Adultery PERVERT - BABAN

[Baban]

Aurton ki deemag ke sath... Ya yeh bolna sahi hoga ke ek Maa ki deemag ke sath khelna , usko dominate aur control karna Dadaji ko acchey se ataa tha ..... Uski example khud meri mummy thi . 

1-jo Aurat apne sasural apni beemar sasuma ko milney aayi thi ....... Ekdin usi sasuma ko meri Maa murder karney jaa rahi thi takiye se ... Apne Sasur ki baat maanke, 

2-jis Pati ko woh pyar karti thi aur khayal rakhti thi..... Usi Pati ko Maa Namard bolkey apaman kar rahi thi ... Yeh bhi Dadaji ke kehene par... Aur aaj usi pati ke baju mein sulaake usi patni ko..... Ufff

3- jis betey ko ek Maa sabse zyada pyar aur kgayal rakhti thi ... Usi betey ko ignore karke woh maa apne sasur ka khayal zyada rakhti hai .yahan tak ki usi betey ke presence mein uski Maa ke sath bathroom mein sex tak kiya hai unhone. 

4- Apne bahu ko khud hi apney past ke sab khatarnak kand ke barein mein batate hai. Aur apne sasur ki insab murder, abuse , conspiracy ke barein mein pata hote hue bhi woh bahu chup hai.... Apne pati ko kuch nahi bataati.... Balki usi Sasur ka Sath deti hai. 

Ek Aurat ke under ki hawas ko kis tarah bahaar laya jata hai is mamley mein Dadaji jaise Gyaani the. Sirf un Aurat ko Dadaji use hi nahi karte the ... Balki un aurton ki pavitrata ko maar ke unke under ke shaitaan ko jaga dete the . jo meri Maa ke sath bhi hua. Aaj meri maa khud apne pati ko dawai dekey sasur ke sath aish kar rahe hai . 

Dadaji boltey hai : ahhhh... Ahhhh sabash bahu.... Tum sab kuch seekh gayi ho.... Bahut khub... Ahhhh.... 

Mummy: ahhh.. Ahhhh.. Ufffff ... Itney fin se aapke is Lund ko le rahi hu... Par pata nahi kyun harbaar lagta hai ke pehelibaar le rahi hun... Ahhhh... Kitna baraa hai.... Pet ke under tak chala jata hai... Ahhhh.....

Dadaji : bahu .... Tumhara yeh sasur ka Lund ko tumhari Saasuma ek din bhi thik se nahi le payi..... Ekbar puraa dala tha toh sali behush ho gayi thi..... Ekbar bhi sali ko chodkey woh maza aya hi nahi..... Kaash..... Mujhey uswaqt tum milti.... Ahh

Mummy haskey : Babuji... Main toh tab paida bhi nahi hui thi.....

Dadaji : haan bahu..... Lekin tumhari Maa toh thi..... Tumko dekhke hi pata chalta hai.... Tumhari Maa bhi zarur bahut khoobsurat rahi hogi.... ahhhh Kash uswaqt Samdhan ji mili hoti..

Mummy : ish ! babuji.... Bahut badmash hi aap..... 

Dadaji : woh toh hu...... Ahhh.. Ahhh.... Is umar mein jawan aurat ko chodney ka maza kaisa hota hai ... Yeh kya bolu bahu..... Is umar mein chodney ki chahat aur bar jataa hai. 

Mummy : ahhh.. Sshhh... Woh toh aapko dekhkey hi pata chalta hai..... Khudki Bahu ko bhi nahi chora aapne..... Ahhhhhh

Dadaji : betey ki biwi agar tum jaisi roop ki raani ho... Toh har Sasur Asur ban jayega... Hi.. Hi... Hi

Mummy aur dadaji is baat se hasney lagey . Mera deemag garam ho gaya . khas karke apni mummy pe. Udhar mere papa behush hokey parey hai... Aur idhar mummy Dadaji ke saath mazak masti kar rahe hai aur Has rahi hai ! 

Apni Maa pe bahut gyssa aya us umar me hi. Main wapas aa gaya . bed pe jaakey papa ko pakar ke so gaya. Papa ki saasey chal rahi thi ... Bus isi wajah se lag raha tha ke woh zinda hai.. baaki puri tarah behush the. 

Subah jab neend khula tab dekha mummy kamrey mein nahi hai aur Papa tabhi bhi waise hi geheri neend mein soye hai. Tabhi mummy ayi aur mujhe bathroom jaane ko bolkey papa ko jagaane lagi . 

Mummy: কি হলো? ওঠো.. কতক্ষন ঘুমোবে?( kya hua? Utho... Kab tak soye rahoge?)

Papa ahistey se uthte hai . tabhi bhi bahut neend tha unke chehere pe . mummy papa ko bolti hai 

Mummy: itni der tak koi sota hai kya? Utho ab.

Waah Mummy wah ! Khud hi apne pati ko dawaai deti hai ... Aur ab kya acting kar rahi hai .. Waah! 

Papa kisi tarah uthke baithte hai . mummy ko bolte hai : pata nahi Latika .... Itna geheri neend kabhi nahi aya ab tak....bahut kamzori lag raha hai.. Abhi bhi bahut neend hai . 

Mummy : koi baat nahi... Main chaai la rahi hoon... Chai peene se neend chala jayega... Rohan tum bathroom jaon 

main bathroom se aane ke baad papa under jaate hai. Papa ke aane ke baad Mummy unko aur Dadaji ko chai deti hai aur khud bhi unke sath baithte hai .

Papa mummy aur mummy ke baju pe Dadaji . main agar chahta toh Dadaji ke paas baith sakta tha par main jakey papa ke paas baitha . papa ab thora fresh mehesoos kar rahe the par fir bhi thora kamzori thi unme. Dadaji ne papa ko aise dekhke poocha

Dadaji : kya hua Dipu? Thora kamzor lag raha hai.... Raat ko acchey se neend nahi aayi tujhko?

Papa haske bolte hai : nahi babuji... Theek iska Ulta ... Bahut neend ayi.... Itna ke abhi bhi thora .....

Yeh sunkey Dadaji tez nazar se mummy ke taraf dekha aur Mummy bhi dadaji ko dekhkar halki muskurayi aur chai peene lagi . main papa ke paas baithke apna khana khaney laga. 

Papa ne mummy ko poocha : Latika..... Itne din mere bina rehena para... Koi pareshani toh nahi hui..? Rihan ne zyada pareshan toh nahi kiya na betey?

Maine halka haskey nahi bola. Udhar Dadaji boley : arey nahi beta.... Bahu aur rohan ko koi Paredhani nahi hui .. Maine bahut khayal rakhha ... Kyu bahu ? 

