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bahut maja aaya iss update ko padhke Pink bhai, ekdum mast update hai yeh bhi.[color=rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.54)] aap vaastav mein vayask kahaanee lekhan ke kshetr mein Boss ke Bosses hain vishesh roop se interfaith sex kahaanee hai. [/color]
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(09-03-2019, 01:34 AM)Rustydusty66 Wrote: Bht h super duper update buddy
End main bht zaberdast or unexpected twist dala, afsoos bechara susar ziada mazay nae lepaya....
Anxiously waiting k agay kia hota hai ab
thanks Rustyjee ...
time to ab thora lagy ga hi na next update main
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(09-03-2019, 05:35 AM)hfmwife Wrote: WOW!! OMG!! What a lascivious update and what a surprising twist!!! It is really sad to see the sorrowful consequence of mr. malik but it is also blessing for Aleena to keep her illicit affair secret from her husband.Well-done brother.
Thanks for liking the twist in the story
and also thanks for liking the whole update
give your suggestions for the forwarding of story
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(09-03-2019, 05:59 AM)Vik88 Wrote: what a dick raising update!! Now the story has got new twist.I am eagerly waiting to see what Aleena will do next as she knows it very well what a great damage has been done by her husband's enemy.
damage to bechary buddhy susar ji ka ho gya na bhai .....
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(09-03-2019, 09:50 AM)Singsonu1415 Wrote: Bhot khub apke likhna ka Andaaz Sabse alag h apka bada update bhi chota lagta hai . Mere pass apki tarif ke liye koi sabd nahi h thanks update k liy
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(09-03-2019, 10:43 AM)SweetSonali Wrote: [color=rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.54)]kya ek gazab update!!,mujhe yah bhee ummeed thee ki Aleena apane avaidh sambandh ko apane pyaar karane vaale pati se gupt rakh paegee. kya ek mod! main besabree se intajaar kar raha hoon
agalaupdate yah dekhane ke lie ki kya elena apane pati ke dushman ke saath avaidh sambandh jaaree rakhegee ya nahin। [/color]
thanks for liking
ab aap aagy ki kuch suggestions do na
what you friends think ky Aleena ko mukamal azaadi milni chahye kisi sy bhi sex krny ki ........
ya phir sirf aik bandy tak hi rahna chahye
kyon ky aik hi bandy ki ho kar rahny main bhi to maza nahi rahy ga na ......... naa zindgai main ....... aur na hi kahani main ....... hehehehheheheheh
:D :D :D :D
waiting for suggestions also along with the appreciations
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[color=rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.54)] ekdom lajawab update.bahut maza aya bhai.kya apratyaashit mod hai.ab alena ke lie apane pati ke dushman ke saath avaidh sambandh jaaree rakhana aasaan hoga. bhaee, main besabree se intajaar kar raha hoon ki aage kya hoga. [/color]
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(09-03-2019, 10:57 AM)Mafiadon Wrote: bahut maja aaya iss update ko padhke Pink bhai, ekdum mast update hai yeh bhi.[color=rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.54)]aap vaastav mein vayask kahaanee lekhan ke kshetr mein Boss ke Bosses hain vishesh roop se interfaith sex kahaanee hai. [/color]
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Brother,make another sexual episode between Aleena and Babu in a new situation.I have an idea about that.If you feel interested ,please consider it.
Aleena will try to forget the nightmare and will promise inwardly to remain faithful to her loving husband.But when her husband makes love with her,she will not help but imagine Babu as she will not get any sexual pleasure from her husband.She will be suffering a great mental turmoil whether she will call babu or not.At last she will give in her sexual lust and will call babu.And there will take place a very erotic,kinky,lascivious and also very romantic sexual encounter between Aleena and babu in her marital bed.Please add a maid servant who will catch Aleena red handed in her illicit love making.It is really very exciting when a maid servant catches a housewife having illicit affair with a law class man or her husband’s enemy and does not reveal this illicit affair to her husband rather she helps the housewife to continue it.
You can also add more very religious and conservative female characters such as Junaid’s sister or Aleena’s sister or Aleena’s sister in law and let babu seduces them one by one and makes them his personal whore. I have a request to you please do not let Aleena to have sex with too many men rather let only babu to take care of her sexual needs.
