Adultery Harami balam

[Mom'sbigboob's]

https://xossipy.com/thread-30460-page-23.html

Read My Story :Ammi ke secret

[Mloat]

Bhai iske husband jo humilate kro jyda maza ayega or uski gand mrwao

[Newdevil]

Bhai iske husband jo humilate kro jyda maza ayega or uski gand mrwao

Writer not interested in continuing the story... Har kahani ka yahi haal hai yahan
Pehle Josh josh me shuru hoti hai kuch update jaldi jaldi aate hai phir writer gaayab hota hai phir bolta hai ab main story continue nahi kar sakta... Phir reader par ahsaan karte huye jaldbaazi me story ka track badalkar end kar dete hai ya phir adhuri chhod dete hai... Pata nahi story shuru kyu karte hai jab sahi se story likhni nahi hoti... 

[Fuckstar]

Jaisa ki mai koi new story likhta ho woh shuru mai sahi chalti hai par bich mai woh bhatak jati hai ab kaha kaha se new story paonga..... Aur ye bus aakhiri update samjho..... Ab ye bhi story gayi panding mai.... Ise pad kar shayd kish ko Accha nahi lag raha to... I hope kuch din sochta ho koi housewife par hi story banao jo bahar ka bhi kuch kam dekhti ho.....

Philhal ye story ko mai end karte hue bus yahi likhta ho ki Afrene ne kuch dino mai hi arman se shadi kar li.... Aur use sex ke mamle mai perfect bana diya... Aur uske sath baki zindgi hasi khushi bitnane lagi.... Aur jab kabhi moka milta to woh bahr ke kuch logo se time pass kar leti..... Aur kabhi kabhi chud ke bhi Aa jati..... Ok bhai logo ye story mai end kar deta ho


Ab mere deemag mai nahi Aa raha kaha se new story lao...... Par ab koi bhi likho interfaith par nahi likhonga..

Normal hi likhonga.... Ha ek kahani mere deemag mai madhvi bhabhi..... Aur jo bhi likhonga to use bhaot fast likh kar zyada na lambi khich kar end kar diya karonga


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Bhai wese to writer ki marzi hoti h ki wo apni story ko kitne din chalaye..... Par sach kahu to as a reader m aaj tak aapki stories se bore ni hua...... Ye story xossipy ki unn stories me se h jo jitni baar bhi padlo har baar zada maza aata h...... Ye dusri baar mene ye story padi..... Apne jitni baar bhi koi nya character introduce Kiya h wo ese correct time pe kiya h ki uss character ki entry story me or maza le aati h..... Jese ki agar billu ke character ko aap or zada khichte to story boring ho jaati par tabhi uska chacha or unka threesome krwa diya aapne..... Mujhe to lga Afreen unn teeno mazduro ko bhi moka degi abhi..... Kyuki aapki story writing skills itni achi h ki readers aapki story se bore nahi hote..... Agar aap abhi iss story se pause lena chahte ho to please Hawas or Khoon ko continue kro..... Wo story bhi bohot hi ache mod pe aake ruk gyi hai..... M dekhna chahta hu ki uss story me Sahil ka kya hua, ya danish ne kantilal se sauda kyu kiya..... Nazbeen or Mahnaz or kis kis se chudti h.....

[vat69addict]

agla update kab aayega

[vat69addict]

bhai ye story bandh kya

[vat69addict]

ended??

[vat69addict]

update?

[vat69addict]

update

[Fuckstar]

Bhai ek baat kehni thi aapse..... Aapki ye last story Shazia Ek Khilona ek bohot achi story ho sakti thi..... Par shayad naye characters ko introduce karne ki jaldbaazi me story thodi ajeeb si ho gayi thi...... Story me potential bohot tha or characters bhi bohot ache the...... Unka buildup bhi acha tha...... Par story me ek saath itne characters aa gaye the shayad zada tar readers confuse ho gaye...... Par story me kuch yaadgar scenes bhi the jese Shazia ka shabana,haria or dhobi ke saath foursome or wo baba ki kutia me unka lund chusna or last me bhikari wala....... Aapke sex scenes likhne ka m shuruaat se hi fan hu...... Aap sex ko alag level pe le jaate ho...... maine puraani teen stories Hawas or Khoon, Harami Balam or kubda bhikari padi hai isse pehle..... Hawas or Khoon or Harami Balam me jo story pe aapki pakad thi uska xossipy ki koi story mukabala nahi kar sakti...... Ek ek character ko ache se introduce kiya tha..... Araam se bina jaldbaazi ke...... Or sex to tha hi next level...... kubda bhikari bhi kaafi achi thi par agar sudama ko bhi sex karne ka moka milta to or maza aata...... Khaer koi nahi but ab aap aage koi nayi story likho ya Shazia ko hi continue karo ya apni koi puraani story ko ye aap pe hai..... Par story apne hisaab se likhna readers ke suggestions ya galat comments se frustrate hoke story me naye characters laane ki jaldbaazi mat karna...... Ek or baat story me female lead hi rakhna.... Ek ladki kai mard nayi situation me..... Haa beech beech me ek do female characters add kar sakte ho flavour ke liye par main heroine ek hi rakhna...... Or aapne iss story me kai baar ye use kiya hai" esa kyu hua ye aage pata chalega"...... Isko zada use mat karo balki reader ke liye surprise rakho ki jo ghatnaya story me pehle ho chuki hai unke piche ki wajah kya hai...... Isse mere khyaal me readers ki dilchaspi badegi.......
Or aapko bohot bohot thank you jo aap apni niji zindagi se time nikalke humare liye esi nayi or manoranjak story laate ho..... Thank you very much bhai......

[Rizzi1198]

Bro plz continue this story

[Bondjamesbond707]

nice..

[Oxfordian]

Superb

[Saifalikhan]

Nice story