Mummy thori muskurayi . Dadaji bolney lagey : Waise Bahu ne bhi mera babut khayal rakkha ...teri Maa toh yahan pe hai nahi.... Par teri Patni ne sab kaam akele samhalaa.... Teri Maa jaise mera khayal rakhti thi usse bhi bahut zyada bahu ne merakhyal rakkha.... Teri Maa ki kami mehesoos hi nahi hone di... Sach bolu toh teri Maa ki jagah bahu ne hi le li hai ....sach mein .... Kya biwi mili hai tujhe beta.

Papa ne is baat ko compliment samjha aur thora sharmaa gate .... Par udhar 2 log ek dusre ko dekhte hue papa ke majudgi mein hi ek dusre ko ghinoni nazar se dekh rahe the . Ab main samajhta hu ke Dadaji asal mein indirectly kya baat kar rahe the . 

Dopaher ko snan ke baad Main aur Papa sofe pe baith ke baat kar rahe the. Papa mere sath haste khelte hue baat kar rahe the . main bhi bahut khush thaa.... Tabhi Dadaji kuch pappers ke sath yahan aye aur papa ko boley

Dadaji : Dipu .. Zara sun

Papa: jee babuji ?

Dadaji: Zara in Papers pe sign kardey

Papa: yeh kaisi papaers hai babuji?

Dadaji : yeh .. Woh.. Main soch raha tha ke mere properties ka kaam ko lekar thora progress karkey rakkhu.... Ab umaar ho rahi hai.... Isliye ab samay  aa gaya he ke in saab baaton ko clear karkey rakkhu.... Tum sab toh yahan rehete nahi ho.... Is liye zarurat pari toh tumhara sign kahan se launga? Isliye pehele se hi tera sign lekar rakh raha hu... Taaki baad mein problems hi naa ho....

Papa : ohhh.. Accha... 

Dadaji : le.... Yahan pe .... Yahan pe aur yahan pe sign karde zara.

Papa: Dijiye...

Papa Ne dadaji ke kehene par jahan jahan Dadaji ne bola wahan pe sign kar diya. Papa ko ek pal ke liye bhi koi doubt nahi hua.... Kyu hoga ? Apne pitaaji pe kaun beta shaq karega? Apne pitaji aur Maa pe hi toh ek santan sabse zyada biswas karta hai fir baaki ke log.  Isliye bina kuch sochey papa ne blank papers pe sign kar diya. Aur papa ko pata bhi nahi chala kitna baraa galti kar diya unhone. Dadaji un papers ko lekar chaley gaye . Maine sab aankhon ke samney dekha par us umaar mein un sab official matters ko samajh pana mere liye impossible tha .. Isliye maine zyada dhyan nahi diya .

Fir khaney ke baad papa mummy aur main dopaher ko thori der chad pe jaakey ghumney lagey . kuch der baad Dadaji ne bhi humko join kiya. Papa meujhe godi mein lekey idhar udhar ghum rahe the... Shayad is ghar se juri hui apni bachpan ko yaad kar rahe thei. Aur udhar Mummy akeley ghum rahi thi lekin Dadaji akaar seedha mummy ke paas hi gayi . Main mummy ko dekh raha tha . Dadaji jakar mummy ke paas khari ho gayi aur mummy ke kandhey pe haat rakkha . Mummy ghumke dadaji ko dekhkar muskurayi . fir Dadaji ne Mummy ke kaan pe kuch bola . mujhey kuch sunai nahi diya par jo bhi bola woh sunkey mummy hauraan ho gayi aur fir unke chehere pe khusi jhalak ne lagi . mummy bahut khush thi dadaji je baat se . Dadaji ne papa ke taraf point karke ishara karkey mummy ko kuch dikhaya . Dadaji ne mummy ko signing ka ishara karkey dikhaya jaise papa ne un papaer pe sign kiya tha . mummy ke chehre pe khusi aur bar gayi . fir dadaji mummy ke paaa jaane lagey toh mummy ne unko rok diya aur papa ke taraf ishara kiya ke papa yahin pe hai . isliye Dadaji ruk gaye aur uswaqt ke liye wahan se chalkey dur ghumney lagey . fir hum wapas kamre mein aa gaye .

Baaki ka din normally guzraa. Lekin jo Raat thi ... Woh raat humare jeevan ki sabsey kharap raat thi . Papa shayad us Raat ko kabhi nahi bhul payenge. Aur yeh sab hua mere ek harkat ke wajah se .

Raat ko dinner ka time ho gaya . Mummy dining table pe khana laga rahi thi . main mummy ke paas hi tha . dadaji bhi akaar mummy ke paas khare ho gaye . maine dekha Mummy jab papa ki khaney ki plate ko rakh rahi thi tab Fish ki plate ko haat mein lekar ekbar dadaji ko dikhaya ... Fir mummy us plate ko papa ke khaney ke jagah rakh diya . Dadaji samajh gaye ke  fish ki plate mein dawai mix kiya gaya hai . Main bhi un dono ka expression dekhkey itna samjha ke us plate mein kuch garbar hai . fir mummy Papa ko bulaane kamre mein gayi aur Dadaji gaye hand wash karney . main uswaqt akela tha dining table ke paas . 

Pata nahi mujhey kya hua.... Mujhey laga Papa ko yeh fish nahi khaana chahiye isliye papa ke plate ki fish ko maine  main jo fish curry ki patila tha jahan aur bhi fish cook karkey rakha gaya tha wahan pe rakh diya aur wahin se do fish lekey papa ke plate mein rakh diya .Peheli baar aisa kuch galat karke mujhe darr , thrill ghabrahat guilty bahut kuch mehesoos ho raha tha . fir sab aa gaye dinner karney . Dinner karte waqt main mummy papa dadaji sabko dekh raha tha. 

Papa araam se dinner kar rahe the ... Lekin Mummy aur Dadaji khatey khatey papa ko hi dekh rahe the. Khaney ke baad papa unglian chat rahe the aur Dadaji mummy ko papa ke taraf ishara karkey muskura rahe the ... Aur mummy bhi apne sasur ko dekhkar has rahi thi . Lekin sirf main jantaa tha ke papa ko ab koi khatra nahi hai . 

Raat ko hum Dadaji ko goodnight bolkey soney ke liye aa gaye . main papa ko pakar ke so gaya . Halaki main sabse zyada close apni Maa ke sath tha . hamesha apni mummy ko pakar ke sota tha aur mummy mujhe sulaati thi . Lekin ab pata nahi kyun par Mummy ko pakar ke soney kaann nahi karta tha . woh feeling kahin gayab ho gaya tha . Mummy Papa aur main lught off karkey soney ka preparation liya . Thori der baad hum so gaye ... Lekin mujhe neend nahi aayi . Mere under se neend jaise urr gaya tha . main jagah hua tha ... Ke aaj kya hoga ? Kyaa aaj bhi wahin sab hoga jo kaal hua? 

