Thriller Pyaar vich [ rommance thriller ]

[Jaspal singh]

Nice update

[desimeet]

Kavita ji please duja viah story v update kar deo... asi os story de suspense ch fase haa please update.....

[Athra jutt]

Wah swaad aa gaya wadiaa update

[doonknightz]

bahut sohna likh rhe ho KAVI ma'am......
aje puri tarh khulli nhi story....ki kujh chall riha ....
character v interesting lag rhe ne...khaas karke SIMI da character...personally i loved it.....
enna sohna likhde ho ji krda bas padi jayiye story.....
keep going ma'am....
keep writing

[Harryjatt]

Kavita ji plz update regular deya kro

[kavitakhullar]

 'Thank god ...' ek lamba sah lay phone ek passey rakhdi  bed tey beithey inder wal vekhdi  simi chehkdi hoyi boli'   'acha mein change kr lwaan' 
 'Change ..' hand bag chuk washroom wal jandi simi nu vekh besabra ho inder bolea 
 'Haan ..' washroom dey door tey khad muskurandi hoyi simi apney kapdeya wal vekhdi boli'  saverey ehi kapdey paa waps b jana ..'
'Ohhh..' upr ton lay haithan tak simi dey gadraye jism dey utar charav vekh  aukha  jeha sah lainda inder machlda hoyea bolea'  ethey e kr lay ..'
' bs doh min ch ayi .. ..' inder wal vekh muskurandi hoyi simi washroom andr jandi boli'  just wait ..'



'Daseya kyoun nyi simi nu k mein ayi hoyi haan'  gaur nal dev wal vekh muskurandi hoyi preet boli 

Kuch na bolea dev ... muskuran di kosis krda mugg ch cha panda kuch boln e lga c k preet hasdi hoyi boli 'Samj sakdi haan dar lagda hona dasdey nu... sahi b a ... raat hon wali bahr meenh pay riha mein tuhadey kol kuch b galt soch sakdi a 
 'Haan ... 'mugg ch  cha panda dev preet di haan ch haan milanda bolea
 'Tusi nyi galt sochdey ..' bina akh jhapkey dev wal vekh muskurandi hoyi preet boli
 'Nyi ..' ek dum hdbda k bolea dev' mein ki galat....' 
 'Kyoun wife di saheli tuhadey kol ekeli 
Bahr meenh painda fer b kuch galt nyi'  gaur nal dev nu upr ton lay haithn tak vekhdi preet hasdi hoyi boli' .. dasna paina simi nu k tera gharwala tan bda sau a ..tun awen ..
 'Ki awen' gaur nal preet wal vekhda dev ek dum bolea  'menu pta .... simi ney e tuhanu bhejya ...'
 'Aho  ' hasdi hoyi dev wal vekh akhn matka muskurandi hoyi  preet boli'  kehndi c vekhin mera dev kitey menu cheat tan nyi karda ..'
 'Ohhh..' munh khula reh gya dev da kuch sochda hoyea bolea'  menu pehlan e pta c tuhanu simi ney bhejya menu check krn lyi..'
 'Omg ...'uch uchi hasdi preet dev wal vekhdi  boli  'mjak kr rahi c ... tusi sachin samj lya... menu simi ney bhejya' 
'Haan'  simi nu chah da mugg franda dev  bolea'  pkka tuhanu simi ney bhejya'
 'Nyi baba..' chah da mug fad hasdi hoyi preet boli'  edn di koi gal nyi ..'

' kehndi hundi c j menu pta lagya tusi menu cheat kita..' preet wal vekh  chah da mug chuk  rasoyi ton bahr anda burburaya dev hun tan usnu preet dey kol khadn ton b dr lagn lga..

