05-01-2021, 08:38 AM
Please [ hin du mus lim ] mat karna story ko
Adultery Jawani Ka Nasha
05-01-2021, 11:41 PM
Thanks doston support k liye. Story main abhi kaafi kuch hona baaki hai. Thoda time kam tha story develop kerne k liye lekin within 2 days update de dunga.
Thanks !
Your comment helps it grow, thanks !
Kya ek detailed character page aapko characters ko jaanane main help karega ?
Bro abtak k 11 updates ki dates check ker leejiye, ye story to main bullet train ki speed se chala rha tha. Thoda aur support milta readers ka to udne bhi lagti.
Sahi rah pe ho bhai. Ye story main do alpha khiladi banenge jismain se ek to apni Neelu he hai.
Story pyar, dhoka aur chudai ki hai. Ismain characters pe focus rahega unke religion pe nahi.
Story band kabhi ni hogi.. 2 draft update likh chuka hoon lekin editing chalu hai taaki suspense and thrill rahe and pics dalna bacha hai. 48hrs main update aa jayega.
(24-12-2020, 01:09 AM)prashanthi Wrote: Super update
Thanks !
(24-12-2020, 01:10 AM)prashanthi Wrote: I don't y there are very few comments. But your story is very good and great going.. please continue
Your comment helps it grow, thanks !
(26-12-2020, 01:28 AM)Curiousbull Wrote: Good story. But multiple characters make it confusing.
Please continue.
Kya ek detailed character page aapko characters ko jaanane main help karega ?
(29-12-2020, 08:11 AM)Anil.mjpru Wrote: Nice story but update very slow
Bro abtak k 11 updates ki dates check ker leejiye, ye story to main bullet train ki speed se chala rha tha. Thoda aur support milta readers ka to udne bhi lagti.
(31-12-2020, 12:41 PM)Sameer517 Wrote: Wow mast story hai dil happy ho giya neelu ab khul ke chudegi very nice but brother ek request hai update thoda jaldi dena thanx
Sahi rah pe ho bhai. Ye story main do alpha khiladi banenge jismain se ek to apni Neelu he hai.
(31-12-2020, 08:54 PM)Sharma8086 Wrote: Very hot story
Pls update asap
(05-01-2021, 08:38 AM)Rohan0064 Wrote: Please [ hin du mus lim ] mat karna story ko
Story pyar, dhoka aur chudai ki hai. Ismain characters pe focus rahega unke religion pe nahi.
(05-01-2021, 07:31 PM)Anil.mjpru Wrote: Ye story bhi band??????
Story band kabhi ni hogi.. 2 draft update likh chuka hoon lekin editing chalu hai taaki suspense and thrill rahe and pics dalna bacha hai. 48hrs main update aa jayega.
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My latest Stories:
- Jawani Ka Nasha (Hinglish, Sex, Romance, Suspense, Thriller, Plot twist, Blackmail, Corruption)
13-01-2021, 12:01 AM
Very good erotic story. Good characters. Bhai aapki story super hit hot entertainment hai. All characters are well defined with contrast. Maza aa gaya. Please continue. Finished first page just now.
13-01-2021, 01:53 AM
Fantom bhai, aapki kahani sach men bahot hee dumdaar creative hot erotica hai. Page 2 padh raha hun.
Sirf ek request hai bhai. Thoda sexual intercourse ka narration thoda lumba do toh aap ki bahot meherbani. Itna achchha sex scene aur characters hain. Magar scene chhota hai. Thoda lumba khincho bhai. Baaki readers ka bhi yehi demand hai. Baaki bhai you are a great erotic writer with all contrast characters. Congratulations.
What is CHHOYA STYLE OF WRITING~?
Sirf ek request hai bhai. Thoda sexual intercourse ka narration thoda lumba do toh aap ki bahot meherbani. Itna achchha sex scene aur characters hain. Magar scene chhota hai. Thoda lumba khincho bhai. Baaki readers ka bhi yehi demand hai. Baaki bhai you are a great erotic writer with all contrast characters. Congratulations.
What is CHHOYA STYLE OF WRITING~?
30-01-2021, 02:58 PM
Fantom bhai, aap ki story Jawani Ka Nasha super hit ho gayee. Aur aap maidan chhod ke bhaag gaye. Aisi KLPD mat karo. Aur update dijiye. Kum se kum yeh toh bata do ki agar busy ho toh update kab doge? Please update.
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