[Silverstone93]

20,000 Views

Wooohooo.... Finally, this thread reached 20,000 views..I am happy to have 15 readers who showed their interest in the thread and want to specially thank to 3 main readers Saravroman, Lorutt and Blackak.aa bhai to keep this thread active with their continuous support and feedbacks. I am also thankful to Bhikhumumbai, KASHIKA, Sam840, DR. DINGDONGDING, vat69addict, Bhavana_sonii, Mgaya, swatantra Goyal, Curiousbull, kochabas, Insiya, maakaloda who commented on this thread and showed their interest in it.

 

[Basic]

Brother can you please make a story on poor old man who cannot afford a single rupees but fall in love a beautiful woman like Tamanna Bhatiya. He meets her and woman felt sympathy and after long meeting they both fall in love and crossed ages boundary.

[Insiya-Muslimah]

20,000 Views

Wooohooo.... Finally, this thread reached 20,000 views..I am happy to have 15 readers who showed their interest in the thread and want to specially thank to 3 main readers Saravroman, Lorutt and Blackak.aa bhai to keep this thread active with their continuous support and feedbacks. I am also thankful to Bhikhumumbai, KASHIKA, Sam840, DR. DINGDONGDING, vat69addict, Bhavana_sonii, Mgaya, swatantra Goyal, Curiousbull, kochabas, Insiya, maakaloda who commented on this thread and showed their interest in it.

 

You deserve this recognition you are best.

I have a suggestion Make a story about hardcore raw sex and a little forced sex

[Blackak.aa]

Bhai why don't you wanna continue ur two amazing stories which have really a big possibility of humiliation and emotional torture for the male characters? The boys eventually came to know wt their beloved used to do under their noses and how they always find excuses to be away from them and even bunk classes with silly and meek excuses and how The male antagonist also absent on those days in KNU campus story or college scandal.
The kutiya was also good!! U can make it more interesting and humilating for the their husband when they gotta know who are actually kutiyas in their society!!
Plz continue both the story bro!! U will bring fire ?? I know it
I m waiting for cllg scandal and kutiya

[Silverstone93]

Brother can you please make a story on poor old man who cannot afford a single rupees but fall in love a beautiful woman like Tamanna Bhatiya. He meets her and woman felt sympathy and after long meeting they both fall in love and crossed ages boundary.

Thank you for the suggestion Basic. I am happy to see new readers like you taking interest in my thread. I'll make note of your suggestion and will let you know. 

Keep supporting.

[Silverstone93]

You deserve this recognition you are best.

I have a suggestion Make a story about hardcore raw sex and a little forced sex

Thank you Insiya. Thank you for supporting and encouraging words..

Regarding the suggestion, I have taken a note and will let you know.

[Silverstone93]

Bhai why don't you wanna continue ur two amazing stories which have really a big possibility of humiliation and emotional torture for the male characters? The boys eventually came to know wt their beloved used to do under their noses and how they always find excuses to be away from them and even bunk classes with silly and meek excuses and how The male antagonist also absent on those days in KNU campus story or college scandal.
The kutiya was also good!!  U can make it more interesting and humilating for the their husband when they gotta know who are actually kutiyas in their society!!
Plz continue both the story bro!! U will bring fire ?? I know it
I m waiting for cllg scandal and kutiya

Thank you so much, Blackak.aa bhai.. But, I am not interested in writing long stories when hardly anyone shows interest in the thread. 

As a writer, I spent a lot of time in writing updates and literally no one comments . I check my threads every hour to see comments and I found that no one is even interested in writing "good update", "bad update", "nice". 

What's more surprising is that hardly anyone comments "waiting".. it shows that readers are not even interested in next updates too. To keep thread active, I, myself comment on the thread and talk something. Yesterday I posted an update and no one commented for more than 10 hours, then I posted "20000 views" comments to thank 15 people who showed interest. 

I am thinking about ending all threads and focus on my real life.  

[Blackak.aa]

Bhai everyone take interest in ur strory that why they check ur story read ur story. U know I never comment to anyone story earlier it doesn't mean that i didn't like their stories

[Blackak.aa]

Yeah u are rt bhai!! U should focus on ur real life also! If u think u should stop writing and focus on ur creer i must say it's the best decision!
But u know everybody loves big updates . If u wnna write pls focus on big updates like KNU Campus

[Silverstone93]

Bhai everyone take interest in ur strory that why they check ur story read ur story. U know I never comment to anyone story earlier it doesn't mean that i didn't like their stories

It's your perspective as a Reader brother. As a writer, you cannot go with this perspective. When you spend your valuable time to write updates and people just read and go and don't even think to give feedbacks, it hurts. At first, you can ignore and go on with new updates, but with time, you cannot ignore this fact. Nowadays, when I write update, I started feeling like "why am I even writing this if no one is interested?". Still, I write and post updates ignoring no response from readers. 
It's easy to say that "carry on, readers will comment", but it's not easy tbh..

