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Romance Duja via ( vintage romance thriller incest punjabi story
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 'Esi lyi keh riha  rat tuhadey kol aa janda.... beith k galln krangey ..' muskurandey hoye jeetu  preet wal vekh enj bolea jiven samney preet nyi kiran bhabhi khadi hovey  
' mere naal kehria gallan karnia o b rat nu'  hasdi hoyi preet b   kiran di awaaz ch boli
' o bhabhi bs ... preet barey ..' kuch sochda hoyea jeetu bolea' vekho na kinney din ho gye viah nu .. pichey paan e nyi dindi kehndi fudi ch e laina... bda dil krdi usdi gol matol doldi bund ch paan nu ..' 
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 'Hye raaba sida e kahunga eh o b kiran didi nu'  akhn kad di preet boli'  jutti lah laini usney' 
' ohhh fer ki gal krn'  preet wal vekh jeetu  hasda hoyea   bolea
 'Ghuma fira k gal kr..' jeetu nu cherdi samjandi  hasdi hoyi preet boli'  edan b koi pehli baar gal krda bhabhi naal ... pagal jeha ..'

'Theek'  kuch sochda jeetu   bolea'   aj sara din dil udas udas riha .. edan lgda jiven ghar khali khali hovey es lyi tuhanu milan aa gya ..'
' changa kitta ... es bahaney tun milan aaya tan sahi nyi tan ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  nyi tan viah ton baad bhabhi nu kon puchda' 
 'Sachin... bhabhi kal di gyi a pr..' ahh jehi bharda jeetu bolea'  edan lagda pta nyi kinney din ho gye ...'
 'hunda a edan b deor ji'   jeetu wal  vekhdi preet akhn matkandi boli'   koi na aa jayougi... usda kehra dil lagda hona pekey ..'
 'Sari rat neend nyi ayi . .' Masoom jeha bn  preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea' acha bhabhi tuhanu aa jandi ekelya nu neend..'
'Aho  'hasdi hoyi preet boli' kyoun' 

