সুন্দর শহরের ঝাপসা আলো

[swank.hunk]

Enjoyed the update. Both liked and rated.

[Mr Fantastic]

আগের edition-র থেকে এটা অনেক বেশি জাগ্রত আর পরিণত লাগছে, মানে Snyder Cut-র মতো আর কি ! 

মালিকের স্ত্রী কিছু একটা বুঝতে পেরেছে মনে হচ্ছে, তাই সুমিত্রাকে কিছু বলার জন্য উসখুশ করছে। 

[Raz-s999]

Emon ekta bab jeno ma cheler maje kiso hoyni ,othoso ager rathe chele ma er gude jompesh tap dise ,er kono nishan ei porbe buja gelo na ,emon golpo e balo lager ,jotho kiso hok er por o ma bole kotha , chele kapor komorer upor tole shujug buje gude tap dibe ,ma lojjay kiso bolbe na ,emon golper bastho Botha beshi .tnx 

[Jupiter10]

লাইক এবং রেইট দুইটাই দিয়ে দিলাম দাদা।  পরের পর্বে কি হবে তা জানার অপেক্ষায় রইলাম।  সামনের কয়েকটা দিন দুজন কি ভাবে কাটাবে তাই উৎসাহ জাগাচ্ছে।

thanks a lot brother... for encourage me.

[Jupiter10]

Darun detail. Ninkhut visual toiri korechhe. Ebare Sanjayer malik ebang tnar stri-ke raktko mangsher manus bole mone hochchhe, tara katha bolche. Malik-er strir achoron kintu mysterious! Ki bolte chan tini Sumitra ke?

হ্যাঁ এখানে আপনার অবদান ও জড়িত আছে। ধন্যবাদ। সঙ্গে থাকবেন।

[Jupiter10]

Fantastic! Jupiter da make it erotic. She should resist her son's sexual aggression but should give up / surrender ultimately and should co-operate and eventually indulge herself multiple times on the same night. Sanjoy is young and is energetic and capable of performing several times. It should be forceful at first, tearing down her clothes, mother in shame hiding her private parts and requesting her son not to fornicate as she is fertile. But at last to much of foreplay will make her surrender and lower her guard. Sanjoy should be able to continue for a much longer time, arousing her carnal need and at last asking her son to cum inside without worrying about the eventuality. Great going. It is good that you can read the mind of the readers.

Thank you so much for commenting on my story, for giving your opinion and for making suggestions.

[Jupiter10]

Nice build up. Literally raat baki baat baki. Porer update ta puro bomb hote choleche bojhai jache. 

আশাকরি পরের পর্ব টা খুব ভালো লাগবে আপনার। অসংখ্য ধন্যবাদ।

[Jupiter10]

Baah....onek din por update peye khub valo laglo.... oshadharon hoyeche....

2 din por abar porbo Baki ta

অসংখ্য ধন্যবাদ Shoumen

[Jupiter10]

Enjoyed the update. Both liked and rated.

thanks a lot brother.

[Jupiter10]

আগের edition-র থেকে এটা অনেক বেশি জাগ্রত আর পরিণত লাগছে, মানে Snyder Cut-র মতো আর কি ! 

মালিকের স্ত্রী কিছু একটা বুঝতে পেরেছে মনে হচ্ছে, তাই সুমিত্রাকে কিছু বলার জন্য উসখুশ করছে। 

সবই তোমাদের ভালোবাসাই Mr Fantastic   । Snyder Cut

রহস্যটা পরের জন্য রেখে দিলাম

[Jupiter10]

Emon ekta bab jeno ma cheler maje kiso hoyni ,othoso ager rathe chele ma er gude jompesh tap dise ,er kono nishan ei porbe buja gelo na ,emon golpo e balo lager ,jotho kiso hok er por o ma bole kotha , chele kapor komorer upor tole shujug buje gude tap dibe ,ma lojjay kiso bolbe na ,emon golper bastho Botha beshi .tnx 

আশাকরি পরের পর্বটা আপনার মনোমত হবে। :shy:

[Rinkp219]

কন্যাদান ও পিতৃঋণ 2 এর অপেক্ষায় আছি

[Paul]