Thori der baad mummy ahistey se uthkar bed pe baithi . maine aankh aadhi bandh karkey aadhi se dekha ke mummy ne ekbar mujhe check kiya .... Fir mummy papa ko check kiya ke woh so rahe hai ke nhi. Papa normally neend mein the . lekin Mummy ko laga dawai ka effect hai . Isliye nischint hokey Mummy uth ke  bahaar chali gayi . 

Mummy ke jaate hi main uthke baith gaya aur neechey utarkey darwaze ke paas gaya . maine chupke dekha Mummy seedha Dadaji ke kamre mein ghus gayi . Aur kamre ki light jala di . itney dur se main thora hi dekh paa raha tha ... Aur woh bhi light ke wajah se . Maine dekha Mummy ke under jaatey hi Daaji peechey se Mummy ko pakar ke mummy ko uthaake  gol gol ghumney lagey aur Mummy hasney lagi . fir Dadaji ne darwaza bandh kar diya... Par lock nahi kiya ... Kyunki abhibhi darwaze ke beech se light ki roshni aa rahi thi . 

Main wapaas kar papa ke paas Baith gaya . mujhe ek baar lag raha tha papa ko sab bataa du.... Ekbar lag raha tha ke papa ko bataane se mummy dantegi toh nahi? Ekbar lag raha tha ke yeh sab ho kya raha hai? Mummy Dadaji yeh kya karte hai ? Isse kya hota hai? 

Bahut sarey sawal the mere us chotey se deemag mein. Main kuch der soya raha par neend nahi aa rahi thi . bar bar lag raha tha ke yeh sab galat hai.... Meti Mummy mujhse dur jaa rahi hai.... Mummy badal gayi hai. Mujhe peheli ki tarah pyar nahi karti, mujhe apne haat se mahi khilaati .... Baat karti bhi hai toh us baat mein apney betey ke liye woh pyaar nahi dikhta. Pata nahi aakhri baar kab godi mein uthaa ke pyar kiya tha .... Pehele mummy roz mere gaal pe pappi deti thi ... Par ab woh bhi nahi deti . lekin uske badle mummy Dadaji ke sath jo karti hai woh kya hai? 

Main so nahi paa raha tha . main firse uthke baith gaya . fir mujhe laga ke ekbaar unko dekh kar aau . Main uthke wapas bahaar ayaa. Dheere dheere agey barney laga. Jitna main kareeb pahuch raha tha utna mujhey ek aurat ki ahhhhh.. Ahhhhhhh... Ahhhhhhh.... Ssshhhhh.. Ahhhhhhhh.... Awaz aa rahi thi Aur sath mein thop... Thop... Thop.. Thopass... Poch .. Poch .. Pochatttt... Awaz .

Woh aurat ki awaz meri Maa ki thi ismein koi shaq nahi. Mujhey yaad ayaa ekdin aisi hi awaz maine dadaji ke kamre se aati hui suni thi . usdin kamrey mein Daaji aur champa masi the . usdin Dadaji champa masi ke sath meri Mummy ko fasaane ka baatein kar rahe the .  Aur Aaj wahi Dadaji meri Mummy ke sath milkey mazey kar rahe hai . Meri Maa ko already apne jaal mein fasaa chukey the. Ya yeh bolna sahi hoga ke mummy apni marzi se Dadaji aur champa ke sath haat milayi thi . 

Main Dadaji ke kamrey ke bahut paas aa gaya tha ke tabhi Mere kandhey pe kisine haat rakkha. Main chowk ke peechey dekha toh Papa thei. Papa ne mujhe poocha

Papa: beta... Itni Raat ko tum akeley kahaan jaa rahe ho?

Mujhey us situation mein kuch samajh nahi aya aur maine bol diya : Papa..... Mummy Dadaji ke kamrey mein hai .

Papa: kya? Tumhari Maa babuji ke kamre mein ? Is waqt ? 

Tabhi Papa ke kaan mein bhi woh Ahhhhhh... Ahhhhhhh.. Ss.. Ummmmmm... Awazein aane lagti hai .

Main us waqt chota tha isliye yeh sab samajh nahi paa raha tha par Papa toh ek adult insaan thei ... Isliye woh sab awaz ka matlab acchi tarah samajh gaye . Papa samajh gaye the ke itni Raat ko un ki patni under kya kar rahi hai. 

Tabhi under se awaz aayi mummy ki . mummy boli : Ahhhhhh.... Sshhhhh.... Itni zor se nahi babuji.. Ahhhhh.... Ahhhhh.... Humari awaz baahar tak jaa rahi hai...

Daaji : toh kya hua ... Jaane do... Purey haveli mrin fayl jaane do humari chudai ki awaz..

Mummy : Ahhhh.. Sshhh... Aap shayad bhool gaye ..... Aapka beta ab is ghar mein hi hai.... Agar usko kisi tarah pata chal gaya ke hum yeh sab karte hai toh...

Dadaji : arey kaise pata chalega bahu.... Usko toh tumney apne haat se neend ki dawai di hai... Abhi toh salaa murdey ki tarah soya hoga. Aur agar usko pata chal bhi jaye toh kya? Saaley ko maar maar ke ghar se bahar fek dungaa....

Mummy : lekin babuji... Agar aapka beta gaon mein sabko jakar humare barein mein sab bataa de toh?

Dadaji : arey bahu tum toh apne Sasur ko acchey se janti ho..... Usko kya aise hi chorumga? Aisa daraunga ke sala kisiko kuch nahi bataega. Aur agar fir bhi naa mane toh ....... Upar pahucha dunga.... Bus.. Problem khatam hamesha ke liye .. Ahhhhh.... Ahhh.. Yeh lo bahu.... Yeh lo ahhhh.... Bas... Ab zyada din nahi.... Usse papaers pe sign toh le hi liya hai... Ab woh kuch nahi kar payega..... Ab tum bahut jald us Nalayak se azaad ho jaogi.. Aur fir main aur tum... Ahhhhhha... Ahhhhhhh... Yeh le kutti.... Samhal isko.. Ahhhhh

Papa ke muh se ek awaz nahi nikal . patthar ki tarah kharey hokey papa sab sun rahe the. Apne kaan ko biswas nahi kar paa rahe the Papa. Khud ka Baap ... Aur apni hi patni ka plan sunke papa shocked thei. Ek pitaah apne hi betey ki murder ki plan kar raha hai !! Aur woh bhi apni hi Bahu ke sath milkey . jis aurat se papa ki shaadi hui thi , jo unke bacchey ki maa hai ..... Aaj apney hi Pati ke Pitaji ke sath bistar pe aish kar rahe hai ! Kya dono bhool gaye ke unke beech Rishta kya hai ? Yeh bhi possible hai ?

