Misc. Erotica மீண்டும் சிறு கதைகள் - முதல் கதை - என்னங்க, அது பரவாயில்லையா? 2 .) மறைவில் இருந்து

[lacksidal]

You are one of the best going around. And the one who writes logically. All your stories ends with a full stop with scope for a new beginning for the characters.

But I feel the emotions in the story is not settled down and edge is sharpened at the end. And also one of your strong point is the way you sketch the characters. I feel the vidhya character was not sketched out completely. For the end you have given, the alpha shall be vidya not varun in my opinion.

And also Ranjan has not embraced the cockholdery completely as per your end. He was somewhat subdued and comprimed to accept. And he will be subdued only till varun was present in their life.

What will happen once varun moves out of their life?
What will be the equation between husband and wife?

And few more un answered questions.

As usaual, you wrote it well. You make this space better.

Congratulations.

[game40it]

Been reading the comments on the end of the story. Tried something different this time around. Apparently it went well in parts and not so in others, especially towards the end. Nevertheless it was an experience in attempting a genre of which to be honest I am not very fond of. Again I may have rushed towards the end as time constraints were getting more tight towards the end and I don't believe in letting a story just hang about without a conclusion. After the conclusion of this story I was intending to write a story in English as it has been quite sometime since I had done that. Though it is easier for me (and very much less time consuming than writing in Tamil) to do that but at present I need to put that on hold too till my time restraints eases. 

My appreciation to all those who took the trouble to convey their appreciation as well as their thoughts on the story. Every feedback would be something to learn from. Constructive criticism is always welcome however in very rare instances some person(s) make unwanted personal comments. I don't want to dignify those comments by taking offence to it and therefore had not mentioned this before. I would appreciate such person(s) to better spend their time doing something else than reading my stories. All authors here write stories for fun and without any expectation of any rewards, monetary or otherwise. This is not aimed at anyone giving their opinions on why they liked the story or what disappointed them in how the story was written or went. This is towards those making personal comment on me as the author. To be fair this happens in very  very rare instances and that is why I debated with myself if I should mention this at all. However I decided I should not refrain from doing this for betterment of all authors. I hope the moderators in this forum would take appropriate action when necessary.

Once again my thanks and appreciation to all the readers. 

[TamilPayyan]

Good job Bro.Quality writing

[Krish World]

Super bro

[AjitKumar]

Been reading the comments on the end of the story. Tried something different this time around. Apparently it went well in parts and not so in others, especially towards the end. Nevertheless it was an experience in attempting a genre of which to be honest I am not very fond of. Again I may have rushed towards the end as time constraints were getting more tight towards the end and I don't believe in letting a story just hang about without a conclusion. After the conclusion of this story I was intending to write a story in English as it has been quite sometime since I had done that. Though it is easier for me (and very much less time consuming than writing in Tamil) to do that but at present I need to put that on hold too till my time restraints eases. 

My appreciation to all those who took the trouble to convey their appreciation as well as their thoughts on the story. Every feedback would be something to learn from. Constructive criticism is always welcome however in very rare instances some person(s) make unwanted personal comments. I don't want to dignify those comments by taking offence to it and therefore had not mentioned this before. I would appreciate such person(s) to better spend their time doing something else than reading my stories. All authors here write stories for fun and without any expectation of any rewards, monetary or otherwise. This is not aimed at anyone giving their opinions on why they liked the story or what disappointed them in how the story was written or went. This is towards those making personal comment on me as the author. To be fair this happens in very  very rare instances and that is why I debated with myself if I should mention this at all. However I decided I should not refrain from doing this for betterment of all authors. I hope the moderators in this forum would take appropriate action when necessary.

Once again my thanks and appreciation to all the readers. 

Completely agree. This happened to one of your previous story too. You have to perform only at the place where your work is respected. You put lot of effort but the readers here are not matured enough to understand it. Please start writing in english where your comfort zone is more and your time is saved. you will be able to give a much better stories out there and respected too. Reades in this forum do not deserve quality author's work like yours. They can continue reading crap stories.

[Vasanthan]

So, this is your last story in tamil?. Thank you for the story.

[game40it]

So, this is your last story in tamil?. Thank you for the story.

Not necessarily. I will write one or two stories in English (when time permits), if at that time I feel there is a good story line for a Tamil story I would then revert to Tamil.

[intrested]

pls keep writing in tamil... our simple request

[0123456]

super super super bro

[life21man]

Nice... Well written and sexy descriptions.
Beautiful

[intrested]

excellent stories

[Santhosh Stanley]

Are you starting a new story in english. If so, when?

[game40it]

Are you starting a new story in english.  If so, when?

I just started writing it. I have to write a fair bit before I start posting it. I am trying something a bit different this time so it's going to be a bit tricky. Hope I can carry it off.

[King Kesavan]

I just started writing it. I have to write a fair bit before I start posting it. I am trying something a bit different this time so it's going to be a bit tricky. Hope I can carry it off.

Awesome, waiting for it 

[jollypawan]

நண்பா ருத்ரன் நண்பா நீலவாசுகி , ஓணத்தில் ஒரு ஓழ் மற்றும் IRON MAIDEN எழுதிய மலையாள மஹாராணிகளின் மதன லீலை என்ற கதைகள் கிடைக்குமா

[Nayaganivan]

As usual one of your masterpiece. Awaiting for next one.

[intrested]

i am your fan.. keep rocking

[fuckandforget]

I just started writing it. I have to write a fair bit before I start posting it. I am trying something a bit different this time so it's going to be a bit tricky. Hope I can carry it off.

Waiting for your post eagerly. 

[Gilmalover]

Long time. no see. waiting for the new story

[pallaviarek]

Been reading the comments on the end of the story. Tried something different this time around. Apparently it went well in parts and not so in others, especially towards the end. Nevertheless it was an experience in attempting a genre of which to be honest I am not very fond of. Again I may have rushed towards the end as time constraints were getting more tight towards the end and I don't believe in letting a story just hang about without a conclusion. After the conclusion of this story I was intending to write a story in English as it has been quite sometime since I had done that. Though it is easier for me (and very much less time consuming than writing in Tamil) to do that but at present I need to put that on hold too till my time restraints eases. 

My appreciation to all those who took the trouble to convey their appreciation as well as their thoughts on the story. Every feedback would be something to learn from. Constructive criticism is always welcome however in very rare instances some person(s) make unwanted personal comments. I don't want to dignify those comments by taking offence to it and therefore had not mentioned this before. I would appreciate such person(s) to better spend their time doing something else than reading my stories. All authors here write stories for fun and without any expectation of any rewards, monetary or otherwise. This is not aimed at anyone giving their opinions on why they liked the story or what disappointed them in how the story was written or went. This is towards those making personal comment on me as the author. To be fair this happens in very  very rare instances and that is why I debated with myself if I should mention this at all. However I decided I should not refrain from doing this for betterment of all authors. I hope the moderators in this forum would take appropriate action when necessary.

Once again my thanks and appreciation to all the readers. 

Thank you so much bro... more than 10 times I read your story... my mind says can v read once again... I love your narration... Even ur writing skills got admired by girl... I love you bro...