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Adultery काले लंड और गोरी चुत की कहानिया - Interracial Thoughts (with pictures)
Bahot hi Sandar story hai
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(29-10-2020, 10:27 PM)Abstar Wrote: Bhai aisa disappoint mt ho yaha kafi readerd hai jo comment ni krte jst lyk me lekin mai yeh ni chahta ki comment ke karan koi accha writer apni story close kr de toh sbse phle toh sry n bhai plz story band mt krna ho skta hai abhi tumhe jdya comments na aaye lekin tum bht acche writer ho n jald hi people will understand this n bhai rahi appreciate ya criticize krne ki baat toh ho sake toh story ko alg alg post krna ek hi thread me itni sari stories bht se logo ko smj ni aati agr me meri baat karu toh mjhe jyoti n thn ragini n sakib ki stry bht acchi lgi toh agr tum use n haa kala kutta bhi acchi bs vo yogesh wali theek thak hai n bro tum na thoda build up do characters ko thoda background batao thoda unki feelings batao sb kuch start kise hua yeh batao direct ghapa ghap ko log jdya appreciate ni krte log aate hai pdhte hai hilate hai n chale jate hai comments ni krte toh mai toh aapko yahi suggest krunga ki aap yeh thread mai ragini ki story n jyoti ki story complete krke ek nai story likhna jo ki ek hi story ho n us story ko aise likhna ki sb ke dimag ka bhosada ho jaye n jitni mine tumhari writing dekhi hai toh mje yahi lgta hai ki u can do it. U can write a masterpiece ek legendary story jo hoti hai na woh aap likh skte ho bs please disappoint mt ho people will understand n likhna mt chodo request hai meri aapse agr tumko yeh thread band krna hai toh thk hai bt i will definitely wait for ur next story

Thank you bhai.. Ek comment bhi dil khush kar deti hai.. 


Mai kal udas tha, isliye wo sab likha maine.. And thanks for the suggestion..

Mai sirf short story likhne wala banda hu.. Har story ke liye alag thread banana mere bas ki baat nahi aur nahi mai un thread ko sambhal paunga.. 

Mai tumhare suggestion ko dhyan me rakhke character development pe jyada kaam karunga.

Mai expert nahi hu kahaniyo me, so jo dimag me aata hai wo mai yaha likh deta hu..

Thank you for your kind words. I'll keep posting new updates and sorry for my previous post.  Heart
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(30-10-2020, 08:41 AM)masterchef Wrote: Bahot hot ??

Thank you bhai.. thanks
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(30-10-2020, 08:42 AM)masterchef Wrote: Bahot hi Sandar story hai

Thank you so much. Namaskar
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Bahut hi achchi thread thi. Thank you.
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Yar itny pharroooo gifs kaha say dhoond kay laty hooon ???? Yar boobs me say doodh (milk) nikalny waly gifs aur story likho plz plz plz
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Next update kb aey ga?
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(30-10-2020, 05:08 PM)Adnan Shokir Wrote: Bahut hi achchi thread thi. Thank you.

Thank you bhai..
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(31-10-2020, 03:43 PM)flash speed 321 Wrote: Yar itny pharroooo gifs kaha say dhoond kay laty hooon ???? Yar boobs me say doodh (milk)  nikalny waly gifs aur story likho plz plz plz

Kuch gif online mil jaate hai, aur baaki ke mai khud banata hu..

Thank you for suggestions. Par milk wale videos honge to bata na, mai gif aur story dono bana dunga.Tongue
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(31-10-2020, 05:56 PM)hirarandi Wrote: Next update kb aey ga?

Kal tak ek chhota update de dunga.. Ab kahaniyo ko alag alag na likh ke ek hi pal mai ek story khatm karke dusri story likhne ka socha hai..Hope, you'll like it
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(31-10-2020, 09:48 PM)Silverstone93 Wrote: Kal tak ek chhota update de dunga.. Ab kahaniyo ko alag alag na likh ke ek hi pal mai ek story khatm karke dusri story likhne ka socha hai..Hope, you'll like it

Intezar rahega bhai
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(24-10-2020, 02:32 AM)Silverstone93 Wrote:
संजना की संगत : 

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Sanjana Bhabhi aur Driver Hari 

Maalik ko office chhodkar Hari turant ghar aata tha aur apni malkin ki seva me lag jaata tha...
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Aapne jo shuruvaat ke 2-3 images dale hai th e evil.ki kahani ya chodke kya bakike kahaniyo ka naam bata sakte hai kya aap
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Specially sanjay aur rohini ki romanchak honeymoon, mummy driver ke saath aur sanjana ki sangat ye asal mein konsi kahaniyan hai please naam bataye
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(31-10-2020, 10:58 PM)vigkad7891 Wrote: Aapne jo shuruvaat ke 2-3 images dale hai th e evil.ki kahani ya chodke kya bakike kahaniyo ka naam bata sakte hai kya aap

Iss thread ki shurwat maine isliye ki thi ki THE EVIL ki mast stories ke kuch scenes leke pics dalu..

