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Misc. Erotica VANDANA..( a hottest tale of conservative beautiful housewife turning to whore)
बहुत घटिया लिखते हो !
एक सुंदर आम को अगर 15-20 आदमी से उसे सहला सहला कर किसी को खाने को दोगे तो मजा नही आएगा और आम भी पच - पच हो जाएगा !!
यही हाल तेरी कहानी का हैं !!वंदना जैसे खुबसूरती को हाथ लगवा के नंगे कडवा के चुस चुस कर सब मजा खराब कर दिए !!
एक सफल कहानी का मतलव हैं की मर्द हाथ लगाए और उस यौवन को मसलकर भोग ले !!! लेकिन यहा तो ठेला वाला, गोलगप्पे वाला , भिखारी सब जवानी को छु रहा हैं और बाद मे ना जाने कितने का झुठा कौन खाएगा !!
कहानी की वाट लगा दी !!!
हरिया के साथ अच्छा चल रहा था लेकिन अब बेकार हो गई
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3 nice 3 updet bro. Bt balackmale mat karo. Baki tumari marji
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(22-02-2021, 12:05 AM)Feku Wrote: बहुत घटिया लिखते हो !
एक सुंदर आम को अगर 15-20 आदमी से उसे सहला सहला कर किसी को खाने को दोगे तो मजा नही आएगा और आम भी पच - पच हो जाएगा !!
यही हाल तेरी कहानी का हैं !!वंदना जैसे खुबसूरती को हाथ लगवा के नंगे कडवा के चुस चुस कर सब मजा खराब कर दिए !!
एक सफल कहानी का मतलव हैं की मर्द हाथ लगाए और उस यौवन को मसलकर भोग ले !!! लेकिन यहा तो ठेला वाला, गोलगप्पे वाला , भिखारी सब जवानी को छु रहा हैं और बाद मे ना जाने कितने का झुठा कौन खाएगा !!
कहानी की वाट लगा दी !!!
हरिया के साथ अच्छा चल रहा था लेकिन अब बेकार हो गई

Ek dum bole bro kahani me hariya hi badiya tha....
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(22-02-2021, 12:05 AM)Feku Wrote: बहुत घटिया लिखते हो !
एक सुंदर आम को अगर 15-20 आदमी से उसे सहला सहला कर किसी को खाने को दोगे तो मजा नही आएगा और आम भी पच - पच हो जाएगा !!
यही हाल तेरी कहानी का हैं !!वंदना जैसे खुबसूरती को हाथ लगवा के नंगे कडवा के चुस चुस कर सब मजा खराब कर दिए !!
एक सफल कहानी का मतलव हैं की मर्द हाथ लगाए और उस यौवन को मसलकर भोग ले !!! लेकिन यहा तो ठेला वाला, गोलगप्पे वाला , भिखारी सब जवानी को छु रहा हैं और बाद मे ना जाने कितने का झुठा कौन खाएगा !!
कहानी की वाट लगा दी !!!
हरिया के साथ अच्छा चल रहा था लेकिन अब बेकार हो गई

(22-02-2021, 01:27 PM)Sumit1234 Wrote: Ek dum bole bro kahani me hariya hi badiya tha....

First of all thankyou mujhe meri kami batane ke liye or bhai ye story  mai ek kisi individual person ke liye to nahi likh raha or mere ko pasand aaraha hai mai usi base pe likh raha hu or rahi baat aaplog ki to ek writer or human hone ke naate ye possible nahi ki mai sab ko khush kar paau.....agar ab aaplog ko story nahi jam rahi to aap leave kar sakte ho.....no problem or rahi baat hariya ki to mene pehle hi bola tha hariya lead mai rahega par saath mai ek character or hai .....aage ab hariya ka hi seen hai.......phir se thanks aaplog ko.....
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(22-02-2021, 12:05 AM)Feku Wrote: बहुत घटिया लिखते हो !
एक सुंदर आम को अगर 15-20 आदमी से उसे सहला सहला कर किसी को खाने को दोगे तो मजा नही आएगा और आम भी पच - पच हो जाएगा !!
यही हाल तेरी कहानी का हैं !!वंदना जैसे खुबसूरती को हाथ लगवा के नंगे कडवा के चुस चुस कर सब मजा खराब कर दिए !!
एक सफल कहानी का मतलव हैं की मर्द हाथ लगाए और उस यौवन को मसलकर भोग ले !!! लेकिन यहा तो ठेला वाला, गोलगप्पे वाला , भिखारी सब जवानी को छु रहा हैं और बाद मे ना जाने कितने का झुठा कौन खाएगा !!
कहानी की वाट लगा दी !!!
हरिया के साथ अच्छा चल रहा था लेकिन अब बेकार हो गई

Khud kitne story likhe ho jo keh rhe ho ki "Ghatia story".... 

