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Sana ki barbadi (restarted from where writer left).
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Hello Dosto meine ye kahani bahot pahle padhi thi aur mujhe is kahani ka plot bahot acha laga. Mujhe lagta h ki is kahani mein bahot potential h bas is story ko eik ache direction ki jarurat h. 
Halaki main koi professional writer nahi hu par mere dimag mein eik plot h jo is story ko aage aur uchai par leja sakta h.

Umeed hai ap logo ko mere naye twist aur nayi direction pasand aayegi. 
Is story mein apko bdsm, humilation, sadism sab kuch dekhne ko milega aur wada karta hu ki is story ko main pura karke rahunga par agar apko ye plot pasand aaye tabhi main aage badhunga. 

Update likhne laga hu aaj aap log eik mega update ki umeed kar sakte h.
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Ab tak apne padha ki kaise Sana apne ghamand aur aage badhne ki chah mein Javed naam ke ubharte hue businessman ko apne raste se hatane ki sochti h aur achanak Javed ki factory mein aag lagne se aur sab kuch barbad hone se Javed suicide kar leta aur uska chota bhai Rizwan Javed ki maut ka jimmedar Sana ko manta hai, Kya Rizwan ki soch sahi h ? Ya ye eik bhram hai ye to time hi batayega par Rizwan Sana ko barbad karne ki sari planning karke Sana ki company join karta hai aur apne talent aur chikni chupdi baton se office ke sabhi staff aur yaha tak Sana ko impress kar deta hai jisse wo company mein famous ho jata h. Isi talent ki wajah se Sana Rizwan ke kareeb aane lagti h, ye kareebi is had tak badh jati h ki dono eik sath movie dekhne jate h jo Sana ne ajtak kisi ke sath nhi kiya tha, movie mein hot scene ki wajah se Sana aur Rizwan physically close ho jate h aur Alam ye ho jata h ki Sana apni hasiyat aur rutba sab kuch bhul kr Rizwan ke liye bich sadak pr nangi ho jati h aur to aur Sana is qadar deewani ho jati h Rizwan ki, ki wo nange hi ghar tak drive karke jati h.

Ab aage:
Rizwan ko ghar drop karne ke bad Sana ko apni sthiti ka abhas hota h, josh josh mein wo Rizwan se ghar tak nange jane ka wada to kar aayi thi par kisi kaam ke bare mein sochna aur usko Haqeeqat mein karna dono alag alag cheej hai, Sana heat of the moment mein wada to kar aayi thi par ab usko dar lagne laga tha ki agar kisi ne usko is condition mein dekh liya to uski saakh, aur ijjat dono dhool mein mil jayegi, wahi Rizwan ki harkat aur apni aisi halat ke bare mein soch kr wo excited bhi ho rahi thi, kyunki ye sab Sana ke liye naya aur kinky tha, is condition mein Sana is qadar garam ho chuki thi ki wo drive karte hue bhi apni chut ko rub karti ja rahi thi aur uske jehan mein bas eik hi naam tha Rizwan. Idhar Rizwan is waqt aaj ke incident ke bare mein soch kar thoda pareshan tha wo khud se na-khush tha usko itni jaldbazi nhi dikhani thi, asal mein Rizwan Sana ke kareeb jake khud ko rok nhi pa raha tha, jo uske plan ke liye thik nhi tha, Rizwan Sana ko is qadar majboor karna chahta tha ki Sana Rizwan se chudwane ke liye kuch bhi karne ko taiyaar ho jaye pr aj Rizwan khud behakne laga tha. Rizwan bahot der tak aj aur future ke bare mein sochta rahta h.
Idhar Sana ghar to pahoonch gayi thi par gadi se nikal kr apne ghar mein ander jane ki uski himmat nhi ho rahi thi kyunki bunglow mein charo taraf uske guards pehra de rahe the aise mein gadi se bahar nange nikalne se koi bhi usko dekh sakta tha, bahot der sochne ke bad usko eik idea aata h wo gadi ko thoda dur park krti h aur apne security chief ko phone karke kuch samjhati h, ye sab karte hue Sana ko ghabrahat ki wajah se paseena aa raha tha to uski chut excitement mein pani chor rahi thi. Khair kuch hi der mein Sana ke bunglow ke piche kuch halla machta h aur sare guards us taraf bhagte h. Asal mein Sana ne apne security chief ko bola tha ki wo aj apne guards ki kabiliyat ko janchna chahti h isliye usne apne chief of security ko bola ki wo ghar ke piche wali jhadiyo mein aag laga de aur ghar ki main light switch off krde dekhe ki uska staff kitni jaldi react krta h. Jaise hi aag lagi sara staff piche ki taraf bhaga jise dekh kr Sana ko proud bhi hua pr abhi ye sab sochne ka waqt nhi tha andhere ka fayda utha kar Sana jaldi se ghar ke ander ghus kr apne room mein pahonchi aur turant bathroom mein ghus gyi, tabhi ghar ki light dobara on ho gyi aur sabko samjha diya gaya ki ye sab mock drill tha. Sana khush thi ki usne Rizwan ki bat ka maan rakha aur nange hi ghar mein ghusi itna staff hone ke bad bhi par Sana ko nahi pta tha ki Sana ke staff mein eik sniper bhi tha jiske pass advance night enabled binoculars the aur usne sab kuch apni ankho se dekha tha. Us bande ke bare mein bad mein bat karenge.

