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যৌন উত্তেজক মা এবং অন‍্যান‍্যরা
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(05-01-2020, 07:42 AM)Wtf99 Wrote: Apnar narration, setting, characters, dialogue oshadharon hoyechilo er ager update gula porjonto but ei notun character like baper friend, notun setting ba situation konotai ager update gular moto kinky ba hot hocche na. Ekta bhikhari bhikkha chaite eshe ek dobka milf teacher er buker dudh kheye gelo tari bashaye, college er bura peon classroom e drja janala bondho kore oi collegeer er respected teacher er dudh kochle kochle khelo ar tiplo, train e ek bura gorib stranger, train er conductor ar arek bhotka bura lok eki raat ek respected family er bouer dudh pet bhore kheyeo shesh korte parlo na. Prottekta scenario super creative, weirdly fun, kinky ar prochondo exciting. Ar ebarer gula? Shei same old adultery clichéd baper lompot friend ar tar friend ra ekta party te ma ke chudbe? How the fuck is it exciting? I don't wanna sound begatuve or rude man but im your story's oldest and biggest fan. Apni erokm ekbar ei update gula fiye praye ek bochor kono update denni. Ei notun arc ta interestibg na ektuo. Oi purono low class weird character ar kinky kinky breastfeeding scenario te ferot jan. If you need help with ideas. I'll help as best as I can if you want. Thsnks for restarting uour mastetpiece of a story sgain. Just change the characters start anew with a new arc.

Bujhlam.
Tobe Erokom episode thakbe majhe Majhe. 
Eguloo oneke khub pochondo kore.
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#23
(04-01-2020, 09:34 PM)Panuostad Wrote: Apni ei part gulo ki kothay upload koreche keu Milki mom name Bolte parben ?? 
Kon site e ??

এই সাইটেই সম্ভবত। আমার কাছে হয়তো পিডিএফ আছে কিন্তু খূব ভালো ভাবে পোস্ট করতে পারিনি। আপনি  চাইলে নিতে পারেন। কিন্তু পাঠাব কিভাবে তা বলবেন।
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#24
আজকেই বাকিটুকু দিন তারপর না হয় গল্পের গতি ঘোরাবেন।
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#25
Bro apni ekhono update ta dilen na. Abar ki hariye jaben?
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#26
কোথায় পানুওস্তাদ?
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#27
কি আর গল্প পাওয়া যাবে না?
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#28
গল্পটি তাহলে থামিয়েই দিলেন?
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#29
আর শুরু হবে না?
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#30
খগঢতথথ
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#31
এই পর্বটা শেষ করলাম‌। ব‍্যস্ত থাকি খুব। মেডিক‍্যাল স্টুডেন্ট।
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#33
Kemon lagche ?
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#34
আপনার গল্প বেশ ভালো লাগে। আপডেট এত ছোট, প্লিজ বেশি করে দিন।
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#35
।।কগগগঙণ
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#36
(13-10-2020, 04:00 PM)Panuostad Wrote: ।।কগগগঙণ

??
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#37
(13-10-2020, 04:00 PM)Panuostad Wrote: ।।কগগগঙণ

Apni ki paglaye gesen naki?
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