Criticize karne ka bhi tarika hota hai..aise hi likha nhi jata... Fekuuuuuuuu.......
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Bhai storey to acchi likh rahi ho
Bt birju ke caracter ko or mat lamba
Karo bhai bhot ho gaya birju ka khel.
Biruj ab tak 5bar jhar chuka he o bhe
Insan he or kitne dafa???
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Hriya k sath story too horny
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Nice update plz post quickly
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Vandana ka papa ka moka do
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Bhai aacha hai mast story hai.. But update bahut jyada kate aa raha hai uper jo aa raha hai who bhi chota aa raha hai
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Update 24
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Birju bhut itminan se vandana ke chut ke daane ko apni ungli se ragad raha tha or vandana masti mai apni aankhe band kiye is pal ka maza le rahi thi...tabhi birju ka phone bajne lagta hai jisse wo vandana ke choochi ko choosna chhor ke apne jeb se phone nikaalne lagta hai......phone brijmohan ka tha...birju hadbadakar vandana ki chut ko ragadna chhodta hai or brijmohan ka phone uthate hue bolta hai " haa sahabjee" tabhi brijmohan bolta hai " unlog ko ghar chhod ke jaldi aao mujhe bhut urgent kaam hai ....samjhe...." yeh sunkar birju maayus hote hue bolta hai jee sahab....wahi vandana bas driver ko dekhe jaa rahi thi.....phone kaatne ke baad birju vandana ke jism ko bariki se dekhte hue muskurate hue bolta hai kismat kharab hai madam tumhari ...sahab ka phone tha ...avi or maja nahi kar paunga....par chinta mat karo kal tabadtod chudai karunga tumhari......ye bolte hue birju vandana ki choochi se lekar uski chut tak dekhne lagta hai.....accha ab chalo or kapde thik karlo warna is haalath mai koi dekh lega to teri bur koi or chod lega mere se pehle...hehe....ye kehte hue birju aage badhkar aakhiri baar vandana ke choochi ko chhu or chut ke daane ko ragad deta hai.....jisse vandana na chahte hue bhi sisak padti hai....


Ab kuch samay baad vandana apna huliya sahi kar leti hai or isbaar avi ke saath peeche baith jaati hai or uska sir apna godi mai rakhkar uska maatha sehlaane lagti hai...wahi dusri taraf birju bhi apna pant pehankar gaadi wapas road par lejaane lagta hai.....vandana ko ab yeh sab bhut ajeeb lag raha tha jo bhi aaj uske saath hua...ab uske aankho se aansu ki boonde beh rahi thi...wo ab yeh soch rahi thi ki wo acchi patni nahi hai or aaj usne besharmi ki saari hade paar kar di hai....aaj mene apne pyaare pati ko dhokha diya hai .....wo avi ke maathe ko sehlaate hue bas yhi soch rahi thi....


