huyi usse mera dil tut gaya aur bahat gussa bhi aaya ki hamare kaam ko log mazak me le rahe hai.

[dgssfvgssry]

Continue this story bro!we all loved it.

[KING of Devils]

Update 74

Kallu ab sare Randiyo ko paisa de deta hai aur nakli mela ko band kr deta hai. Aur Birju aur Hariya ko kehta hai. 

Kallu....... Tum dono bhi tayaar ho jaao Kareena ke ghar me naukar logo ki fauj hai waha tum dono bhi koi kaam krne baith jana ek baar ushke ghar par kabu kr lu phir Kareena ka ghar nahi wo randi khana banaunga jaha badi badi ghar ki aurat log randi banke chudegi.

Hariya..... Thik hai Kallu tere har plan me mai tere saath hu.

Birju...... Mai bhi bade bhai ush raandi ki badi behen me ushe bhi jyada ghamand hai. Kutiya pati ko bhi pairo ki dhul samjhti hai.

Kallu..... (Mushkurata hua) ek baar mere se chud jaaye phir randi banne me der nahi hoga. Dono behno ko ek saath ek hi bistar pe leta ke eshe chodunga ki paani chhod chhod ke mere lund ki seva karengi randiya.



Kallu..... Dono ko randi banake nachaunga ek saath aur dono beheno ko apar me ladaunga mere lund ke liye. Ek to mere lund le le kr pagal ho hi gayi hai dusre ki baari hai.

Hariya...... Chhoti behen agar itni badi chhinaal hai to badi to akhir badi hai.

Birju....... Bade bhai bas ush raand ki dimag par kabja kr do kareena ki jaisi wo bhi apki kutiya ban jaaegi.

Kallu...... Sirf ushki behen ko hi nahi ushki sauteli beti ko jo abhi abhi heroine bani hai ushe bhi, Kareena Randi ke madat se chodunga. Kareena hi meri machhli hai jisse jariye me ush khandan ke har aurat me apna bij daalunga aur meri rakhel banaunga.



Kallu...... Lekin sabse pehle Kareena ki madat se ushki behen ka number hai. Tum dono tayyar ho jaao mera hukum Kareena kaat nahi sakti.

Wohi dursi taraf..

Kareena itni thak gayi thi ki wo bina nahaye hi so gayi thi jab subah hoti hai. Kareena ke sarir me pisab, virya aur pasina sukh ke pura chipak chuki thi. Kareena ke gaand aur chut me bahat dard ho raha tha, wo ek heroine thi koi randi thodi jo roz roz itne sare lund lene ki aadat ho.

Wo Subah suabh uth ke turant hi nahane baathroom me ghush jaati hai.

Tabhi saif ka bhi nind tut jaata hai ushe kal raat ki baat ek darawna Sapna jaisa lag Raha tha. Lekin ushe kya pata tha ki wo ab mind control hone wala hai Kallu se aur jisse wo sapna samajh raha hai wo asli me kal raat ko Kareena ke saath hua hai.

Saif...... Bebo ...... Bebo kaha ho tum.

Kareena...... Me bathroom me hu.

Saif romantic hone lagta hai aur Kareena ke saath bathroom me ghush jaata hai. Samne Kareena nangi khadi naha rahi thi ushke badan par Paani gir ke uske badan ko aur bhi kaamuk bana raha tha. Saif turant hi Kareena ko pakad leta hai aur ushke chumne lagta hai.



Saif ko pata hi nahi tha gaon walo ka virya aur Randiyo ka pisab ko Kareena ke badan se chum aur chat raha hai. Saif Kareena ke saath nahane lagta hai ushke badan per sabun aur lotion lagata hai.

Kareena (man me)....... Kitna pyar karta hai saif mujhe, mere badan ko kitne pyaar se saaf kr raha hai. Aaj tak haath to kya gaali tak nahi diya hai mujhe lekin ab mujhe ye sab kyu achha nahi lag raha hai. Kyu mujhe maalik ki gaaliya aur maar achhi lag rahi hai.

Yehi sochte huye Kareena saif ko kiss karne lagti hai aur saif ka pant khol deti hai jisse ushka sara bhram tut jaata hai ushe pata lag jaata hai ki Kallu ke pass esha kya hai jo ushke pati ke pass nahi hai.