We have to remember that this is an alternate version as Jupiter dada has already said. This means that in this version there is no give and take or no consideration-that one has to give something to get something. In this version we find the plot is much more at ease, everything happening with a sense of belonging and maternal love of a mother for her son. Just splendid!
For example, in the original version, Sumitra was not keen to venture into the Digha sea but in this version, we did find Sumitra taking a chance in the water on the first day. We hope, the plot will be more elaborate the next morning when Sanjoy will request his mother with teary eyes to take a bath in the saline water of the Bay. The mother to keep her son happy will have no option but to concede his request as no one knows when they again will have such a wonderful time in future. So,the plot may take the mother and son to a secluded part of the beach,away from the crowded population of the Digha beach where there will be none except the big granite boulders, sand and rough sea. She would be wearing the same white saree with very little pink small scattered prints and a white blouse.Not wanting to soak her clothing, she goes behind a boulder and gets rid of her inner garments. Only clad in the Saree and blouse with nothing inside, to please her only son and with maternal love- just to cherish the moment of to-gerther-ness with her son,keeping the towel on the boulder, they go in the waters to enjoy. But once inside the water, the mother will be totally exposed to the eyes of the son. Her upper torso will be totally transparent & crystal clear to her son's eyes. Jupitar dada may have to describe the mother's state of mind and that of the son. It is out of my bound! But what about the lower torso. The juncture between her two legs will be so exposed that Sumitra will be confused how to hide her life giving boobs and the place from where she had given birth to Sanjoy with both her palms from the astonished eyes of her son- as if Sanjoy is seeing not his mother but a lady of his fantasy for the first time.
Jupitar dada, you are fantastic.
After the above episode at Sea, the next episode may happen in the hotel room at noon. Dada, we want the same happen not at the dark of the night but at day time. Sumitra will be loosing a bit of her guard to please her son at sea during bathing ( to quench his thirst of eyes) but during noon after lunch at room, there will be nothing like that. It will be a war where Sumtra will be confronted by Sanjoy for the ultimate pleasure of the flesh and though she will resist as a mother till the end but constant foreplay will make her surrender and she will ultimately give up knowing she is fertile and Sanjoy will devour her in different positions like can happen standing near the sofa with Sumitra looking straight at the dressing glass fit on the Almirah door (which she will be ashamed to look during fornication, but during the height of pleasure she will be moaning and biting her lips looking straight at the eyes of her son through the glass who is ramming her son's source of birth from behind), and then on bed etc.
Good going Jupiter dada.
But at the end, I think you are right, after sacrificing so much for her son, she can ASK her son to continue his studies. No one can have a second opinion to this. That's what every mother cherish for her child- a good future!
All The Best.
One of the Best Stories Ever!!

[nilr1]

We have to remember that this is an alternate version as Jupiter dada has already said. This means that in this version there is no give and take or no consideration-that one has to give something to get something. In this version we find the plot is much more at ease, everything happening with a sense of belonging and maternal love of a mother for her son. Just splendid!

