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Mast.... Please update more
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Salim ke hath apnee boobs mehasus hote hi nita ne apne hatho se salim ke kalayiyo ko pakad liya lekin salim ke hath usake ubharo par hi mehasus ho rahe thr
S jan main jab tumhe dekha tabhi rumhara aashiq ban gaya tha .Aur tumhare liye hi main tumba tribes ke pass ja raha hu .Ab tum batao tum mere liye kya karogi jan
N jo aap kahoge main karugi salim ji
Nita ab usake touch se kafi uttejit ho rahi thi aur aisa usake sath pahale bar ho raha tha use yeh ahsas achha lag raha tha. Woh salim se sat chuki thi
S dekho phir mana to nahi karogi na
N nahi baba aap kaho to jan bhi hazir hai
S jan nahi chahiye mujhe to kuch aur hi chahiye
N kya chahiye aapko
S main chahta hu tumhe dekhana mehasus karna
N woh to tum ab bhi kar rahe ho
S aise nahi main tumhe natural roop me dekhana chahta hu
N matmab kaise
S bina kuch pahane huye
Nita yah sunate hi chup baith gayi .Use samjh me nahi aa raha tha kya jawab de .
S kya huva nita chup kyo ho jan
Nita ko bhi ab lag raha tha ki salim use touch kare aur use woh sochate huye uttejana aa rahi thi
N ji salim ji jaisa aap chahate ho main apne kapde utar dungi
S are yeh kam to main karuga jan.
Aise kahate huye salim ne ek hath se nita ke pallu ko hata diya ab nita ka seena jorose dhadakne laga usake kabootar upar niche hote huye salim ko saaf najar aa rahe the
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Really like ur plotting . Good going
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please yaar naam pura likha ,wo feeling nahi aa pati isme
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puri kar de story bhai great what a writter ,, thoda prem rush me dubokar nita ka sansarg kadana bhi ho payar se aur jabdarst ,,
ye jb khatam ho to aysa hi dusra likhna
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tumne achha likh h 30 ko suru kie aur ek tak update v die but aaj 5 tarikh ho gae aur ek v update ki dia sabhi ki trah tum v adhure chodkar bhag gae
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Xossop aur Xossipy pe chutiya stories complete hoti hain lekin best unique erotic stories 90% Adhuri reh jaati hai. It's a curse. Badluck for readers. Very disappointed. Writers ki kitni taarif jaro. Encourage karo magar writers gaayab. Hope he will complete it in 2021.
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Absolutely wonderful story ❤