Sana is waqt khud ko seeshe mein dekh rahi thi, is waqt wo kisi randi se kam nhi lag rahi thi, muh pr Rizwan ke virya ke kuch dag, baal bikhre hue, laal ankhein, chut se rista hua pani jaha Sana ko humilated sa feel kara rahe the wahi usko Rizwan ka deewana bana rahe the, Sana yahi sab sochte hue aur apne aane wale pal ke bare mein sochte hue apni chut ko roughly apni ungli se chodne lagti h. Uski chut fool chuki thi hawas ke karan, Sana ko kuch dikhai nhi de raha tha hawas ki wajah se wo bas chudna chahti thi Rizwan se, Khair Sana garmi ko jyada der bardasht nhi kar pati aur jhad jati h. Is qadar jhadti h ki uski tange jawab de deti h aur uski chut se pani ke sath pishab ki dhara bhi foot padti h. Sana nidhar si hokar farsh pr apne hi pani aur pishab mein let jati h. Thakan uske chehre pr saaf dekhi ja sakti thi, Sana apne pishab ko apne shareer pr mehsus kr sakti thi jo usko ganda mehsus krwa raha tha, pishab ki gandh uski naak sungh sakti thi pr thakawat ki wajah se wo lachar si thi, aj wo is qadar jhadi thi, jis qadar wo kabhi nhi jhadi thi. Itna sab kuch hone ke bad itni gandh hone ke bad bhi uske chehre pr santushti thi aur santushti se jyada pyas thi wo pyas jo aj Rizwan ne bhadka di thi jisko wo aj tak ignore karti aayi thi, ab Rizwan hi uske liye sab kuch tha, wo Rizwan ki bahon mein pisna chahti thi, us pr sab kuch kurban hona chahti thi. Khair thodi der bad Sana shower leti h aur mand mand muskurate hue apne bed pr let jati h aur fir se Rizwan ke bare mein sochne lagti h, uske dil aur dimag mein jung chidi hui thi, eik taraf usko pachtawa aur dar tha jo bhi aj hua wo nhi hona chahiye tha, wo eik powerful lady thi wo kamjor nhi padna chahti thi pr uska shareer uska sath nhi de raha tha, uska shareer Rizwan ko chahne laga tha. Dimag aur dil ki ladai mein jeet dil ki hoti h jisme Rizwan bas chuka tha aur wo Rizwan ko text krti h,
S- Hi reached home safely. So gye kya ?
Sana ne text to bhej diya tha pr abhi tak koi reply nhi aya tha, Sana ko text kiye hue 15 min ho chuke the usse aur intejar nhi hota wo call milati h, phone ring to hota h par koi uthata nhi aisa 3 bar hua. Ajse pahle kisi mei itni himmat nhi thi ki wo Sana ka phone recieve na kare. Abhi wo bebus sa mehsus kr rahi thi wo rizwan se bat karna chah rahi thi pr jawab nhi mil raha tha. Ye majburi usko gussa dila rahi thi aur Sana ke gusse ko to tum jante hi ho aur fir gusse mein Sana text krti h. Fuck off kal se office aane ki jarurat nhi h. Text to kr diya pr Sana ko is tarah ka text bhejne ka pachtawa bhi bhot hone laga ki usne gusse mein aake apne pair par khud kulhari maar li hain. Is wajah se usne 5 text aur kiye sorry ke. Uska manna tha ki so gya hoga Rizwan isliye phone nhi uthaya. Apni aur Rizwan ki harkat ko yaad krke wo eik bar fir khayalo mein kho gyi, kabhi sharmati to kabhi muskura deti. Isi tarah khoye hue wo neend ki giraft mein chali gyi kal ke haseen sapne sajoye.

Ab dekhte h Rizwan kya kr raha h, arey ye kya mobile to uske hath mein hi h. Table pr samne scotch ka glass rakha h, uski halat bhi ajeeb si h, kabhi wo shaitano wali hasi hasta aur kabhi ankhon mein ansoo aa jate. Kuch sochte hue usne apni drinks khatam ki aur sofe pr hi so gya. Yakeenan ye uska pehla peg nhi tha.