 'Omg  'hasdi hoyi preet usdey pichey         pichey bahr andi boli  'edan di koi gal     nyi na e menu simi ney bhejya na e menu pta c simi pekey gyi a .. '
 'Rehn deo mjak na karo  'sofey  tey beithda dev bolea  'menu sab pta' 
 'Theek a ji..' dev samney sofey tey beithdi preet boli'  j tihanu lagda menu simi ney bhejya  tan changa e a .. at least safe tan haan mein .. nyi tan ehi soch soch dar rahi c simi hay nyi ethey mein ekeli tuhadey kol kitey menu fad tusi mera kam e na khich deo..'
 'Ji ..' preet dey munh ton eh sun sofey tey beitha beitha uchal pya dev 
 'Hanji..' lat tey lat rakh sofey tey aram nal  beithdi preet cha da ghut bhardi  boli  'mein awen dr rahi c k   simi hay nyi ethey ..aj nyi tun suki bach ghar jandi  preet..'
Kuch na bolea dev jidan muskurandi hoyi preet usnu tease kr hasdi pyi c hun samj gya pkka simi ney usnu bhejya a chah da ghut bharda burburaya'  pakka simi ney e bhejya a... jandi hoyi keh k b fyi c jyada naughty na baneyo..menu pta lag jana ..'
 'Thank god ... chah da cup mej tey rakh janbuj k hik bahr nu kad angrayi lendi preet hasdi hoyi boli'  safe haan mein ethey ..kyoun ...'
 'Ji ...  'bahr nu ubr aye preet dey mummeya di golayi nu vekhda dev akhn churanda bolea 
 'Thora suit  tight a menu'   apni hik wal vekh... tedi akh naal dev wal vekhdi  preet muskurandi hoyi  boli  'ja fer mere simi ton wadey ney ..'
Sakpka e gya dev ...munh vichon kuch na niklya jijhkda hoyea preet ton akhan churanda mez tey chah da mug rakh  edr udr vekhn lga ..
 'Daso na' apni hik nu bahr nu kad vekhdi hoyi preet dev nu cherdi boli'  wadey hay na mere  simi ton ..'
 'Pta nyi' sah niglda dev es ton agey na bol sakeya ..
 'Oh come on.. 'uth k dev kol sofey tey aa beith preet  usdean akhn ch vekhdi boli  'dnt worry nyi dasdi simi nu ..'
 'Ji pta nyi' sofey tey eketha jeha ho sahan nal upr thalley hundi preet di hik nu vekh njra churanda burburaya dev 

'Haath la k vekh layo' sharart ch muskurandi hoyi preet dev dean akhn ch vekhdi usda hath fad apni   hik tey rakh ghutdi hoyi boli 
Uuchal e pya dev umeed nyi c usnu preet edan usda hath fad apni hik tey rakh ghut layougi gol mottey mummey nu hath ch fardey e pura jism usda jhanjhanahat nal kamb uthea.. gol mumma usdi hatheli ch .. jhatkey nal apna hath prey kr sofey tey uston dur hunda bolea'  eh tusi ki...'
 'Wadda a na mera ..' agey nu ho apna mumma usdey moddey nal ragar us upr jhukdi preet hasdi hoyi boli
 'Menu nyi pta ..' apna sah nigal preet ton dur hon di kosis krda dev  ghabranda hoyea  burburaya  'hun tan usnu yakeen ho gya janbuj k usnu uksa rahi a preet 
 'Kyoun nyi pta ..'muskurandi hoyi usupr jhukdi preet usdey bulln kol apney bull lya bina akh jhapkey usdean akhn ch vekhdi boli
Apney aap nu rokna muskil ho gya uslyi preet dey munh ton nikldey gram sah... eni nedey preet dey kambdey thar tharandey bull ... besabra ho kidan apney aap tey control kr riha usnu e pta c j preet simi di saheli na hundi pakka uston preet dey bull chum ho janey c ... pr pta c usnu eh sirf usnu ajma rahi a  j usney  koi b harkat kiti pkka esney simi nu das..
 'Nyi dasdi simi nu'  apney bull ghut dev dean akhn ch vekhdi preet dev dey bulln tey ungl ferdi boli 
 'Nyi tusi .. 'ena e bol apney bull preet dey bulln ton dur krn e lga c k preet ney usdey moddey fad apney bull usdey billn nal jod dittey......
Andr tak hil gya dev preet nu apney bull chumdi vekh ksmasanda hoyea usdey modey fad bull vakh kr hichki lenda bolea'  eh tusi ki ..'
 'Tuhanu nyi pta ki ...' dev dean akhn ch vekh khind k chehkdi hoyi preet apney bull chabdi muskurandi hoyi boli 

