09-01-2021, 11:35 PM
Aa gayi woh !! Ab shuru hoga asli khel.
Superb Baban bhai.
Like, reps added
Superb Baban bhai.
Like, reps added
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(10-01-2021, 09:47 PM)pinuram Wrote: agar yeh hindi alphabets mei hote toh aur bhi achaa lagta... paar koi nehi isme bhi padhne mei maza hai... aab dekhte hai yeh mohini kya kya gul khilati hai !!!!!![]()
(11-01-2021, 09:21 AM)vat69addict Wrote: Abhi bhi suspense bana hua h...badboo kaisi aur ye agar bhoot hai to sabko kaise dikhti h...jaisa ki pados ki aunty ne dekha...maasad kya h...abhi tak kuch sexual content to aaya nahi...kaafi peechida story hai ab tak...gol gol ghum rahe h...
(11-01-2021, 11:58 AM)vat69addict Wrote: Seems like a plot of Dan Brown novel
(11-01-2021, 12:06 PM)Baban Wrote: Arey... Thank you bhai.
Itney barey ek author ke sath mere plot ko compare kiya. Unke writting toh next level ke hote hai.
Mera yeh story unke kisi story se inspired nahi hai.
Yeh toh ek idea Achanak aya mere deemag mein aur shuru kar diya maine.
(11-01-2021, 12:26 PM)vat69addict Wrote: It just occurred to my mind...jaise un ki beginning badi vivid hoti h...aur starting mei bada confusion sa rehta h...then he unwinds everything ,that each piece falls in place...in that sense...aap bhi apne genre mei bahut umda likhte ho...u mesmerise us all with all your plots n descriptive style
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Abhishek 