Agli subha Sana ki aankh khuli to wo bahot khush thi aur shayad hum sab uski muskurahat ki wajah jante h, ji haan Rizwan. Uthte hi Sana apna mobile check karti h, pr usko nirasha hi hath lagti h kyunki na to rizwan ka koi messsge tha aur na call. Sana ko laga ki shayad Rizwan abhi jaga na ho isliye wo good morning ka text krti h pr bahot der bad bhi message deliver nhi hota to wo Rizwan ko call krti h pr phone switch off tha. Ab Sana bahot jyada pareshan ho gyi thi, usko samjh nhi aa raha tha ki ye sab kya ho raha h, kal tak sab acha tha sukhad tha pr aj sab kuch ulta hi ho raha h. Fir kuch sochte hue wo muskura padti h aur office ke liye ready hone lagti h. Aj wo kuch jyada hi excited thi taiyyar hone mein shayad wo Rizwan ke liye specially taiyyar hona chahti thi.
Kuch der bad wo ready thi office jane ke liye pr shayad uska din hi kharab tha, office jakar pta chala ki aj rizwan office hi nhi aaya, ab uski hawas gusse mein badati ja rahi thi jiska khamiyaza office staff bhugat raha tha, unlogo ko samjh hi nhi aa raha tha ki unki galti kya h jo Sana ka gussa jhelna pad raha h achanak se. Aise hi 3 din gujar gye, in 3 dino mein Sana ki halat bad se badtar thi, usko samjh hi nhi aa raha tha ki wo kya kare, eik taraf usko Rizwan se milne ki tadap khaye ja rahi thi to dusri taraf usko ye fikar thi ki usse aisi kya khata hui ki Rizwan usko is tarah majdhar mein chor gya tha. Abhi to sab shuru hi hua tha fir kyunki achanak se Rizwan gayab ho gya. Gajab ki bat ye thi ki office mein se kisi ko bhi Rizwan ke ghar ka address nhi pta tha, halaki Sana ne Rizwan ko uski society ke gate pr chora tha, pr kahte h na jab tum majhdar mein ho to tumhe kuch nhi sujhta, Sana chahti to wo uski society mein ja kar pta kar sakti thi pr shayad uska ghamand usko aisa krne se rok raha tha.
3 din bad jab Sana se aur intejar na hua, Rizwan ki tadap usd bardasht nhi hui, aur uska ghamand chaknachoor ho gya to wo khud ko Rizwan ke ghar pr jane se nhi rok payi. Rizwan shayad janta tha ki usne aisi Aag lagai thi ki wo aag ab Sana ko rakh karne wali thi.
Akhirkar Sana rizwan ke ghar phonch hi gyi, usne callbell bajayi to gate Rizwan ne khola, Rizwan ki halat thik nhi lag rahi thi, ankhon ke niche kaale dhabbe is bat ke gawah the ki Rizwan kuch pareshan h ya bimar h tabhi wo thik se so nhi paya jiski wajah se uski ankhon ke niche kale dhabbe aa gye the. Rizwan ko dekh kr Sana khud ko rok nhi payi aur Rizwan ki bahon mein jhul gyi. Rizwan ki bahon mei usko sukoon mila to wo khud ko rok nhi payi fut fut kr rone lagi aur Rizwan se sawalo ki jhadi laga di
Kaha the ab tak ? Phone kyu switch off h ? Office kyu nhi aaye? Bimar lag rahe ho, kya hua ? Aur uska matha chu kr dekne lagi. Sana ye nhi janti thi ki ye sab Rizwan ne makeup se kiya tha taki wo Sana ko apne jaal mein puri tarah fasa sake. Jab sana ke question khatam hone ka naam nhi le rahe the to rizwan ne khud ko Sana se alag kiya aur bola
R- Madam aap yaha? Kuch kaam tha kya ? Mujhe btaiye kya kaam h.
S- Rizwan meine mana kiya tha na ki akele mein tum mujhe madam nhi bulaoge. Aur kaam hoga to tabhi tumhare ghar aa sakti hu kya ? Akhir hum dost bhi nhi to hai na. Ye btao tumhe hua kya h, itna sab hone ke bad tum mujhe bta nhi sakte the kya? Chalo abhi doctor ke pass mere sath.
Ye sab bolte hue Sana rizwan ka hath pakad kar usko bahar ki taraf khinchne lagti h pr Rizwan ka plan kuch aur tha. Rizwan Sana se apna hath churwa kar ghar ke ander dakhil hota hua bolta h ki madam ander aaiye na.
Rizwan ki aisi berukhi Sana ko shock deti h usko samjh nhi aata ki aisa kya hua ki Rizwan aisa behave kyu kar raha h, jab Sana ko koi jawab na milta to wo khisia kr jake sofe pr baith jati h. Sana aur Rizwan aamne samne baithe the aur Sana Rizwan ko ghur rahi thi, rizwan Sana se muh chura raha tha.
Jab bahot der tak dono chup rahte h to Sana se bardasht nhi hota aur wo puch hi leti h.
S- kya hua ? Tum mujhe saaf saaf bata sakte ho.