[Silverstone93]

I have nearly 40 updates prepared in my drafts. I'll post them as time permits and wil end this short story thread.

Thank you guys who gave suggestions and commented on this thread.

[Blackak.aa]

U are absolutely rt bhai

[Silverstone93]

Gardner Wasim

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Diksha (23) ki shadi hue sirf 3 mahine hue the aur uska pati kisi kaam se 1 mahine ke liye Europe chala gaya.
Lekin asli musibat tab aayi, jab corona ki wajah se wo agle 3 mahine Europe me hi atak gaya..
Diksha ka naseeb achha tha kyunki Gardner Wasim Sayyad (69) uske sath tha. March - June tak ke lambe lockdown me Ahmed ne Diksha ki sab jarurate puri ki.

[Silverstone93]

Trapped

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Bholi Khushi (19) Imran-Shoib ke jaal me acche se fas gayi thi. Ye dono khushi ke ghar pe kaam karte the aur inhone khushi ko ek ladke ke sath kiss karte pakad liya.



Papa ki daant se bachne ke liye usne Imran (55) aur Shoib (65) ke sath ek deal ki jisko wo dono mana nahi kar paaye....

[Blackak.aa]

I m sorry bhai abt wt u feel! But I truly love ur stories! I will now comment everyone's story onwards. I never thought feedback meant a lot. Thank u for ur honest reply bhai

[vat69addict]

Dono short stories mast hain..
kahan se laate h ye sab idea

[Silverstone93]

Cleavage Show

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Amit ke ghar aaj uske 4 dost aaye the khaana khane ke liye.

Ashok Pandey, Abbas Khan , Aamir Hussain aur Johnny Mendoza..

Ye 4 pakke harami hai aur Amit ke ghar sirf ek maksad se aaye hai - Amit ki didi "Sonali" ko niharne..

Sonali ab inn charo ko khana parosane lagti hai. Jab wo jhukti hai tab Aamir ka dhyan ekdum se Sonali ke chucho pe jata hai.



Sonali : Aamir, sharmna mat.. apna ghar samaj ke khana..

Aamir apni najar Sonali ki chhati par hataye bina "Ji didi" bolta hai.. Sonali ab aage badhti hai tabhi Aamir ek baar khasta hai, baki ke teeno uski iss khasi se samaj jate hai ki jarur kuch baat hai. Wo uske taraf dekhte hai aur wo unn teeno ko Sonali ki dress me dekhne ka ishara karta hai.

Ab Sonali Abbas ko khana parosane ke liye jhukti hai. Abbas bhi ab uski dress ke andar se dikh rahe uske chucho ko dekhne lagta hai.



Sonali : Abbas..sharmana nahi..agar kuch chahiye ho to batana..

Abbas : Didi..aap se kaisa sharmana..hehe..jo chahiye wo mai le lunga, bas aap dete rehna..

Sonali : Thik hai.. tum apna ghar samajhna air nina dikkat ke sab le lena..

Abbas : Ji didi..mai to aapki bina sharm ke lunga..



Uski double meaning baat par baki ke 3 hasne lagte hai. Ab Sonali Johnny ko khana parosane jaati hai aur niche jhukne ke baad apne chucho le darshan Johnny ko bhi kara deti hai..

Johnny : Didi..kash aap meri hoti...I mean meri didi hoti..

Sonali : are aisa kyu bol rahe ho, Johnny? Mai tum sabki hu..

Uski baat sunkar sabke hosh udd jate hai ,par Sonali ke kehne ka matlab tha ki wo sabki didi hai..

Johnny : Haha.. aap ham sabko ho didi..waise khana khane ke baad mujhe aapka dudh lina hai.. Matlab khana khane ke baad mujhe dudh pina achha lagta hai..



Sonali : Thik hai..tum khana kha lo for mai dudh lekar aati hu..

Ab wo Ashok ko khana parosane aati hai. Ashok kai baar Amit ke ghar aaya tha isase pehle, to uski aur Sonali ka relation acha tha.

Ashok : Sona di.. aap aaj kuch jyada nahi dikha rahi ho?

Sonali : Kya matlab?