 'Nyi mera matlab  ..' gaur naal preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea'  jad inder  veera doh tin din sehr reh k anda..Yaad nyi andi veerey di' 
 'Andi a ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet muskurandi hoyi boli'  yaad kyoun nyi andi' 
 'Din nu  jyada andi k raat nu'  preet wal vekh muskuranda hoyea jeetu akhn matkanda bolea
' kyoun...' akhan tarer di preet boli
' mera matlab eni thand ch ekelya neend tan nyi andi honi'  muskuranda hoyea jeetu bolea
'Aho nyi andi'  kiran wang hasdi hoyi preet boli' bda  badmash ho gya tun jeetu ..'
 'Mein ruk jawaan raat    tuhadey kol'  preet dean akhn ch vekhda jeetu akh dbabda bolea'  tusi b ekeley mein b ekela .. ' 
 'Nyi ji'  uchi uchi hasdi hoyi preet kiran bn boli'  kehna paina  preet  nu  sambh k rakh jeetu nu  ... nal e lay jya kr  pekey' 
 'Tusi nyi sambh sakdey ..eni k tan bhabhi b velley kuvelley deor dey kam aa sakdi a ..' gaur naal preet dean akhn ch vekhda jeetu muskuranda hoyea bolea
 'Aye hye    'jeetu wal vekh uchi uchi hasdi hoyi preet boli  'enia chakmia galln ...kar b  layounga tun apni kiran bhabhi naal .. ..'
  'J laini a tan chakmi gal tan karni paini'  preet nu upr ton lay haithan tak vekh jeetu nimma nimma   hasda hoyea bolea
'Oye oye'  akhn kad di preet jeetu nu ghurdi hoyi  boli'   dholki kidan bajani eh puchn aya kiran bhabhi kol  . . Ethey tun  hor e   tanka  jodn lga.'
' hye..' apni  hik tey hath rakh jeetu b  chehkda hoyea   bolea'  ghar ch ekeli gaddar wargi bhabhi .... kosis krn ch ki harj ki pta tanka  bhird jawey...'
' nyi ji kiran didi nyi hath andi tere ..' angutha dikhandi preet jeetu nu cherdi boli'  ena ku pta menu unha da ..'
 'Aa b sakdi a' preet wal vekh hasda chehkda hoyea jeetu bolea'  bs tusi kiran bhabhi bn k jwaab deo' 
' mein..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet muskurandi hoyi kuch sochdi kiran bn boli'  nyi ji mein nyi sambh sakdi... preet e pekey ton aa k sambhu gi tenu ..'
 'Hye bhabhi edn na kaho .. mein bdi umeed nal tuhadey kol aya c'  preet dean akhn ch vekhda jeetu edan bolea jiven sachi e kiran usdey samney khadi hovey '  tusi b aj rat ekeley o . Preet b nyi  ethey .... kyoun na aj raat tusi tey mein'
 'Ki ki matlab'  pichey nu edan hatti preet jiven o preet nyi kiran hovey 
 'Eney bholey b nyi tusi bhabhi k mein ki keha tusi  samjey nayi ' agey nu ho preet da hath fad jeetu usdean akhn ch vekhda bolea'  kisi nu pta nyi lagna j aj rat asin dono ..'
 'Pagal a tun .. ' hauka lay drdi hoyi jeetu ton hath chrdwa kahli kahli  kamrey wal jandi preet boli'  tun ja etho mein ghar ch ekeli haan j koi tenu ethey  dekhuga tan ki sochuga' 
 'Keh dayeo... deor a mera miln aya menu'  preet dey pichey pichey kamrey ch anda jeetu kahli kahli ch bolea 
 'tun ja ethon ..' apni hik tey hath rakh jeetu wal pith krdi preet boli 
 'Mn jayo na bhabhi' preet dey  modey fad  jeetu usdey agey aa khada hunda bolea
  'Chad menu nyi tan tere inder veerey nu...'   jeetu da hath apney modey ton prey krdi preet uston akhn churandi boli
 ' kisi nu nyi pta lagna bhabhi ..' preet dean akhn ch vekh masoom jeha bn minttan krda jeetu bolea. ' bas aj di raat...'
Kuch der  jeetu nu edan mintan karda vekh chup rahi preet fer usdey modey tey hath mardi  uchi uchi hassan lgi 
 'Ki hoyea bhabhi'  preet nu hasdi vekh hairaan hunda jeetu bolea
 'Galln e kari jayounga k kuch karunga b  ' jeetu wal vekh apna hassa rokdi  preet boli'mintan krn naal kuch nyi hona  jaffi juffi pa kiran didi nu .....kulley kulley angn tey hath fer.... hik palos  .. ki pta mn javey' 

 'Ohhh...'bolda bolda hass pya jeetu fer kuch soch buhey di kundi laa preet kol aa khad sahn nal hildey usdey mummeya wal vekhda  bolea'  lo bhabhi kundi laa diti.. hun nyi pta lagda kisi nu k mein tuhadey kol rat rukeya ..
 'Pagal a tu  jeetu ..kundi khol'  ekethi jehi ho pichey nu hundi preet ghabrandi hoyi boli 
 'Nyi kholni  'preet dey modey tey hath ferda ungln usdi hik wal lijnda jeetu besabra ho bolea...
'Jeetu'  ek dum akhn kad di jeetu da hath fad apni hik ton prey krdi preet uston dur hundi apni awaz kadak krdi boli'   chaleya ja jeetu ethon nyi tan thapd..'
 'Hye bhabhi jiney marji thappd maar layo pr jaan lyi na kaho ..' agey nu ho preet nu ghut k jaffi panda jeetu usnal chimbd da bolea
 'Chad menu'  puri jaan la jeetu dean wahn vichon nikln di kosis krdi preet usdey modey tey mukkey mardi boli'  nyi tan mein raula pa dena..'
 'Menu pta tusi raula nyi paa na..' preet dey moddey fad jeetu usnu kand nal laa apney bull usdey bull kol lyada machl e utheya.... preet nu edan puri jaan laa prey nu dhakka mardi  nah krdi vekh ek alag e swad aa riha c usnu 
 'Ahh jeetu nyi'  kand naal lgi machaldi hoyi preet  jeetu nu prey krn lyi puri jaan laa dhaka mardi boli' hath jordi haan tere jeetu tun jaa ethon' 
 'Bs ek baar aj di raat bhabhi ..' bechain jeetu apney bull preet dey kambdey bulln kol lya hauka lenda siskar utheya
' nyi'  apney bull jeetu tey bulln ton dur krdi preet munh dujey passey  kr usnu dhaka mardi usdean wahan ton nikln di kosis krdi edan jid krn lgi jiven jeetu ney usnu nyi kiran nu edan kand naal laa fadeya hovey
 'Nyi jeetu'  jeetu dean wahan vichon nikln lyi jor landi preet uston  dur hon di kosis krdi boli' na kr ..'
' uff bhabhi kyoun jid krdey o'  mud bull preet dey bull kol lyanda jeetu besabra ho utheya