Saif ki chhoti se lulli ushke pairo ke bich me jhul rahi thi. Kareena Kallu ke bare me sochte hi chut gila kr chuki thi aur ushka haath apne aap hi apne chut ko ragad rahi thi.



Kareena ka esha kaamuk roop dekh ke kisi ke bhi ander ka hawas bahar aajega lekin saif ko to Kallu napunsak bana chuka tha jisse ushka lulli khada hi nahi hua tha aur bejan jhul rha tha. Saif bhi apna lund nikal ke hilane lagta hai lekin Kallu ke diye dawai achhe se asar kar rahi thi. Saif chah kr bhi apna lulli khada nahi kr paa raha tha.

Kareena abhi bhi apne chut me ungli kr rahi wo raat bhar chudi thi lekin ushpar bhi Kallu ke diye dawai ka asar ho raha tha.

Dono pati-patni ek kale bhadde badsurat gaon ke majdur ke haathon mazboor ho chuke the, ek randi ban gayi aur dusra namard ban gaya hai.

Kareena Saif ki lulli ko apne muh me leke chushne lagti hai. Saif Ahhhhhhh Ahhhhhhh krke maze le raha tha lekin ab bhi ushka lulli khada nahi hua tha. Tavi Kareena saif ka lund apne bade bade stano ke bich me rakh deti hai aur ragadne lagti hai, jisse saif kisi ladki ki tarah dard me chillane lagta hai.

Saif(dard me)...... Bebo ahhhhh please chhod do pata nahi aaj ye khada hi nahi ho raha hai.

Kareena........ Kya saif sara maza kharab kar diya tumne. Please mujhe shaant kr do. Mere chut ko shaant kr do....

Kareena ke muh se chut sabd sunke saif chaunk jaata hai lekin wo kuchh bol paaye ushse pehle hi Kareena apna chut leke saif ke muh ke upar rakh deti hai.

Saif apne jeebh se Kareena ki chut chat raha tha, aur ungli se Kareena ki chut ko chodne lagta hai , ushki lulli to khadi ho nahi rahi thi ishiliye wo socha kyuna ungli se hi Kareena ko charamsukh dede.

Lekin Kareena ko ab ungli thodi na shaant kr sakti thi ushe to Kallu ka mota lund chahiye tha.

Kareena....... Ahhhhhhh Maaallliiiii......

Kareena ko turant hosh aata hai aur wo apne muh pe haath rakh ke apna muh kr deti hai jisse ushke muh se Kallu ka naam nahi nikla. Wo pure time Kallu ki chudayi ke bare me soch rahi thi, ushka mota lund ushka taqatwar dakke jo sidha Kareena ki bachhedaani ko chhuti thi, aur Kallu ka gadha virya, ek baar me Kareena ki gaand aur chut bhar deti thi Kallu ka virya.

Kareena yehi sochte huye hi saif muh ke upar apna kaamrash chod deti hai aur phir ungli krte huye mut deti hai saif ke muh par hi.

Kareena..... Ahhhhhhh Saif I ammmmmm sorry.

Kareena ka pisab saif me muh par krte huye saif ko maafi maang rahi thi.


Saif ko bhi hairani thi ki aakhir Kareena ko hua kya hai wo ushke saath aaj se pehle esha kuchh nahi ki thi. Lekin Kareena ish gaon me aake ab puri tarah badal gayi thi.

Kareena saif ke saath naha kar kapde pehen leti hai aur saif saif bhi taiyyar ho jaata hai kyunki aaj unsab ko Mumbai wapas jaana tha tavi Kareena saif se kehti hai...... Saif yaha gaon me mujhe ek Naukar mil gaya hai bechare ke ghar me koi nahi hai budhha ho gaya hai. Isiliye me chahti hu ki hum ushe hamare ghar me ek Naukri de de.

Saif...... Itne Naukar to hai ghar me abhi ek aur kyu.

Kareena...... Please saif please wo aadmi ko hamari jarurat hai please .

Kareena Kallu ko apne saath lene ke liye Saif se minnat Krna chalu kr deti hai jiski wajah se akhri kaar saif maan jaata hai.

Saif...... Thik hai Bebo le lenge ushe bhi saath me. Bese naam kya bataya ush aadmi ka.

Kareena......(khusi ke maare).... KALLU hai ushka naam.

