[RajuRajesh]

Excellent Super Going Keep Rock An Waiting Kajal Family

[RajuRajesh]

Super Story

[Srinu143]

Super update bro ...good narration ..try to give big update...add images also which will highlight the story

[Harries1]

Hello friends, 

As this is my first thread there can be spelling mistakes and few mistakes on narration.


Let me know your opinions

[Ranjith27]

Excellent update

[Harries1]

There will be a big update for the weekend. 

Who's waiting?

[Harries1]

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[Harries1]

Guys tell your opinions so that I can improve writing

[Harries1]

Superb update keep going like this...

Krish phone shalini room lo vundanga mogindhi:

krish ki oka sarega gunda agenantha pane airndhi. ventana pocket loninchi phone silent lo peti bed medha nundi legichi malle curtain vanakaleke valadu. 



phone ring ki krish bed medha nundi sudden ga lechi sareke shalini ki melukuva vochindhi... shalini mellaga lechi thanu "abba entha manchi dream... em forplay chasadu dream lo, cha nijam life lo kuda evedu anna ela chastha bagundu" anukundhi. thanu water tagadaneke kindhanke vallidhi.





apudu krish vadi friend pavan ki call casadu

krish: enti ra!! manchi time lo phone chasav

pavan: anta chala sapu aiendhi velli inka raledhu ane call chasara

krish: aa gopa pana chasav la lanja na kodaka

pavan: enduku ra antha kopam ga vunav em aiendhi

krish: aaaaa na madda aiendhi, emledhu la phone silent lo patukola rowdie ki thalistha problem aiedhi ane 

pavan: ayooo sorry ra 

krish: sarla, enthaki thana room ekada

pavan: 1st floor right side 2nd room ra 

krish: ha sarla vasthanu la tondaraga

Eka thanake mood poee malle rowdies legistha problem aiedhi ane chinnaga room door dhagaraku veladu. shalini water kosam kindhaki vallindhi. floor lo evaru leru edha right time ane dhanya room lo ki valataneke try chasadu. a door just gade pate vundhi lock ledhu, hamayya anukone krish lopaliki veladu akada dhanya oka sofa lo kurchoni vundhi. krish ni chudam galna dhanya krish ni hug chasukone edustundhi.






krish thana kannelu thudeche dharyam chapadu. 

krish: eka kadhu la dhanya nanu vunanuga pavan bhayata wait chasthunadu pada eka veldham 

dhanya: sara krish, vokka nimisham ane (thanu money and gold sardhuthundi)


dhanya manchi tee shirt and night pant vasukundi. aa dress lo dhane shapulu dhane sizlu antha kane pisthundhi, krish manasulo "abba ee pavan gadu manchi kathi lanti figure ni patadu" anukunadu. dhanya antha sardhukone "krish nanu ready eka veldhama" ane adegendhi






krish dhanne chudatam ape "ha veldham pada" ane chiinaga kindhaku fence wall dhaka vocharu. dhanya eka leka pothundhi, apudu krish "aa dhnaya nanu help chasthanu ga ane dhanne ethukunadu" ala ethukunatapudu dhane bayalu dhane pirralu baga pisikadu. dhanya last to koncham piki valalaka pothundhi. apudu krish "dhanne pisakadaneke edha last time" anukone vade rondu chatulatho dhane rondu pirlni tosthunatu build up estunadu but baga pisukuthunadu. inka last ki bhayatake vochasaru.








Next day early morning krish valedhareke pelli chasadu. vallani rishi(krish father) dagareke thisuku vastunadu. Office dagarake vochi krish rishi ki call chasadu.

krish: hi dad

rishi: hi ra, whats up

krish: dad ma friend ki pelli chasanu, ne blessings kavale

rishi: well done my boy!! thats my son

krish: thanks dad, actually i am in the office, oka 2 minutes lo ne mundhu vunta 

rishi: ok ra come

krish: ok dad, bye



In the office rishi dad with his secretry:

[harries5]

this is good

[Harries1]

Hi friends, 

I got a problem. All my replays are going to one page and i cannot see remaining replays. 


How to create new pages in threads? Please help me so that I can give next updates.

[RajuRajesh]

Super Story

[Ranjith27]

Excellent update

[Tom cruise]

continue please

[sandhya bharath]

Bagundi bro

[Ranjith27]

Excellent update

[ramd420]

Nice idea
If possible please post in తెలుగు

[Thimmappa]

Telugu

[Siva199216]

Super continue

[Harries1]

Nice idea
If possible please post in తెలుగు

Hello guys,


I cannot write in Telugu format. Don't have the tools. If I write it in Telugu it will take a long time. I cannot give updates regularly.


I hope you understand that.