' chummi tan nyi lain dindi tenu kiran didi ..' jeetu dey munh tey hath rakh usnu prey krdi  preet hasdi hoyi boli  'Naley nu hath pa....   didi ney tan edan e nakhrey karney eh tere tey kidan lott krda apni kiran bhabhi  ' 


 

 'Ohhhh' Samj gya jeetu shyad sahi keh rahi a ...eni asani nal thori mn jayougi kiran bhabhi kahli kahli ch hath thalley kr salwar da nala fad khichn lga 

 'Jeetu ..'uchi awaz ch cheekdi preet dona hathn nal  apni dhili hoyi salwaar  fad jeetu nu ghurdi  ekethi jehi hundi boli'  minat ali gal a jeetu ja ethon ..meri gal mn lay.'
 'Tusi meri gal mn lyo ..' preet dey dono hath fad upr nu chuk kand naal laa jeetu usdean akhn ch vekhda bolea ..' kyoun jid krdey o' 
 'Nyi chad menu  'kasmasandi hoyi preet jeetu ton apney hath churdwan lyi machldi apney pairaan ch khul k digi salwaar wal vekhdi boli'  eh tun theek nyi kr riha ..'


 'Kyoun'  preet  nal chimbda jeetu  besabra ho bolea'  deor haan tuhada ena ku hak tan hay mera' 
 'Uff jeetu pagal a tun ..'machldi hoyi preet jeetu ton chuttan lyi apni awaz bhari krdi boli'  bhabhi nal b koi edan ..'
 'Haan' 'Pairaan ch digi preet di salwaar ..nangia gorria lattan... kameej dey palley thalley jhattia mardey sudol nangey pattan wal vekhda jeetu sarur ch dubda  lak ton preet di kameej upr nu chukda usdean akhan ch vekhda bolea'  bhabhi o esi lyi tan tuhanu...' 
 'Pagal a'  jeetu dey hath fad kameej chukan ton rokdi preet puri jaan laa kand nal lgi usnu prey krdi boli'  chad menu' 
 'Bhabhi lah lain deo na kameej  'preet nu jid krdi vekh jeetu us di kameej upr nu chuk  gorey nangey  dhid wal vekh machlda hoyea bolea


