04-04-2021, 01:13 AM
Waiting for next update.
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(04-04-2021, 05:23 PM)Radha sharma Wrote: Kya jabrdast update or suspence.. ye vo lecturer hoga i think.super like always ur skills and everything.
Bs jb kisi ka namarta ko dkh k seduce hona explain krte ho tab almost repeat mode mai hi chlta hai bht lamba. Words aage piche hoke.. jaldi clear krke vha se length kam hogi or story jyada likhi jaiyegi.. i know mai ache se smjha ni skti k kyu kehma chahti hu. Bt jsa aapko shi lge u go.. waiting for next
THANK YOU RADHA FOR COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION
.(04-04-2021, 10:43 PM)Royalkingfire Wrote:Thanks for reply and giving attention on my comment.. mai raga ya kise hore ekdum kuch sex scene krn baare nhi keh rhiTHANK YOU RADHA FOR COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION
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ha i understand apko kya kehna hain and i am agree with you ki sometimes kuch things repeat hote hain but character development bhi jaroori hain . Agar main raga aur NAMRATA ke bich first meet main he kuch dikhaya hota toh voh illogical aur connect nahi hota apko . And NAMRATA ka bhi abhi developing phase chalu hain so i accept ki kahani ki phasing and movement slow hogi .
But good things takes time :)
Thank you for suggestions aise he COMMENTS kijiye ...aapke comments se mujhe kuch sikhne ko aur bat deliver karne ko asani hoti hain so thank you once AGAIN
(05-04-2021, 12:26 AM)Anvesharonny Wrote: What A Fabulous Update.Aapke writing ki jitani tariff karu utani Kam Hain.
Firstly brilliant build up scene between Namrata and Raga,the way you describes the situation with pics is inch perfect.The conversation between Raga and namrata was good,and Raga somewhat reminds about the character of Birju.You didn't wrote sex scene between Namrata and raga in 1st meeting woh bahot acha laga bilkul reality jaisa laga.
Then Comes the best part of the story Stranger Buddha calling Namrata and inviting her to his room.
Woh Buddha toh Harami Das hoga.
Interesting call conversation between namrata and das on phone.Ab ye janana bahot interesting hoga
Ke Uss buddhe ne Namrata ko asali namrata kaise dikhayi??Isape toh lamba episode banata Hain boss kyunki pehali meeting main to Buddhe ne namrata ko usaki sundarata Nahi dikhati hogi?Aur namrata pehele usase jab mili hogi toh wo Shy rahi hogi Aur kaise buddhe ne use dance performance Ke Liye manaya hoga janana interesting hoga.
Aur iss sab main ye secret abhi Tak Nahi open hua Hain Ke namrata ko chudai ka pehela lesson sikhaya kisane hoga??
Ab aage Kya hota Hain dekhana interesting hoga.Story past Aur present main bahot achi jaa rahi Hain.Sabhi log namrata ko pane Ke Liye bekarar Hain ab wo kon safal hota Hain dekhana interesting hoga.
Eagerly waiting for next update.
Keep it up.Kudos To your writing. yr):
(06-04-2021, 07:05 AM)rehanboy16 Wrote: Can’t stop myself from reading and thinking about the next possible scenarios. This scene in the dark basement i think will be the soul of this story. This just sounds so erotic.
A beautiful shy and horny female student is being manipulated by an old pervert teacher who always fantasised about taking his sexily shy student Namrita to the basement and fulfill his deep dark desires and lust using her young curvy body. She is hesitant to go but cannot refuse as her nature is very submissive. Plus she thinks she cannot say no to a teacher. The teacher always knew of Namrata’s submissive nature always fantasised about how he can manipulate her.
As we can see in the scene that it’s not her first time going in the basement with that pervert, therefore she now has a little sense as to why she was being called in the basement alone. This shows that she now can be easily convinced to do whatever he desires. It would be awesome to read how it all started at the beginning and how she was able to reach where she is now with that pervert.
Just another thing that i want to add is that involving Namrata with Karan is not a good idea, especially when all his friends are also involved in this. She has a reputation plus she’s a daughter of an ACP. Guys this age are very naive who won’t keep any secrets and tarnish her reputation. Girls in colleges are also aware of this and would rather be involved with guys such as teachers and unknown guys from outside colleges who she believes will not expose theirs illicit acts. Just my observation. She is in the developing phase of her youth and sexuality and Karan is way too young, naive and hyper that he wont do any good to Namrata’s character.
Just my small input. Please don’t take it the wrong way. And disregard if you don’t agree with it.
The scene with the shoe repairer is also beyond eroticism. She is disgusted by his gaze but also not sure how to react to it and to tell him not to stare. This will make her more submissive in front of him eventually will fall to his advances. He can take advantage of her anyway he want in his small dirty bunker and she being submissive and curious about all these new sexual things happening to her will make him more dominant to use her full.
Can’t wait for the next update.