So, pehle kuch updates unhi ke stories se liye hai. Baaki ki sare stories maine tayyar ki hai..
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(31-10-2020, 11:00 PM)vigkad7891 Wrote: Specially sanjay aur rohini ki romanchak honeymoon, mummy driver ke saath aur sanjana ki sangat ye asal mein konsi kahaniyan hai please naam bataye

Ye koi kahaniya nahi hai.. Ye mere dimag ki upaj hai.. 

Lekin aap chahe to in kirdaro pe nayi story likh sakte ho. Big Grin
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Kya bhai ispe aap short kahaani aaram se bana shakte ho..meri request hai aapse ki aap ispe kahaani banaiye jyada bada nahi kamse kam 10-20 update tak
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Bhai update do yr
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Ragini apne ghar ke kam me lagi hui thi..

Manjiri : Mom.. Mai ja rahi hu..

Ragini : Are beta breakfast to kar ke jaa.

Manjiri : Bahot der ho gayi hai..

Ragini : Are sun..

Manjiri tezi ke sath ghar se nikal jati hai..

Ye thi Ragini ki jindagi. 44 saal ki ye housewife. Inki jawani apne bachho ko sambhalane me hi chali gayi..

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Iska pati IPS officer tha. Lekin 6 mahine pehle ek car accident me unki maut ho gayi.. Pati ne achha paisa kamaya tha aur pension alag..

Kisi cheez ki kami nahi thi.

Beti Manjiri (25) ko fashion ka shauk tha aur usne ek men's clothing store khola tha .

Beta Manish (21) ko singing ka shauk tha. Wo chala gaya Mumbai.. Ek bade idol show me uska selection bhi ho gaya hai..

Aur kya chahiye ek maa ko.. Khushiyo se ghar bhara pada tha..  

Ragini : Ye Manish bhi na.. Jab se Mumbai gaya hai, isko wakt bhi nahi milta apni maa se baat karne ke liye?

Tabhi door bell bajti hai aur Ragini darwaja kholti hai.

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Ragini : Are aap...Aaiye na..

Shakib muskurate hue ghar me dakhil hota hai.

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Ragini : Ji.. Wo aapne kaha tha na ki aap dophar ko aayenge..

Shakib : Oh sorry.. Fir mai jaata hu..

Ragini : Are nahi.. Mere kehne ka matlab wo nahi tha..

Shakib : Haha.. Mai majak kar raha tha, Ragini Ji.. Akele bore ho raha tha,to socha ki dophar ki jagah abhi aap ke hatho ki chai pi leta hu..

Ragini : Hehe.. Aap bhi na.. Bahut majakiya ho..

Shakib ab Ragini ko achhe se nihar raha tha.. Uski saari uske bade bade chucho ko chupa nahi paa rahi thi.. Uske bade chucho ke beech ki kali lakeer Shakib ke lund me harkat karane ke liye laage thi..

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Ragini : Aap baithiye. Mai chai leke aati hu...

Shakib : Ragini Ji.. dudh jyada dalna.. Mujhe aapke dudh ki chai pini hai..

Bholi Ragini ko iss double meaning ka matlab pata nahi chala..

Ragini : Shakib Ji...Aap pehli baar ghar aaye ho, mai aisi chai banaungi ki aap chakhte reh jaoge... hehe

Shakib : Ji..  Fir to mujhe aapke dudh ki chai chakhni padega...

Ragini : Ji Jarur..

Ragini kitchen ki taraf jaane lagti hai.. Shakib ab uski gori peeth aur badi gaand ko niharne lagta hai..

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Jaise uski nazar uski kamseen kamar par padi uski juban bahar aa gayi..

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Ragini jab tak kitchen me ghusti nahi tab tak Shakib ki nazar uski kamar par hi thi..
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Bht badhiya update bhai aise hi dhree dhree story aage badhao bs ur update thode bade do baki story toh acchi hai dhree dhree seduction karo maja dugna ho jayega story ka
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