 'Salwar khul k pairaan ch digi pyi a teri kiran bhabhi di '  apney pairan ch digi salwaar wal vekhdi preet hasdi hoyi boli  'kameej kyoun lahni edan e khich dey kam..'
 'Nyi ji mein tan puri nangi krni kiran bhabhi  'preet di hik tey ulji kameej nu upr chukn di kosis karda karda bekabu ho utheya  jeetu ...nanga gora lak  kali kachi ch luki fudi mulyam gorey sudol lishkdey patt..... sabr mukn lga usda 
 'Bhul js na e usney kameej lahn deni na e tere ton lah honi  ' jeetu nu kameej upr  chukn ton rokdi preet hasdi hoyi boli
 'Kameej tan lahni e lahni a' kameej upr nu chukda jeetu ahh bharda  bolea   'chahey dhaka na karna pwey ..aj tan gaddar wargi kiran bhabhi nangi karni e karni a'  preet dean akhn ch vekhda jeetu  chehkda hoyea bolea' pr tuhada suit fat jana'
 'Koi na purana e a nwa lay devin ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet hasdi hoyi boli'  kar lay apna cha pura... pr eni saukhi didi b nangi nyi hundi tere samney ..   ' ena keha e c preet ney k jeetu ney kameej da palla fad ajeha jhatka ditta ek passeyo kameej puri udhad k  usdey jism tey jhulan lgi
 'Hye rabba tun tan sachin mera suit'  apney fatey hoye suit wal vekhdi   preet jeetu nu ghurdi  boli'  luchha' 
 'Ajay kithon'  kameej da gala fad khichdey hoyey usney suit  cheer k e rakh ditta.. leero leer hoyi preet dey modeya ch latkdi kameej nu khich k lahnda hoyea jeetu kand naal lag adh nangi khadi preet nu upr ton lay haithn tak vekhda machlda hoyea hath agey kr bra dey  cup ch uljey mummeya nu dono hathn ch fad maslda  pagal ho  jhatka dey bra da hook tod khichda hoyea bolea '  hye bhabhi tuhadey  mummey ..'
 'Kuttya meri nwi bra fad diti'  apney modeya tey latkdi bra wal vekhdi preet akhn kad di boli
 'Koi na  bra b  nwi lay dayounga'  bra khich ek passey sutda jeetu preet dey mummeya tey hath ferda bolea'  bs tusi kiran bhabhi bn roko .. '
 'Lucha ..' apney mummeya tey hath ferdey jeetu dey modey tey mukka mardi preet akhan matkandi boli' Askey tere kr e lyi fer .. tun kiran bhabhi nangi' 
 'Ajay kithey ajay tan kachi lahni a'  hath agey kar lak ton kachi fad thalley krn di kosis karda jeetu us wal   vekh  apney bulln tey jeev ferda  bolea 
 'Nyi nyi   'ek dum apni hik nu hathn ch luko jameen tey beithdi preet  jeetu wal vekh   haukey lendi kiran bn boli' naa kr .... tenu rabb da vasta jeetu... eh galat a ....'


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Kaim update kavi ji preet di banu rail hun
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o yaar etki fr ni scean leanda poorraa...... kavita ji ki karde o yaar...... masa masa maja ana shuru e hoea c k tuhada update muk gea....not fair yaar.... we need a big update....... but thanks for this update..... expecting new update sooner then this one...
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Good update
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Bahut ee kaim update... swad aa gea padke
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hmmmm....not bad....
JEETU jyada hi tez ho gya PREET de naal rah rah ke.....naah KIRAN da le riha ...par enjoy PREET naal ki ker riha .....bas show nhi hon de riha.....
bahut sohne.....m loving it....
bahut wadiya WRITER ho tussi ma'am....swaad aa janda story pad ke....
keep going KAVI ma'am...
keep writing
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Hyeee oyeee...crww update kavita madm...thuk la k
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 'Kuttya meri nwi bra fad diti'  apney modeya tey latkdi bra wal vekhdi preet akhn kad di boli
 'Koi na  bra b  nwi lay dayounga'  josh ch madmast hunda jeetu  bra khich ek passey sutt preet dey mummeya tey hath ferda bolea'  bs tusi kiran bhabhi bn roko .. '
 'Lucha ..' apney mummeya tey hath ferdey jeetu dey modey tey mukka mardi preet akhan matkandi boli' Askey tere kr e lyi fer .. tun kiran bhabhi nangi' 
 'Ajay kithey ajay tan kachi lahni a'  hath agey kar lak ton kachi fad thalley krn di kosis karda jeetu  behkda hoyea us wal   vekh  apney bulln tey jeev ferda  bolea 
 'Nyi nyi   'ek dum apni hik nu wahhn ch luko jameen tey beithdi preet  jeetu wal vekh   haukey lendi kiran bn boli' naa kr .... tenu rabb da vasta jeetu... eh galat a ....'