Kareena Kallu ka naam lete huye bhi apna chut gila kr deti hai bechari itni jyada Kallu se jud chuki thi ki ab Kallu ka naam hi kaafi tha Kareena ko uttejit krne ke liye. Kya kismat hai Kallu ki bollywood ki itni badi heroine ko apna rakhel bana ke rakha hai jo sirf ushka naam se hi garam ho jaati hai.




To be continued.....

Mast update hai bhai maja aa gaya hai

[randibhabhi]

same happened to me as an hobby i post art work somewhere and somebody posted my work on thier page without giving me the credit ..yes i was angry at first nut then i thought atleast my artwork was worth stealing. but still as a hobby i still post ...well if you like something you cant stop doing it just becuz some idiot posted it somewhere else. and your readers knows it to and supports you . otherwise its all your choice whether you want to write or not . just wanted to tell my pov . thanks ! clp);

[KING of Devils]

Waiting for next update

[Baban]

Chalo.......... Hum humarey asli readers ko is sukh se banchit nahi kartey. Insab ke beech jitne bhi sacchey reader hamesha humari matlab hum writers ko support karte rahe, hamesha comments karke motivate kiya unke liye abhi hum likhengey. Ek ashaa thi ke aur readers jurey but chalo... Jo sachme jurey hai unko dukh nahi dena chahiye. Ab unke liye hi likhengey.

Aur haa koi isko koi attention gain karne ka chalaaki mat samajhna..... Ke aisa karke writer alag se reader ko apne taraf kheech rahe hai.. Yeh hum writer ka problem hai jo aapke samney layaa gaya.

Uday bhai se baat karta hoon. Unko bhi abhi kahaani bahut agey le janaa hai. Lekin jo bhi hua usmein...... Apko toh pata hi hai......
  
Lekin pls.....aur zyada readers hum sab writers ke sath juriye. Hum aapke liye hi likhte hai.
Zyada se zyada feedback diya kijiye... ❤❤ 

[Udaybhanu]

Update 75

Kareena, Saif aur Taimur tino ready ho jaate hai Mumbai jaane ke liye lekin taimur abhi bhi dara hua tha pochhle raat ka scene dekh kar. Tabhi Kareena chupke se jaake Kallu ko msg kr deti hai....... Maalik hum log taiyaar ho chuke hai aap kaha hai jaldi aaiye jald hi hum log airport ke liye niklenge.

Kallu msg padhne ke baad apna plan hariya aur Birju ko samjhata hai aur dono ko train se aane ke liye kehta hai.

Kallu apna lungi pehen ke aur ek maili se shirt daal ke kareena ke hotel pahunch jaata hai hariya tempo me baith ke.

Tabhi hotel security guard Kallu ko dekh kr apna nazar jhuka leta hai bechara ab Kallu ko izzat de raha tha.

Kallu bhi khushi khushi hotel ke ander ghush jaata hai jaha par lobby me hi Kareena aur saif aur taimur tino ushe mil jaate hai.

Kallu (haath jod ke)...... Namaste maalik apne mujhe Naukri di hai ishiliye me aapka puri zindagi abhari rahunga.

Saif Kallu ke dekh ke ghin aane lagta hai.

Saif (man me)..... Ye kesa jaahil aadmi hai itne bade hotel me bhi lungi aur shirt pehen ke aaya hai. Ye kya badbu hai ye aadmi kisi sade huye ande ki tarah baash maar raha hai ishe apne ghar me kese kaam du. (Kallu ka kala pila daant dekhte huye) ye aadmi to lagta hai kabhi daant bhi nahi ghista hai. Kitna kala daant hai aur kala to aisha hai ki koyla bhi ishe dekh ke sarma jaaye. Ye mere ghar me kaam karega, kese pura din jhelunga ishe.

Saif kareena ko side me lete huye.



Saif...... Bebo kya sach me ye aadmi hamare ghar me kaam karega.

Kareena..... Kyu kya hua.

Saif....... Ishe dekho zara kesa maila badsurat kala aadmi hai. Ishke paas kya hai esha jise dekh ke tum ishe hamare ghar me ishe kaam dene ki zid kar rahi ho.

