29-03-2021, 09:06 AM
Superb awesome update bro
(29-03-2021, 12:56 PM)oscarpistorious Wrote: Savla budhha uska koi role hoga is stpry me ab dobara??? Sabse pehle namarta ki kamukta ko ussi ne bhadlaya tha lakin usko koi khaas mauka nhi mila namarta ko chodne ka
(29-03-2021, 05:23 PM)Newdevil Wrote: Bro your index links are not working
(29-03-2021, 05:32 PM)Jaan Wrote: Index kaam nai kr raha hae bhai
(29-03-2021, 07:47 PM)oscarpistorious Wrote: Ek or suggestion bhai.... mahino baad ek bada update dene ki bajaye aap chote sahi lakin kuch din baad update diya karo...isse aapko likhne or readers padhne dono me asaani hogi....or readers ko zyada intzaar bhee nhi karna padega
(30-03-2021, 10:44 AM)KASHIKA Wrote: Once again wonderful update nice building for upcoming saga and this is the best example of how to right a erotic story without sex scenes.....mens first update se observe kiya ki ye story main character ke bina sex ke interestingly run ho rahi hain . Nice work
Personally is update main namrta ka character shant laga and clear nahi huva ki uska role kya hain
Karan ka twist kadak hae classroom vala scene real life se kafi had tak connect huva
Ab lagta hain firoj namrta ko pane ke liye koshish karega and profesor bhi namrta ko pane ka mouka dhundega
Par jitna apki writing ko janti hu usse aesa lgta hae nanrta ke maje koi aur he lega clp);
Waiting for next update
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(31-03-2021, 11:20 AM)Hannahji Wrote: Good one feels like story phir s start hogyi h same excitement as earlier Karan nd Dubey are awesome additions abhi is also fine but i personally think adding raga makes it too much male characters for one girl else great start ?