I really do not want divert your ideas on this story.I know it very well that you are incomparable in this regards.As you have sought some suggestions so I let my ideas to consider.Thanks a lot.Wish best luck of you.
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(09-03-2019, 12:19 PM)hfmwife Wrote: Brother,make another sexual episode between Aleena and Babu in a new situation.I have an idea about that.If you feel interested ,please consider it.
Aleena will try to forget the nightmare and will promise inwardly to remain faithful to her loving husband.But when her husband makes love with her,she will not help but imagine Babu as she will not get any sexual pleasure from her husband.She will be suffering a great mental turmoil whether she will call babu or not.At last she will give in her sexual lust and will call babu.And there will take place a very erotic,kinky,lascivious and also very romantic sexual encounter between Aleena and babu in her marital bed.Please add a maid servant who will catch Aleena red handed in her illicit love making.It is really very exciting when a maid servant catches a housewife having illicit affair with a law class man or her husband’s enemy and does not reveal this illicit affair to her husband rather she helps the housewife to continue it.
You can also add more very religious and conservative female characters such as Junaid’s sister or Aleena’s sister or Aleena’s sister in law and let babu seduces them one by one and makes them his personal whore. I have a request to you please do not let Aleena to have sex with too many men rather let only babu to take care of her sexual needs.
I really do not want divert your ideas on this story.I know it very well that you are incomparable in this regards.As you have sought some suggestions so I let my ideas to consider.Thanks a lot.Wish best luck of you.
Great ideas dear
you can also share more ideas in my inbox..
you are always welcome dear
rather i am waiting for some or the same ideas in detail ........... in my inbox ..........
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Wow bahut acha update hai,der se aye durust aye.
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Hot,Hot and Hot! Very hot and erotic.but i have only a request,please keep the illegal affair in story only between Alina and babu.don't use gangbang like other authors.than the story will possibly became a realistic erotica.
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kya zabardast twist daala h...ab Junaid ko bina bataye ...Aleena Babu ki rakhail ban jaaye....usse chudwaye aur dikhaye ki badi sati savitri h.....tarah tarah se chudwaye Babu se ...apni maang mei Babu ka sindooor aur virya bhare....us k bacche ki maa bane...Junaid ki jaankaari k begair
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इस अपडेट को पढ़कर मुझे अत्यधिक खुशी मिली है। अब अलीना भी बहुत खुश है क्योंकि वह अपने पति के लिए खुद को बहुत ही मासूम और शुद्ध पत्नी के रूप में पेश कर पाएगी।
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09-03-2019, 05:29 PM
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kya ek romaanchakaaree update hai. ab yah kahaanee ek aashcharyajanak mod par aa gaee hai. mujhe yah dekhane ke lie besabree se intajaar hai ki bhavishy mein kya hone vaala hai.
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kya ek behad kaamuk kahaanee aap likh rahe hain Pink bhai! yah kahaanee sahee disha mein ja rahee hai bhaee, main aapase vinamr nivedan karata hoon, krpaya Aleena ko kaee purush saathiyon ke saath sex karane na den. aap is kahaanee mein aur bhee mahila paatron ko jod sakate hain taaki aap kar saken nae yaun episodes kee rachana karen.
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bhaee, main aap ka andha prashansak hoon. main is forum par aapako mil jaane par shabdon mein apanee uttejana vyakt nahin kar sakata. aapakee kahaaniyaan kaamukata aur uttejana se bharee hain. yah super hot kahaanee shuroo karane ke lie aapaka bahut-bahut dhanyavaad.Main ek lambe samay ke lie ummeed hai ki aap aisee kahaanee likhana shuroo karenge jisamen ek bahut roodhivaadee, vishvaasayogy aur pyaar karane vaalee patnee ko usake pati ke khataranaak dushman dvaara bahakaaya aur gadabad kiya ja raha hai. main ab bahut khush hoon kyonki aapane yah kahaanee shuroo kee hai.
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bhai , agla update kab tak aayega
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(09-03-2019, 02:51 PM)Henry Wrote: Hot,Hot and Hot! Very hot and erotic.but i have only a request,please keep the illegal affair in story only between Alina and babu.don't use gangbang like other authors.than the story will possibly became a realistic erotica.
Henry bhai ......
give one good reason for this .............. ky Aleena sirf aik ky saath illegal affair rakhy
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