 'Kuch galat nyi bhabhi ..' preet dey samney jameen tey beith jeetu usdey nangey goddey tey hath rakh usdean akhn ch vekhda bolea'  tusi awen dr rahey o ...'
 'Nyi jeetu'  ekethi jehi ho apney app nu lukondi preet edn mintan krn lgi jiven o nyi kiran  jeetu samney beithi usdean  mintan krdi jovey...' mein kadi kisi hor naal... soch b  nyi sakdi ..'

 'Mein koi hor thori haan ..' preet da godda ghut pattan vichkar kachi ch ubri hoyi fudi nu vekh besabra ho   jeetu bolea'  tuhada apna jeetu ..'
' luchha ..kutta ... bhabhi chaud ...' akhn kad jeetu wal vekhdi vekhdi has pyi preet 
 'Ki hoyea'  preet nu galln kad hasdi vekh jeetu b puchda puchda hass pya

 'Hor ki .. ' eni thand ch nangi kr menu khunjey   laa beitha gallan kri janda '  thand nal kambdi ekethi jehi hundi preet boli'
 'Oh hun fer  ' apney samney bina kapdeya ton preet nu  thand nal kambdi vekh jeetu kuch sochda bolea
 'Fer ki chuk k lay ja manjey tey ..' akhan matkandi preet hasdi goyi boli'  eni ku tan jaan honi tere ch k bhabhi chuk majey tey sutt lawey ..  '
Akhan matka bharwatey chuk sharart ch  muskurandi   hoyi preet nu gaur nal vekhdey hoye jeetu ney jad us nu goddi chukeya ... usdean wahan ch machldi preet ney jad usdey modeya nu dhaka mar utarn di kosis kiti apney aap nu sambhlda  jeetu bdi muskil nal khada hunda bolea' ki krdey o bhabhi dig jayoungey ...'
 ' tenu ki lagda kiran didi tere gall ch wahan paa jhotey lendi jayougi manjey wal ..'jeetu wal vekh  chehkdi preet uchi uchi hasdi apney pairr patkdi boli'   'ena saukhi nyi bhabhi tikani... o b kiran didi wargi ...
 'Tikayounga b bajyounga b  'puri jaan laa preet nu  chuk manjey tey lija jeetu usdey  pairaan ch ulji salwaar lah ek passey sutda bolea' hun tan deni e paini...bs tusi kiran bhabhi bn sath deo'  
'nyi jeetu eh theek nyi ...' majey dey dujey passey utardi preet jeetu wal vekhdi boli'  mein tenu vohat changa sau sharif samjdi c pr tun ..'
 'Mein tan hun b sau tey sharif'  preet di wanh fad usnu manjey tey khich jeetu usda hath apney akadey lun tey rakhda bolea'  bs eh  apni pattoley  wargi bhabhi  nu ekeli  ghar ch  vekh kharaab ..'
 'Oye hoye  'jeetu da kadak lun fad ghut preet  hasdi hoyi boli'  j kiran didi di jagah koi hor pind di bhabhi hundi usney tera eda motta vekh  aap e kehna c koi na deora aa ja jhoot lay  bhabhi di peeng da jhoota  ...' kuch der chup reh akhn matkandi fer boli preet' pr kiran didi na ji na o nyi edan di ..'

 'Vich na bolo'  preet dey moddey fad besabra hoyea jeetu usnu manjey tey lami panda  siskda hoyea bolea

 'Theek theek'  jeetu wal vekh apna hath usdey lun ton prey krdi preet apney bulln tey ungl rakh boldi boldi chup kr gyi'  hun nyi boldi'  
 'Nyi nyi chup nyi .. kiran bhabhi bn k bolo'  preet upr jhukda jeetu apney bechain hundey sah kabu krda bolea 
 'Chad menu jeetu ..' apni hik nu wahan ch  luko machldi hoyi preet jeetu thalleyo nikln di kosis krdi  apna munh dujey passey krdi boli'  vekh jeetu meri gal mn lay mein edan di nyi ...tun jaa! 
'Eni sohni bhabhi nu rat ekeli chad kidan  jaawan'  preet dey dono hath fad usdi hik   nangi kr mummey nu niharda jeetu aukha jeha sah lay siskar uthea 
 'Nyi ..'puri jaan la jeetu nu prey nu dhakeldi preet  manjey tey sar patkdi gussey ch awaz kadak krdi boli'  chad menu jeetu' 
 'Bda jor a tuhadey ch bhabhi'  ek baar tan digda digda bachea jeetu jiven jaan la  preet ney usnu prey krn lyi dhakka marea 
 
 'Jad kudi ney na deni hovey fer jor tan .. ' jeetu wal vekh akhan matkandi boldi boldi hass pyi preet  'kiran didi tan hay b mere ton  tagri ... hor na kitey dhaka krn lgey kutt kha k aa jaawin ..'