Ashok : yahi ki aap kitni mehnat se hame khana paros rahi ho aaj... Warna jab mai aata tha tab aap sirf TV dekha karti thi..



Sonali halke se Ashok ko marti hai..

Sonali : shh... Apne dosto ke samne meri ijjat mat utaro..

Ashok : achha? Thik hai.. fir baad me akele me aapki ijjat utarta hu..

Sonali sharmate hue khana wahi rakh kar waha se jaati hai. Ashok ab baki ke teeno ki taraf dekh aankh marta hai. Wo sab hasne lagte hai..

[Silverstone93]

Banarasi Babuji

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Sanket : Smita, Pragati kaha par hai? College se aayi hai na wo?

Smita : Ha.. wo upar Babuji ke room me hai..

Sanket : Are waah.. Jab se babuji aaye hai banaras se, hamari bitiya bilkul badal si gayi hai.. hai na?

Smita apni najre jhukate hue hasne lagti hai..

Smita : Waise sirf aapki bitiya ko hi nahi unhone me mujhe bhi badal diya hai bahut..



Sanket : Haha.. babuji hai hi aise.. waise kya kar rahi hai wo babuji ke kamre me..

Smita : Wo babuji ke pairo ke beech me dard ho raha tha, to Pragati unki malish kar rahi hai..



Sanket : Are.. Pragati ko thodi na malulm hai kaise malish karte hai.. Tumhe jaana chahiye tha na..

Smita : Maine puchha Babuji ko, lekin wo bole ki aaj wo pragati se apne khujli.. mera mattlab apna dard mitayenge..

Sanket : Achha.. thik hai..ek baar mai unse puch leta hu..

Smita : Nahi..koi jarurat nahi hai.. Babuji ko maalish ke wakt koi disturb kare to achha nahi lagta..

Sanket : ohh.. wo to babuji ki aadat hai..Thik hai.. mai aaj rat ko nikal raha hu. Meri gair maujudgi me tumko babuji ka khayal rakhna hoga.. Thik hai..

Smita : aap nishchint rahiye.. mai aur Pragati dono milkar babuji ka achhe se khayal rakhenge..

Sanket foreign trip par jaane ke baad :

[Silverstone93]

Sleeping Beauty

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Anushka apne bistar par so rahi thi aur bahar se uska manager usko nihar raha tha. Aaj wo apne aap ko rok nahi paa raha tha. Lund hilate hue wo ab dheere se bedroom me aata hai aur Anushka ke khubsurat chehre ko dekh lund hilane lagta hai..

Manager : urrgh..aahh.. Anu..aahh.

Anushka ke chehre ko dekh ab uska lund apna aapa kho deta hai aur



Manager : uuurrgghh...aahhh...



Badi lambi pichakri aur dher saara veerya ab uske lund se nikalkar Anushka ke hontho pe girne laga..

Manager : aahh..ye lo anu..ummmhh..aahh..



Uske lund se veerya ki pichkariya rukne ka naam nahi le rahi thi. Wo veerya ab Anushkaa ke hontho se hota hua uske gale par se girkar seedha uske blouse ke andar ghus raha tha..

Manager : aahh..hah..hah.. shit..

Uska lund ab apni aakhiri bunde bhi Anushka ke hontho par gira deta hai.

Anushka ka chehra pura veerya se bhig chuka tha. Manager ab apna lund pant me dalkar Anushka ko waise hi chhod kar waha se chala jata hai. Uske jaate hi sone ka natak kar rahi Anushka ke chehre pe muskan chha jaati hai.

[Silverstone93]

Charamsukh - Sasur ka Pyaar

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Sushma Yadav (26)



Jagjivan Yadav (60)

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Bihar ke ek chhote gaav ki kahani hai. Sushma (26) ki shadi Yadav khandan ke eklote chirag Manoj se hui thi. Shadi ko ab 6 saal ho chuke the par abhi tak ghar me koi bachcha nahi aaya tha. Saas ki daat se Sushma kaafi naraaz hoti thi. Baar baar saasu maa usko "baanz"(infertile) kehkar pukarti thi. Sushma ab thak chuki thi iss har roj ki gaali galoch se. Wo chilla chilla kar kehna chahti thi ki wo baanz nahi hai, balki uska pati namard hai. Manoj ki namardangi se Sushma ab aaye din bura bhala sunn rahi thi. Manoj se kuch kaho to wo bhi gaaliya deta tha. Wo nahi chahta tha ki koi uski mardangi pe ungli uthaye, isliye wo bhi apni biwi ko hi dosh deta rehta tha.