Main papa ke paas gaya aur papa ko bola : Papa ...... Mummy aur Dadaji roz aise eksath karte hai... Papa? Mummy aur Dadaji yeh kya karte hai ? Kyun karte hai ?

Papa mujhey lekey wahan se wapas kamrey mei aa jate hai . aur mujhey poochte hai ke  maine kya dekha hai . Aur main bhi yeh sab papa ko bolney ke liye tadap raha tha .... Isliye maine papa ko sab bataa diya . jo jo ab tak hua tha.. Maine dekha tha woh sab.Sabkuch papa ke sath share karkey mujhe bhi ek sakun mil raha tha . sab baatein sunne ke baad papa bilkul chup karke baithe rahe . maine Papa de poocha tha - Papa? Mummy aur Dadaji yeh kya karte hai? Yeh sab kya hai? Papa ne mujhey apne paas bulaake mujhe hug karke boley - yeh sab tum bhool jao beta..yeh sab baatein bhool jao.... Kuch nahi hai yeh sab . ..... Hum log kal hi wapas Laut jayenge. Lekin yeh baat tum Mummy se mat kehena beta .ok beta ?

Maine bho bola - ok papa . fir papa mujhe sulane lagey . fir Mujhe pakar ke papa so gaye. Mere gaal pe paani ki bund gira achanak . pata nahi tha uswaqt ke paani ki bund kahan se aayi thi . Aaj main janta hu ke woh paani ki bund Papa ke aankh se nikli thi . 

khair ..... Baaki ki baat bahut jaldi jaldi hua. Agley din papa dadaji ko jhoot bolkey shopping jaane ka bahana banaake mujhe aur Mummy ko lekar bahaar nikal jaate hai . Lekin papa jab humko lekar market ke jagah station pe jaate hai tab mummy papa ko poochti hai ke hum yahan kyun aye hai ? Hum toh shopping jaane wale hai na ? Papa kuch nahi bolte mummy ko bus tickit lekey mummy ka haat pakar ke unko train pe chara dete hai fir mujhey lekar train mein jaake baithtey hai . Papa ke chehere ko dekhkar shayad mummy samajh gayi thi ke kuvh garbar hua hai. Main papa ke godi mein tha aur Mummy papa ke baju mein . main muh uthaake papa ko dekh raha tha . Lekin papa seedha Mummy ko shaant aakhon se dekhey jaa rahe thei. Aur mummy papa ke aankh se aankh nahi mila paa rahi thi ,ghabra rahi thi. 

Aakhir jab hum apney ghar pahuchey tab Papa tv on karkey mujhey tv ke samney bithaa ke boley : Betaa.... Tum Tv dekho . Hum apney kamrey mein hai . ok . 

Yeh bolkey Papa mummy ka haat pakar ke seedha kamrey ke taraf jaane lagey . papa ko aise Mummy ko kheech ke le jaate hue pehelibaar dekha tha maine . kamrey mein jaakey papa darwaza bandh kar dete hai . main cartoon dekh raha tha . Tabhi under se Thaaassss karkey thappar ki awaz sunaai di . main chowk gaya aur kya hua dekhne kamrey ke paas jaate hi suna Papa chilla ke bol rahe the-

Ghatiya Aurat ! Chi ! Kaise ? Kaise kiya yeh sab tumne? Kyu dhoka diya mujhko ? Ekbar bar bhi Mere ya humare betey ke barein mein nahi socha tumney? Aur woh bhi mere hi bapuji ke sath ! Chi ! Arey woh Tumhare sasur hai .. Sasur... Aur tum unki bahu .... Ekbar bhi apne is rishtey ke barein mein nahi socha ? Mujhey yakeen nahi jo raha hai ..... Mere hi pitaaji ka asli roop main samajh nahi paya ..... Aur tum bhi unki tarah .... Chi ! Itna neechey gir saktey ho tum log ? Ghatiya aurat !

Firse Ek thappar ki chattak awaz ayi under se . fir Mummy ki chillaney ki awaz ayi ... Mummy chilla ke boli -

Mummy: Khabardaar ! Mujhpe Haat mat uthana ! Mujhpe haat uthaoge ? Pehele us Layaak bano ...... Aaj tak kya diya hai tumne mujhey ? Nahi ek acchi zindagi aur nahi sukh ..... Tum jaise unsaan ke sath fir bhi itne saal guzar liya... Guzar kya liya ? Barbaad kiya... Aur tum apne pitaji ko kya bol rahe ho... Ho saktey hai ke woh ek sharif insaan nahi hai ... Par woh ek asli Mard hai ..... Tumhare jaise kamzor nahi ...... Arey kahaan woh aur kahan Tum ! Mujhey toh yakeen nahi hota ke tum usi Admi ke betey ho ! Aur Haa! Main unke sath soyi hoon .... Aur samjhi hoon ke Mard asal mein hota kya hai ..... Tum apne Pitaaji ke nakhun ke barabar bhi nahi ho ! Unhone mujhe bistar pe sukh bbi diya hai aur apni bahu ko paison se bhar diya hai..... Jitna paisa shayad tum 3/4 saal mein kamaoge .... Utna toh ab mere bag mein hain......Pehele apne Baap ki tarah paise kama kar dikhao ... Fir mujhpe haat uthanaa !

Mummy ke awaz mein ek change aa gaya tha.... Jis Aurat ne kabhi papa se awaz uthaa ke baat nahi ki... Aaj wahi Aurat chilla ke Papa ko Apmaan kar rahi thi. Aur papa shocked ho gaye thei . Unki patni unko aisa bhi bol sakti hai yeh wph soch bhi nahi sakte thei. Unkey biwi ke under itna change aa gaya hai dekhke woh shocked thei. Fir papa boley - Tum..... Tum apney Pati ko yeh sab itni asaani se bol payi ? Ekbar bhi socha nhi ke kya bol rahi ho ?

Papa ko aise dekhkar Mummy ke under aur confidence aur gussa aa gaya . Mummy boli : ha.... Jo sach tha wahi bola tumko..... Aur bahut hua... Ab main tum jaise admi ke sath nahi rehe sakti ......mujhey divorce chahiye... Main mere betey ko lekar chla junga yahan se.

