[Anvesharonny]

Very interesting update.Jis tarah namrata behave Kar rahi Hain abhi Ke sath Aisa lagata Hain Namrata Ke andar aag bhadaki Hui Hain Aur Upar se Das Sir ka teaser ,Jaroor das Sir aur namrata Ke beech Kuch toh khichdi pak gayi thi,unke request pe namrata ne dance karana Jaroor das sir ne dance pe chance maara Hain.
Upar se abhi de kahana Ke usake classmates keh reh Hain ye Ladaki toh 1st year ki lagati hain.iska Matlab I guess namrata college main aane de pehele hi chud gayi Hain.
Hoping for more recap events of Namrata's life before college life.

[Hellopublic]

Wow update was awesome I think ab namrata ka actual. Roop samne dhire dhire aaraha hein abhi ke bhi aur hamare bhi Because namarat ne abhi joh bday gift diya woh unexpected tha aise hi itne jaldi ek ladki kiss vala gift toh nhi desakti..... Toh ismein ek pehli bhi aati hein ki namarat ki yeh first kiss nhi thi... Fir ata hein sir ka scene joh retire hue unhone namrata ko woh dress pehne ke liye force kiya and abhi ke bolne se lagta tha woh bade hi harami type ke the soo namarat ka uske saath bhi koi na koi connection hoga.. Fir ab ata hein last mein toh yeh Karan ne toh ab photos le li kahi yeh blackmail krega shayad usko...  And fir yeh raga vala scene toh kadak.... Uske images bahut related the.... Ekdum mast tha update and maja aaraha hein namarat ke alag alag roop dekhne mein clp); waiting for next update bro

[KASHIKA]

Once again another great structure of writing jitni tarif karu utni kam hain aisa laga first episode slow build-up tha . But iss episode ne alag he raftar pakad liyi. clp);

I mean kitna unpredictable present kiya hae namrta ka character vo bhi first update se

And ab to mano namrta ko pane valo ki race he lag gai

Karan
Professor dube
Raga

And Das vale mention ne surprise kar diya . Aese aur back details aage pdhne me mja ayega 


And one more thing joh pdhke kuch laga 

Namrta ne dono bhi bar Abhi ko answer nhi kia ki voh us jagh ko kese janti hae jaha vo kiss krne gye the 

Kya namrta vaha pehle bhi ja chuki he agr ha to kiske sath ? 


Maja ayega age  keep writing  clp);

[Royalkingfire]

Very interesting update.Jis tarah namrata behave Kar rahi Hain abhi Ke sath Aisa lagata Hain Namrata Ke andar aag bhadaki Hui Hain Aur Upar se Das Sir ka teaser ,Jaroor das Sir aur namrata Ke beech Kuch toh khichdi pak gayi thi,unke request pe namrata ne dance karana Jaroor das sir ne dance pe chance maara Hain.
Upar se abhi de kahana Ke usake classmates keh reh Hain ye Ladaki toh 1st year ki lagati hain.iska Matlab I guess namrata college main aane de pehele hi chud gayi Hain.
Hoping for more recap events of Namrata's life before college life.

Thank you sooo much brother for comment 

I really like your reading skills. You always note interesting points from update 

Keep supporting

[Royalkingfire]

Wow update was awesome I think ab namrata ka actual. Roop samne dhire dhire aaraha hein abhi ke bhi aur hamare bhi Because namarat ne abhi joh bday gift diya woh unexpected tha aise hi itne jaldi ek ladki kiss vala gift toh nhi desakti..... Toh ismein ek pehli bhi aati hein ki namarat ki yeh first kiss nhi thi... Fir ata hein sir ka scene joh retire hue unhone namrata ko woh dress pehne ke liye force kiya and abhi ke bolne se lagta tha woh bade hi harami type ke the soo namarat ka uske saath bhi koi na koi connection hoga.. Fir ab ata hein last mein toh yeh Karan ne toh ab photos le li kahi yeh blackmail krega shayad usko...  And fir yeh raga vala scene toh kadak.... Uske images bahut related the.... Ekdum mast tha update and maja aaraha hein namarat ke alag alag roop dekhne mein clp); waiting for next update bro

Thank you brother for your honest review 

Keep supporting

[Royalkingfire]

Once again another great structure of writing jitni tarif karu utni kam hain aisa laga first episode slow build-up tha . But iss episode ne alag he raftar pakad liyi. clp);

I mean kitna unpredictable present kiya hae namrta ka character vo bhi first update se

And ab to mano namrta ko pane valo ki race he lag gai

Karan
Professor dube
Raga

And Das vale mention ne surprise kar diya . Aese aur back details aage pdhne me mja ayega 


And one more thing joh pdhke kuch laga 

Namrta ne dono bhi bar Abhi ko answer nhi kia ki voh us jagh ko kese janti hae jaha vo kiss krne gye the 

Kya namrta vaha pehle bhi ja chuki he agr ha to kiske sath ? 