Kareena (man me)....... Tum kya samjho ge saif ki ishke paas kya hai, ishke paas tumhari begam ko khush karne ke liye ek mota kala lund hai jo hamesha tumhari begam ko chodne ke liye khada rehta hai. Jiske ek dhakke me mere chut ki gehrai ko naap leta hai, mere maalik ka kala lund. Tum kya jaane ek aurat ki dil ki baat. Kitni raat sirf chut me ungli kr ke apne aap ko shaant kiya hai mene. Aur mere maalik sirf 4-5 dhakke se hi mere chut ka paani nikal dete hai. Ohhhhhh kya lund hai. Kitna gadha paani chhodta hai. Ghanto tak khada rehta hai aur mere chut ko baar baar jhadne par majboor krta hai ish kaale aadmi lund.



Kareena Kallu ke lund ke baare me sochte huye hi ushki chut gili ho chuki thi ushka nipple sakt ho gaye the aur ushka chut apne aap hi khulne laga tha. Ki tabhi saif ki awaz se wo wapas hosh me aati hai.


Saif(chutki marte huye)...... Kya hua bebo kaha kho gayi.

Kareena...... Please saif please ish aadmi ka ish duniya me koi nahi hai please ishe hamare ghar me rehne do. Ish aadmi ka stamina bahat hai dekha hai mene bahat sara kaam kr sakta hai ye. 

Saif.... Lekin ishke sarir kya badbu aati rehti hai maano koi sada hua anda ho aur ishke daant kitne kaale hai pura koi janwar jaisa hai maano koi gorilla ho.

Kareena se apne maalik ki aishi baizatti bardasht nahi hoti ushka maan kr raha tha ki saif ko ek jordar thapad maar de. Lekin ushe Kallu ke bade khel me ushka saath jo dena tha.

Kareena....... Bas bahat hua saif mene decide kr liya hai ya to ye aadmi hamare saath jaaega nahi to me yehi ishi gaon me rahungi.

Saif(pyaar se)...... Kya bebo itni si baat se itna gussa chalo thik hai itne naukar hai ghar me ek aur sahi.

Saif...... Aye kaale aadmi kya naam hai tera.

Kallu (man me)...... Sala harami ki aulaad meri beizzati kr raha hai ishka saza eshe dunga tujhe ki puri zindagi yaad rakhega tu. Koi baat nahi tera ghamand bhi todunga jaise teri Biwi ka toda hu.

Kallu..... Ji Maalik mera naam KALLU hai.

Naam sun ke saif hasne lagta hai jiske saath saif ke bodyguard bhi hasne lagte hai.

Saif(haste huye).... Lagta hai tere MAA BAAP ko jyada mehnat nahi krna pada tera naam rakhne me tu hai hi itna kala ki tujhe dekh ke dimaag me Kallu naam hi aata hai.

Kallu ko aur jyada gussa aata hai kyunki Saif ab ushke MAA BAAP tak pahunch gaya tha. Lekin Kallu ab apne gusse par kaabu rakhta hai.

Kallu..... Maalik aap bilkul sahi keh rahe hai mere MAA BAAP to anpadh the meri tarah ishiliye sayad ye naam rakha hai mera.

Ye kehte huye Kallu haath jod ke apna shir jhuka leta hai, ye dekh kr Kareena ko bhi bahat jyada gussa aaraha tha saif par.

Kareena (man me)..... Mann kr raha hai saif ki tere samne nangi hoke mere maalik se chud jaau. Lekin nahi mere maalik ka khel mujhe kharab nahi krna hai. Tujhe teri ish galati ki saza mere maalik denge.



Kareena..... Chalo ab bas bahat hogya hai chalo airport chalte hai.

Kareena ki baat sunke ushke sare naukar bodyguard sab alert ho jaate hai aur sara saaman utha ke gaadi me bharne lagte hai, to Kallu bhi unke saath milke kaam krta hai sara saaman leke gaadi me rakhta hai. Ye sab ke bich me sirf taimur hi esha tha jo Kallu ke dekh ke bura haal ho chuka tha. Jisko Kallu dekh chuka tha wo fauran Kareena ko message krta hai Kareena ko.

Kallu (msg me)..... Chhinaal apne bete ko sambhal le kahi mujhe dekh kr apna muh naa khol de apne baap ke samne phir mera sara bana banaya kaam bigad jaaega.

Kareena Kallu ka msg padhti hai aur taimur ko chupke se akelee leke ek jagah pe bolti hai....... Sun le taimur agar tune apna muh khola ki ye Aadmi kaun hai aur kya kiya hai to tujhe ushi kaale aadmi se pit put ke maar dungi aur tere sarir ke chhote chhote tukde kr ke gatar me baha dungi.