Lekin ghar ka ek aadmi sab shant hokar sunn raha tha, Jagjivan Yadav (60), Manoj ka baap aur Sushma ka Sasur.. Wo ghar me bahut kam rehta tha, jyada tar wakt uska kheti me hi jata tha. Wo bhi ab aone khandan ka waaris chahta tha aur usko samajhne me deri nahi lagi ki uske bete me dosh hai.. Lekin isi beech uski aankho me apni bahu ki jawani bharne lagi. Akeli Sushma bhi khet me sasur ji ke paas jakar apni aap biti batane lagi. Jagjivan ne sab baate sunkar ek ilaaj bataya.

Sushma : kya? nahi.. aao kya bol rahe ho?

Jag : Suno Bahurani, ab mera beta namard hai ye baat gaav me fail gayi to mai kahi muh dikhane layak nahi reh paunga.. Maine kai saal se iss gaav me apni ijjat banayi hai aur bas yahi ek rasta hai uss ijjat ko bachane ka..

Sushma : lekin sasurji.. aap aur mai.. ye galat hai.. saasu maa ko oata chal to aur Manoj to mujhe ghar se nikal denge..

Jag : Kisi ko pata nahi chalega, tu bas kal se uss purani kholi me aaya kar, mai dusre darwaje se aaya karunga. Aur waha koi aata nahi hai dekhne ke liye..

Jagjivan uske hatho pe hath rakhta hai. Sushma ki bhi apni "baanz" ko mitane ka koi dusra rasta nahi dikh raha tha. Wo ab apne sasur ko dekh ha me sar hila deti hai.

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Dusre din Sushma jaldi se uthkar uss purani room me chali jati hai aur waha jakar bed pe baith jati hai. Thodi der me hi Jagjivan waha aata hai. Dono ek dusre ko dekhte hai aur Sushma apni najar jhukaye baithi rehti hai. Jagjivan uske paas aata hai aur usko dekhne lagta hai.

Jagjivan : Ab sharma kyu rahi ho, bahu.. Lagta hai aaj tumhari suhag raat hai..hehe..

Sushma muskurtati hai aur aage badhkar apne buddhe sasur chumne lagti hai.



Dono ab rukna nahi chahte the. Jagjivan aaj kai saalo baad apni hawas mitane jaa raha tha wahi dusri aur Sushma bhi kai dino baad apni chut me lund lene ke liye pagal ho rahi thi. Jagjivan ab apni bahu ki paseene se bhige jism ko chatne lagta hai aur dusre hath se uske blouse ke button kholne lagta hai.



Sushma bhi apne sasur ke safed balo me sse hath fer rahi thi aur dusre hath se unke bade lund ko dhoti ke upar se mehsus kar rahi thi. Jagjivan jaise hi uske blouse ko kholta hai, Sushma ke bade bade chuche ekdum se bahar aa jaye hai. Bra me kaid un do bade chucho ko dekh Jagjivan ki aankhe chamakane lagti hai. Shayad jindagi me pehli baar usne itne bade chuche dekhe the. Sushma apne sasur ko dekh muskurati hai..

Sushma : Aise kya dekh rahe ho, sasurji? Ye thodi na aap pehli baar dekh rahe ho? hehe.. saasu maa ke dekhe nahi kabhi?

Jag : Itne bade ubhar to aaj pehli baar hi dekh raha hu mai.. teri saas ke to dekh kar hi mera mood kharab ho jata tha.. bas haddiya thi uss kutiya me.. hehe.. ye hai alsi chuche..

Jagjivan Sushma ke chucho ko bra ke upar se masalne lagta hai. Sushma ko bhi apni saas ki burai sunkar achha mehsus hota hai.



Jagjivan jee bhar ke Sushma ke chuche dabane lagta hai aur ab uska palta kar uski peeth ko chathe lagta hai. Sushma ki gardan paseene se bhig chuki thi aur Jagjivan ko uska paseena kisi amrut se kam nahi lag raha tha, wo paseene ki har bund ko chus raha tha aur sath hi sath Sushma ke chuche dabaye jaa raha tha.



Jagjivan : Bahu.. ab raha nahi jaa raha.. Tere jism ki ye khushbu mujhe pagal kar degi..

Sushma ab apne sasur ko baho me bharte hue chumne lagti hai.

Sushma : mai bhi.. mujhse bhi ab raha nahi ja raha. Sasur ji... Jaldi kariye aur meri chut ki khujli mita dijiye.. mai maa banana chahti hu sasur ji..

