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19-03-2021, 07:17 PM
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Who was She?
Saurabh : No chacha..I don't want to see. It's so disgusting.
Watchman : Are beta.. dekh le.. Ab to tu bhi 18 saal ka ho gaya hai. Ab tujhe bhi yahi karna hai.. isme sharma kyu raha hai..
Watchman chacha apna mobile nikalta hai aur wo video shuru karke Saurabh ko dikhata hai. Lekin Saurabh apni aankhe band kar deta hai..
"aahh..gangu...aahh..aise hi.."
Wo aawaj sunkar Saurabh apni aankhe kholta hai. Wo aawaj kuch jani pehchani si thi. Wo uss video ko dekhne lagta hai.
"Ohh..shit...gangu...meri jaan...aahh..aahh"
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Wo saree...Wo ghar...Wo aawaj..Wo sofa...Wo aurat..
Wo sab usko jani pehchane se lag rahe the.
Tabhi usko uski Maa Lakshmi balcony se bulati hai aur darr kar Saurabh waha se chala jata hai.
Watchman Saurabh ko dekh hasne lagta hai. Jaise hi uski najar balcony ki taraf jaati hai, Lakshmi uske taraf dekh muskura deti hai.
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(19-03-2021, 07:01 PM)Lorutt Wrote: Erotic short story
Thank you brother.. 
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(19-03-2021, 07:17 PM)Silverstone93 Wrote: Saurabh : No chacha..I don't want to see. It's so disgusting.
Watchman : Are beta.. dekh le.. Ab to tu bhi 18 saal ka ho gaya hai. Ab tujhe bhi yahi karna hai.. isme sharma kyu raha hai..
Watchman chacha apna mobile nikalta hai aur wo video shuru karke Saurabh ko dikhata hai. Lekin Saurabh apni aankhe band kar deta hai..
"aahh..gangu...aahh..aise hi.."
Wo aawaj sunkar Saurabh apni aankhe kholta hai. Wo aawaj kuch jani pehchani si thi. Wo uss video ko dekhne lagta hai.
"Ohh..shit...gangu...meri jaan...aahh..aahh"
Wo saree...Wo ghar...Wo aawaj..Wo sofa...Wo aurat..
Wo sab usko jani pehchane se lag rahe the.
Tabhi usko uski Maa Lakshmi balcony se bulati hai aur darr kar Saurabh waha se chala jata hai.
Watchman Saurabh ko dekh hasne lagta hai. Jaise hi uski najar balcony ki taraf jaati hai, Lakshmi uske taraf dekh muskura deti hai.
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Waiting for update you are Best erotic writer
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Hello, I'll be out of town for a weekend. I'll post new updates on Monday onwards.
If you have suggestions, you can DM me. I'll check them and reply them on Monday.
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(18-03-2021, 07:54 PM)Silverstone93 Wrote: Your mom Anasuya was a beautiful woman and a loyal wife. When you entered college, one day you brought your friends home and intorduced them with your mom.
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They were mesmerized by her beauty and her perfect body. After that day, something changed. Your mom Anasuya started acting strangely. She started wearing seductive sarees and backless blouse. She started going out in that attire.
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On weekends she started coming home late or sometimes she didn't even come home. Whenever you called her, her phone was switched off. When you confronted, she always said that she was at aunts place or grandma's place.
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If that wasn't strange enough, your friends also started coming to your home frequenty and most of the times, they came when you weren't at home. When you reached home, they were already left and your mom had only one answer
"They were passing by and came here to drink some juice."
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This close relationship between your mom and your friends started haunting you. You warned your friends not to come your home in your absence. But, your friends ignored your warning and kept coming to your home in your absence. One day, you came home early to see what exactly your friends and mom do in your absence. When you opened the door, you saw your mom happily chatting with your friends in main hall. Everything was looking normal.
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Your mom looked at you and smiled. Her smile... Her smile was torturing, like it was making fun of you. You looked at your friends and they were also smirking at you. Their glare was making you uncomfortable. But, you started feeling apologetic for spying on your lovely and loyal mom and your best friends. They were having a normal discussion, there was nothing suspicious
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Or were you missing something?????
Bhai iska 2nd part jaldi dalna
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(19-03-2021, 07:17 PM)Silverstone93 Wrote: Saurabh : No chacha..I don't want to see. It's so disgusting.
Watchman : Are beta.. dekh le.. Ab to tu bhi 18 saal ka ho gaya hai. Ab tujhe bhi yahi karna hai.. isme sharma kyu raha hai..
Watchman chacha apna mobile nikalta hai aur wo video shuru karke Saurabh ko dikhata hai. Lekin Saurabh apni aankhe band kar deta hai..
"aahh..gangu...aahh..aise hi.."
Wo aawaj sunkar Saurabh apni aankhe kholta hai. Wo aawaj kuch jani pehchani si thi. Wo uss video ko dekhne lagta hai.
"Ohh..shit...gangu...meri jaan...aahh..aahh"
Wo saree...Wo ghar...Wo aawaj..Wo sofa...Wo aurat..
Wo sab usko jani pehchane se lag rahe the.
Tabhi usko uski Maa Lakshmi balcony se bulati hai aur darr kar Saurabh waha se chala jata hai.
Watchman Saurabh ko dekh hasne lagta hai. Jaise hi uski najar balcony ki taraf jaati hai, Lakshmi uske taraf dekh muskura deti hai.