Kareena saif par aaya gussa apne bete par pura utaar deti hai aur taimur apne hi MAA ke muh se eshi baat sunke itna daar jata hai ki dar ke maare pisab ke deta hai apne paant me hi.



Taimur ki bolti baand ho chuki thi, Kareena ab taimur ko leke gaadi me aake baith jaati hai aur airport ko nikal jaati hai saif gaadi me hi taimur ka pant badalwa deta hai.

Kareena (msg me)...... Kutte ka pilla apna muh nahi kholega maalik itna darr gaya hai ki mujhe dekh ke pisab nikal gaya pille ka. Aap chinta mat kijiye aapke apman ka badla me gin gin ke lungi saif se.

Kallu msg padhte huye bahat khush hota hai ushke chehre par ek ghinoni mushkaan aajati hai.

Kallu (mann me)...... Kya baat hai Kallu tera training to ish randi ke shir par chad chuka hai. Ab ishe mere lund ka nasha chad chuka hai isna sara dawai jo dala hu ish randi me. Pura chakad chhinaal ban gayi hai. Ab ish kutiya ke jariye ishke Pati ka ghamand todunga. Hoga ye nawab kahika lekin ishki ghar ki sari aurton ko apna rakhel banadunga.

Kallu reply dete huye....... Sabash kutiya ab tu tayaar reh kyunki bahat jald mujhe teri jarurat padegi. Aur hamesha ush pille pe nazar rakhna aur dara kr rakhna taaki wo sapne me bhi apne baap ko kuchh na bol paaye. Jab tak mera plan kaam na kr jaaye tab tak.

Ab wo log sab airport par pahunch chuke tha Saif, Kareena aur Taimur tino apne private jet se jaate hai aur baaki sab naukar aur crew dusre public transport wale aircraft se jaate hai.

Kallu jet ko dekhte huye....... Koi baat nahi bahat jald ye sab par me raaj karunga. Saif baht jald tu mera kutta banega jaise teri biwi bani hai aur tere aankhon ke samne teri biwi aur beti dono ki gaand marunga aur tere haath me camera deke wo sab shoot karwaunga.



 Flight takeoff kr leta hai aur dekhte dekhte Kallu sapno ka seher mumbai pahunch jaata hai. Apna sapna pura karne, phir waha se wapas gaadiyo ka jhakira aata hai aur sara samaan chada ke sab log Kareena aur saif ke ghar pahunchte hai.

Ghar dekh kr Kallu ki aankhe fati ki fati reh jaati hai wo ghar nahi Mahal tha ek nawab ka Mahal. Itna bada property ki Kallu ke dekhta hi reh gaya.



Kallu.(man me)...... Ish jagah pe to mere gaon jaisa 10 gaon reh sakta hai. Ye Mahal ki raani hai meri rakhel Kareena kya baat hai socha nahi tha itni ameer hai meri randi. Eshe ghar me to mera khandaan bhi kabhi sapne me nahi dekha hoga lekin mere aage ke aane wale khandan jarur dekhega ki unka baap kese ek Mahal ki raani ko apna rakhel bana ke ye sab property par kabza kiya.

Saif...... Aye Kallu dekh kya raha hai chal sara samaan utha ke ghar ke ander aaja baaki naukar logo se bhi milwana hai tujhe. Aur jaldi kr buddhe.

Kallu ko aur gussa aarha tha...... Saale hijde tujhe napunsak to bana hi diya hu ab dekh tujhe kese tere hi biwi aur beti ka dalal banata hu tu khud roz apne biwi aur beti ko bechega bas tu dekhta hai.

Jaise hi Kareena ghar ke amder ghushti hai Karishma Kapoor ushke saamne khadi thi. Ek aur khubsurat bala bala jo apne pati se alag ho chuki thi sirf aur sirf apne ghamand ke wajah se.



Karishma turant hi aake Kareena ke gale lag jaati hai.

Karishma....... Congratulations Bebo for the second child. Me to sunte hi tumse milne bhagi bhagi chali aayi. Lockdown me jiju se bahat mehnat karwayi ho tum.

Ye kehte huye Karishma aur Kareena dono hasne lagte hai.