Papa: accha ? Toh jaogi kahan zara batanaa ?

Mummy : tumhare Pitaji ke paas.... Apne Sasuraal . wahi rahungi main .

Papa: chi ! Itna neechey gir gayi tum ? Mere muh pe bol rahi ho tum mere pitaji ke paas jakar rahogi !Aur woh admi ..... Kitna kam janta hoon apne baap ko ...... Apni hi bahu ke sath kaun aisa kar sakta hai ? Chi ....mere pitaji itna ghatiya insaan hai ? 

Mummy : khabardar ! kuch maat bolna unko..... Unko gaali de rahe ho ? Pehele khudko gaali do ..... Kisi kaam ke nahi ho aur bari bari baat kar rahe ho? Unke layak banke dikhao ... Fir gaali dena unko.... Huh! Chalo hato..... Mujhey phone karna hai ! 

Mumny bahaar aa gayi .. aur humare Landline se kaisko call kiya . fir mummy jab "hello Babuji" boli tab samjha ke Dadaji ko phone kiya hai unhone . mummy ne phone pe hi Dadaji ko sab bataya ke kaise papa unko jhoot bolkey ghar lekar aaye hai . Fir mummy ne phone ka receiver Papa ko diya .Main sirf papa ke side se sab conversation sun raha tha . Papa gusse se phone ko lekar boley -

Papa : jee bapuji.... Aur kya bolna baaki hai ? Jo sunna tha woh toh kal Raat ko hi sun liya tha maine ! Chi babuji chi ! Apne hi betey ki patni ke sath yeh sab ghinona kaam aapne kaise kiya ?  Ek baar bhi Maa ka khayal nahi aya ? Ek taraf Maa hospital mein aur aap apni hi bahu ke sath ... Itna neechey aap gir gaye ?Haa ... Main usko lekar wapas ghar aa gaya hoon... Ab kabhi wahan nahi jaunga........kya? Nahi Latika us ghar mein wapas kabhi mahi jayegi ... Samjhey aap ? ...kya? Agar usko nahi wapas bheja toh kya karoge aap ? Woh meri patni hai.... Usko kahan jana hai yeh main decide karunga!  Kya ? Nahi... Latika wapas nahi jayegi bapuji! KYA KARLO GE AAP ?

Fir us taraf se Dadaji ne kya bola woh main nahi sun paya lekin  maine dekha Dadaji ke baat sunke papa ke chehre ka expression badal gaya .... Gusse se Darr ka expression aa gaya ... Aur shocked bhi ho gaye .

Papa : kya ! Aap apne betey ko dhamkee de rahe ho ? Ke aap mujhey khatam kar dengey ! Ek baap hokar aap apne hi betey ko itna bara dhamkee de rahe ho ! Jo karna hai kar lijiye ..... Main Latika ko nahi bhejunga! ....... Kya !! Aap mere betey ko bhi ! Itna neechey kab gir gaye aap bapuji ? Aap apney hi potey ko khatam karne ki baat bol rahe hai ! 

Fir Dadaji ne aur kuch bola jisse papa ki hosh hi udd gaye . papa darrte huye boley : kya ! Matlab meri Maa ko aapne hi ! Oh my ............ Aap ka yeh roop mujhey pata hi nahi tha! Shayad isliliye Maa ne mujhey aap se dur rakkha ....... Haan janta hu Aap. Sab kar saktey ho.... Aap kuch bhi kar saktey ho ! Bahut hi powerful ho aap, bahut naami logon se aapka pehechan hai....... Aap kisko bhi barbad kar saktey ho....Lekin apne betey ke Sath bhi kar saktey ho yeh nahi jatna tha ....... Theek hai ! Main main usko aapke paas bhej deta hu..... Apne jaan ke darr ke liye nahi... Mujhey mere betey ka khayal hai isiliye...... Main aap ki baat maanne ko taiyaar hu.... Nahi chahiye mujhe aisi Beimaan Patni ....lekin iske baad aapka aur mera sab rishta khatam! 

Papa phone rakhkey gusse se Mummy ke taraf dekhte hue boley : just get out ..... Nikal jao .....! Mummy Apne kapre aur samaan lekar aur apna purse lekar mera haat pakar ke jaane lagi ... Tabhi Papa ne mera haat pakar ke boley - Rohan tumhare sath nahi jayega ! Agar mera beta us ghar mein gaya toh ekdin shayad sununga ke mera beta zinda hi nahi hai...... Nahi ! Rohan nahi jayega tumhare sath ! Mera beta wahan safe nahi hai .

Mummy boli : rohan mere sath hi jayega...... Woh mera bhi beta hai... Aao beta.. Mummy ke paaa aao ...

Main papa aur mummy dono ko hi dekh raha tha. Ek insaan ke chehre par lalach aur ghamand dikh raha tha aur dusre insaan ke chehre par mere liye pyaar hi pyar . Maine usdin Pyar ko choose kiya tha . Main daurkey Papa ke paas jakar unke peechey chup gaya .

Is baat se mummy bahut naraaz ho gayi . Gusse se chilla kar boli : theek hai ! Rehe tu yahan par..... Ban apni baap ki tarah.... Tu bhi apne baap ke jaisa hi hai . mujhey teri zaroorat nahi . 

Mummy yeh bolkey nikal gayi ghar se . apni aakhon ke samney maine dekha meri maa mujhe aur papa ko chorkey chali gayi . papa sirf dekh rahe the.

Hum hamesha Sauteli Maa ko galat boltey hai .... Kyunki woh khud ki janam dene wali Maa nahi hoti . woh kabhi ek asli Maa ki jagah nahi le sakti ... Par kuch aise kahaniya bhi hoti hai jo sabkuch ulat pulat kar rakh deti hai . jis aurat ne papa ke sath Shaadi ki .... Sansaar kiya ..... Mujhey janam diya ...Ekdin wahi Patni / wahi Maa Daulat , property aur hawas ke khatir humko chorkey apne sasural chali gayi apne Sasur ke paas . 

Ekdin ek letter aya papa ke paas. Maine dekha tha papa woh letter parkey gusse se us letter ko faar ke fek diya . maine papa se chupaake un kagaz ko uthaa ke unko jor ke is letter ko par liya tha . usmein likha tha -  divorce paper tumhare papa ready kar rahe hai. Miltey hi chupchap sign kar dena ..... Fir mujhe tumse azaadi mil jayegi . fir main apna naya zindagi shuru karungi . aur yeh bataane ki zarurat nahi ke koi problem create mat karna ... Varna tum jante hi ho ke tumhare pitaji kya kya kar sakte hai. Tumko aur Rohan ko dono ko nahi chorega woh... Main bhi unko nahi rok paungi.... Isliye chupchap sab maan lo.