Kuch der baad wo log apne ghar pahuch jaate hai or fir birju or vandana milkar avi ko ghar ke andar le jaane lagte hai....fir birju use bed par badhiya se leta deta hai or vandana ke taraf dekhne lagta hai....birju ko aise apne taraf dekhte hue vandana ka dil ek baar fir jor se dhadkne lagta hai or wo mushkil se apnaa thook gatakte hue bolti hai " ppllssss bbiirrjjuu ab jjaaoo yyaahhaa seee..." wahi uske baat ko sunkar birju haule se muskura deta hai or haste hue kehta hai " are madam jee tension mat lo mai abhi kuch nahi karunga aapke saath...mai kal aaunga....." or yeh bolkar wo jaane lagta hai par vandana ke ekdam paas pahuchakar wo ruk jaata hai or aakhiri bar jaate hue kas ke uske honth ko apne honth mai lekar choosne lagta hai or saath hi uski choochi or gaand ko apne dono haatho se masalne lagta hai....vandana ke abhi tak na jhadhne se wo ab bhi pyaasi thi or birju ke kiss karne se wo khud ko rok nahi paayi or wo bhi uska choomban mai  saath dene lagti hai.......birju ke uske choochi or gaand kas ke masalne se vandana ki siskari nikal jaati hai or uske honth khul jaate hai jiska faida birju uthate hue apna jibh vandana ke muh mai daal deta hai or uska jibh ko apne honth ke giraft mai lekar kiss karne lagta hai...wahi vandana bhi ab sab kuch bhool kar apni aankhe band kar birju ke kiss mai uska poora saath dene lagti hai....lagbhag 5 min tak dono ek doosre ko kiss karte hai fir birju apna honth uske honth se alag karta hai.....vandana ki aankh ek baar fir hawas se surkh laal ho chuka tha or birju ki aankho mai jhaank rahi thi...wahi birju vandana ki aankho mai dekhta hua kamini muskaan apne hontho mai laate hue besharmi se bolta hai " kamaal ki raand ho yar tum toh saala yaha tera bewra pati soya hai or tum saali ek driver ko kiss kar rahi hai....hehe " " man to kar raha hai ki yhi tere pati ke saamne teri chut maar du par saala maza nahi aayega aise tujhe chodne mai.....hehe.....par jo bhi bol tu hai puri garam maal " lagta hai tera ye nikamma pati tujhe sahi se chodta nahi hai....hehe....par tu fikar mat kar mai hu na...mai saari kasar puri kar dunga......ye bolta hua birju apne dono haath vandana ke choochi par rakh deta hai or kas ke dono choochi ko masal deta hai jisse na chahte hue bhi vandana jor se aahe bharte hue sisak padti hai ......


Birju ke aisa bolne se vandana puri tarah sharma jaati hai or sharam se apni nazar neeche kar leti hai......birju ab usse kehta hai ki chalta hu kal aaunga tujhe chodne .....chal khyal rakhna apna....yeh bolte hue wo baahir nikal jaata hai or vandana apni gardan neeche kiye bas aansu bha rahi thi......kuch der aise hi khade rahne ke baad vandana avi ke taraf dekhti hai or birju ki kahi baat ko sochne lagti hai ...use ab avi par gussa aa raha tha or wo apne man mai sochti hai ki aaj avi tumne accha nahi kiya ...tumne aaj mujhe akela chhod diya ek anjaan jagah mai or khud tum sharab peene lage or ab aisi halath karli apni ki tumhare samne koi anjaan mard tumhari patni ko molest kar raha tha....kese pati ho tum avi ??...tumne saath fere lete hue yeh kasam khaye the ki tum har haalath mai har musibat mai mera saath doge meri raksha karoge par tum wo waada wo kasme nahi nibha paaye.......vandana apni aankho mai aansu or gussa liye avi ko dekhti rahti hai......