Maja ayega age  keep writing  clp);

THANK YOU SO MUCH KASHIKA 

Your explanation always on point 

Aese comments se motivation milta hain meri baki readers ko bhi request hain ki episode read karne ke bad plz comments kijiye usse pata chalta hain maine jo likha hain voh aap tal deliver huva ya nahi 

Comment choto hoga toh bhi chalega 

Aur apke suggestions ka hamesha swagat hain  

[Royalkingfire]

DEAR READERS 


Lagta hain sabka iss kahani se intrest nikal gaya hain ..gine chune log he update ke bad response karte hainn koi bhi suggestions nahi deta ...and comment nahi karta issliye iss kahani ka safar bas yahi tak tha . Mujhe bhi boht work load hain . Aap bhi sab safe raho and itne dino tak support karne ke liye thanks 

[Curlygirl]

DEAR READERS 


Lagta hain sabka iss kahani se intrest nikal gaya hain ..gine chune log he update ke bad response karte hainn koi bhi suggestions nahi deta ...and comment nahi karta issliye iss kahani ka safar bas yahi tak tha . Mujhe bhi boht work load hain . Aap bhi sab safe raho and itne dino tak support karne ke liye thanks 

Don't stop writing you are a good writer. You have started a new phase in this story. So Comments will come after sometime. Atleast complete this phase. Rest is your wish

[Omprakash meena]

DEAR READERS 


Lagta hain sabka iss kahani se intrest nikal gaya hain ..gine chune log he update ke bad response karte hainn koi bhi suggestions nahi deta ...and comment nahi karta issliye iss kahani ka safar bas yahi tak tha . Mujhe bhi boht work load hain . Aap bhi sab safe raho and itne dino tak support karne ke liye thanks 

Nice update bro

[Omprakash meena]

Aap ye kahani bahut achi likh rahe ho ES forum per bahut se aise writer hai jo update time per nahi de pate hai mai bhi unhi writers me se ek hu per aap sabse ache writer ho aap kahani ko continue rakhe
Aap kisi ke suggestion ka wait na karo aap bahut acha likh rahe ho

[Anvesharonny]

Thank you sooo much brother for comment 

I really like your reading skills. You always note interesting points from update 

Keep supporting

Your story update always have Easter eggs hidden in the story so I always read every update carefully.
Stay Safe and keep entertaining us.

[Anvesharonny]

DEAR READERS 


Lagta hain sabka iss kahani se intrest nikal gaya hain ..gine chune log he update ke bad response karte hainn koi bhi suggestions nahi deta ...and comment nahi karta issliye iss kahani ka safar bas yahi tak tha . Mujhe bhi boht work load hain . Aap bhi sab safe raho and itne dino tak support karne ke liye thanks  

Why you saying this bro??Your loyal story readers will comment here no matter what happens.
Your story have top 3 most views on xossipy forum which tells you how much readers love reading your story.Most people don't comment because of shame,fear etc.
I hope you take back your decision and it's just a April fool joke.And if you stop updating your story then it will be unfair on your loyal story fans.

[Royalkingfire]

Aap ye kahani bahut achi likh rahe ho ES forum per bahut se aise writer hai jo update time per nahi de pate hai mai bhi unhi writers me se ek hu per aap sabse ache writer ho aap kahani ko continue rakhe
Aap kisi ke suggestion ka wait na karo aap bahut acha likh rahe ho

Why you saying this bro??Your loyal story readers will comment here no matter what happens.
Your story have top 3 most views on xossipy forum which tells you how much readers love reading your story.Most people don't comment because of shame,fear etc.
I hope you take back your decision and it's just a April fool joke.And if you stop updating your story then it will be unfair on your loyal story fans.

THANKS BROTHERS FOR YOUR HONEST REPLY ABOUT STORY 



BUT DON'T TAKE IT SERIOUSLY ITS APRIL FOOL MESSAGE :)



Khani tabhi band hogi jab complete hogi 



MUJHE COMMENTS SE FARAK NAHI PADTA YE MAINE PEHLE BHI KAHA HAIN ...BASS STORY KO ENJOY KARO AND JAB DIL SE KUCH KEHNA HO TAB COMMENT KARO YA FEER PERSONALLY APKA FEEDBACK DO YE MERA SAB READER KO KEHNA HAIN 



AND RECENTLY WE CROSSED 7 LAKH VIEWS ON THIS STORY IT'S A GREAT ACHIVEMENT FOR US ....SO THANKS ROYAL FANS ....

[doctor101]

Looking forward blackmail episode of Phiroz Namrata.

[Jaan]

THANKS BROTHERS FOR YOUR HONEST REPLY ABOUT STORY 



BUT DON'T TAKE IT SERIOUSLY ITS APRIL FOOL MESSAGE :)



Khani tabhi band hogi jab complete hogi 



MUJHE COMMENTS SE FARAK NAHI PADTA YE MAINE PEHLE BHI KAHA HAIN ...BASS STORY KO ENJOY KARO AND JAB DIL SE KUCH KEHNA HO TAB COMMENT KARO YA FEER PERSONALLY APKA FEEDBACK DO YE MERA SAB READER KO KEHNA HAIN 



AND RECENTLY WE CROSSED 7 LAKH VIEWS ON THIS STORY IT'S A GREAT ACHIVEMENT FOR US ....SO THANKS ROYAL FANS ....

yr): clp); clp); clp);

[Royalkingfire]

DEAR READERS....







NAMRATA ek PAHELI 

EPISODE :- 03


Coming     soon....


3 APRIL. ( MIDNIGHT) 

[BHOG LO]

Update ke wait me jaan jakar rahegi

Post dekhake lalach aa gaya

[Hellopublic]

Excited bro   

[Anvesharonny]

Eagerly waiting for new update.

[Jaan]

Excited...!