Kareena Kallu ki wor dekhte huye(man me)....... Lolo mubarak ka ashli haqdar to mere maalik hai. Jinki din raat ki mehnat ke wajah se mere pet me ye bacha aa pata hai nahi to tumhare jija ji me dum hi nahi hai.

Tabhi Kallu saman uthate huye ushka nazar Karishma par padta hai jise dekh ke ushka lund khada hota hai. Wo turant hi apne lund ko lungi ke upar se pakad leta hai.

Kallu (man me)...... Koi baat nahi shaant hoja mere sher ish kutiya ka bhi chut ka rash tujhe chakhaunga bash jaisa socha hu bilkul baisa hi chala to bahat jald hoga ye bhi.


To be continued.......

[Ajanmol]

Accha laga uday bhai...aapne phir se story restart ki....or bhut badhiya update diye ho...ufff ab aage dekhna hai kya hota hai....

[ramumargaya]

Update 75

Kareena, Saif aur Taimur tino ready ho jaate hai Mumbai jaane ke liye lekin taimur abhi bhi dara hua tha pochhle raat ka scene dekh kar. Tabhi Kareena chupke se jaake Kallu ko msg kr deti hai....... Maalik hum log taiyaar ho chuke hai aap kaha hai jaldi aaiye jald hi hum log airport ke liye niklenge.

Kallu msg padhne ke baad apna plan hariya aur Birju ko samjhata hai aur dono ko train se aane ke liye kehta hai.

Kallu apna lungi pehen ke aur ek maili se shirt daal ke kareena ke hotel pahunch jaata hai hariya tempo me baith ke.

Tabhi hotel security guard Kallu ko dekh kr apna nazar jhuka leta hai bechara ab Kallu ko izzat de raha tha.

Kallu bhi khushi khushi hotel ke ander ghush jaata hai jaha par lobby me hi Kareena aur saif aur taimur tino ushe mil jaate hai.

Kallu (haath jod ke)...... Namaste maalik apne mujhe Naukri di hai ishiliye me aapka puri zindagi abhari rahunga.

Saif Kallu ke dekh ke ghin aane lagta hai.

Saif (man me)..... Ye kesa jaahil aadmi hai itne bade hotel me bhi lungi aur shirt pehen ke aaya hai. Ye kya badbu hai ye aadmi kisi sade huye ande ki tarah baash maar raha hai ishe apne ghar me kese kaam du. (Kallu ka kala pila daant dekhte huye) ye aadmi to lagta hai kabhi daant bhi nahi ghista hai. Kitna kala daant hai aur kala to aisha hai ki koyla bhi ishe dekh ke sarma jaaye. Ye mere ghar me kaam karega, kese pura din jhelunga ishe.

Saif kareena ko side me lete huye.



Saif...... Bebo kya sach me ye aadmi hamare ghar me kaam karega.

Kareena..... Kyu kya hua.

Saif....... Ishe dekho zara kesa maila badsurat kala aadmi hai. Ishke paas kya hai esha jise dekh ke tum ishe hamare ghar me ishe kaam dene ki zid kar rahi ho.

Kareena (man me)....... Tum kya samjho ge saif ki ishke paas kya hai, ishke paas tumhari begam ko khush karne ke liye ek mota kala lund hai jo hamesha tumhari begam ko chodne ke liye khada rehta hai. Jiske ek dhakke me mere chut ki gehrai ko naap leta hai, mere maalik ka kala lund. Tum kya jaane ek aurat ki dil ki baat. Kitni raat sirf chut me ungli kr ke apne aap ko shaant kiya hai mene. Aur mere maalik sirf 4-5 dhakke se hi mere chut ka paani nikal dete hai. Ohhhhhh kya lund hai. Kitna gadha paani chhodta hai. Ghanto tak khada rehta hai aur mere chut ko baar baar jhadne par majboor krta hai ish kaale aadmi lund.



Kareena Kallu ke lund ke baare me sochte huye hi ushki chut gili ho chuki thi ushka nipple sakt ho gaye the aur ushka chut apne aap hi khulne laga tha. Ki tabhi saif ki awaz se wo wapas hosh me aati hai.


Saif(chutki marte huye)...... Kya hua bebo kaha kho gayi.

Kareena...... Please saif please ish aadmi ka ish duniya me koi nahi hai please ishe hamare ghar me rehne do. Ish aadmi ka stamina bahat hai dekha hai mene bahat sara kaam kr sakta hai ye. 

