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bahit khoob....kya likhe ho...waiting for next update
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Uffff bhai bhot khob kya zabardast likhay hooooooo
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Ab intizar nahi ho raha pls ak bada say update day do
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Dosto mere ek site chal rahi hai is karan bahot busy ho subah se raat 10 baje tak busy rahta ho waha se aake mera deemag mai kuch nahi chalta khali sa rahta hai thak bhi jata ho isi karan mai regular update nahi de pa raha ho par ek ya 2 din ki baat aur hai....
Uske bad mai thoda free ho jaonga aur regular jaida update deta tha Phir waisa hi donga.....
Ho sake to aaj kuch time nikal kar afreen ki train journey likhta ho
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Jeyse jeyse bahari mardo ka hath lag raha hai
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Train journey wow waiting for update
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Sabr nahi ho raha kuch to Kamal kar do new saal per
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afreen apne old nani ke sath rehti hai.
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ek baba Shivnarayan (46), dusra kalicharan (50).
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Don't rush and spoil the entire story theme.. take your time on development of characters and plots