Wo Jagjivan ko kas ke pakdate hue chumne lagti hai. Jagjivan bhi ab Sushma ko gand masalte hue ab uski saree upar khichne lagta hai. Ab uske hath apni bahu ki gol matol gand par the. Wo Sushma ki gand dabate hue uspe halke se thappad marne lagta hai..



Sushma : aahh.. sasur ji..aap to bahut gande ho..

Jag : Hehe.. kya karu.. tumhari gaand hi aisi hai ki thappad mare bina raha nahi jaa raha..



Hawas ab dono ke sar pe chadh chuki thi aur dono ab ek dusre ko nochne lagte hai, chumne lagte hai aur chatne lagte hai. Sushma ab apne sasur ki dhoti khol deti hai aur Jagjivan ke bade se lund ko dekhne lagti hai..

Sushma : Are baap re..ye..ye kya hai sasur ji..

Jag : Ye wo musal lund hai jo ab teri chut ka bhosda banayega aur fir baad me teri kokh me beej dalega.. hehe..

Sushma apne honth katati hai aur Jagjivan ko bed pe dhakel deti hai..

Jagjivan : ahh..hahaha.. lagta hai aaj tu pehli baar me hi sasur ke lund ki sawari karne ki firaq me hai..hehe..

Sushma : Ab ye lund aapka nahi, mera hai sasur ji.. ab mai iska wo haal karungi ki aap dekhte reh jaoge...

Wo ab apni saree uthakar uske lund pe baith jati hai. Jagjivan ko apne lund pe Sushma ko geeli chut mehsus hoti hai aur ab dheere se wo geeli chut uske lund ko khane lagti hai. Jagjivan ki mehsus ho raha tha kaise uski bahu ki chut dheere dheere uske lund ko nigal rahi hai. Wo bas aahe bharte hue apne bahu ko chumne lagta hai..



Jagjivan ke liye ye kisi spane se kam nahi tha. Aakhiri baar usne shayad 25 saal pehle chudai ki thi. Aaj wo apni bahu ko chodne laga tha aur ab sushma sab bhulkar apne sasur ke lund pe kudne lagi. Jagjivan bas uski taraf dekh raha tha. Sushma ke chehre se hawas tapak rahi thi, wo ek bhukhi sherni ki tarah apne sasur ke lund ko kha rahi thi. Jagjivan bhi ab apni bahu ke chucho se bra hata deta hai aur uske nipples ko katane lagta hai..

Sushma : ahh.. ha.. aahh.. katiye inhe..aah..maja aa raha hai sasurji.. ahh..

Jagjivan uske nipples pe se juban ferte hue jee bhar kar usko chusne lagta hai..

Sushma : aahh..chusiye..mere chucho ko..aahh..

Jagjivan : umm..sushma, mujhe tere inn chucho ka dudh pina hai..

Sushma : jarur sasur ji.. mere chucho ka dudh aap hi piyenge.. aapka namard bete ko to mai hath bhi...aahh..nahi lagane dungi..aahh..

Sushma uske baalo me se hath ferte hue bolti hai..

Jagjivan : Sushma.. sasur ji nahi.. bas Jagjivan.. aahh.. lagta hai aa...

Itne saalo me pehli baar chudai ke karan jagjivan ka lund ab apna paani nikalne ke kareeb tha..

Sushma ab uske lund pe jor jor se kudne lagti hai..



Sushma : ahh...jag..Jagjivan..aahh..nikal meri chut me apna paani.. bana de mujhe maaa..aahh.. dikhati hu fir teri kutiya biwi ko..aahh..mai kaun hu..aahh..

Jagjivan apne honth katane lagta hai, uski gotiya tight ho jati hai aur ek badi si garam veerya ki dhaar sidhe Sushma ki bachedani me girne lagti hai. Sushma bhi ab jhadne lagti hai. Dono bahu-sasyr ek dusre ko kaske pakad kar apni gand hila rahe the. Lagatar 6-7 pichkariya Sushma ko apne andar mehsus hoti hai. Jagjivan ko bhi ab mehsus hota hai ki uska veerya Sushma ki chut se behta hua uske lund se neeche gir raha hai.
Lagbhag 5 minutes dono aise hi ek dusre ko kas ke pakad kar wahi bed par let jate hai.

Sushma : Jaggu..

Jagjivan jorjor se saanse lete hue apni bahu ko dekhta hai. Uske chehre pe ek sukun ki hasi thi..

Jagjivan : Sushma..

Dono bas ek dusre ko dekh muskurate hai aur ek dusre ko chumne lagte hai.