 'Hun chahey juttia marey chahey ... ' pura jor la preet nu apney thalley npn di kosis krda jeetu apni latt usdean lattn tey rakh apna munh usdi hik tey rakhda bolea  'aj tan chaudni e chaudni a kiran bhabhi 

 'Nyiiiii'  jeetu da sar fad apni huk ton dur krdi preet manjey tey lattan patkdi usnu dhakka  dindi cheekdi boli  'kadi b nyi ....'
 'Bs aj di raat'  ahh bhar jeetu preet dey mummya vich apna munh luko hath usdey dhid tey  ferda machl uthea
 'Nyi jeetu eh nyi ..' apni kachi andr hath pandey jeetu nu rokdi preet had bdandi boli  ' eh tun ki kr riha jeetu mein kdi soch b nyi ..'
 'Ki nyi'  bechain ho  bhij k chikni hoyi preet di fudi di lakeer ragarda jeetu usdean akhn ch vekhda bolea'  menu pta tuhada b dil kr riha' 
 'Nyi mera nyi dil kr riha'  jeetu di ungl apney pattan ch ghutdi preet hauka lendi boli'  mein tere naal nayi ..'
 'Kyoun nyi bhabhi ..   'preet da mumma munh ch lay chungda jeetu fudi  andr  ungl pa holi holi hilanda ankhn chuk uswal vekhda bolea 


 'Ufff jeetu..' lak upr nu chukdi preet hath agey kr jeetu da lun fad ghut k masaldi hoyi boli  'mere ton nyi hor kiran didi bnkey natak kr hunda .. paa dey hun' 
 'Bs thori der hor ..' preet di fudi ch ungl andr nu dhakda siskar uthea jeetu'  bs thori der hor kiran bhabhi bn  roko... jid karo ...bda mja aa riha ..'
'Lucha'  jeetu di ungl apni fudi ch ghut siskian lendi preet hasdi hoyi boli'  aap b tan nanga ho .. ki pta tera nanga motta lamba sapp vekh o mn'  ..
 'Ohhh' kurta lah ek passey sutda jeetu kahli kahli ch apney pjamey da nala kholda bolea... ' hun chahey mney chahey na mney andar tan dhakna e a' 

 'Kapdey kyoun jeetu ..' jeetu wal vekh kiran bn hath jordi preet mintan krdi boli  'na jeetu eh na kr..'
 'Bas ek baar bhabhi'  apna kacha lah preet da hath apney khadey  lun tey rakh ghutda bolea'  vekho kinna bechain a tuhadey andr jaan lyi ..'
 'Nyi mein nyi laina ...'apna hath prey krdi preet gussey nal jeetu wal vekhdi boli'  j tun mere nal jabardasti ...  mein tere veerey nu ..'



