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[color=rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.54)]ekdom lajawab update.bahut maza aya bhai.kya apratyaashit mod hai.ab alena ke lie apane pati ke dushman ke saath avaidh sambandh jaaree rakhana aasaan hoga. bhaee, main besabree se intajaar kar raha hoon ki aage kya hoga. yr): [/color]
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Brother,make another sexual episode between Aleena and Babu in a new situation.I have an idea about that.If you feel interested ,please consider it.
Aleena will try to forget the nightmare and will promise inwardly to remain faithful to her loving husband.But when her husband makes love with her,she will not help but imagine Babu as she will not get any sexual pleasure from her husband.She will be suffering a great mental turmoil whether she will call babu or not.At last she will give in her sexual lust and will call babu.And there will take place a very erotic,kinky,lascivious and also very romantic sexual encounter between Aleena and babu in her marital bed.Please add a maid servant who will catch Aleena red handed in her illicit love making.It is really very exciting when a maid servant catches a housewife having illicit affair with a law class man or her husband’s enemy and does not reveal this illicit affair to her husband rather she helps the housewife to continue it.
You can also add more very religious and conservative female characters such as Junaid’s sister or Aleena’s sister or Aleena’s sister in law and let babu seduces them one by one and makes them his personal whore. I have a request to you please do not let Aleena to have sex with too many men rather let only babu to take care of her sexual needs.
I really do not want divert your ideas on this story.I know it very well that you are incomparable in this regards.As you have sought some suggestions so I let my ideas to consider.Thanks a lot.Wish best luck of you.
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Wow bahut acha update hai,der se aye durust aye.
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Hot,Hot and Hot! Very hot and erotic.but i have only a request,please keep the illegal affair in story only between Alina and babu.don't use gangbang like other authors.than the story will possibly became a realistic erotica.
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kya zabardast twist daala h...ab Junaid ko bina bataye ...Aleena Babu ki rakhail ban jaaye....usse chudwaye aur dikhaye ki badi sati savitri h.....tarah tarah se chudwaye Babu se ...apni maang mei Babu ka sindooor aur virya bhare....us k bacche ki maa bane...Junaid ki jaankaari k begair
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kya ek romaanchakaaree update hai. ab yah kahaanee ek aashcharyajanak mod par aa gaee hai. mujhe yah dekhane ke lie besabree se intajaar hai ki bhavishy mein kya hone vaala hai.
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kya ek behad kaamuk kahaanee aap likh rahe hain Pink bhai! yah kahaanee sahee disha mein ja rahee hai bhaee, main aapase vinamr nivedan karata hoon, krpaya Aleena ko kaee purush saathiyon ke saath sex karane na den. aap is kahaanee mein aur bhee mahila paatron ko jod sakate hain taaki aap kar saken nae yaun episodes kee rachana karen.
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bhaee, main aap ka andha prashansak hoon. main is forum par aapako mil jaane par shabdon mein apanee uttejana vyakt nahin kar sakata. aapakee kahaaniyaan kaamukata aur uttejana se bharee hain. yah super hot kahaanee shuroo karane ke lie aapaka bahut-bahut dhanyavaad.Main ek lambe samay ke lie ummeed hai ki aap aisee kahaanee likhana shuroo karenge jisamen ek bahut roodhivaadee, vishvaasayogy aur pyaar karane vaalee patnee ko usake pati ke khataranaak dushman dvaara bahakaaya aur gadabad kiya ja raha hai. main ab bahut khush hoon kyonki aapane yah kahaanee shuroo kee hai.
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bhai , agla update kab tak aayega