Bull tan vakh kr lye dev ney pr preet dey gulabi masti ch thirkdey bulln di tapish ney usda roya roya khinda k rakh ditta.. preet dey gadraye jism da sek nasheelian akhn di chamak gram sahn di mehak ney usdey jism ch akadn paida kr diti... lower andr tan lun akad k funkr e utheya kasmasanda hoyea sofey tey preet ton  dur hon lyi prey hunda apney aap nu sambhln di kosis kr edr udr vekhn lga .. chahey preet ney e usdey bull chumey c pr preet dey nrm bulln di tapish usdey bulln nu bekabu krn lgi. .. usdey bull  mud preet dey kamdey tharandey muskurandey bulln nal judn lyi  bechain ho uthey .. usnu e pta c usney apney aap nu kidan rokeya hoyea c ..
 'Hun ho gya yakeen menu simi ney nyi bhejya ...' bina akh jhapkey dev dean akhn ch vekhdi prert usdey modey nal apna modda ragardi boli
 'Nyi ..' apney sah kabu kr bull ghut preet ton akhn churanda dev hauka lay bolea pta c usnu j usney preet dean akhn ch vekheya usdey bulln ney bekbu ho preet dey bulln nal jud jana 
 'Oh come on'   dev dey pairr nal apna pairr ragardi preet apney walln nu jhatka dey pichey kr hasdi hoyi boli'  hun kidan yakeen dilawan ..
Kuch na bolea dev apna pairr preet dey pairr ton prey kr ektha jeha ho edr udr vekhn lga


 'tuhanu ajay b eh lagda menu  simi ney bhejya ethey tuhanu test krn lyi'  dev nu jijhkda ghabra k eketha jeha ho beithdey vekh preet gaur nal us wal vekhdi boli'  mera matlab simi eh vekhna chahundi a k tusi usnu cheat krdey o k nyi
 'Haan ..' apna sah niglda dev preet wal vekhda bolea ... eh tan usnu e pta c usney apney aap tey kidan control kitta ...ang ang usda bechain c ...
 'Oh come on ajeha kuch nyi  'dev da modda fad us wal vekhdi preet boli'  acha daso ajeha ki krn key tuhanu yakeen ho javey menu simi ney tuhanu check krn lyi nyi bhejya' 
 Kuch der chup reh sochda hoyea dev bolea' dnt know pls tusi us room ch ja rest ..' sofey ton uth khada hunda dev burburaya  'I love simi I cant cheat her'  
 'Ohhh ....u know wat..' dev da hath fad usnu sofey tey beithandi preet boli'  mein b married haan mein b apney husband nu vohat pyar krdi haan tey mera huaband b menu vohat pyar karda a ..'
 'Exactly same here..' preet da jwaab sun dev apney aap nu sambhlda bolea