'Ohhhh'  bhabhi nu eni jaan la rokdi jid kr    inder di dhamki dindi sun pta nyi kyoun usdi  pkd dhili ho gyi ...hairaan hoyi preet jeetu wal vekh ek dum boli'  ki hoyea..!'
 'O o..' preet di lak tey ulji kachi wal vekh jeetu  apna sah niglda bolea   'menu lagea'  j unha ney veerey nu das ..'
 'Yaar o tan rokugi e . . dhamki b dayougi ...gussey b hoyougi... darayougi b tenu..' jeetu dey moddey fad preet usnu apney upr khichdi boli  'eh tan tere tey a hun kidan nangi krda  '  .. 'pehli baar koi hor unha di marji ton  bina ... kosis tan karugi e rokan di' jeetu nu chup vekh usda lun hath ch fad ghutdi hasdi hoyi boli' hun ad vichkar rukeya b tan kehra unha da gussa ghat jana  ..o b nangi tun b nanga...  hun tan eh soch lattan kidan kholnea apni  kiran bhabhi dean' 
 'Hun nyi rukda hun tan andr pa k e hatunga kiran bhabhi dey......'chehkda hoyea jeetu preet dey hath tey lun da gassa marda bolea
 'Eh kiti nal gal . ' Jeetu wal vekh preet usdey modey fad prey nu krdi boli'  kiran didi ney tan edan e  nakhrey karney ... j tun nap sakda tan nap lay ..'
 'Napuga b tey unha di fudi ch dhakunga b'  manjey tey machldi preet dean lattan fad usdey pairan kol beith khich thalley kr  nangi  fudi nu vekh machlda hoyea usdey goddey vakh krn lga jeetu  
 'Ahh jeetu teria mintan krdi haan na kr'  kiran bn awaz kad di preet  apnia lattan jod jeetu nu patt kholan ton rokdi boli'  mein kadi soch b nyi sakdi mein  kisi hor nu ...ahhh chad menu..'
 'Uff bhabhi kyoun jid kardey o  'preet di fudi  dey vakh hoye dono  gilley chikney bullan wal vekh jeetu usdey pairr fad vakh krn di kosis krda bolea' mn jayo na ...'

 
 'Ki hoyea... ' apni lat nal lat lapet puri jaan la jeetu nu  apney pair  kholn ton rokdi  preet sar chuk jeetu wal vekhdi hasdi usnu cherdi  boli  'bs eni ku jaan a' 
 'Lattan kholo na'  preet dey dono pair fad vakh krn di kosis krda jeetu  machalda chehkda  hoyea bolea

 'Tenu ki lagda tun kahunga tey kiran didi tere agey lattan khol dayougi ...' 'jeetu wal vekh apni lat tey rakh puri jaan la jeetu nu apney pair vakh krn ton rokdi  preet hasdi hoyi fer  usnu cherdi boli'  la jor ... j khulwa sakda tan ..'
 'Ufff ...bhabhi..' dono pair fad jad b vakh krda  jeetu preet usnu tang krdi tarsandi  mud  pairr jod lendi
 'Waisey jeetu ..' jeetu wal vekh  preet akhan matkandi boli'  j kiran didi lattan na b khulugi kam tan tun fer b unha da khich sakda
 'Kidan'  preet dey pair fad vakh krn di kosis krda jeetu bekabu hoyea bolea
 'Ja vey ena b nyi pta .. udan kehnda dhakey naal leni a bhabhi di'  jeetu  nu cherdi preet hasdi hoyi boli'  dono pair chuk goddey unha di hik nal laa dey  ..  ... apey kiran didi di khudd tere agey aa jani .. fer bina der kitey  dhak devin apna eh funkarda sapp..'



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Kavita ji EK ghalti story bhi start kro
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NICE UPDATE MOST CREATIVE WRITER IN THIS SECTION
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Beautyfull loveyl fantastic love you kavita
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Kavita ji update Tan vdiya but thoka thukai jyada leyao
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Crww e story a yrr...kina mrji pdlo bore ni hunda bnda
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Wah kya story chal ryi aa mam siraae aa
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nice update....
PREET da character sab toh jyada pasand aaya....KAMAL bhabhi chete krwa ditti (RISHTYA DI CHAAV wali) ........ KAVI ma'am.....
personally,mera favorite character hai es story da .......
ek taah enni detail ch scene create krde ho maza aa janda pad ke...bahut sohne
bahut wadiya likhde ho ....
keep going ma'am
keep writing
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If I could I would confer a PhD to you for your skilful and in depth writing. It is far more exciting to read the dialogues than actual act itself. Kudos to you.
God bless you.
Quite a big part of your story RDChaya is on my desktop. I wish I had the whole. If it is there on some site please let me know. 

Thanks
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Siraaa...... swaad aa geya
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Att galbaat
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att kara ti kavita ji.... thanks for those update........ waiting for more please update.....
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