Saif.... Lekin ishke sarir kya badbu aati rehti hai maano koi sada hua anda ho aur ishke daant kitne kaale hai pura koi janwar jaisa hai maano koi gorilla ho.

Kareena se apne maalik ki aishi baizatti bardasht nahi hoti ushka maan kr raha tha ki saif ko ek jordar thapad maar de. Lekin ushe Kallu ke bade khel me ushka saath jo dena tha.

Kareena....... Bas bahat hua saif mene decide kr liya hai ya to ye aadmi hamare saath jaaega nahi to me yehi ishi gaon me rahungi.

Saif(pyaar se)...... Kya bebo itni si baat se itna gussa chalo thik hai itne naukar hai ghar me ek aur sahi.

Saif...... Aye kaale aadmi kya naam hai tera.

Kallu (man me)...... Sala harami ki aulaad meri beizzati kr raha hai ishka saza eshe dunga tujhe ki puri zindagi yaad rakhega tu. Koi baat nahi tera ghamand bhi todunga jaise teri Biwi ka toda hu.

Kallu..... Ji Maalik mera naam KALLU hai.

Naam sun ke saif hasne lagta hai jiske saath saif ke bodyguard bhi hasne lagte hai.

Saif(haste huye).... Lagta hai tere MAA BAAP ko jyada mehnat nahi krna pada tera naam rakhne me tu hai hi itna kala ki tujhe dekh ke dimaag me Kallu naam hi aata hai.

Kallu ko aur jyada gussa aata hai kyunki Saif ab ushke MAA BAAP tak pahunch gaya tha. Lekin Kallu ab apne gusse par kaabu rakhta hai.

Kallu..... Maalik aap bilkul sahi keh rahe hai mere MAA BAAP to anpadh the meri tarah ishiliye sayad ye naam rakha hai mera.

Ye kehte huye Kallu haath jod ke apna shir jhuka leta hai, ye dekh kr Kareena ko bhi bahat jyada gussa aaraha tha saif par.

Kareena (man me)..... Mann kr raha hai saif ki tere samne nangi hoke mere maalik se chud jaau. Lekin nahi mere maalik ka khel mujhe kharab nahi krna hai. Tujhe teri ish galati ki saza mere maalik denge.



Kareena..... Chalo ab bas bahat hogya hai chalo airport chalte hai.

Kareena ki baat sunke ushke sare naukar bodyguard sab alert ho jaate hai aur sara saaman utha ke gaadi me bharne lagte hai, to Kallu bhi unke saath milke kaam krta hai sara saaman leke gaadi me rakhta hai. Ye sab ke bich me sirf taimur hi esha tha jo Kallu ke dekh ke bura haal ho chuka tha. Jisko Kallu dekh chuka tha wo fauran Kareena ko message krta hai Kareena ko.

Kallu (msg me)..... Chhinaal apne bete ko sambhal le kahi mujhe dekh kr apna muh naa khol de apne baap ke samne phir mera sara bana banaya kaam bigad jaaega.

Kareena Kallu ka msg padhti hai aur taimur ko chupke se akelee leke ek jagah pe bolti hai....... Sun le taimur agar tune apna muh khola ki ye Aadmi kaun hai aur kya kiya hai to tujhe ushi kaale aadmi se pit put ke maar dungi aur tere sarir ke chhote chhote tukde kr ke gatar me baha dungi.

Kareena saif par aaya gussa apne bete par pura utaar deti hai aur taimur apne hi MAA ke muh se eshi baat sunke itna daar jata hai ki dar ke maare pisab ke deta hai apne paant me hi.



Taimur ki bolti baand ho chuki thi, Kareena ab taimur ko leke gaadi me aake baith jaati hai aur airport ko nikal jaati hai saif gaadi me hi taimur ka pant badalwa deta hai.

Kareena (msg me)...... Kutte ka pilla apna muh nahi kholega maalik itna darr gaya hai ki mujhe dekh ke pisab nikal gaya pille ka. Aap chinta mat kijiye aapke apman ka badla me gin gin ke lungi saif se.

Kallu msg padhte huye bahat khush hota hai ushke chehre par ek ghinoni mushkaan aajati hai.