Tabhi vandana ke phone par message ka beep bajta hai jisse vandana ka dhyaan tutta hai or wo apne khyaalo se baahir aati hai or apne phone ko dekhti hai....phon check karte hi use whatsapp par message ka notification dikhta hai wo foran whatsapp kholti hai or dekhti hai ki hariya ka 3 new message hai....message dekh kar use yaad aata hai ki usne hariya jee se kaha tha ki wo party se aakar unse baat karegi.....wo apna mobile par time dekhti hai to 1 bj rahe the wo foran hariya ke message ko kholti hai or padhne lagti hai ...
(12:59) hariya : kaaha ho madam jee so gaye qa ?? Accha good night...bye....
(12:15) hariya : party se laute nahi qa vandana jee ??
(11:00) hariya : ghar aagaye qa ?? 
Vandana teeno messages padh leti hai or sochti hai ki oofo maine hariya jee se kha tha ki soyega nahi raat mai baat karenge par maine dhyaan hi nahi diya....hariya jee ne bhi bye bol diya lagta hai gussa ho gaye hai ?? Message karti hu unko....ye soch kar vandana message type karti hai....vandana :" hello hariya jee" ....vandana yeh message likh kar send kar deti hai ....udhar hariya besabri se intezaar kar raha tha ki vandana ab msg karegi or wo usko dono pic mai kami batayega or wo kese tayyar hui party ke liye uska pic mangega par vandana ne use reply hi nahi kiya tha...khair vandana ka message aata dekh hariya ke chehre mai muskaan aajata hai or wo bhi type kar deta hai " hello vandana jee " aakhir kaar aapko hamare liye time mil hi gaya....hum kitna intezar kar rahe the ki ab aap msg karengi par aap to message hi seen nahi kar rahi thi......hariya ka message padhkar vandana ko bura feel hota hai or wo likh ke bhejti hai ki "sorry hariya jee darasal avi just pahuchi hu ghar or waha party mai time lag gaya isliye apna phone check nahi kiya...wese sorry hariya jee mere wajah se aapki neend kharab hui"....ye message padh kar hariya man mai sochta hai ki ( saali madarchod tere intezar mai mene aaj apni patni ko nahi choda saala socha tha teri hot pic dekh ke tere naam ki mooth maarunga par tu behen ki lodi waaha party mai doosre mard ko apni jism se lubha rahi thi...par tujhe chhorunga nahi raand sab hisab barabar karunga....) apni soch se baahir aakar hariya likh ke bhejta hai ki " are vandana jee isme sorry feel karne ki koi baat nahi...ab aap waha enjoy kar rahi thi to mujhse kaaha baat karti ...wese koi baat nai mujhe koi bura nahi laga.....wese kya kar rahe hai ?? Ye msg padhkar vandana likh ke bhejti hai " kuch nahi hariya jee aapse chatting kar rahi hu ....aap kya kar rahe hai ?? " hariya :- mai to bas aapke baare mai soch raha hu avi ....vandana :-matlab ?? Mere bare mai soch rahe hai ..aisa kyo ?? ...hariya : (saali tere choochi or gaand ke baare mai soch raha hu ki kab inhe masalunga behenchod ) hehe...vandana jee mai soch raha tha ki aapne to aaj sabhi mardo ke dil mai chhuriya chala di hongi party mai ...hehe....apni khubsurti ka jaddooo khub bikhera hoga party mai.....ye msg padhkar vandana ke chehre par halki muskaan aajati hai or wo likh ke bhejti hai ki vandana: oofo ..hariya jee aap faltu mai hi meri jhooti tareefe karte hai ...aisa kuch nahi hua ..waha mujhse bhi jyada sunder sunder aurte thi......hariya : mai nahi maan sakta vandana jee ki koi bhi aapko takkar di hogi party mai.....wese ek tarika hai jaanne kaki aap wakai khoobsurat lag rahi thi ya nahi party mai ......vandana : kon sa tarika hariya jee ?? 
Hariya :- aap apni photo bhejiye na vandana jee.....photo to khichi hongi aap ???.....hariya ka yeh msg padhkar vandana ka seena ek baar fir dhak dhak karne lagta hai or wo man mai sochti hai ki uffffff ...hariya jee bhi kitne maahir hai photo maangne ka bhi qa tarika apnaya hai ....wo type karti hai ki haa hariya jee photo to kheechi hu....hariya:-  shabash meri raand yahi umeed thi tujhse ...bas tu photo bhej mujhe pakka yakin hai tu bilkul wesa hi tayyar hui hogi jaisa maine tujhse kaha tha......) pls vandana jee bhejiye na apna photo....aapne apna dilkash husn ka deedar waaha sab ko karwa diya....ab thoda meharbani mujhpar bhi kardo.....photo bhejiye na.....


Hariya ka yeh message padhkar vandana man mai sochti hai ki baap re baap hariya jee to flirt karne mai hoshyaar hai......use bhi hariya jee ka baat karne ka andaz pasand aaraha tha ....wo muskurate hue type karti hai bhej deti hu hariya jee wait....vandana ka msg padhkar hariya man mai sochta hai ki (wait hi nahi hora raha hai raand ....mera lund machal raha hai teri hot photo par apna maal girane ke liye......) accha vandana jee bhejiye jaldi mujhse ab ruka nahi jaa raha ...hariya ka yeh msg padhkar vandana muskurate hue sochti hai ki (hariya jee bhi ekdam paagal hai ...bilkul bacche jaisa karte hai.....sabra hi nahi hota inse.....hehe.....)..vandana phir apna gallery kholti hai usme pic select karne lagti hai.....pic dekhti hai to wo apni bra panty wali pic dekhkar sochti hai ki yeh pic kaisi rahegi ?? Hariya jee ko bhejungi toh ??? Yeh sochkar vandana sharma jaati hai or phir khud se bolti hai nahi nahi mai nahi bhejungi hariya jee ko apni aisi pic ...phir vandana ko khyal aata hai ki isme harj hi kya hai waise bhi hariya jee acche aadmi hai or security officer officer bhi hai....unke paas meri pic safe rahegi....or jab wo kamina driver mere ko nude dekh sakta hai to hariya jee ko half nude bhejne mai qa problem hai?? Par khud se bhejungi to hariya jee sochnge ki mai slut or cheap hu...ni ni wo khud se maangenge to tabhi bhejungi....ye  sb sochte hue vandana apni saree wali mirror selfie ko select karti hai or dhadkte dil ke saath hariya ko send kar deti hai....


