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(25-11-2020, 05:53 PM)Krish World Wrote: Appreciate your efforts on the first story.
Author ended the story due to some anger. May be he did not like few comments. He promised to introduce more characters, but did not do that. She agreed to be the bitch of Shakthi moving out if mahesh life as if he did all cheating is surprising. Instead she could have divorced and married shakti.
Agree.. this story had a huge scope to pull further more romance, sex, emasculate , cuckolding... but one thing to say as author mentioned earlier that he will be introducing more characters that didn’t happen as planned this is a disappointment for all of us as it didn’t go well down the pipe line . Anyway what ever the case is author didn’t left the story incomplete like most of the case. We appreciate that
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Thanks for the story. Sad part is Mahesh was humiliated by his wife for not being a cuckold.
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Thank you for the story. Just the right amount - I think more characters would have ruined. I really liked the ending.
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Shakthi should have made Bindu as slut by sharing her with his friends. He should have taken the properties of mahesh and killed mahesh silently. Having known that it is not going to do anything good, mahesh reaching out to Bindu does not bring any sympathy on him either. Thanks for the story anyway. All the best for your next story.
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Hi all, I read the comments on how Mahesh has to be humiliated and cockholded and insulted, I liked the story but don't have anything to comment then and influence the writer, now that the story has ended I must say it seems kinda incomplete, I felt Mahesh should have done something here , agreed he did a lot wrong from the start but isn't bindu the culprit here and she got away with it. I emphasize with Mahesh and feel sory for him, I am sure many will agree to some extent with me. At the least he could have spoken with his parents and inlaws and left .
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Thanks for completing the story and your effort and time.
Bit disappointed the way you have forcefully brought it to a completion after giving lot of hopes. Each reader have own thought. it is not necessary that author has to budge to all of it. They can go with their own original plan ignoring some of the comments.
If Bindu love towards mahesh was true, Bindu should have caught up in great guilt when she came to know that mahesh knows about her affair. She would have thought how much mental agony her husband would have gone through, that would have forced him to plan something against shakthi who is much more powerful than him. Here, she blindly believed in shakthi forgetting that she is married to Mahesh. She simply says mahesh did not talk to her about this and therefore she decided to be bitch of shakthi. She is already a bitch of shakthi and she cannot change anything now. She did not understand that. She was not thinking from her brain, instead she was thinking from her vagina.
Only when she is living with Mahesh, she will be PA to shakthi. When she started staying there in office, everyone around them would know she has left her husband for shakthi's money and political power. They will consider her only as slut. Shakthi will not be able to marry her and take her as legal wife as it would affect his political status. He will keep her only in the underground as his bitch.
Till she understand the true color of shakthi, she will continue to be bitch of him. One day she will realize her betrayal and what kind of life she has lost. But, here i would say Mahesh had a miraculous escape from this kind of woman who will be dangerous to live with.
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Usually hero will win in the end. Here, the villain Shakthi has won.
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Someone should take this story further from there....
Shakti showing his true color
Bindu realzing what she did
And mahesh coming to know what's happening with Bindu
So saving Bindu and making her realize ...
And so do shakti...
Plot is know or my be well worn but good narration will put life to the story...
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Very nice without further lengthening. Thank you for presenting to us this story.
Waiting for another story from you.
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Good finish. Bindu is a woman with high sexual need. If not Shakthi, she will surely have affair with someone else. She made it very clear to mahesh that sex is important to her than a good person or anything else in her life.
Did Shakthi impregnate her? You failed to tell. Why did she told him she will stay with him and go in her way when she knew she cannot get money, sex and safety from any other man. If shakti loved her, he would not have sent the making out videos to mahesh when he knows mahesh had seen everything. He had shown a live show in own marital bed. Confused. He is clearly a sadist.
Just one question comes up. Does any woman look continuously for sex for whole day. After one or two orgasms they also get tired, bored and get irritated sensation in their pussy. These type of stories are always exaggerate everything.
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26-11-2020, 06:45 AM
(This post was last modified: 26-11-2020, 07:05 AM by Karthik Ramarajan. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Hot story. Bindu at last got a life that she deserved.
I thought sakthi will make Bindu slap her husband and lick his sperms from her pussy y.
Mahesh did not get erection seeing them fuck again or masturbate. why he was called cuckold.???
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(26-11-2020, 06:45 AM)Karthik Ramarajan Wrote: Hot story. Bindu at last got a life that she deserved.
I thought sakthi will make Bindu slap her husband and lick his sperms from her pussy y.
Mahesh did not get erection seeing them fuck again or masturbate. why he was called cuckold.???
May be because the author's definition of cuckold and yours might be different. Try looking up the meaning, and not assume based on typical stories you might have read here or on other sites.
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Lot of post complete comments shows this story had lot of expectations. Unfortunately the author misunderstood the readers mind and brought to closure. Definitely he should have had few interesting things in mind. He can still continue this as part 2. Waiting for author thoughts.
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Happy for Bindu. At last she got a good life that her husband can never be able to give.
Beautiful story. Thank you.
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fantastic story, i really enjoyed these themes, where the wife thinks the husband doesn't know and the husband pretends he doesn't, where the older man takes liberties over the wife. excellent. I hope you write more.
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