Sirf mere khaatir papa sabkuch maan lete hai . varna shayad main bhi aaj zinda nahi hota. Mere zindagi ke badle papa ne apni sab kurbaan kar diya tha . iske baad papa tut gaye the . apne hi logon se aisa dhoka milne pe koi bhi tut jayega. sirf main hi ek lauta apna tha unke paas . woh business ko lekar busy ho gaye . mera future aur business yahi tha papa ke 2 target . dheere dheere papa ka business settled hogaya. Paison ka problems kam hote hote mit gaya . papa ka business successful ho gaya . bus rishton ke mamley mein hi papa fail ho gaye the. Papa ne kabhi dusri shaadi ke barein mein socha tak nahi . papa ko darr tha.... Jab khudki Maa aise badal sakti hai , toh Sauteli Maa kya kya kar sakti hai .... Yeh sochke papa darr gaye the .

Uske baad shayad meri maa ko har raat maza milta hoga Dadaji se . sirf Dadaji kyun.... Champa masi, kamla sujata yeh sab bhi milkey shayad har din aish kartey hongey.... Mummy ka sasuraal shayad ab ek kotha ghar se bhi ghinona ban gaya hoga. Jahan Dadaji har din in sab aurton ke sath aish kartey hai.... Kya pata aur bhi aurtein wahan aati hongi... Shayad ab Dadaji ka haveli hi gaon ki ek besshya ghar ban gaya hoga. Kya pata? Mujhe janna bhi nahi hai. Mere Dadaji ne apni bahu ko , ek maa ko , ek patni ko puri tarah badalne mein safal ho gaye the . 

Filmon mein humney dekha hai ke hamesha jeet acchayi ki hoti hai... Par zaruri nahi ke asli life bhi waisa hi ho .

Is ghatna se  mujhe zindagi mein 2 seekh mili thi . 

1- is dunia mein kuch bhi ho sakta hai. Koi bhi aapko dhoka de sakta hai... Chahe woh aapka dost ho.... Ya aapki patni yaa apka Maa baap ... Koi bhi .

2 - sirf Janam dene se koi Maa nahi banta. Mamta ek aurat ke under se aati hai . woh aurat Maa nahi hoti jo ek bacchey ko sirf janam deti hai... Balki Maa woh hoti hai jo us bacchey ki zindagi ko bachane ke liye khud kurbaan ho sakti hai . is dunia ki koi bhi lalach jis aurat ke Mamta ko nahi hara sakti ... Woh hoti hai Maa.

Mere liye woh Maa mere Papa thei. Dadaji  hamesha mere papa ko namard bolkey apmaan karte thei..... Lekin Mere liye mere Papa se bara MARD koi nahi tha. The real Man . jinhone apne betey ke liye sabkuch kurbaan kar diya . sab kuch Maan liya sirf apne betey ki zindagi ke badley . papa agar chahte toh Dadaji se dushmani kar sakte the ... Par Dadaji ka asli roop janne ke baad unko meri chinta hone lagi. Woh insaan kuch bhi kr sakta tha yeh papa samajh gaye the. Dadaji ka power kitna hai yeh papa jante the isliye woh chup rahe.  papa ne jo bhi kiya sirf apney betey ke liye . 

Ek taraf woh pitaji jo ek betey se sabkuch cheen leta hai..... Aur dusri taraf aur Ek pitaa jo apney betey ke liye sabkuch sacrifice kar deta hai . kya duniya hai na yeh ? Agar nafrat bhi hai.... Toh pyar bhi hai.... Agar dhoka bhi hai toh biswas bhi hai...... Agar dukh bhi hai yoh sukh bhi hai.... Agar galat bhi hai toh sahi bhi hai. 

Shayad meri Maa ko woh sab aish o araam aur woh sabkuch mil raha hoga jo ek aurat ko chahiye..... Lekin ek chis unko kabhi nahi milega  ..... Saccha pyar . pehele bahut dukh hota tha ke mumny mere paas nahi hai.... Par main jab baraa hua ... Tab samjha ke zarurat nahi mujhey waisi Maa ki .... Mere paas mere Papa hai . wahin mere Papa, wahin meri Maa . 

Namard nahi...... Asli Mard .

THE END

Doston... Khataam hua itney dino ka journey. Kaisa lagaa last update? Zarur batanaa aur ek aakhribaar Like, Reps dena .

[vat69addict]

itni jaldi khatam ho gaya....pata nahi kyu per dukh lag raha h...itni mast kahani khatam ho gayi...Thanks Baban dada...mast likhe ho aap...aagey bhi aapki stories ka intezaar rahega...is baar rk cuckold husband pe kahani likho....just a suggestion..all the best for future stories...keep it up..n take care

[chandamadam]

Love the ending... It is the most important thing in the world. Being righteous.
No one is going to cry when the mother dies. Father of the little boy indeed is a real man. You should have added a part where the father re-married and son gets love of a real(step) mother he deserves.

As someone who cheated her husband various times with different men, I know its fun. And super easy nowadays.
But the consequences are dire. I know of women, colleagues etc. who got caught and their life turned to hell overnight. A friend of mine lost 15 kgs in few weeks after her husband caught her cheating. She never looked beautiful again. No one called and addressed her with respect anymore including her own children, parents, siblings and colleagues. She looked 20 years older after that incident. Her husband didn't divorced her for sake of their children but her life became pure torture. Her husband even doubted that children off the wedding weren't his. I had to counsel her 5 days a week daily for more than a year to curb her suicidal instincts. I know it will stay with her for every second of her life.

There are so many real incidents I know of. So called lovers/bf/fuckbuddies/relatives who enjoyed with them never take responsibility after husband(s) find out. Some couples get divorced because men can't take it out of their minds and hearts easily. Even divorce is not so easy. Right from the court peon to judge will try their luck with the lady.

Some stay together for the sake of children and society. But life is always worse, pure-torture after, specially for the lady.

If you are having problems in your relationship/marriage, speak to each other. Tell your better halves what you don't like about them and what they should do about it. Talking will solve 95% of the problems. You can separate if it still does not work out, of course.

To have sex or an emotional affair with someone outside the marriage might seem sexy, thrilling, fun, easy, beautiful, adventurous, satisfying, youthful and revengeful but its highway to hell and torture; both emotionally and practically.