For example, in the original version, Sumitra was not keen to venture into the Digha sea but in this version, we did find Sumitra taking a chance in the water on the first day. We hope, the plot will be more elaborate the next morning when Sanjoy will request his mother with teary eyes to take a bath in the saline water of the Bay. The mother to keep her son happy will have no option but to concede his request as no one knows when they again will have such a wonderful time in future. So,the plot may take the mother and son to a secluded part of the beach,away from the crowded population of the Digha beach where there will be none except the big granite boulders, sand and rough sea. She would be wearing the same white saree with very little pink small scattered prints and a white blouse.Not wanting to soak her clothing, she goes behind a boulder and gets rid of her inner garments. Only clad in the Saree and blouse with nothing inside, to please her only son and with maternal love- just to cherish the moment of to-gerther-ness with her son,keeping the towel on the boulder, they go in the waters to enjoy. But once inside the water, the mother will be totally exposed to the eyes of the son. Her upper torso will be totally transparent & crystal clear to her son's eyes. Jupitar dada may have to describe the mother's state of mind and that of the son. It is out of my bound! But what about the lower torso. The juncture between her two legs will be so exposed that Sumitra will be confused how to hide her life giving boobs and the place from where she had given birth to Sanjoy with both her palms from the astonished eyes of her son- as if Sanjoy is seeing not his mother but a lady of his fantasy for the first time.
Jupitar dada, you are fantastic.
After the above episode at Sea, the next episode may happen in  the hotel room at noon. Dada, we want the same happen not at the dark of the night but at day time. Sumitra will be loosing a bit of her guard to please her son at sea during bathing ( to quench his thirst of eyes) but during noon after lunch at room, there will be nothing like that. It will be a war where Sumtra will be confronted by Sanjoy for the ultimate pleasure of the flesh and though she will resist as a mother till the end but constant foreplay will make her surrender and she will ultimately give up knowing she is fertile and Sanjoy will devour her in different positions like can happen standing near the sofa with Sumitra looking straight at the dressing glass fit on the Almirah door (which she will be ashamed to look during fornication, but during the height of pleasure she will be moaning and biting her lips looking straight at the eyes of her son through the glass who is ramming her son's source of birth from behind), and then on bed etc.
Good going Jupiter dada.
But at the end, I think you are right, after sacrificing so much for her son, she can ASK her son to continue his studies. No one can have a second opinion to this. That's what every mother cherish for her child- a good future!
All The Best.
One of the Best Stories Ever!!

"except the big granite boulders, sand and rough sea."

Digha te granite boulder? achhe naki? Digha plain land noi?

[b]"that one has to give something to get something."[/b]
[b]Ekdam. kaam-balobasa banijyik chukti diye hoina.[/b]

[b][b]"Dada, we want the same happen not at the dark of the night but at day time. "[/b][/b]

[b][b]Interesting. Malik o tar stri ki bhabbe? ma-chele dupure na ghure room e ki korchhe?. ora ki"do not disturb"placard jhuliye debe naki darjay? . [/b][/b]

[b][b]Tabe, khaoyar par bhat-ghumer samay tay bodhay kara jay. erjonye lunch er samay mailk o tar strir sange katha bole ekta expectation set kore neoya bhalo. Jatha: sara sakal khub hutopati kore ghurechhi. ekhon luncher por ektu bishram nebo bhabchhi Ki balen?[/b][/b]

[b][b]Apnar mirror reflection idea ta besh exciting. [/b][/b]

[bigassgirllover]

আজ আপডেট পাবার কথা ছিল।

[nilr1]

আজ আপডেট পাবার কথা ছিল।

Jupitar Bhai galpo dhele sajachchhen. Asun Amra  dhoijro dhori . Amader moner moto kore galpo sajate samay to lagbei. 

Tarpareo achhe jibikar jonye byastota.

[Raju roy]

Koy dada ajke to update aslo na ar....kalke ki asbe... ????????

[shml22]

Jupitar dada kotha rakhen nai seta somossa na. Jehetu Sanjoy abar pora-lekha start korte jacche so asha korbo Sumitra character ta te kono karone ar cuckold anben na.

[Chodon.Thakur]

আপনি বিশাল মাপের শিল্পী, মশাই। এ গল্পের শিল্পমান, বিন্যাস, গভীরতা, গাঁথুনি অনেক উঁচুমানের

আপনার মত আপনি লিখতে থাকুন৷ আমরা আপনার সাথেই আছি।

মা ছেলের নিত্য নতুন তীব্র আবেগমথিত প্রেমময় সঙ্গমের আপডেট দিতে থাকুন৷ জয় হোক আপনার

[bengaligudboy]

Ekhane Ami koekta kotha bolte chai...sanjooy at sumitrar milon ta khub normal vabe na Kore ektu cholonar asray nilei Mone joy valo hobe...r khu sohoje na Kore ektu ektu ghotonar sahajjo neya jete pare....r dada garajer Malik r tar strir ekhane ekta erotic role thakle kemon hoy? R dada sanjoy - sumitrar sathe ki koushik-deboshree r dekha hobe? Vebe dekhete paren. Oi dike abar salauddiner bodhoba bou r chele ache..musolman bidhoba bou ke ektu Aram deben na? Kew ki okearam debe na...? Sanjoy,koushik,or chele...etota kochi jowan chele ache ki korte?