[exbiixossip2]

hum readers jo chahte the wo sab aapne de diya hai to maza a gaya hai ek long update ....

bas ab chinta sata rahi hai ki agla update kab ayega.....

full kinky sex seduce ke sath...

[vat69addict]

bahut zabardast update..ab kuch naye character lao story mei...ek college boy bhi lao...jis k saath neha seduce kare aur sex kare

[Rancour]

Nice update

[exbiixossip2]

hi bro...
update please and new character in story

[BHOG LO]

Nice update

[exbiixossip2]

update please and other man add

[Curiouser]

Yes sunsaan jagah mei khule mein sex it will be awesome... Keep updating

[swap_neel]

You have made Neha a real slut.So the excitement of this story has lost. So it is my last comment of this story.Good bye.

I too felt after initial shaandar start (- may be the author is not concentrating more or has less time to write) the story has derailed. There is no description of return journey, and 1st night (or first few nights) @ home with Nishith, No conversation between savi n Nishth till after 2 weeks or so as described here, Neeha has the SD card of hot pics - then why she or savi not interested to hv a look or @ least some convo about it for so long.... such n more things like this in last 2-3 parts make the story more filmy style n lose the intimate style of interactions betwen Nish, Neeha, savi, n chedi. Really disappointed that after such promising start, author has let the story drift away. Hope he could rewrite some by adding flashbacks etc

[darubadnamkarti]

The story is not as interested as it was, Neha without regrets and shame is not the concept on this story. There should be a little love story with nishith and guilt and all

[Rancour]

Contrary to opinions
Story should have crescendo & decrescendo effects with such softcore episodes

[Rancour]

[exbiixossip2]

hi bro..
are you fine ...
please next update i can not wait more.... with pics..

[BHOG LO]

UPDATE

[vat69addict]

bhai ab update de do

[Kalusinghbabli]

Jabardast writer ho bhai..

[seveer]

update

[Rancour]

Please update

[exbiixossip2]

hi bro...
update kab tak ayega. one week ho gaya hai jitna aapiki adat me shamil hai...

jo bhi ho but long update full sex seduce sex double meaining conversation ke sath.. or pics add ho jaye to maza hi phir or hai.

[rafiqshaikh9059]

kaha gaya use dhundo baheti hawa sa tha wo udti patang sa tha wo

[exbiixossip2]

hi bro..
are you fine..
next update brother..