Kallu (mann me)...... Kya baat hai Kallu tera training to ish randi ke shir par chad chuka hai. Ab ishe mere lund ka nasha chad chuka hai isna sara dawai jo dala hu ish randi me. Pura chakad chhinaal ban gayi hai. Ab ish kutiya ke jariye ishke Pati ka ghamand todunga. Hoga ye nawab kahika lekin ishki ghar ki sari aurton ko apna rakhel banadunga.

Kallu reply dete huye....... Sabash kutiya ab tu tayaar reh kyunki bahat jald mujhe teri jarurat padegi. Aur hamesha ush pille pe nazar rakhna aur dara kr rakhna taaki wo sapne me bhi apne baap ko kuchh na bol paaye. Jab tak mera plan kaam na kr jaaye tab tak.

Ab wo log sab airport par pahunch chuke tha Saif, Kareena aur Taimur tino apne private jet se jaate hai aur baaki sab naukar aur crew dusre public transport wale aircraft se jaate hai.

Kallu jet ko dekhte huye....... Koi baat nahi bahat jald ye sab par me raaj karunga. Saif baht jald tu mera kutta banega jaise teri biwi bani hai aur tere aankhon ke samne teri biwi aur beti dono ki gaand marunga aur tere haath me camera deke wo sab shoot karwaunga.



 Flight takeoff kr leta hai aur dekhte dekhte Kallu sapno ka seher mumbai pahunch jaata hai. Apna sapna pura karne, phir waha se wapas gaadiyo ka jhakira aata hai aur sara samaan chada ke sab log Kareena aur saif ke ghar pahunchte hai.

Ghar dekh kr Kallu ki aankhe fati ki fati reh jaati hai wo ghar nahi Mahal tha ek nawab ka Mahal. Itna bada property ki Kallu ke dekhta hi reh gaya.



Kallu.(man me)...... Ish jagah pe to mere gaon jaisa 10 gaon reh sakta hai. Ye Mahal ki raani hai meri rakhel Kareena kya baat hai socha nahi tha itni ameer hai meri randi. Eshe ghar me to mera khandaan bhi kabhi sapne me nahi dekha hoga lekin mere aage ke aane wale khandan jarur dekhega ki unka baap kese ek Mahal ki raani ko apna rakhel bana ke ye sab property par kabza kiya.

Saif...... Aye Kallu dekh kya raha hai chal sara samaan utha ke ghar ke ander aaja baaki naukar logo se bhi milwana hai tujhe. Aur jaldi kr buddhe.

Kallu ko aur gussa aarha tha...... Saale hijde tujhe napunsak to bana hi diya hu ab dekh tujhe kese tere hi biwi aur beti ka dalal banata hu tu khud roz apne biwi aur beti ko bechega bas tu dekhta hai.

Jaise hi Kareena ghar ke amder ghushti hai Karishma Kapoor ushke saamne khadi thi. Ek aur khubsurat bala bala jo apne pati se alag ho chuki thi sirf aur sirf apne ghamand ke wajah se.



Karishma turant hi aake Kareena ke gale lag jaati hai.

Karishma....... Congratulations Bebo for the second child. Me to sunte hi tumse milne bhagi bhagi chali aayi. Lockdown me jiju se bahat mehnat karwayi ho tum.

Ye kehte huye Karishma aur Kareena dono hasne lagte hai.

Kareena Kallu ki wor dekhte huye(man me)....... Lolo mubarak ka ashli haqdar to mere maalik hai. Jinki din raat ki mehnat ke wajah se mere pet me ye bacha aa pata hai nahi to tumhare jija ji me dum hi nahi hai.

Tabhi Kallu saman uthate huye ushka nazar Karishma par padta hai jise dekh ke ushka lund khada hota hai. Wo turant hi apne lund ko lungi ke upar se pakad leta hai.

Kallu (man me)...... Koi baat nahi shaant hoja mere sher ish kutiya ka bhi chut ka rash tujhe chakhaunga bash jaisa socha hu bilkul baisa hi chala to bahat jald hoga ye bhi.


To be continued.......

Uday bhai, bohot accha update hai. Mai nusrat ki story ki pratiksha kar raha hu

[Baban]

Uday bhai aur maine discuss kiya aur agey barbey ka decision liya.  Unko bhi abhi kahaani bahut agey le janaa hai. Lekin jo bhi hua usmein...... Ap sabko toh pata hi hai......  
  
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