 'So .. bahr meenh pay riha tusi ghar ch ekely... wife pekey gyi a ... ' dev dean akhn ch vekhdi preet muskurandi hoyi boli' tey wife di saheli  tuhadey kol exictment nyi feel ho rahi' 
 'No nop ..' preet ton akhn churanda dev apni bechaini lukonda bolea .. himat nyi ho rahi c usdi preet dean gehrean mottia mottia akhn ch vekhn di 
 'Joothey j exictment nyi feel ho rahi tan'   preet bull tuk tedi akh naal  dev dey pattan ch  bahr nu ubr k akadey lun wal vekhdi boli'  fer eh  kyoun khada' 
 'O .. o'  hadbda k apni lat tey lat rakh apni exictment lukondey dev nu samj na ayi ki boley  
 'Ena kyoun dardey o .. ' dev dey patt tey hath rakhdi preet muskurandi hoyi boli'  aap socho j mein tuhanu simi dey kehn tey check krn ayi hundi tan tuhadey bull na chumdi. .. ja fer '  hath agey kr  ungln dev dey lun tey holi holi ferdi boli'  ethey hath na landi ..'
Hauka e nikl gya dev da preet dean nrm mulaym ungln ney tan usdey khadey lun nu akada k rakh dita sah niglda burburaya  'Dr lagda j simi nu pta lag gya. .'
 'Kon dasu...  mein tan nyi dasdi ..' chamkdean akhn naal chehkdi hoyi preet usdey lun nu ungln ch fad ghutdi boli' tusi dasungey' 
'Nyi'  bolda bolda siskar uthea dev 
 ' Fer come on eni b madi nyi mein ..' muskurandi hoyi preet apna mumma dev dey modey nal ragardi boli' 
 'Nyi o gal nyi ..' preet dey noor bharey munh wal vekh bekabu hunda dev bolea 
 'Fer krhri gal a ..  ' akhan matkandi preet dev dey lun nu palosdi boli' hun eh na keheo  kudi di laini  nyi andi ...'
 'Nyi....  aj tak simi ton elawa kadi kisi hor naal..' sabr muk gya dev da lun tan funkrada baggi ho gya  jidan preet aap usdey lun nu fad pola pola  palos...'
  'Wow realy.. ' chehkdi hoyi preet dev dean akhn ch vekh bharwatey chuk akhn matkandi boli' tuhanu ki lagda mein apney husband ton elawa kisi hor naal...'
 'Nyi nyi mein kado keha..' aukha sah lay ahh bhar machlda hoyea bolea dev 
 ' hye ehi tan ..' agey nu ho dev dey gall ch wahan paa uth k usdi goddi ch beithdi preet b siski lendi  boli'  na kuch kehndey o na e kuch  kardey o .'
 
Munh e khulla reh gya dev da preet di himmat vekh .... najuk mulaym jism dey sek ney usnu kuch b boln na ditta ... pattan nal judey preet dey gadraye  gol gol chittadan di nrmi ney usdey lun di halat e kharab kr diti ...

 'Ena na socho'  dev nu edan hairaan ho ghabraya vekh  preet bull tukdi  apna lak hila bund tey chubdey dev dey khadey lun dey kadakpn nal bechain hundi boli  'aj ragar e deo hath ayi vohti di saheli...naley fer...'
 'Naley fer ki...' apni hik tey chubdey preet dey mottey mottey mummya dey sek nal bechain hunda dev bolea 
 'Vohti di saheli ek trah sali e lagdi a... tey sali tan adi gharwali hundi a .
' akhan matkandi dev wal vekh muskurandi hoyi preet akh mardi boli'  sahi keha na jeeja ji' 
' ohhh ..' preet nu edn muskurandi vekh bolda bolda hass pya dev .. dil tan kitta preet dey shararti bull nu apney bulln ch fsa chuss e lwey ...'
 'Tey jad sali app jeejey di godi tey aa beithey ..' dev da sar fad apni hik ch ghutdi preet usdey sar nu chumdi boli ...' . fer tan jeejey nu b sangna nyi chahida ..'

[Harryjatt]

Very erotic update kavita ji

[doonknightz]

nice update.....
bahut sohna buildup krde ho story nu.....suspence lag riha story ch....mainu enjh lag riha jiwe ke DEV nu sabh kujh pta SIMI bare.....bas LOVE krke kujh show nhi krna chaunda......
story kujh new genre di hai....interesting lag rahi hai...
keep going KAVI ma'am
keep writing

[Jaspal singh]

Nice update

[Athra jutt]

Wadiyaaa update

[Jatt James Bond]

very nice update

[crispypringles]

Wah Wah.....
Superb......

[NAV nAv]

Update

[NAV nAv]

Update plz

[Jatt James Bond]

waiting

[Jambojatt]

NYC plot... Keep it up dear

[Hot_irfan]

Dear kavita g still no updates why....

You are best writer please eeh story v start kro 

Jald update kro bht zaberdst story ha or plot bht kamal

Ka ha ...