[Avishek]

wow!! amazing ending. so emotional. Is story ko parney ka 2 nazariyaa hai. ek isko ek garam hot sasur bahu ki sex story ke tarah para jaa saktaa hai, aur dusra is story ko ek betey ki aankhon dekhi kahaani ke hisab se bhi para jaa sakta hai. jahan beta dekhta ke kaise dheere dheere uski apni Maa badal gayi, kaise apni hi maa ko beta samajh nahi paa raha tha, kaise apni hi Maa se bechara darrne laga tha. aur aakhir usne kho diya apni Maa ko. uski Maa usko chorkey apne sasur ki paas chali gayi aish karne .
aur is story ka last line - mere papa namard nahi asli mard hai. wow.. brilliant. sirf woh hi mard nahi hota jo biwi, gf ko sex ka pleasure de... balki is story mein Rohan ke papa ne jo kiya usse pata chala ke Asli Mard toh wohi hai... the real Man... who sacrificed everything to save his kid. He is the real Man.. . and the dadaji is just a pervert fucker.
one of the best story of xossipy (for me. )

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[Curiousbull]

Love the ending... It is the most important thing in the world. Being righteous.
No one is going to cry when the mother dies. Father of the little boy indeed is a real man. You should have added a part where the father re-married and son gets love of a real(step) mother he deserves.

As someone who cheated her husband various times with different men, I know its fun. And super easy nowadays.
But the consequences are dire. I know of women, colleagues etc. who got caught and their life turned to hell overnight. A friend of mine lost 15 kgs in few weeks after her husband caught her cheating. She never looked beautiful again. No one called and addressed her with respect anymore including her own children, parents, siblings and  colleagues. She looked 20 years older after that incident. Her husband didn't divorced her for sake of their children but her life became pure torture. Her husband even doubted that children off the wedding weren't his. I had to counsel her 5 days a week daily for more than a year to curb her suicidal instincts. I know it will stay with her for every second of her life.  

There are so many real incidents I know of. So called lovers/bf/fuckbuddies/relatives who enjoyed with them never take responsibility after husband(s) find out. Some couples get divorced because men can't take it out of their minds and hearts easily. Even divorce is not so easy. Right from the court peon to judge will try their luck with the lady.

Some stay together for the sake of children and society. But life is always worse, pure-torture after, specially for the lady.

If you are having problems in your relationship/marriage, speak to each other. Tell your better halves what you don't like about them and what they should do about it. Talking will solve 95% of the problems. You can separate if it still does not work out, of course.

To have sex or an emotional affair with someone outside the marriage might seem sexy,  thrilling, fun, easy, beautiful, adventurous, satisfying, youthful and revengeful but its highway to hell and torture; both emotionally and practically.

Baban bhai don't mind but the Chandaji's response is better than the story. 

I didn't like the ending as a positive ending is always more desirable. Also in last two three updates it seemed stretched out. 

I have read all your stories in this section and they had twists and turns and amazing narration which was always at an even pace. The story didn't live upto your calibre as a writer. 

Waiting for more stories from the most repped writer.

[Baban]

Baban bhai don't mind but the Chandaji's response is better than the story. 

I didn't like the ending as a positive ending is always more desirable. Also in last two three updates it seemed stretched out. 

I have read all your stories in this section and they had twists and turns and amazing narration which was always at an even pace. The story didn't live upto your calibre as a writer. 

Waiting for more stories from the most repped writer.

First of all Thank you curiousbull❤️
Thanks for sharing your thaught and views. Main koi excuse nahi de raha par dekhiye ek writer ko reality aur fiction ke beech ek balance karna parta hai. Full reality or fully fiction dono hi story ko cheap bana dete hai ... Isliye kabhi kabhi reality ke sath unrealistic kuch lines add karni parti hai. Is story ke liye isse behetar ending aur kuch nahi ho sakta tha. Kyunki aisa hum news mein , tv mein dekha hai bahutbar . Baaki yeh reader ke upar hai ke woh kaise ek story ko enjoy karengey. Aap ko utna accha nahi laga its ok. Par aapko meri dusri stories pasand ayi uske liye thanks. Mujhe most repped writer aap sab ne hi banaya . aap sab ka pyar aur biswas aise hi sath rehena chahiye. 

[Baban]

itni jaldi khatam ho gaya....pata nahi kyu per dukh lag raha h...itni mast kahani khatam ho gayi...Thanks Baban dada...mast likhe ho aap...aagey bhi aapki stories ka intezaar rahega...is baar rk cuckold husband pe kahani likho....just a suggestion..all the best for future stories...keep it up..n take care

Thank you very much vat69addict. Puri story ke sath jurey rehene ke liye aur apna feedback hamesha dene ke liye .

[Baban]

Love the ending... It is the most important thing in the world. Being righteous.
No one is going to cry when the mother dies. Father of the little boy indeed is a real man. You should have added a part where the father re-married and son gets love of a real(step) mother he deserves.

As someone who cheated her husband various times with different men, I know its fun. And super easy nowadays.
But the consequences are dire. I know of women, colleagues etc. who got caught and their life turned to hell overnight. A friend of mine lost 15 kgs in few weeks after her husband caught her cheating. She never looked beautiful again. No one called and addressed her with respect anymore including her own children, parents, siblings and  colleagues. She looked 20 years older after that incident. Her husband didn't divorced her for sake of their children but her life became pure torture. Her husband even doubted that children off the wedding weren't his. I had to counsel her 5 days a week daily for more than a year to curb her suicidal instincts. I know it will stay with her for every second of her life.  

There are so many real incidents I know of. So called lovers/bf/fuckbuddies/relatives who enjoyed with them never take responsibility after husband(s) find out. Some couples get divorced because men can't take it out of their minds and hearts easily. Even divorce is not so easy. Right from the court peon to judge will try their luck with the lady.

Some stay together for the sake of children and society. But life is always worse, pure-torture after, specially for the lady.

If you are having problems in your relationship/marriage, speak to each other. Tell your better halves what you don't like about them and what they should do about it. Talking will solve 95% of the problems. You can separate if it still does not work out, of course.

To have sex or an emotional affair with someone outside the marriage might seem sexy,  thrilling, fun, easy, beautiful, adventurous, satisfying, youthful and revengeful but its highway to hell and torture; both emotionally and practically.

Thank you very much chandamadam for sharing your experience, real incidents with us . you are absolutely right madam. Kuch samay ki maza aur thrill ke liye hum kuch aise steps utha lete hai jiska result humko sari zindagi bhugatna parta hai . kya zarurat aise fun ki ? Isse accha hai sahi tarikey se chalo..... Thora problems ayengi... Par aakhir ek shanti hamesha aapke sath rahegi. 