R- Madam ji mere se bahot badi galti ho gyi. Main apni aukat bhul gya tha, kaha ap eik rich and powerful lady aur kaha main 1 mamuli sa employee.
S- ho gya tumhara, ye sab kya h Rizwan please aisa na kro main tumko chahne lagi hu, please mujhe apni bahon mein lelo, ye ameeri- gareebi main kuch nhi janti. Kya meine tumhe ye kabhi ehsaas karaya ki tum gareeb ho. Tum mere pass aaye kyunki meine tumhe aane diya
Tumne jo bhi hua wo meri rajamandi se hua isliye khud ko dosh mat do. Main tumhari hu jaise chahe pyar karo.
Ye sab kahte hue Sana rizwan se chipatne lagi.
Rizwan ne fir se Sana ko apne se dur kiya aur kaha
R- nhi madam main aapke kabil nhi hu, ye sab jo bhi hua wo meri galti se hua, ap to ho hi itni khubsurat ki koi bhi khud ko rok na paaye aur apko meine bahot kareeb se dekha h isliye khud ko rok na paya. Please mujhe maaf karde.
S- nhi Rizwan aisa kuch nhi h, main sach mein tumse pyar krne lagi hu. Please mujhe khud se alag na kro, main ji nhi paungi.
R- ap samjh nhi rahi ho madam, ye pyar nhi lust h, humne jo kuch bhi kiya wo hum dono ko pasand aya isliye hum wo sab dobara karna chahte h. Main dawe ke sath kah sakta hu ki ye pyar nhi lust h. Main sabit kr sakta hu.
S- tum mere pyar pr shaq kr rahe ho Rizwan is sehar mein kisi ki itni aukat nhi jo mere kareeb bhi aa jaye aur tum jisko meine apne pass aane diya, wo sab kiya jo aj tak kisi ke sath nhi kiya aur tum mere pyar pr shaq kr rahe ho, bhulo mat main kon hu.
Akhirkar Sana ka ghamand bahar aa hi gya.
R- mujhe pta h madam, main apni aukat pahle hi samjh chuka hu. Isliye to apse dur hua, halaki dur jana mushkil tha mere liye, Pr karna pada. Main nhi bhula ap kon ho madam ji. Maaf kijiyega mujhse galti ho gyi.
Ab Sana ko ehsas hua ki usne gusse mein kya kya kah diya ab galti to Sana se ho gyi thi to uski bharpai to karni hi thi. Sana ko kuch na sujha to usne Rizwan ke pair pakad liye, aap soch sakte ho eik high class powerful lady jiska sikka pure sehar mein chalta h wo aj eik mamuli se employee ke pairo mein padi thi, kyu aur kisliye ? Reason thi aag hawas ki aag jisko chingari rizwan ne di thi pr santusht na hone ki wajah se wo is kadar tut chuki thi ki aj wo apna ohda, paisa aur ijjat sab kuch bhool chuki thi, wo Sana jo har mard ki ankho mein ankhein dal kr apna hukum chalati thi wo aj eik mard ke pairo mein padi thi, ye sab krke Sana ander hi ander humilated to feel kr rahi thi pr wo anteratma hawas ke bojh ke niche dab chuki thi.
Kya hoga ab ? Kya Sana ki barbadi shuru ho chuki h ya wo sambhal jayegi. Agla update sham ko
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Great update.... waiting next
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HMMMM . . . .  . NICE TO SEE SOMEONE IS CONTINUING A STORY LEFT BY SOMEONE ABRUPTLY !!



KEEP IT UP  thanks
नशीली आँखें
वो प्यार क्या जो लफ्ज़ो में बयाँ हो 
प्यार वो है जो आँखों में नज़र आए!!
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(13-03-2021, 03:38 PM)MasterShadow Wrote: Kya hoga ab ? Kya Sana ki barbadi shuru ho chuki h ya wo sambhal jayegi. Agla update sham ko


barbaadi to sabhi kahaniyon me likhi jaati hai parantu


I think you should give it a good and different end.


As, there is always a good time after a bad time and everyone learns from that only. 


barbadi ke safar ke baad uska apni galati se seekhna aur barbaad karne walon ko sabak sikhana bhi hona chahiye, tabhi kahani mein maza aayega.


baaki dominating sex ki taraf to tum badh hi rahe ho . . . . .  dirty romantic talk ke sath sath seduction ka bhi istemaal kar lena.


bass fir story HITTT.
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वो प्यार क्या जो लफ्ज़ो में बयाँ हो 
प्यार वो है जो आँखों में नज़र आए!!
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Kahan gae bhai... Abhi tak sham nahi hui apki??
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bahot khub!
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