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Zabardast but small.... I can understand it. I am a writer too. Har bar likhney ka zyada time nahi milta. Its ok.
But bahut uttejak build up tha bhai.... Ab aur bhi kamuk tarikey se likho. Is haseena ki under ki acchayi ko nasht kar do... Sirf jo rehe jayega woh hoga hawas aur kallu.
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Good writing bhai ek dum gazab update chal rha hain behad uttejak dhanywad hamari sardi ki raatein jawan kr e k liye
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ekdom lajawab aur bahut bahut garam,kamuk,uttejana karnewala kahaani, bahut khoob bhai.
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Last ke part ko just imagine karo...... Bapre khatarnak uttejak!!!!!
Kallu...... Kya khatarnak admi hai.... Is umar mein bhi kya khel dikha raha hai. Idhar jawan log is haseena ke liye trapte hai aur idhar yeh 2 gaon ke buddhey aisey aish lar rahe hai.
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Great mind blowing update bro
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Dosto aaj time nahi mila writing ka kal pakka update aaegi,Kaam kuchh jyada hi tha aaj.
And thanks for the support....
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Hot awesome update bhai.....bhai dance dekh ne ke liye kisi dusre ko bhi bulwao
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Bhai ab aap masti kr rhe ho kallu ki trah tadpa rhe ho. Maze wala update krdo aaj raat ka scene bn jaaye yaha thand zyada hain ????