Baaki is story ko lekar agar bolu toh main chahata toh rohan ke papa ke sath ek acchi ladki ki shaadi kara sakta tha..... Jo rohan ko bbi pyar karti . par woh bahut filmy ho jata. Main is story ko ek realistic way mein present karna chahta tha . kitney aiae examples hain jahan pati patni ko ya patni pati ko dhoka dekar chale jate hai chorkey ... Yoh kya sab ki life ki ending happy hkti hai? Nahi....... Because life is not a commercial film. Again thanks aapki itni khoobsurat feedback ke liye ❤️

[Baban]

wow!! amazing ending. so emotional. Is story ko parney ka 2 nazariyaa hai. ek isko ek garam hot sasur bahu ki sex story ke tarah para jaa saktaa hai, aur dusra is story ko ek betey ki aankhon dekhi kahaani ke hisab se bhi para jaa sakta hai. jahan beta dekhta ke kaise dheere dheere uski apni Maa badal gayi, kaise apni hi maa ko beta samajh nahi paa raha tha, kaise apni hi Maa se bechara darrne laga tha. aur aakhir usne kho diya apni Maa ko. uski Maa usko chorkey apne sasur ki paas chali gayi aish karne .  
aur is story ka last line - mere papa namard nahi asli mard hai.  wow.. brilliant. sirf woh hi mard nahi hota jo biwi, gf ko sex ka pleasure de... balki is story mein Rohan ke papa ne jo kiya usse pata chala ke Asli Mard toh wohi hai... the real Man... who sacrificed everything to save his kid. He is the real Man.. . and the dadaji is just a pervert fucker.
one of the best story of xossipy (for me. )

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Ek writer humesha ek aise reader ke comments ka intezar karta hai jiske feedback ke Sath writer ke khudkey thoughts, feelings match karey . thanks Avishek for understanding the story's main plot . yeh jitna ek sex se varpur erotic thriller hai , utna hi ek sad story bhi hai . ek betey je liye sabsey vayankar aur dukh ki baat hoti hai jab woh dekhta hai uski khudki Maa jo abtak bahut jaani pehechani , pyar karne wali , care karne wali mummy thi woh dheere dheere ek anjaan insaan banti jaa rahi hai, apni hi maa se betey anjaan hote jaa raha hai.... Kuch harkat , kuch baatein us betey ko darne mein majboor karta hai . apni hi maa ko bina kapron ke kuch gandi aur ajeeb karte hue dekh raha hai ... Sochiye us betey ke upar kya guzarta hoga ? Aur main is baat ko always clear karna chahata tha ke tagra 6 foot ka insaan jo bahut taqatwar hai, aurton ko pleasure deta hai ... Woh jitna bara Mard hai , utna hi baraa Mard woh Pitah bhi hota hai jo sirf naam ka nahi ... Asal mein baap hota hai... Jo zarurat parney pe apney bacchey ke liye sab khusi sacrifice karne ka Dum rakhta hai.

[vat69addict]

Thank you very much vat69addict. Puri story ke sath jurey rehene ke liye aur apna feedback hamesha dene ke liye .

All the best for your future stories...I am a great fan of your writing ...Keep it up... Hoping the next story again will be a hit...Keep writing

[rajeev13]

हृदयस्पर्शी अंत दिया आपने कहानी को पर काश इसके बाद वाली घटना भी हम जान पाते अगर ये लतिका के नज़रिये से लिखी जाती।

उसके जीवन में क्या हुआ ये एक रहस्य बनकर ही रह गया !

दुनिया-समाज की नज़रों से उसने कैसे अपने और ससुर के रिश्ते को उजागर नहीं होने दिया ?

क्या वो अपने ससुर से गर्भधारण करके माँ बनी ?

अगर हाँ तो उसने बच्चे को उसके पिता के बारे में क्या बताया होगा ?

काश ये कहानी थोड़ा और चल पाती, तो इन प्रश्नों के उत्तर मिल जाते !

[Indiboy807]

great story

[Baban]

Thanks- vat69addict, rajeev13,Indiboy807❤️

[axm55]

Agla story kab ?

[will]

Tough story...

[exbiixossip2]

hi bro..
best end..
next thread name please...

[Sumit1234]

Waiting for new story

[Baban]

Jab likhna shuru kiya tha tab pata nahi tha kitna log pasand karenge , kitna feedback milega . bus apney under ke lekhak ko bahar nikal ke aap sabke samney lekar aya tha . Lekin aap sab ne mujhey itna grand way mein welcome kiya aur mere stories ko pasand kiya ke main hairaan bhi hua aur bahut bahut khush bhi . Hawas ki Aag se shuru kiya tha , phir Puraani Haveli aur aakhir mein Pervert . mere har ek kahaani ko aap sab ne enjoy kiya , pasand kiya aur positive feedback diya ...... Aur sirf itna hi nahi ... Apne khusi aur feedback ko apne like aur Reputation ke zariye nhi bayaan kiya . aur woh bhi itna dil khol ke diya ke aaj mera reputation score 1000 cross kar gaya!!!!! 

Jitna bhi thanks kahuu kam hoga  

0 se is 1000 ke safar mein aap sabne mera support kiya , sath rahe , stories enjoy kiye . Dil se shukriyaa

[hirarandi]

Jab likhna shuru kiya tha tab pata nahi tha kitna log pasand karenge , kitna feedback milega . bus apney under ke lekhak ko bahar nikal ke aap sabke samney lekar aya tha . Lekin aap sab ne mujhey itna grand way mein welcome kiya aur mere stories ko pasand kiya ke main hairaan bhi hua aur bahut bahut khush bhi . Hawas ki Aag se shuru kiya tha , phir Puraani Haveli aur aakhir mein Pervert . mere har ek kahaani ko aap sab ne enjoy kiya , pasand kiya aur positive feedback diya ...... Aur sirf itna hi nahi ... Apne khusi aur feedback ko apne like aur Reputation ke zariye nhi bayaan kiya . aur woh bhi itna dil khol ke diya ke aaj mera reputation score 1000 cross kar gaya!!!!! 

Jitna bhi thanks kahuu kam hoga  

0 se is 1000 ke safar mein aap sabne mera support kiya , sath rahe , stories enjoy kiye . Dil se shukriyaa

Apki next story ka besabri se intazar hai.... Please jaldi post kijiye...!

[Baban]

Apki next story ka besabri se intazar hai.... Please jaldi post kijiye...!

Aap sab mere stories ko itna pasand karte ho iske liye bahut shukriyaa

Asal mein thora busy hoon. Work plus ek Bengali story likh raha hu... Abhi agar hindi story shuru kardu tih bahut pressure aa jayega . phir late hoga update mein . isliye abhi nahi shuru kar paunga.

Laungaa new story par samay nikal ke