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Sorry dear readers some technical issues ke karan delay ho gaya
Now iam posting the last episode 
Last episode main main 45 ke karib gif / pics hain .
Update ko high internet speed pain load karna
After reading update aapni comment jarur karna...and suggestions ke liye sada he aapka swagat hainn..
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Nice update.... Par me ye chahta hon dono maa beti ek sath chude ab tak saare lundo me sabse bade lund se...... please bro esa update dene ki koshish karna please....
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Superb hot update bhai....aakhir chudai ho hi gai namrata ki....ab aage gaand ka seel watchman se khulwaiye....aur phir gangbang
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DEAR readers.....
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This message made my day .......
Jab koi aapke hidden plot and chijo ko focus se read karta hain and observe karta hain tar ek writer ko aapne writing ka maja aata hain ek time investing ka satisfaction milta hain 
Thank bro jin logo ko bhi iss message main likha hain voh feel aa raha hain then comments here why ?
Bro aapko aisa q laga i mean iss feel ke piche kya reason hain ?
I love quality comments and iss story ke sabhi readers acche hain but catch some hidden plot in episode tab aur maja aayega  apko padhne main aur mujhe likhne main 
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Teen bar read karne ke bad bhi aisa lagta hai kuch miss ho raha hai
Story likhna aur story me apne aapko duba dena alag alag bat hai
Wonderful update bolne me bhi aisa mahsus ho raha ki bahut kam tariff hai
Bas itna kahungi likhte rahiye likhte rahiye
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Was Busy in some work so couldnt read last week's update so decided to read last two update in once to reply you.
The Safar Saga had ups and down.After the blockbuster Diwali episode readers were eagerly waiting to know what going to happen next who will enjoy Sweet sanskari namrata?
Episode started with calm before the storm then encounter of Suchita happened with bhikari which some readers liked it some didn't liked it.i was one of them who didn't like suchita doing sex with stranger.Because it was hard to imagine sex without proper build up and seduction.
Then Comes the best part of the story Namrata and Mishra ji's encounter.The scooty trip was icing on the cake the way you described the condition of namrata and Mishra during the trip was sensational.The way you described the seduction of namu's boobs and her expression with those pics were just outstanding.That was the best part of the Safar saga in my opinion.Then comes the climax which most readers wanted the fuck session between Namrata and Mishra it was excuted beautifully.Then comes the biggest twist weather Namrata is sanskari virgin girl or chalakh lombadi?it was just brilliant.i will talk about that on next post.
Overall Safar saga was beautifully written it had everything seduction,plot twist ,wonderful location.just wanna say keep writing.
Stay Safe,Kudos to your Writing skills.
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And talking about future prospect of the story I will share what I think what's going to happen in the story.
In my opinion Namu is not sweet,sansakri Jo wo dikhati Hain.Wo apani pyas buzane Ke Liye sharfi hone ka Nayak karake logo ko attract karake apani kamvasana buzati Hain.
She all ready lost her virginity but how and to whom she have lost the virginity it's interesting point. Because it was quite evident that Mishra didn't took her virginity.So then question arises who took her virginity??
I hope it happen between Her college-college duration and that person can be college peon,Her tution teacher or someone else that person should be middle aged one like birju,savala.
And I hope you will describe her seduction in details like her first kiss,first touch on her boobs by a men etc etc.
And talking about suchita I have all ready predicted that namrata might not be the daughter of Sanjay that's why he conspired with birju to seduce her.
Pehla prediction to sahi nikala ab dekhate Hain aage Kya hota Hain??
Next part of the story is about secret behind namrata's birth but I hope you also write how namrata lost her virginity?! After all namrata is the heroine of the story so focus should be on namrata.
Eagerly waiting for the next part of the story.
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Intazaar maa beti ek sath hardcore chudai...???
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(01-03-2021, 08:04 PM)Anvesharonny Wrote: And talking about future prospect of the story I will share what I think what's going to happen in the story.
In my opinion Namu is not sweet,sansakri Jo wo dikhati Hain.Wo apani pyas buzane Ke Liye sharfi hone ka Nayak karake logo ko attract karake apani kamvasana buzati Hain.
She all ready lost her virginity but how and to whom she have lost the virginity it's interesting point. Because it was quite evident that Mishra didn't took her virginity.So then question arises who took her virginity??
I hope it happen between Her college-college duration and that person can be college peon,Her tution teacher or someone else that person should be middle aged one like birju,savala.
And I hope you will describe her seduction in details like her first kiss,first touch on her boobs by a men etc etc.
And talking about suchita I have all ready predicted that namrata might not be the daughter of Sanjay that's why he conspired with birju to seduce her.
Pehla prediction to sahi nikala ab dekhate Hain aage Kya hota Hain??
Next part of the story is about secret behind namrata's birth but I hope you also write how namrata lost her virginity?! After all namrata is the heroine of the story so focus should be on namrata.
Eagerly waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank you so much my brother for your honest feedback . Yes i accept your opinion on Suchita some readers really like Suchita-bhikari theme and kuch logo ko nahi connect huva... because of realistic theme
But my writing basically depends on realistic thing and that time main kuch alag karna chahta tha .
