25-03-2021, 04:20 AM
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Adultery வனிதா
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25-03-2021, 04:20 AM
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25-03-2021, 04:21 AM
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25-03-2021, 06:59 AM
great going
25-03-2021, 11:04 AM
nice continue
25-03-2021, 11:36 AM
Super story. Really enjoyed every episode. Naan oru manaiviyaga irunthal, eppadi ellam irukka aasai paduveno, athe pol Vanitha irukiral. Continue panna valthukkal.
Suggestion: Please take long time to explain the situation. Keep Vanitha only as an exhibitionist for as long as possible. This is what makes this story an interesting read. Dont make her a slut so soon. Also, i wish there were more encounters with the milk man and chandraseker before Vanitha starts to imagine them in bed. It felt bit rushed up and unrealistic to imaging them in bed just after 2 encounters.
25-03-2021, 11:40 AM
(25-03-2021, 11:36 AM)bang333 Wrote: Super story. Really enjoyed every episode. Naan oru manaiviyaga irunthal, eppadi ellam irukka aasai paduveno, athe pol Vanitha irukiral. Continue panna valthukkal. Sure!thank you for suggestion bro
25-03-2021, 11:42 AM
Thank you all the friends who read and gave comments ,please include related pics if you like.
25-03-2021, 12:20 PM
அருமை
25-03-2021, 01:04 PM
Super..
25-03-2021, 11:52 PM
Very good writing for a first timer! All the very best bro. Write the story on your own terms and do not budge to reader's opinion or pulse. A story is as good as its creator's imagination and infiltration of others' fantasies into your story will spoil the essence.
Once again all the best
26-03-2021, 12:05 AM
Thank you bro for all your suggestions
26-03-2021, 07:09 AM
Nice one ... Just letting the slut inside vanitha out ..
27-03-2021, 07:45 AM
Super bro continue
30-03-2021, 07:32 AM
When is the next update coming? Eagerly awaiting!
30-03-2021, 12:14 PM
(26-03-2021, 12:05 AM)Priyaram Wrote: Thank you bro for all your suggestions actually this is a thread no need of pages count here you just post your content as reply at post subject (when you reply / edit them you can see it) in that you can add part -01, 02 like that. Convert from Tanglish to Tamil @ shorturl.at/ahsW1/
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02-04-2021, 10:33 PM
Bro waiting for the update
02-04-2021, 11:58 PM
Hi, episode 2 is missing please repost thanks
06-04-2021, 08:50 PM
Why are posts removed and no updates for a long time. Is this story not going to be continued Priyaram ? Would be great if you can keep us informed as we eagerly await updates
07-04-2021, 02:55 AM
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