Vandana selfie bhejkar photo ko fir se dekhti hai acche se or sochti hai ki jaisa hariya jee ne kaha tha mai bilkul waisa hi tayyar hui thi....i hope hariya jee ko meri ye photo pasand aayegi....udhar hariya vandana ka photo dekh apne payjaame ke upar se apna lund masalne lagta hai or khud se bolta hai ki waah meri raand bilkul mere kahe anusaar hi saali tayyar hui hai...hehe...ufffff kaali saari mai bilkul top ki raand lag rahi hai....dekho to saali apna choochi ki ghaati or navi kese dikha rahi hai...or itni gaadhi rang ki lipstick lagayi hai maano waaha party mai nahi balki kisi kothe mai jaa rahi ho apne grahak ko khush karne ke liye.......hariya ka lund ab pura khada ho chuka tha or payjaame se baahir aane ko betaab tha...hariya uski photo ko haule se choom leta hai or apna payjaama neeche sarka kar apna lauda baahir nikaal leta hai.....


Hariya message likhta hai ki " waah vandana jee ....waah....aapne to mera raat bana diya.....uffffff .....qa lag rahi hai aap....kasam se mai daawe se keh sakta hu ki waaha mojud saari aurte aapki jawaani or khubsurti dekh jal bhun gayi hongi or saare mard aapko dekh apne muh se laar tapka rahe honge......sach mai vandana jee aapki tasveer dekh kar meri haalath kharab hogayi to sochiye aapko itne karib se dekhkar waha mojud baaki mardo ka qa haal hua hoga ???".....hariya ab jaan raha tha ki vandana ab uske kisi bhi message ka bura nahi maanegi isliye wo ab bejhijhak message likh raha tha....wahi hariya ka message padhkar vandana sharam se paani paani ho jaati hai or saath hi uski chut mai bhi use geelapan mehsus hone lagta hai......hariya ke mssagee mai use "jawaani" or "meri haalath kharabh ho rhi hai "ye padh kar uski chut paniya gayi thi...vandana man mai sochti hai ki ufff hariya jee bhi qa qa bolte rahte hai....hehe....bilkul bhi sharam nahi karte bolne mai......par unko ye tamij hai ki kaise bolna chahiye......hehe ....vandana ab type karti hai ki " qa hariya jee aap bhi faltu ki taarif kar rahe hai bas...mai itni bhi hot nahi lag rahi thi.....or aap batane wale the mere dono pic ki difference .....ye likh kar vandana send kar deti hai.....


Mesage bhej to di thi vandana par ab uski heartbeat tej ho gayi thi yeh sochkar ki hariya jee ab qa bolenhe usko.....or usse bhi jyada ye tha ki hariya jee kaise batayenge kyoki wo jaanti thi ki hariye bolne mai dabang hai or wo bejhijhak open hoke uski comparision mai bolega pic ke baare mai......


Wahi hariya uske message ko padhkar khush hota hai or bolta hai waah raand mai isi ke talash mai tha or tune mujhe moka de diya....ab dekh mai tujhe kaise apni baato se nanga karta hu.....tujhe sharam se paani paani or teri chut geeli na kar diya to mera naam hariya nahi....yeh bolkar hariya message mai likhta hai ki thik hai vandana jee par ye sab mai message mai nahi likhna chahta kyoki mera haath dard ho raha hai ...or ab aapki hot pic dekhne ke baad aapka hot aawaj sunne ka man ho raha hai.....hum call par baat kare ...???......
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(23-02-2021, 11:20 AM)Fuckerboy Wrote: Bhai aacha hai mast story hai.. But update bahut jyada kate aa raha hai uper jo aa raha hai who bhi chota aa raha hai

Dont worry bhai ab bada update dunga.....
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bahut h garam aur kamuk update
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(23-02-2021, 11:35 AM)Ajanmol Wrote: Update 24
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Fantastic... Itna garam kar de rhe ho aap readers ko... Mast update!!!!!! so hot.... Keep writing and entertain ur readers....
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Awesome update, fantastic and mind blowing writings
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Superb hot update bhai
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uff gazab
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very very sensational and exciting update
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jabardast aur mind blowing update
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Nice updet bro
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