FanArtic 061: fan appreciation
Super Duper! Not a fan of son-mom scenario, but scene & situation is superb!
Bring more of father-daughter / bro-sis / FIL-DIL scenes like this!
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(20-03-2021, 07:39 PM)Saravroman Wrote: FanArtic 061: fan appreciation
Super Duper! Not a fan of son-mom scenario, but scene & situation is superb!
Bring more of father-daughter / bro-sis / FIL-DIL scenes like this!
Your wish is an order for me, bro. It's duty of a writer to fulfill wish of his BEST reader.
I'll add more FIL-DIL, Father-daughter and bro-Sis scenarios. Share your ideas too.
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(20-03-2021, 12:27 PM)vat69addict Wrote: Bhai iska agla ya pichla bhaag to daalo...suspense mei chor diya
Bhai, iska agla aur pichla sab readers ke dimag me hai. Aap ko soch na hai ki aakhir kya hua Vidya ke sath..
Kya wo sach me Sheikh saab ke dukan par masala taste kar rahi hai ya fir kuch aur?
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(21-03-2021, 08:05 PM)Silverstone93 Wrote: Bhai, iska agla aur pichla sab readers ke dimag me hai. Aap ko soch na hai ki aakhir kya hua Vidya ke sath..
Kya wo sach me Sheikh saab ke dukan par masala taste kar rahi hai ya fir kuch aur?
Bhai, ye to koi bhi samjh jayega ki wo kis liye wahan gayi...lekin agar thodi background detail ho jaati ya flashback hi to kahani ka maza aa jaata...aise to modern art ki tarah khud hi khud se kuch bhi jo soch liya wo hi samjh liya...
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(20-03-2021, 12:05 PM)Sam840 Wrote: Bhai iska 2nd part jaldi dalna
Bhai.. iska koi 2nd update nahi hai.. Ye to aap ki soch par depend karta hai ki Anasuya ke sath aakhir hua kya hai. Meri short update story me readers ka cock-block thus thus kar bhara hai. Aapko imagine karna hai wo parde ke piche kya kya hua..
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(21-03-2021, 08:08 PM)vat69addict Wrote: Bhai, ye to koi bhi samjh jayega ki wo kis liye wahan gayi...lekin agar thodi background detail ho jaati ya flashback hi to kahani ka maza aa jaata...aise to modern art ki tarah khud hi khud se kuch bhi jo soch liya wo hi samjh liya...
Isme hi to asli maja hai bhai.. modern art me sirf artist ko pata hota hai (or maybe not, LOL) ki uski art kya hai, par jab wo fans ke reviews sunta hai, padhta hai tab usko ek different approach dikhta hai jo usko ek alag duniya dikhata hai, ek alag Point of view dikhata hai.
Meri stories ka maksad bhi yahi hai. Agar sab kuch samne rakh do to log padhte hai aur bhul jate hai, lekin jab hum story me suspence rakhte hai to dimag uss suspence ka solution nikalne lagta hai. Suspence ki wajah se readers jab apni raay rakhte hai tab usse bhi ek short story idea mil jata hai.
Different people, Different solutions, Different short stories..
If you have a solution, then share with me. 
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21-03-2021, 09:36 PM
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Naraaz Abbu
Nusrat (19) apne abbu ke khilaf jakar college gayi thi. Abbu iss baat se kaafi naaraz ho gaye the.
Apne pyare abbu ko manane Nusrat jab bhi wapas ghar aati thi, apne abbu ko manane lag jati hai
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आलसी नौकर
हुसैन नौकर है इस घर का, पर एक नंबर का आलसी आदमी है,
अब ये देखो, कैसे सोफे पे बैठे बैठे काम कर रहा है, बिलकुल तमीज नही है इसको..
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प्रोफेसर पांडे
हुमा - मधुरा, मैं सोच रही थी की अपने बाल काट दू..
मधुरा - क्या?? पर क्यू? तुम कितनी खुबसुरत दिखती हो लंबे बालों मे.
हुमा : वो.. वो.. प्रोफेसर पांडे कह रहे थे बाल काटो ऐसा..
मधुरा : क्या? वो क्यू ऐसा कहेंगे. वो कितनी तारीफ करते है लम्बे बालो की.. हि ही..
हुमा मधुरा को देखते हुए कल रात को बात याद करती है
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(शिक्षक निवास)
पांडेजी : आहह... हुमा..ये तेरे बाल..आह.. आशिक हू मैं इनका..
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Did you hear something?
Peter(76) and Sandra (73) sleeping in their bedroom
Peter : Sandya(Sandra), did you heal(hear) something?
Sandra : what?
Peter : I hald(heard) some noises flom(from) the kitchen..
Sandra : Ohh.. fir se tumhare kaan bajane lage hai.. Budha pe pagal ho gaye ho aur mujhe bhi pagal bana doge.. so jaao chup chap..
Peter : Lehman(Rakesh) hai na kitchen me..
Sandra : Ha baba.. Rakesh kitchen me hai aur Sophia (grand-daughter of Peter) room me so rahi hai.. Ab tum so jao aur mujhe bhi chen se sone do..
Peter : But.. I think I hald(heard) something...
Meanwhile in Kitchen
Sophia (21) and Rakesh (31)
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