I know NAMRATA is heroine of story . But as a writer i like suchita's character . Because SUCHITA ko likhne main ek alag he maja aata hain.
And as a reader i know value and importance , emotions of NAMRATA's character.
Ab jyada kuch na bolte huve aapke iss comment ke liye dil se thank you .
Aur aise he suggestions and feedback dete rahiye . Because aapke comments se samjta hain ki story kaha tar samjhi hain aur main jo likh raha hu uska value ho raha hain ya nahi
Once again thank you so much
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(02-03-2021, 03:01 PM)Royalkingfire Wrote: Thank you so much my brother for your honest feedback . Yes i accept your opinion on Suchita some readers really like Suchita-bhikari theme and kuch logo ko nahi connect huva... because of realistic theme
But my writing basically depends on realistic thing and that time main kuch alag karna chahta tha .
I know NAMRATA is heroine of story . But as a writer i like suchita's character . Because SUCHITA ko likhne main ek alag he maja aata hain.
And as a reader i know value and importance , emotions of NAMRATA's character.
Ab jyada kuch na bolte huve aapke iss comment ke liye dil se thank you .
Aur aise he suggestions and feedback dete rahiye . Because aapke comments se samjta hain ki story kaha tar samjhi hain aur main jo likh raha hu uska value ho raha hain ya nahi
Once again thank you so much
Agree with you completely.Your story is very relastic and relatable.Everthing happening in the story have a reason behind it unlike other stories where stranger or hero comes started seducing female characters and fucks them and female characters becomes slut,that is why we reader love and enjoy this story for realistic situations.
And here I will share what I think about namrata and suchita's character.If you think or describes sex as ocean then Suchita is champion swimmer of this ocean.She knows how to swim in sex ocean and what is going to happen at the end but on the opposite side there is Namrata if you imagine her as young sanskari virgin teen then she will have curiosity about this ocean,she want to enter and swim in to this ocean but at the same time she will have fear about the ocean.Usako samunder main aana to Hain lekin kisake sath aaye ,Kya hoga enter karane Ke baad ye fear bhi hoga.So yeh dekhana bahot interesting hoga Ke kaun namrata ko iss samunder main lata Hain Aur kaise pehela sex ka anubhav deta Hain.
So if possible you can write past life of both namrata and Suchita simultaneously through their memory lens in next chapter so fans of both characters will enjoy this story. 
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(02-03-2021, 01:07 AM)KASHIKA Wrote: Hi kashika here ...me pehle only story padha krti the but aaj comment kr rahi hu joh dil se hae
Royalking iss kahani ko pdhne ke bad me apki fan bn gayi hu and specially last episode of safar saga. Magnificent writing skills and fabulous concept .
Aapne kaha ki kuch things hain catch karo so i observe some things .
1) since first update namrta ka view apne kabhi nahi bataya . Ya kabhi bhi apne namrta ka open nahi kiya but hamesha aisa lagta tha ki namrta ko kuch chahiye
2) savla ko first meet main attract karna , Birju ko apne badan ka darshan dena , mishra ko apni taraf khichna
3) but pata nahi Birju ke sath aisa q usne bartav kiya may be tab voh virgin thi but safar ke saga main i mean train or may be bhikari ? I don't know yaha confused hu.
4) but my opinion is namrta dikhti vesi nhi hae . She is intelligent , she behaves like sanskari but boht raj hoge uske .
5) is episode mae apne likha ki voh last main mishra ko jata dekh kehti hain sala madarchod kahi ka this line discribe namrta's original side
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6) namrta is silent bitch who chose her man . Jise vo attract karti hain sanskari dikhati he . Lund ko anjane me tight krti hae aur Sharif Insan ko uske bare me ganda sochne pe majbur krti he .
7) and last you mentioned ki aisa badan aese he nhi milta itni badi gaand aur boobs god ki nahi insan ke den hae so i think uska past 2-3 yrs ka hoga. And uspe apne intresting plot choda he .
8) at the end i think namrta is queen of this story . Aur uski chut chodne vale uske gulam ya fir side character and i like female lead story.
Is story ki chuddakad suchita pe alag views hae vo me bad me batavungi because bhikari and suchita ki me fan hu and suchita also have intresting plot.
Ye episode padh te vkt literally ek hat leggings ke andar tha . Aur dimag me namrta apne dimg ke sath khela he . Ek time ke liye namrta ki jagh khud ko rakh diya tha .
[b]Thank you [/b]
Hi kashika , thank you for your valuable comment.
I think its one of the best demonstration of story
Your point and point of view is excellent .
Har ek ke andar ek writer chupa hota hain and mujhe aap main ek accha reader aur writer dikh raha hain . Joh hidden readers hain iss story ke aap enjoy karo but kabhi man kar toh aise comment kar dena . Because she said voh story padhti thi but aaj comment kiyi hain .
ONCE again thanks for comment
And keep supporting
Waiting for suchita's explanation
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